I love u too much to lose u(Rajeev-FF)LINK Pg-147 - Page 50

Originally posted by: guglu088

REPLY FOR PART 16:

Hi Sumi, Hey Guglu....😃

Sorry for being late. Great update dear.👏 👏 👏Its ok dear.....kabhi kabhi we cant manage it....n thnx for liking the part....😃

Toh finally the D-day dawns. Aur ye tha Mauli ka plan,Ayaan ka car crsh karwana.😆 😆 😆. Aur wo bhi Asmi ke haathon.Hmm....so naughty of Mauli na...😆😆 Wo bechare guards nahi jaante ki jisne unke Ayaan sir ki car crash ki hai usse Ayaan kuch nahi keh paayega aur bechare ki khud ki bolti hi band ho jayegi. Truly said yaar....Ayaan ki hi bolti bandh ho gayi thi....😆😆Par Mauli ke dimaag ki taarif karni padegi, kya idea tha.😆 😆 😆I'm glad u liked the idea....stupid nahi tha wo...😆

Ayaan gusse se badbadate hue nikal gaya.😆Mauli ne kya acting ki hai.😆Asmi pareshan ho rahi hai aur Mauli usse samjha rahi hai. Sahi kaha Mauli ne, Ayaan kabhi Asmi se naaraz nahi ho sakta.😉 😉 😉Well....Mauli knws Ayaan well to say that....😛😛

Toh finally Ayaan-Asmi mil hi gaye. What a meeting!!! You described their meeting very well. It was perfect. Not like Ekta kapoor. Phew.....mujhe to filmy scenes laane me hi darr lagta hai....I dont want it to be Kektaish at all...😆😆(though I'd admit she's done sum gr8 work😊)Ayaan soch raha hai ki Asmi surprised kyun nahi hai and he puts the two and two together. Well, I would have been disappointed if he hadn't been able to know.Ayaan tumhe thodi disappoint karta?😉Ib officer hai yaar.....itna to usse karna hi tha....😳

Asmi and Mauli ka convo mysterious tha. Asmi soch rahi hai ki wo Arnav ko janti hai, Ayaan ko nahi.😉. Jaan jayegi, meri Sumi hai na batane ke liye.😉Bilkul.....aur uske saath tum log bhi jaan jaoge....😃Asmi kitna chid gayi mauli se aur mauli ne kya reason bataya Ayaan ka usko behen banane ke liye.😆 😆 😆I'm happy u liked this bit....actually after Nishant I didnt want u all to again think of a triangle....isiliye iss baar confusion clear kar diya....😆😆

Toh Asmi Ayaan ke car ke saamne aa gayi aur Ayaan ne usse ghar chod diya. Asmi ke dimag ki batti to bilkul band hi thi jab tak ki mauli ne nahi bataya.Hehe.....Ayaan saath hota to mera bhi yehi haal hota...😳 Aur Ayaan ne Mauli ko shaitan bandariya kaha, bilkul sahi kaha. Beautiful update.Thank u dear....😛

Continue soon

Love

Guglu.

PS: Loved the sentence I want that girl and its double meaning and Mauli's reply. It was the best part of this update.Awe.....i'm glad u thought it to be the best part of the UD.....waise pata hai main ye line likhne nahi wali thi.....last tym jab error dhundne k liye padh rahi thi tabhi add kiya tha....😆😆

Originally posted by: guglu088

REPLY FOR PART 17:

Hi Sumi, Hey Guglu.....so mere Ud karne se pehle tumne comment kar hi diya....kya kare....I'm too late....😆😆

