My Wishful PraSha Prediction Post Lohri

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my wishful prediction..

Night falls.. Prats asks shanky if he wud have coffee.. Shanky smiles n says yes y not.. as

reaches Kitchen, she hears Shanky's low voice talking 2 himself.."pi le beta, kya pata ye

aakhri baar ho.." Prats feels sad n goes 2 make coffee.. she is deeply immersed in her

thots abt her complex bandhans, when she hears a familiar tone.."hullo" its Shanky.. he has

come 2 inform tht Bua has come n 2 make it three cups.. shanky ga. zes her for a moment and

asks her.."wat happened".. she nods her head.. Shanky smiles off n says.. "i know u r

thinking abt last nite.. dont worry it wont happen again.. n i will try 2 keep Sumo as happy

as possible" "and you?" asks Prats.. it was jst in her mind..she didnt knew herself how it

came out... Shanky looks at her smilingly and says.. "i will live... bt i dont know how.."

and quickly moves out of kitchen.. her eyes fill up.. coffee is ready she takes it to hall n

greets Bua. Bua has a gud chat with Prats over the coffee.. she tells abt her luv story and

how it was jst all too painful.. she was indecisive all the way thru.. bt at the end, she

had 2 chose one either 2 break her family's trust or her luver's trust.. n she chose 2 b

with her luver coz she cudnt see him in such a distress bt tht she was jst too late.. her

luver was dead n tht she had 2 pay a heavy price 4 her late decision... Prats remembers

Shanky's words 4rm last nite.. "I wud jst die without u Prateeksha.. i cant live without u"

Suddenly a sense of fear overcomes Prats.. she becomes very much concerned 4 Shanky..she

feels uneasy .. wat if something terrible happens and she loses Shanky forever bcoz of her

wrong decision.. is her sacrifice 4 Sumo worth losing Shanky.. wud she able 2 forgive

herself 4 wat Shanky goes thru.. wat happens of his mom and dad.. Shanky is their only son..

will Sumo or araina forgive her.. bt thn she remembers her promises.. she cant break them..

she is in a fix n is indecisive, confused n very afraid as to wat will happen of Shanky..

she rushes 2 Shanky's room n sees he has jst dozed of in chair by the fire place.. there is

some picture in his hands pressed to his chest.. she slowly removes his hands n pulls it

out.. its her picture with Shanky 4rm a celebration party for a successful deal in the

office.. both so happy and smiling.. it occurs 2 her how shanky had filled her void life

with happiness and a feeling tht she had never felt b4.... the lonliness she had felt for

soo long had jst vanished.. she smiles faintly at Shanky.. covers him up..n retreats herself

and sits by a window.. with picture pressed at her heart gazing at stars, she slowly fells

asleep..


its dawn n light pours in thru the window.. she opens her eyes and finds Shanky gazing at

her face.. shanky quickly takes his eyes off, bends n pulls off picture 4rm her hands n

says.. "this is MINE" Prats stares.. he explains "its of MY office remember.. so i can keep

it" "u better get fresh n b ready as bua is taking us to temple" and leaves.. Prats has a

faint smile watches him go for minute, sighs softly n gets up..

In next hour an so, all three of them are down at the Lord Shiva temple. They Worshipped

and put their offerings. On their way back, bua showed them a small Devi Ma's temple up on

a small hill. She said it is said whoever goes their n worships their wishes r fullfilled

and the rituals done their have grt significance. PPl go their 4 mrg rituals as it is said

the vows taken their r never broken. She asked them 2 visit it and she wud wait there 4

them as she wudnt b able to climb up stairs with her weak knees. Shanky Prats went ahead n

climbed up.. while they were putting their shoes, a piece from the metal rack pierced into

Shanky's right thumb.. he gave a little shriek n pulled his hand back.. blood started

dripping out. He quickly pressed it to control the oozing. Prats got scared. She quickly

took out her kerchief to wrap it and tried to grab his hand, but he quickly moved away n hid

his hand backwards.. she stared.. and told smiling faintly "oh no, thnx.. i need 2 learn 2

go around without u.. i m so habitual 2 b with u it wud b difficult 4 me if i dont

control.." and he took out his own, grabbed the piece and threw it away and tried 2 control

the bleed with his hanky but it was still dripping.. he ignored it and turned around 2 climb

the stairs towards temple.. Suddenly Prats felt very bad..tears welled up in her eyes.. she

cud c the blood drops on the stairs.. she followed it, he was standing near a pillar gazing

at the beautiful valley below.. she got near him.. Shanky looked at her, saw the tears, and

looked away and spoke in a low voice.. u wanted it.. u didnt want me near u.. u didnt want

me in ur life.. u dont want 2 spend ur life with me.. Prats was overwhelmed and cudnt

control any more and burst out in tears.. "then u tell me wat shud i do.. i cant accept u..

