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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sanju_veni

hey great update loved each of them thanks for pm

Thanks hun
glad u loved it!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: preethis

hey Zoah wonderful dear... wonderful...

thanks a lot
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: AngelArTi1988

hey zoah...un4tunately m late 4 dis ff 2...thnk god! dat i missed only 1st 5 parts!!! 🤪 so i dint hav ny big difficulty in reading d story-till-now..
well now d comments:
again a hot-shot exciting potboiler frm zoah-d great!!! ⭐️ 👏 nothing more n nothin less 2 say beyond dis...m alredy in awe of diss ff 2.. new characters r enthralling n queer enuf 2 evoke curiosity 2 knw more...do update soon dear!! 🤗
luv mayur always!!! luv mjht... 🤗

awwwwwwww thanks for reading this one and glad u loved it too!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: zoya_me

i am so sorry i couldn't comment earlier.....but well.....awesome awesome update....just loved the lil convos among frnds......plzzzzz continue soon

aww its ok hun
dnt be sorry
glad u loved it tho!
will cont tonight!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thank you
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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 6: PG 42
Flashback:

It was about 4'o clock, but due to winter, it used to get dark really quickly. It was yet another day for Nupur, but something was different about that day. Nupur was actually smiling the whole day!

Nupur was sitting in the common room, with a broad smile on her face. Mayank, who was passing through the corridor saw this and was amazed at it. Ever since her started college, he never saw Nupur smiling her heart out.
Mayank walked up to her and pulled out a chair to make himself comfortable. By the time Mayank pulled out chair, Nupur looked up to find those dark brown attractive eyes staring at her. Nupur liked Mayank ever since he joined college, but never let him know about it. She knew that he will reject her, so she never told him in the first place.

"Someone is looking very happy today." Mayank said, breaking the stare.

"Nothing to do with you." Nupur replied, sarcastically.
"Come on Nupur, I am being so nice to you." Mayank said, making puppy face.
"But I don't think you need to know why am I happy." Nupur replied in a calm manner.

"Nupur why do act so hard when you don't mean it?" Mayank asked slowly, making sure he is not hurting her in any way.

"What do you mean?" Nupur asked puzzled.
"What I mean is that, Nupur you are very nice." Mayank said, making Nupur look shocking and happy at the same time. She never expected him to say such a thing to her. He was indeed adorable, thought Nupur in her heart. "You like keeping things to yourself, but as it says share your happiness to increase and share your sorrows to decrease." Mayank explained sincerely, which reflected in his eyes.
" Well, thanks for the compliment! I appreciate it." Nupur replied with a smile.

"Your most welcome. Now would you like to share the reason of your happiness with me?" Mayank grinned, "To double your happiness." He added.

"Sure. I am happy because, today after about 6 months, my mother asked me how am I doing. I mean she is so busy in her work, that she hardly gets time to talk to me, but today she asked me how am I doing. I am so happy today." Nupur said, smiling her heart out to Mayank.
After her best friends, Mayank was the first person Nupur shared her happiness with. This was the very first occasion, where Nupur even talked to him nicely. Today. after sharing her happiness with Mayank, Nupur felt really good. She felt something that had no description in the world. Just the perfect feeling of love.
"Actually my mother stays out of country most of the time due to her business trips, so I don't get along with her very well. But today, I am just so happy." Nupur explained the reason in bit more depth, to which Mayank simply smiled.
"Oh that's great!" Mayank replied after hearing Nupur's reply, with a big smile.

"So friends?" Mayank asked handing out his hand to shake with not so sure look on his face. Nupur was amazed for a minute, but then she took the hand in her hand and shook.

"Friends." Nupur replied.

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Nupur jerks out of her thoughts as she feels someone tapping on her shoulder. She quickly wipes away her tears, that comes out of her eyes, remembering the first of meeting of the her and Mayank's friendship. It is very precious and memorable for Nupur.
"Nupur, are you all right?" asks a lady in her mid 40, wearing a knee length black shirt with white half sleeve plain blouse. Her hair is tied in ponytail behind her neck, with minimum of make up to look attractive. She is holding a tray that has drinks and some crisps in a bowl with 3 glasses.
"Yes DJ, I am fine. Give me the tray, I'll take it." saying Nupur takes the tray from DJ. The lady is Nupur's nany, Nupur calls her DJ. She is extremely lovable and caring. She looked after Nupur ever since her father passed away.
"Here Child!" saying she hands over the tray to Nupur and makes her way towards the kitchen.
Nupur, holding the tray in her hands moves towards the stairs, lost in her own world.