Toh tumne aakhir meri kwaish puri kar hi di. Ayaan ke flashback aur uski feelings dikhakar.Ya I knw....u hav been w8ing to knw Ayaan's side of story....😳😳 The flashback was truly great. He wanted everything to occur as smoothly as possible and he is blaming himself for going close to Asmi. It was truly nice, the trip into the past. It reminded me of everythind-from their first conversation to his exit from Shergill mansion. His memories of the time when he realised her love for him and his love for as well as well.But he kept his feelings under wrap and is doing it even now. My heart goes out for Ayaan. His convo with Mauli at the cliff point was amusing as well as interesting. He realised the truth of her words now. Uski har baat Asmi se shuru hokar Asmi par hi khatam hoti hai. And then when he could feel her love for him through her performance. It was very well written.I'm so glad u liked this Guglu.....I've tried my best to recreate those memories in ur minds....and also describe Ayaan's state at that tym.....I'm glad I cud do justice to that....😃

Asmi and Mauli's conversation confuseed the former and she was thinking ki Mauli ne baat taal kyun di.Hmm....I guess u r also a bit confused ryt?😉 Mauli forbade her to go out and when she knew that Asmi doesn't know any place in Mumbai she made the plan to send her along with ayaan. Mauli will do everything to get them 2gether...😆😆Ayaan ko itne ajeeb plan kahan se aate hai logon ko test karne ke? Mauli ne sahi kaha ki acha hua ki Ayaan ne usse test nahi kiya.Haha....Ayaan hai hi sabse different....😃

Ayaan ko Mauli ne asmi ke saath bhej diya aur jab asmi uski car ko dekhkar pachta rahi thi to Ayaan muskura raha tha kyunki uski Asmi aisi hi thi.😊 Their convo was hilarious. he knows very well how to deal with hr.Who else other than Ayaan knws Asmi so well?😉😉 They spent some nice time in each other's company. The song was very nice. I liked it,actually it is one of my favourites.Mine too...😃 I remembered another song for them.😉

Pehle pyaar ka pehla gum,

Pehli baar hai aankhen nam,

Pehla hai tanhai ka ye mausam

Aa bhi jao warna ro denge hum.

Awe.....thats a beautiful song.....par maine shayad kabhi nahi suna.....from which film is it Guglu?😛

Please continue soon. Do din jaldi update karke baith gayi ho. Jaldi update karo.Hehe....I knw.....bahut late ho gaya hai.....hopefully kal Ud kar dungi.....sorry for the delay anyways...😊

Love

Guglu

Originally posted by: nisha1984

Sorry I didn't comment in last three parts but I have been busy.Hey Nisha....thats ok....I knw sumtyms we just cant get tym....abhi mera kuch aisa hi haal hai...😆

I just read them and they were awesome.........Thank u dear.....i'm glad u liked the parts....😃

I will comment on them as I will get time...........Sure....take ur tym.....I'm always here w8ing for ur comments...😃

But for now rocking updates...........Thanks again dear....😃

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

beautiful... 👏 👏 👏Hi Priya.....Thanks for liking the part....😃

tumhe pata hai is ud me sab se jyada khaash kya tha...ayaan ka emotions...us k feelings...past days k sare un palon me jab bhi us ne kuch naya kadam uthaya...!!!😃 😃 😃Well....anything related to AYaan is always 'khaas'.....I'm glad u liked the flashbak thing....😃

Awesome...👏 👏 👏

par yaar...is Ayaan ko le kar abhi bhi baht sare unsolved-mysteries hain...😕!!!Hmm....abhi saare mysteries maine khole nahi hai na...😆 pata nahi yeh baar baar koun phone karta hai...???Yup....ye sochne wali baat hai na....😆😆 aur Asmi se dur rahne ki ek hi wajah nahi hai us k paas...kuch aur bhi hai...jo aayaan asmi se chupa raha hai...aur tum hum se...😕!!!! Not for long dear.....ye baat tum sabko jald hi pata chal jayega...😃ab kuch aur gadbad ki na...toh main Ayaan ka toh kuch nahi karungi...par tumari halat mujhe saaf saaf dikhayi de rahi hai...kyoun ki baht padnewali hai tumhe...tab... samjhi....???😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉Oops....mujhe dhamki bhare comments mil rahe hai....lagta hai safety k liye Ayaan ko hi consult karna padega....coz Priya chahe kuch bhi ho jaye Ayaan ko to kuch nahi karegi na....😳