i have made promises.. all trust me.. i have assured them i wont break their trust.. how can

i b mean.. how can i break their trust.. the promises i made" Shanky turned towards her

hold her shoulders n asked her "bt u luv me right?" Prats nodded her head in yes n "u do

want 2 spend ur life with me right?" Prats again nodded her head in yes and said "i want..

yes..i want" "thn come" and Shanky took her into the temple "u made the promises i didnt.. u

cant break it bt i can.. " said he in a firm voice.. Prats was puzzled.. she didnt knew wat

he was upto... he went 2 near the idol.. took the sindoor kept there in his fingers n put it

on Prats.. she was shocked.. "wat did u do?" Shanky ignored her.. pulled out a chain with a

heart pendant and put it around her neck.. He said i especially bought this 4 u and i always

wanted 2 put it around ur neck.. he grabbed her hand and vowed infront of Devi Ma with

folded hands.. "oh Lord, i hereby take Prateeksha as my wedded wife in ur presence and i

promise 2 take care of her n stay by her side all my life. I would only b hers and noone

else in this life and coming all life. Bless us lord." she did nt know wat 2 say.. he

turned around her and said.. this doesnt mean i m binding u 2 me.. bt it does mean tht i m

binding me 2 u.. u r free 2 marry whoever u want.. these r not proper rituals n its not a

proper mrg.. its jst my vow and tht sindoor is token of it.. i will have u and only u in my

this life.... its up to u if u wanna accept me or not.. i wont force u into anything.. or

to follow it... i jst tried 2 make the decision easier 4 u.." Prats was speechless and it

took a while 4 her to get wat jst transpired.. Shanky hold her shoulders n took her to the

nearest chair.. she jst clasped Shanky's palm tight and hid her head on his chest and started crying silently as it slowly dawned upon her wat exactly jst happened between them.....

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achiever thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i know my story has many flaws.. bt i was jst short of time.. i wanted to include Sumo and Aziz as well.. bt had 2 cut short with PraSha track only.. and actually had 2 cut down a lot of scenes..

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Posted: 15 years ago
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love it wish this happens in pkb wow i love it.. plz if u have time write a ff.. would love to read it..
minuu thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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That is a really nice prediction!!!! Would really love to see such scenes happen 😳
Juneli thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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omg wht a beautiful prediction dear🤗...loved it😳...n..how i wish we could get to see this...even 10% will do😍
btw..wht abt that aziz...he is hovering like a bee behind his sister😡😭
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Manisha just saw your beautiful post..mindblowing prediction👏👏👏
Really loved this whole idea of Shanky thinikng that he is not hving any pressure to keep any promises and so he just decides to put the sindoor on Prateeksha's forehead and then leaving the final decision on her whether or not to accept the marriage...👏👏..I really hope creatives can see this thread and get some ideas about how to unite PraSha😳
I m sure if Shanky can put sindoor on her maang then no way Prateeksha can break the bond ..she will hv no option but to b with Shanky forever😳
This is mindblowing prediction...Manisha please email it to Rekha modi😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Lovely prediction ....👏👏
Hope this happens ...
But Y sindoor ...Shanky right thumb is already dripping wid blood ...
he can just put his blood on her fore head ...the relation would b much more stronger ...!! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I jst luved it2the core.Wanted2write so many thngs bt,am in a hurry ryt now,so gt2go.Once again a round of applause4the awesome prediction.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i dont like prasha.if it happened in kmh,it wud b gr8.. i love ARJUHI THEY R D BEST
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dew-drop

Lovely prediction ....👏👏
Hope this happens ...
But Y sindoor ...Shanky right thumb is already dripping wid blood ...
he can just put his blood on her fore head ...the relation would b much more stronger ...!! 😃

Dew drop thts y i had his rite thmb dripping 😆.. bt thn i thot it was b very cliched and unrealistic..😉

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