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"They both broke up" Hinna says, looking down on the creamy carpet with complete blank eyes. Mayank's words echos in her ears again and again. She could not belive a guy like Mayank can do something like playing with someone's emotions. Right this second, all she could think is that how did Nupur face all this? She feels guilt taking over her frustration for not being able to stand by her best friend in her time of need. "More like cheated on her" Hinna added further before Sanam could reply her.

"What? How? When? Why?" Sanam asks question after question, not believing what she just heard. She feels like smacking Mayank right this very second. How could he cheated on Nupur? The girl who loves him more than anything and anyone? How can someone be so heartless?, Sanam thought to herself.
"Yes, He told me yesterday when I met him in university." Hinna replie, narrating her the flashback.

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Flashback:

"So, what's wrong?" Hinna asks, taking seat opposite him in the university canteen, after their enrolment. Hinna asked Mayank to see her, after his enrolment, and he did as he been told. Mayank was right there on time. After few minutes Hinna reached there too and took a seat opposite him.

"What do you mean?" confused Mayank asked. He knew he will not be spared so easily, for what he did to Nupur and this was only the trailer.

"What's up with you and Nupur? Did anything happened?" Hinna finally asked, not getting hold of herself anymore.

"Look, it's all misunderstanding." Mayank replied, trying his best to sound normal and praying within that Hinna will not burst out on him.

"Come to point, will you?" Hinna stated starightaway.

"Okay, but please hear me out once and then comment." Hinna simply nodded, gestruing him to srart.

"Okay!" Mayank silently prepared himself to take what ever comes next. "I placed a bet with one of my friend that I will have to make Nupur fall in love with me and when she is fallen for me, I have to dump her." Mayank said, knowing the exact reaction of Hinna. He knew he was done for.

"What? Do you even realise what you are saying? How could you even think of doing that with her? How could you do something so cheap and vulgur? How could you?" Hinna burts out on him, showering all her bitterness and anger on him. How can a man stoop so law? Does it not have any consicous?, Hinna spoke through her red angry eyes.

"I know what I did was just so cheap and I am really sorry about that. I really am." Mayank apologised, not daring to look up and face Hinna. He knew if she could, she would have killed him by now.

"Isn't that great? Ruining someone's life, playing with their emotions and say sorry. Amazing." Hinna sair again with same anger and bitterness in her tone, but this time she said a bit louder. Everyone in the canteen turned to look at her, and she gestured them which meant Sorry.

"Please, Let me finish." Mayank pleaded in front of her. Hinna calmed herself down and gestured Mayank to continue.

"The other day I was talking to the same guy, I placed a bet with, and Nupur overheard us and misunderstood me.", he pauses for a second and then continues, " I swear down, I was talking to him about cancelling the bet but he wasn't ready for it. I didn't wanted to hurt Nuput anymore and was going to tell her the truth, but just then she overheard us and all went wrong." Mayank finished, slowly looked up to find Hinna in lost in deep thoughts. He knew what he had done, had no forgiveness what so ever, but somewhere in his heart he knew Nupur would forgive him. For now, more than Nupur's forgiveness, it was really imporant get Hinna's forgiveness.

"You know what, Mr. Sharma, she was too good for you. I mean way too good for you. A guy, who she loved or shall I say loves the most, placed a bet on her life, on her emotions. And she was not even aware of it." Hinna said, this time with calm but cold tone. "You know Mayank, somewhere in all this, I feel guilty for encourging her to bring out her emotions. I was the one who told her to be with you. When she first told me and Sanam about this, I was very happy but Sanam wasn't. She knew how does it feel when love hurts. I wish, I had listen to her and stop encouraging Nupur go ahead with er relationship with you. I really wished." Hinna added further, with tears coming out of her eyes, but somehow she manages to control her emotions.

"Tell me what did you get by doing all this bullshit? Money, girls, popularity, answer me god damn it?" Hinna screamed, but was not so loud to be able for other to hear her.

Mayank did dared to look up. Hinna was shooting diggers at him.

"But I love her Hinna." Mayank finally confessed his love to Hinna, looking up but not exactly facing her but it was not going to be that easy to make Hinna believe this.