us din Asmi k dance k baad Ayaan khud confess karnewala tha...par achanak kya ho gaya...mere dimagless dimag me kuch bhi ghoos nahi raha hai...😕!!!Kyunki ye meri dimagless dimag ki karamat hai...😆😆 jarur is k piche bhi tum ne apne dimagless dimag ki koi chaal rakhi hogi...😆!!!Oh yes....maine abhi wahi kaha....😆😆

n mauli bhi kuch toh janti hi hai Ayaan k bare me...lekin voh bhi ASmi ko nahi bata rahi...!!! ab na toh Ayaan bata raha hai aur na mauli...aur na hi SUMI...!!! No problem yaar....I assure u....main jald hi bata dungi....sach poochho to batane me zyada parts nahi lungi....par problem ye hai ki mujhe part likhne ka tym hi nahi mil raha hai...😕😕 toh ayaan aur Mauli toh mere pahunch se dur hain...par Sumi toh yahi hai na...toh bolo...'maar diya jaye ki chod diya jaye...bol tere sath kya suluk kiya jaye...???'😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆*gulping hard*......AYAAN!!!!!! (I'm screaming for help)😆

yaar meri bhi aaj tak yahi samajh me nahi aati ki log museum kyoun jate hain...😕??? ek raja ne is brush se daant saaf kiya tha...is ki biwi ne yahi dupatta pahan kar apni premi k sath bhaag gayi thi...aise hi chizain hoti hain...aur bhi kuch hoti hain...jo mere dimag k upar se nikal jata hai...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆!!!Haha....kya baat kahi hai.....waise sach akhu to main kabhi museum nahi gayi....😆😆....aur ab to jana bhi nahi hai....😆😆 vaise bhi mere paas dimag kahan hain...😆??? last floor toh bilkul khali hai...sirf ek candel jal rahi hai...jo ki kabhi bhi aur kisi bhi waqt bujh sakti hai...😆!!! abhi main isi ka ilaaz karwa rahi hun Dr. Mana k paas...!!! aur gr888 news yeh hai ki ilaaz karne k baht din baad pata chala ki Dr. mana k paar toh khud ka hi dimag nahi hai...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Hehe....waise achha hi hua....at least tum Mana ki patient ban gayi.....dimagless Dr. k paas hum jaise dimagless patients hi hone chahiye....😆😆

Asmi ne toh pahle bade bhaav khaye the yeh kah kar ki 'kahin bhi jayungi, par beach nahi...'...par apne Ayaan k paas har ek chiz ka tod hai...tabhi us ne asmi ko us museum me le gaya...😛!!!Bilkul.....Ayaan hai aisa.....😳😳 beach par baithna sach me achha lagta hai😃...mera fav job hai yeh...kabhi agar mood off hota hai toh main vohin ja kar baithna pasand karti hun...of course akele...kyoun ki Ayaan ko toh tum ne vahan Asmi k sath duty par laga diya hai na...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆😆 😆Hehe....beach to mujhe bhi pasand hai.....lekin main ek baat hi gayi hu.....Dhaka me beach nahi hai na.....and tum chaho to Asmi ki jagah khud hi jaa sakti ho.....u c....Asmi depend completely on ur imagination...😉😉

ek aur scene tha jo mujhe achha laga...jab asmi Ayaan ka car dekh rahi thi...jahan us ne thoka tha...aur Ayaan ne aa kar 'AHEM>>>AHEM' kiya...aur us scene par Asmi ka reaction...baht hi sweet tha...!!!😃 😃 😃 😃😃 😃Awe.....I'm glad u liked that scene....😃....it was mainly to show the innocent side of their sweet relation....which can never fade away....😃

