ss=valentines day- samy n mayu drunk..part4,pg-29.

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oki guys hello .....
this idea and story is by simi (my jaan) and me........
its a short story .... a real short one ..... i mean it this time.............
we'll like to thank rnbdj and three idiots 4 being the inspiration behind this storyyy
starting == pg-1
part 1== pg-7
part 2==pg-13
part 3== pg-19
part 4== pg-29
pls guys do read it and comment
heres the story>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Benji- are nupur , gunjan jaldi karo '.. hum log already bahut late ho chuke hain .......

Nupur- aa gaye baba aa gaye '. Aaj k din bhi tum logon ko party karni thi kya????

Dia- aaj k din matlab??? Tumhara koi special plan tha kya nupur???

Nupur=NAHIN nahin too.

By god valentines day k din mera koi bhio plan nahin hai'. Mera raj jo itna mahhaan hai''

Gunjan== kuch kaha di tumne???

Nupur== nahi nahin to '.. acha benji hum jaa kahan rahe hain??? Aur uday bhaiya kahan hai'.

Dia== hum farmhouse jaa rahe hain aur dodo vahan already pahunch chukka hai ' actually vo sammy aur mayank ki help kar raha hai aaj raat ki party ki arrangements karne k liye'..

Benji==== chalo na yaar lets go.......

Scene2=

Samrat's farmhouse'

Drawing room'.

Uday is sitting on the floor with his head in his hands ,,, while there r a lot of sounds of banging and crashing coming from the kitchen'

Gunjan=== bhaiya aap aise kyun baithe ho aur yeh aawazein '. Ho kya raha hai yahan'.

Gunjan looks around the drawing room , which is in complete mess,,, cushions were strewn haphazardly across the floor ,,the sofa covers were depicting the sculpture of world map ,,,,, the piano was ransacked

Another large bang comes from the kitchen accompanied by samrat's shriek '

Gunjan tensed makes a move towards the kitchen

Uday stops her midway'.

u==dekho mein jaanta hun k tum meri sabse sweet sis ho ' lekin is waqt tumhara kitchen k andar janna khatre se khaali nahin hai '.

Nupur==what ??? uday bhaiya aap yeh kya keh rahe hain....... Aur samrat chilaya kyun ,,, aur is ghar ko zoo kyun bana k rakha hai aur mayank kahan hai?????

Mayank's voice from kitchen== I LOV NUPUR........ONLY '.

Nupur== hey bhagwan yeh ho kya raha hai '

Benji=== uday kya kiya tune ????

Dia hitting uday on his shoulder

Dia'dodo tum koi bhi kaam bina bigaade kar nahin sakte kya???????

Gunjan== uday bhaiya mujhe jaane dijiye samrat chila raha tha '..

Samrat=== I LOVE CHASHMISH............ONLY''

Another bang and a rolling utensil comes out of the kitchen to stop at uday's foot''

The next scene that they see shocks them into statues completely'

Samrat comes out of kitchen , a cauliflower in his hand and a carrot stuck behind his ear '.. he looked dangerously unbalanced and is about to fall on the floor when gunjan runs and gets hold of him,,,,,,

Gunjan== samrat' tum theek ho ???,,, yeh tum kya kar rahe ho???

Samrat looks at her and smiles ... then kisses her on his cheek ...

Gunjun blushes scarlet and in the same instance is shocked on seeing samrat's strange behaviour''

Seeing this benji finally looses his cool and gets hold of uday's shoulder and literally shouts''.

Benji== KYA KIA TUNE UDAY??????

Uday'ismeine meri koi galti nahin hai' mein to experiment kar raha tha '. Different different drinks ko mix kake timepass kar raha tha'.. phir mein kitchen mein kuch khanne ko lene k liye gaya tha''

Jab vapas aaya to sam aur mayank vo drinks ko juice samajh kar pi chuke the '''.

Gunjan. Dia , nupur, benji== KYA?????????????????

Uday== haan sorry

Nupur== uday bhaiya aap''.. aap ka mein kya karun???

Benji== nupur iska hum log kuch nahin kar sakte ''..

Another bang is heard from inside the kitchen and samrat jumps a foot in the air on hearing the sound''

Nupur=== hey bhagwan yeh mayank andar kar kya raha hai????

Uday=== actually vo samrat ka kitchen destroy kar raha hai ' u know jab bhi vo koi utensil phenkta hai vo shout kart a hai!!!!!

Nupur== kya shout karta hai????

Mayank= I LOVE NUPUR ............ONLY'

Uday= yeh shout karta hai.... aur phir sammy bhi use shout karke jawab deta hai'

Gunjan (still holding on to samrat)==kya jawab deta hai????

Samrat( looking backwards in the direction of the kitchen)= I LOVE CHASHMISH........... ONLY

Saying so samrat planted another kiss on gunjan's cheek '''''..

Uday=== yeh jawaab deta hai' jab tak gunjan yahan nahin thin na ,, tab tak sammy us cauliflower ko kiss kar raha tha'.

Benji== WHAT????

Uday=== dekho ' ab jo gadbad honi thi vo to ho gayi ' deeds aur benji hum logon ko yahan se chalna chahiye,,, nupur aur gunjan k illawa is waqt samrat aur mayank ko aur koi nahin sambhal sakta ''

Saying so he gets hold of dia and benji and drags them outwards ' leaving behind a tensed nupur and a horrified gunjan still holding on to samrat'''.

Another bang '' this time three glasses came rolling out'.

Mayank= I LOVE NUPUR................ ONLY

Nupur== hey bhagwan isse pehle mayank is ghar mein bhuchal le aaye mujhe use jaake sambhalna chahiye '. Yeh uday bhaiya bhi na''''''.

TO BE CONTINUED

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love

dolly 😳and simu😳

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Lovely dolly.....plz continue soon nd pm me............
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hehehe really very nice plsss do update soon
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🤣🤣🤣 lollllllllllllllllllllll loved it 2 da core please continue i am dying 2 c mayu kissing nupur😳 & my fav 'i love nupur only' by god after holi epi main mayu ki dewani hogayi! and mayank throwing utensils loooooooooooool🤣🤣 dat was really funny! wish it had palak paneer though! & btw thanks 4 pmšŸ¤—
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lovely update dear.loved it.

continue soon dear.
thanks for the pm dear.
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Ha ha ha kya funny story hai. Kya idea hai. Love u dolly dear. šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜‰
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this was hilarious!!!! šŸ˜† do continue!
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Ha ha Ha hillarious

loved it dear

do continue soon

luv
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wow thanku sooooooooooooo much guys 4 this amazingf response
lov all of u loads loads loads and loads ...
ya i'll continue sooonnn ...
ok and i forgot putting the palak paneer sorry 4 that
but promise mayur kisss ko entry zaroor milegi

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