"Yeah of course you do, otherwise you wouldn't have treated her like this." Hinna let out a fake laugh.

"Trust me, I really do love her and I mean it." Mayank tried once again, but this time in a determined tone.

"And what is the guaranty that you really love her?" Hinna questioned back, with cold look.

"I can do anything for her, I mean ANYTHING." Mayank spoke in a tone ,which helplessly made Hinna think twice.

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Sanam just kept quiet after hearing this. She is not uttering a single word since last 5 minutes. She looks exceptionally lost in her own thoughts or may be breaking down within herself. The guilt takes over her shock, for not being there for Nupur, who always stood by her. Soon, her guilt turns into tears and starts shedding from her eyes. Hinna notices this and simply hugs her tightly.

"Sshhh Sanu." Hinna tries to stop Sanam from crying. Sanam gets hold of herself and lifts her head up to face Hinna.

"Thanks." Sanam replies.

"For what?" Hinna asks with question look.
"Just, for being my friend." Sanam replies with a smile.
"Not fair. Best friends hug without me?" Nupur says, entering the room with tray in her hand. As soon as she enters she sees two of her most important people in her life hugging.

"Join us." Hinna replies, and Nupur runs to hug both the ladies.

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"Are you sure you want to drive?" Nupur asks Hinna, coming out of her house with all her belongings and placing them in the boot at the back.

"Yeah, I'll be fine." Hinna replies, shutting the boot and walking towards the front dirver seat. Sanam sits next to her and Nupur makes herself comfortable on the back seat.

"Or how about I driving till London motorway, then you can take over?" Nupur suggests her friend, as she knows driving 174 by herself will be a great challenge and she drove in the morning too, so she must be tired.

"I don't mind." Hinna agrees to it and comes out of the car and takes a seat at the back and Nupur does the same taking driver's seat and their journey starts.

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Promo:-

The door bell rings and Nupur goes to open the door as Sanam and Hinna are in the kitchen, god knows what they cooking.

Nupur reaches for the handle and pulls the door inside to find The one and only Mayank Sharma standing in front of her, dressed in black as always.

"What are you doing here?" Nupur asks him, as he gives his one of the best smile to her.

"Hello. Don't be in illusion. I am here to meet Sanam." Mayank replies with a big grin on his face and Nupur is complete taken back at his reply.

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Hey guys

I know all of you must be wondering that I didn't include the promo, but I wanted to get over with the flashback, so could not include the promo. The more flashback will be coming in next few parts.

I am sorry about that!

Hope you all like the part!

I think it's very long, so hope you are happy with it too.

Please do comment!

Silent readers, Please don't be silent. Please comment

They mean a lot to me!

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Edited by Ansh_Arti - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey sweety

Lovely update dear

very well written

I cant believe Mayank used Nupur for a bet

I'm glad now he really loves her

Waiting for Mayur meet

Hope it is in the next part

Plz plz continue soon

Luv
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Edited by mayurarti - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh this time i miss but next time i wish i will be the one to comment
i like whole part but some lines touch core of my heart .
[B You like keeping things to yourself, but as it says share your happiness to increase and share your sorrows to decrease." Mayank explained sincerely, [/B]
he said very right word and i love these words.


hat? How? When? Why?" Sanam asks question after question, not believing what she just heard. She feels like smacking Mayank right this very second

even i feel this when a boy hurt my friend

"Not fair. Best friends hug without me?" Nupur says, entering the room with tray in her hand. As soon as she enters she sees two of her most important people in her life hugging.
"Join us." Hinna replies, and Nupur runs to hug both the ladies.

lovely update
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Edited by adi_gupta - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey dear.... Damn good update..... I just loved the way Hinna reacted to Mayank's bet... Had I been there, I would have literally slapped him for treating my best friend like that... But then Hinna was no less... I am happy she slammed Mayank.. And God, for the first time, I had started to hate Mayank but then when he confessed his love for Nupur, to Hinna.. I was happy.😊.. that the train is back on the track....Somehow cannot see Mayank and Nupur separate.... so much used to seeing them together.. kya karen?

Edited by Divya_kaldivya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
sorry yaar.......

woh kaam tha isisliye chali gayi thi........

yaar i loved the update completely.........

hats off to u.....

the flashback scenes were perfect.......

and the feelings part too.......

do continue soon......

as sabra nahi hota hai..........
Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago

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