song was perfect...aur is song k dauraan asmi n ayaan k feelings ko bhi tum ne bakhubi likha hai...!!!😃 😃 😃 👏 👏 👏Thanks....likhne me kitni mushkil ho rahi thi....main hi janti hu....khair I'm glad I cud do gud....😃

gr8888888 work...👏 👏 👏 Thanqqqqqqqqq😃

par in sare tarifon me tumhari 50% ki partner hai Dhara...😃!!! after all us ki hi wajah se hum sab ko itni jaldi aur itna khubsurat Ud padhne ka mauka mila...😃!!! gud job dhara👏...tum aise hi dhamkiyaan deti raho...main tumhare hi piche khadi hun...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Hmm.....ok then....i'll forward this message to Dhara Dii....😆😆....And I guess she wud always "welcum" u....😉

aur haan Sumi dear...jab bhi tumhe tym mile tabhi Ud karo...after all studies first na...!!!😃Yes....lekin mujhe skool jane aur ane se fursaat hi nahi milti....😆😆😆

take care...😃U too dear....😛

Originally posted by: sweet_shona

Hi sumaiya...Sorry for being late dear....!!Its ok Shona....kabhi kabhi ho jata hai....c I'm also late for the UD....😆😆
u have described so welll the way Asmi realised her true feelings for ayaan.. n decided to get back her love by any cost..it ws soo pleasenat...hehehe...Glad u liked this.....and surely it was pleasant after sum sad parts....😆😆
So Mauli is helping her to get ayaan back...so sweet of her...Yup....she is a sweet frnd....😃
Wow... asmi crashed Ayaan's car...hahahaha..his most favourite thing...Hmm...thats very naughty of her ryt?😆😆
So aakhir woh dono mil hi gaye...U described their meeting sooo well..loved that scene...!! 😳 .. liked the way u described Ayaan's feelings... just awesome...👏 Awe....thanks for the appreciation Shona....😃
Hailaa... Asmi to Ayaan ki car ke saamne aa gayi n uske bina bataaye hi ayaan ne use Mauli ke ghar chhod diya..he is v v smart...samaj gaya ki Mauli is the one who is helping Asmi.. 😆 Yes....Ayaan has to be smart.....warna IB officer kaise banta....😛😛
Woww..Ayaan took Asmi out...chalo slowly hi sahi kuchh interaction to shuru hua dono ke bich... Ayaan kitna bhi dur bhaag le but Asmi iss baar use dur nahi jaane degi... 😉 Bilkul.....this tym she will not lose him....😉😉
Lovely parts.... fantastic...!!! 👏 Thanks Shona....😃
Waiting for the next update... 😊

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Good update this one.Thnx Vertika...😃

Kaafi had tak Mauli ka plan kaam kar gaya hai. Mauli bhejna chahti thi dono ko ek saath par Ayaan hai na bekaar me attitude dikhata hai aur Asmi ne bhi socha tha Ayaan us k hi saath jaayega. Chalo kisi bhi tarah janab gaye to madam k saath jab ki vo to jaane hi nahi vaale the.Yes Ayaan chala to gaya.....kya kare....wo Asmi ko aise hi chhor bhi to nahi sakta...😊

Mauli bhi surprise hoti rehti hai ki logon ko test karne k liye itne weired ideas aate kahan se hain us k dimaag me i mean Ayaan k. But definetly kuch dekh k hi Ayaan logon ko apni team me rakhta hai na aise hi to rakh nahi lega na. Yes....aise hi koi bhi uske team me nahi aa sakta....and I'll surely explain this thing later on...😉Cliff pe khada ho k Ayaan fir se apni memories ko fresh kar raha tha jis se us ko ek positive vibes milen.Hmm....thats true.

