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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#121

Hey Sookie!

Feels good to be back :).

Is it not that at the call of the complete silence(end) we find the value of our life? Yes... It is. Thats what you have truthfully penned down.

Thanks again.

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Pebblez

@Pebblez

Voyager

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Posted: 16 years ago

#122

Before I'm killed by you, or before you block me on gtalk :P, um here, um here!! :D dude, seriously, morbid as this stuff is, can you NEVER keep your characters alive? haha! just kidding...i LOVED the part...and only because I saw a connection there to smg personal related to u, maybe this is how u felt about it, hmm? But yeah, as Aria said, i had that 'bad nagging feeling' too, in my stomach, as i read it...and it proved correct! she's dead :D but that doesn't matter, she got the tune at least :D okay, total hyper mode cuz of all the sugary stuff i just ate...laterzz!!

You better know who, by now. :D

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suvi_rox1

@suvi_rox1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#123

running too slow even this time....

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: Prasanthi
Hey Sookie!

Feels good to be back :).

Is it not that at the call of the complete silence(end) we find the value of our life? Yes... It is. Thats what you have truthfully penned down.

Thanks again.

Welcome back Prasanthi. Thanks for your comment. Yes, you got it right. In that final moment of peace and silence, the value of life is known.

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 16 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: Pebblez
Before I'm killed by you, or before you block me on gtalk :P, um here, um here!! :D dude, seriously, morbid as this stuff is, can you NEVER keep your characters alive? haha! just kidding...i LOVED the part...and only because I saw a connection there to smg personal related to u, maybe this is how u felt about it, hmm? But yeah, as Aria said, i had that 'bad nagging feeling' too, in my stomach, as i read it...and it proved correct! she's dead :D but that doesn't matter, she got the tune at least :D okay, total hyper mode cuz of all the sugary stuff i just ate...laterzz!!

You better know who, by now. :D

Gosh! You are finally here (After loitering all around the web!) Nope. Characters will have an ultimately sad ending. Come on, you have seen the trend.
Hmm..something personal huh. Personally, except for my music search, nothing really falls into place but when I wrote it, it seemed like a very good idea. :-) Thanks Kiran.

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 16 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: suvi_rox1
running too slow even this time....

:-) Take your time.

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 16 years ago

#127

Recoil

You are quiet, he observes.
Nothing left to speak, she replies.
You have changed, he muses.
Have you not, she questions.
Not as much as you have, he counters.
I am tired of this, she sighs.
Tired of what, he queries.
You, me, us, she mutters.
You hurt me deep, he growls.
I know, she sniffs.
What happens now, he asks.
Lets end this, she says.
I don't want to, he retorts.
Its not about you, she scoffs.
Oh, now its us, he thunders.
Don't be like that, she pleads.
Tell me what to do, he avers.
Let me go, she affirms.
Its not easy, he alleges.
Not for me either, she swears.
Kiss me goodbye then, he requests.
I don't think I can, she refuses.
Victorian witch, he mocks.
Please, she begs.
Whatever, he cries.

Sookie

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Sri

@RadiantTreasure

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#128

hey sookie*
great one dear,,
recoil!!!!loved the name.......
and loved the way u wrote it..so lovely!!!
good wishes..
sri:-)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#129

ahh recoil..beautiful flow- the back and forth dual..and esp. loved the ending.
👏

Edited by olive_green - 16 years ago

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 16 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: sri_4
hey sookie*
great one dear,,
recoil!!!!loved the name.......
and loved the way u wrote it..so lovely!!!
good wishes..
sri:-)

Thanks Sri. I liked the title too (also the episode!) Thanks very much for your comment.

Sookie.