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Aisha

@Aisha202

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Posted: 15 years ago

#371

Mich, totally loved the update! 😃 Thank u thank u thank u!! Really love ur new FF as I do your previous ones!! ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

My fav part is:

As he continues to stare out into the dark, he notices a pair of beautiful red bangled hands encircling him and then resting on the bareness of his chest. The warmth radiating from those hands sends a tingling sensation into his whole system. As she rests her head on his back, Abhi smiles. As long as she is with him, he'll never feel lonely.

"What happened ?" he tried to sound indifferent. "Have you finished checking on all the important people in your life ? If not, why don't you complete it. I can always wait."

Nikki smiles.

"I know. That is why, I've come to see the most important person of my life," standing on her toes, she whispers seductively in his ears.

"Oh really?" A twisted smile appears on Abhi's lips as he pulls her in front of him. "Glad to know it."

He encircles his arms around her waist and looks lovingly into her face.

Nikki blushes. "What did you want to tell me ?"

"You are so beautiful," he drawls passionately. 😍

Loved it!! 👏 🤗

Edited by Aisha862 - 15 years ago

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Michelle

@mich09

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Posted: 15 years ago

#372

NOTE TO READERS :

UPDATED 3RD PART OF CONNECTED IN LOVE ON PAGE 45

Sorry could not send out PM for the 2nd part as I have been extremely busy the whole of tdy.....

Thanks HOney, Shachee, Sheena, Ditto Aisha, Pri for your comments on the 2nd part and the FF....Glad you guys are liking it...

@ Honey, yeah ARmaan on Abhi's side makes better viewing.....

@ Shachee glad you are liking the dialogues...... and am trying my best to update as much as I can before I leave for India next week..

@ Pri, you don' t know how much I have been thinking about you and hoping you wld get time to read my FF...... Glad you liking it....

@ Sheena, glad you liking the FF.....Yeah I know i am writing a lot these days....I keep promising myself I'll stop but then I get coaxed into writing by the constant requests of some lovely members of the forum....

@ Ditto, thanks so much for the encouragement...I hope you like this series too..

@ Aisha, that is my fav part too..... especially the lonely and the bangled hand on his chest...WAs discussing the same with Bhavs earlier on... glad you liked it too

Thanks Guys once again....

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hapinezz13

@hapinezz13

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#373

Mich.....the last line is beautiful!!!

This part was so sweet.....Armaan n Abhi actually teasing each other....god bless their hearts.....how much confusion wud they have avoided if they had made peace earler!!

I love how u write about Abhi staring at Nikki and Nikki acting shy....always nice to read!!

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Aisha

@Aisha202

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#374

Hey Mich!! 😃

Thank you soo much for the third part! Really enjoyed reading it - It was beautiful!!

My fav part is:

"We are one now Abhi , we'll never part." Nikki tells him.

" Yes Nikki, we'll never part," looking fondly at her face, Abhi assures her. " No matter what happens now, we will always be bound by some tiny thread of love. We will always be connected."

Soo sweet!!! 😍Thanks a lot!! loved it - totally!! 🤗 🤗 🤗

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Michelle

@mich09

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#375

Thanks Honey and Aisha,

Glad you both liked the 3rd part .

@ Honey, glad you liked the last line.......... Even, I feel there was more scope of Armaan and Abhi becoming friends and teasing their respective lady love... I always love how Abhi looks at NIkki and she feeling shy under his gaze... Glad you like it too.

@ Aisha happy to know you love that part...

Thanks once again

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Sheena

@AbhiNikiLuver

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#376

OMG..........OMG.............OMG..................OMG...................OMG
I couldn't even read the whole thing cuz it was soooooooooo
intense!!!! I really can't imagine my cute
AN in those kinds of roles.... but i try my best.....
Mich - you did an AMAZING job of describing their emotions! 👏
seriously, you are an amazing writer...
Are you going to be an author or a journalist????
Cuz you would do great...
Update soon! 😃

Luv, Sheena

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Michelle

@mich09

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#377

Thanks Sonali and Sheena for liking the update.

@ Well Sheena AN did attend AR's wedding 😃 For me, AN have always been so intensely passionate, that is why it becomes easier for me to picturise them in these scenes...Can't imagine anyone else in them.... Also, please don't get me wrong, it wasn't just an act, it was an emotional need and extension of love, of two lonely emotional disturbed people crazily in love with each other.....

Thanks so much for the compliment.....Well I always liked writing, but never explored it passionately....... I guess its AN's passion and intensity that inspires me to write so much.... 😃

Thanks once again Guys...

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Sheena

@AbhiNikiLuver

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#378

Originally posted by: mich09

Thanks Sonali and Sheena for liking the update.

@ Well Sheena AN did attend AR's wedding 😃 For me, ANhave always been so intensely passionate, that is why it becomes easier for me to picturise them in these scenes...Can't imagineanyone else in them....Also, please don't get me wrong, it wasn't just an act, it was an emotional need and extension of love, of two lonely emotional disturbed people crazily in love with each other.....

Thanks so much for the compliment.....Well I always liked writing, but never explored it passionately.......I guess its AN's passion and intensity that inspires me to write so much.... 😃

Thanks once again Guys...

I think ur soooooo right Michi..
AN are the passionate, intense jodi..
That's what caused me to watch DMG for over a year....
As for writing, even I'm not that great... I passed with a 92% in Literature and Composition.... 😆
Please do update...
BTW- is Nikki gonna live w/ Abhi 4 a long time now, or just until her mother is here???? 😕

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kabeeraspeaking

@kabeeraspeaking

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#379

Gotta agree with Honey. Life would've been so much more easier for everyone involved if Armaan and Abhi had worked something out. And if they had become friends...well, how wonderful a dynamic that would've been to milk is glaringly obvious from how you wrote them, Michi. I think their quirks towards each other had to be my favourite part (: The teasing about marriage...one on the verge of it, the other very near...fun between friends.

Loved how Nikki's the one flashbacking to begin with, but Abhi takes it on later. And all the things we're getting to see with it really help give the current situation better understanding. The explanation of the title (: Sweet.

I hope this is a long, long series, Michi 😛 There's so many things that can be shown. 9 months.

🤗

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Ivy

@Ivy9

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#380

Interesting story mich...I like the Armaan/Abhi relationship...I wish that the actual storyline had them become somewhat friends....the main reason I loved the Panchgani epis were because of how all the interns got along with Abhi and he was a part of the gang...

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