Revealing the Past (manohar ki Kahani-Pg 5)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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As many of you liked my earlier creation "Weird PR", I would like to thank you all. This encourages me to script my next venture. If anyday BT likes to go into past, they may show things like this.

1. Manohar, Girish and Manav's kaka were all classmates while doing their graduation. Girish was a brillant scholar. Manohar was a play boy and Kaka was more or less the Don of the university (see even today he keeps his head bald and he has a strong physique).

2. Kaka used to drink heavily and one could easily find a bottle in his pockets. Though he was a student, his proffession was kidnapping and all. He earned a lot from this and made this house, where Manav and all are staying now a days.

3. Mahohar, a rich brat would always come to college in new cars and pick up a new girl everday. He had a carefree attitude and was a strong Rajesh Khanna Fan

4. Girish was from a poor family and he had to do tuitions for his studies.

5. Things were normal unless and until a new girl joined the college in 1st year of graduation. She was Rashika Lokhande. She was an abosulte beauty and a damn item girl. She came to college in minis (just imagine a girl wearing minis and coming to college in 70's). She was a good dancer and performed in the freshers' welcome. The song was "Mungda Mungda main gud ki dali". Her thumka made everyone mad.

6. The trio of Kaka, Manohar and Girish fell for her. They proposed to her one by one (without knowledge of each other). Rashika who already had 3 boy friends in her school days, did not refuse anyone and spent time with them ( going to movies, sea beach etc) separtely.

7. Though Rashika was playing with their emotions, all of them were damn serious and love changed their lives. Kaka became the most soft spoken man. Manohar's rich father also stopped funding him money as he got to know that Manohar was spending money on girls. Manohar quit seeing many girls and spent more time on studies to secure a govt job. He also left his father for all. Girish knew he can't afford a rich girl like rashika unless he earns a lot. He planned to start his own business.

8. Rashika was so clever to handle them separately, but one day she felt its high time to choose only one of them and marry. All 3 guys had graduated from the college and were doing their job or business. Manohar had secured a govt job of low salary so he was rejected right away. Girish was someone whom Rashika started liking the most as he was now a business man and earning a lot. Kaka had a shop of his own and his incomes were decent though not as much ar Girish's.

9.Oneday truth got unveiled before all that Rashika intends to marry Girish and she was just flirting with them till date. Manohar was so depressed that she walked away of rashika's life. Kaka got violent again and rode off to Rashika's place on his Rajdoot Mortor cycle. Rashika's father had diff plans, he had fixed another guy for her.

10. So the climax was like this. It was rashika's house. Kaka reached there with his rampuri chaku, Girish was already there requesting rashika's father to marry them off. Kaka threatened that he would kill each and everyone. Just at that point, Rashika vomitted and fainted. Doctor came and told that Rashika was pregnant. Seeing this both Kaka and Girish were taken aback. Both conversed and came to know that both of them had slept with Rashika. Manohar was also called there. But he told he had never done anything like this with Rashika as he was bored of these things , which he had done with nearly 30-40 girls. This time he was in true love. Manohar could not help his tears and left the place. Kaka and Girish were not ready to marry rashika now.Rashika's father gave them 1 lakh each and took the oath that they would never reveal the secrets in their life and would act as if they don't know Rashika if ever they come across with her. They both left Rashika's house and Rashika was married to a new guy the very next day. Some months later she gave birth to Manju. Rashika promised to herself that she would ruin lives of all three of her boy friends.

So its for you to decide whose child manju is.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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🤣
I have never laughed this hard in a post. (In fact, I cannot recall ever having laughed enough to actually use that rofl-ing fellow up there.)
I now love you, whoever you are satyamdas.
You must do more of these, you have one creative mind there.
This is just sheer beauty man. 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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🤣

OMG ! someone please stop me from laughing . I can't stop laughing . What a hilarious love story. 🤣


You have great creativity & sense of humour . One creative soul you are. Post more please.



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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG. 🤣

What a sense of humour...........
I dont remember that i have ever laughed that much after seeing any other post......
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Posted: 15 years ago
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friends
while I wrote my previous post "weird PR", I was just reflecting my anger for Balaji Telefilms. The way they have been killing the beautiful love story is simply rubbish. But the critical acclaim I got from you guys made me a script writer. I will surely post such things, as and when such devil ideas (😈)strike me.
thank you all for reading these posts and hope this helps us overcome the trauma and agony Ms Kapoor is offering us through PR.
Cheers
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Posted: 15 years ago
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🤣 Man, this is too good!!! **wiping tears** This explains why Rasika and Manju are so bad and trying to ruin the lives of Manohar, Girish and Kaka's family... good logic.. I liked it!!
Pls. continue with more of such hilarious stories..!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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If Manju is Manohars daughter this will make her Vinod's second sister hope she is Kaka's or Girish's daughter ....
Anyways its the BEST...
You can surely become a scriptwriter.... I guess Balaji Telefilms should hire you atleast you will maintain the curiosity of the viewers and make and twist story which will interest them...You are way much better than the Balaji Scriptwriter who are getting paid to show us nonsense onscreen.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Cnt take it anymore....ha hahahahahah🤣 almost fainted with laughter...let me get hold of myself..than I'll post something.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG ....that was amazing ... 🤣 i am still laughing ...

I hope its manhors daughter which will then make manjus life a living hell because she married her brother !!🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome!!!!!!!!!
u are hilarious 🤣 🤣 🤣
plzzz write for Arman scenes

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