A MayUr scene that i want to see *sigh*

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Hi everyone! How are you guys doing?😳

Well since we all know that our MayUr are tied in this beautiful bond called "marriage", so i was thinking what do we have next in store for us crazy fans!...

There will be love, pain, romance, passion, intensity of emotions, hatred, loyalty, sacrifice & care and so much more between our eternal pair..

But what kind of a scene do you guys want to see? Do you want to see cute nok-jhok scenes? or some passion with a lot of intense romance, or just a college-going MayUr, or some cute silly fights between then?

Well this is a kind of a scene i want to watch :

Both Mayank & Nupur are getting back home from their normal day routine that is back from their college , and it suddenly starts to rain heavily, and they are both waiting at the bus stop , waiting to get home by a bus since Mayank is not earning yet, he's just studying...so they are leading a very simple life. They are both holding their hands there, and trying to cose-up from the slight cold that the rain gives out...

and Mayank suddenly says,

" Mrs. Nupur Sharma , aaj college mein toh tumne kamaal hi kar diya, maine socha bhi nahi thaa ki tum itna accha presentation dogi, wow, im impressed"

Nupur says " Haan tumne kya socha tha Mr.Mayank Sharma ki main aisa koi faltoo sa presentation doongi, huh! tum meri tareef kar rahe ho ya mazaak uda rahe ho"

Mayank : " tumhe kya lagtaa hai Nupur?"

Nupur : "obviously tum mera mazaak hi udaoge, hamesha se to karte aaye ho"

Mayank : "Nahi Nupur, iss time main tumhara mazaak bilkul bhi nahi uda raha , im serious, tum hamesha special thi or hamesha rahogi, aur jo bhi tum karogi , main hamesha tumhe uske liye encouragement doonga"

Nupur : "Haaye Mayank, tumhaari issi baat pe to main bilkul fidaa hoon (in her filmy style)😆"

and they have a very small eyelock, not too long..and Mayank softly kisses her cheek 😍

They get onto the bus, and reach home (Shilpa aunty's new home as she's transferred to Mumbai)

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Will write more later. Do you guys think i should continue with more scenes....Next will be a CUTEEE balcony mayUr scene with some cuteness, romance etc! 😳

Do let me know what you guys felt about this scene....will write more soon

Love you all 🤗

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Ragini

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Awww OMG yams, beautifully written, well u know how lazy im to write😆 so im just going to say i wud love to see nok jhoks between them with passionate romance..!! and the bus scene u described..awhh so cute ya!!

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Posted: 15 years ago

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awww thats really cute.....yup you should write more!......naina

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Ragini

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Goshh i still cant believe Nupur is Nupur Sharma now 😳

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Hi yams 🤗. I would love to see cute and simple scenes like the one u have written. I really really want to see them studying together. Never got a study date before marriage at least after marriage I'll get to see one (hoping). I just saw few of MN scenes during the play and RV section. I am refreshed and in MN mode once again.

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Awesome! Yami!

i think you should open a One Shot gallery!! Open one and continue there! as OS's aren't allowed here! I wish they were!

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Such a cute MayUr scene Yamini and of course you should continue!! 😃

The scene was very well written and I liked the fact that it brought out that Nupur is an intelligent person - and Mayank learns to respect that intelligence! Yes, she's fun loving and does masti - but shouldn't detract from the fact that she's also a very intelligent person!! It also showed Mayank as being a supportive husband which I liked!

I definitely would like the CVs to show Mayank being v.supporting of Nupur's continuing education - because often in our society the women do want to study after marriage - but the in-laws including the husband are not supportive. But I deviate from the topic...

Once again - a v.cute scene and would love to read more!!

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Srishti but I prefer being called Mishu

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Posted: 15 years ago

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thats amazing yamini di!!
i wish there r some scenes like this!!
n plz do write some more! i'd love to read it

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Originally posted by: kasuforever
Awww OMG yams, beautifully written, well u know how lazy im to write😆 so im just going to say i wud love to see nok jhoks between them with passionate romance..!! and the bus scene u described..awhh so cute ya!!

haha ur superrrrrrlazy 🤣 !😉😉

Awweh thank you so much little sis..🤗 i was gonna write a short one but dunno how did it become so long😆

Ya me too..cant wait to see some sensiblity now

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