Sahi me kitne chinta thi na Asmi ko ye jaane ki kaisa response kiya Ayaan ne us k baare me sab pata chalne k baad. Par ek baat bahut acchi hue ki ab Ayaan kaafi had tak normal behave kar raha hai na Asmi k saath. Yes.....coz at the end of the day.....he is Asmi's Ayaan who also luvs her a lot.😃Loved the fb as u shown n liked the song selection too.

continue soon.Glad u liked it.😃

Originally posted by: sweet.dreamz

Asmi.......opps sorry sumi Hehe....Hi Rajita...😃....yaar, this was a genuine typing error.....u know i just typed it and then didn't want to erase it.....u know why....well, becos i wanted to tell u how engrossed u keep me in this fic.....main sab bhul jati hoon.....its just ayaan and asmi....Wow.....thats a big compliment for me....n so I surely dont mind being called Asmi....waise bhi Asmi hone se Ayaan mil jayega na...😉..and sorry, maine tere 16th part par bhi comment nahi kiya...Its ok....padh to liye na...😆😆..yaar, i had my maths paper yesterday....eng is next thats why net par hoon....eng toh pedaishi aati hai....this is the thought process u see.....hehehe..😆😆😆Main bhi bilkul aisa hi sochti hu.....when I hav eng papers....I behave as if there is no xam at all...😆😆..anyways...i wont keep the comment long.....just remember i love the way u write and the selection of words which u use for u dialogues.....itne pyaare aur innocent yet deep and full of meaning waale dialogues..😊😊😊...mujhe bahut pasand hai......infact there were several dialogues in this update which i loved...I'm more than glad to knw dat.....😃😃.....aur pichle update mein ayaan bechare ki choti choti eyes itne saare emotions ko trap kaise kar paa rahi thi..It was surely difficult for him...😆..hehe😃😃....i love him yaar..I LOVE AYAAN TOO.😳😳....yaar meri uske saath appointment fix karaa de.....main usse usi waqat propose kar doongi.....main padhai likhai chor kar 12th pass kar ke shaadi karne ko bhi taiyyar hoon....seriously..Arre serious to main bhi hu.....bas agar sirf Ayaan hota😍....I swear I wud hav seriously done it....aur dekha jaye to maine to 11th bhi paas nahi kiya....so 10th boards k baad hi main sab kuch chhor chhar k usse shaadi kar leti....😆😆...aur main updates ke detailed comments 15th dec ko doongi becos my exms get over then.....as for now u can remember i just loveeeeeeeeeeedddd both the 2 updates.Okay dear.....take ur tym.....jab chahe comment karo.....I'm always here to read them😃😃.....aur mauli ko sorry kehna.....i remember once i even forgot her alias name malvika.....hehehe.....but i really like her now.....Hehe....ok....sorry pohucha dungi....waise itni liking kis liye....Ayaan ki behen jaisi hai isliye.....aur Ayaan-Asmi ko milana chahti hai isliye....ryt?😆😆

and yaar, why am i feeling Ayaan has lost his family....probably his sister.....u know when he told mauli she is like his sister....u know jab mauli was joking wid asmi abt this instance wid him.....maybe she thinks of this as a joke....but he knws the reason.....but it seems mauli also knows quite alot abt him.....par jo bhi ho u know it all..True....I knw it all for now....and soon u'll get to knw everything.😃...hehehehe.......bye bye....plz forgive the typing errors....bahut jaldi type kiya hai....Achha? Tab to mujhe Hindi k saath saath typing lessons bhi lene chahiye.....I didnt find any error.....😆😆

loads of luv,

rajita......

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

@ Pinky:

Thank u for liking the part dear.....sorry to keep u w8ing for long....I'll UD soon.😃

@Dhara dii:

Dii.....aapke liye bahut se thanks messages hai from Sur (Sur Singhania), Yogitha (Sanskruthi), Mana (Manatated) n Priya (Lion_priya)......😃...In fact Priya has got sumthing to tell u:

par in sare tarifon me tumhari 50% ki partner hai Dhara...😃!!! after all us ki hi wajah se hum sab ko itni jaldi aur itna khubsurat Ud padhne ka mauka mila...😃!!! gud job dhara👏...tum aise hi dhamkiyaan deti raho...main tumhare hi piche khadi hun...!!!😆