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Posted: 15 years ago
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I met her couple of nights back in one of the local pubs. She gave me her number after we shared some drinks and a handful of dances. Tonight, she called me to visit her. So here I am standing out on the corner of the street where she lives. Its past midnight already and I know I am late. But after tonight, I hope she'll understand why. I am dressed in black and almost blend with the night.
For a very long time now, the darkness has been my only companion.
My coat flutters and my wavy hair is all over my face. I chuckle. That must be the breeze. It seems like it's been a lifetime since I felt the breeze. Or felt anything at all. I continue my slow pace towards her house and contemplating on my life or lack of it. I stop in front of a small house. I see that she has a small garden full of daisies.
I choose a red one for her.
I stand outside her door and try to collect myself. I don't remember being this nervous before. I am about to knock on the door but then I see that she has left the door unlocked. There is a knot in my stomach just by thinking her trust in me. I almost turn around, go back to my house and forget everything; her scent, her laugh, her smile and even her existence.
But I need her.
I need her more than I need anything else. She was so full of energy, so full of life and so full of questions. She even offered me a good sunscreen to get the paleness out of my face. I had felt something for her. I, a person who doesn't feel anything, felt a small faint of something towards this person.
Was that an emotion?
I smile at these memories and walk into her house. She is on couch sleeping; perhaps she fell asleep waiting for me. I see two glasses and a bottle of wine; the wine bottle is not yet opened. I watch her sleep and her steady rise and fall of her chest in a rhythm for which I almost wanted to dance. I position myself in front of her. I can smell the faint perfume of her, something sweet something floral something very much like her. I can see the pale green colored vein on her slender neck bulged slightly.
I whisper softly - "Sorry" I really meant it.
I bit her neck slowly.
I could feel her reacting to the pain I am causing her. I was glad that I couldn't see the horror on her face or her disappoint in me in her eyes or her surrender for the mistake she did by trusting me. I close my eyes and feel almost alive with warm blood that I can taste and I can feel it flowing in me. Once finished, I slowly move away from her body.
I don't allow myself to look at her face. It would've broken my heart, if I had one. I pick up the red daisy that I had chosen for her and walked away.
And again, I felt nothing.

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Edited by Sookie* - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82
cruel intentions.
has someone been watching the new moon? :P


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all that build up, and he has no regrets. deserves his darkness of the night
thanks for the pm
Edited by olive_green - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: olive_green

cruel intentions
has someone been watching the new moon?



You wound me so deep with this accusation.
I am one of the anti-sparkling vampire brigade. (Irnoic how I even wrote a FF on those characters for the heck of it)

Actually, I was inspired by Angel. You remember that show in late 90's? I had left watching it after three seasons and last night I restarted it to take a break from crime dramas.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sookie*



You wound me so deep with this accusation.
I am one of the anti-sparkling vampire brigade. (Irnoic how I even wrote a FF on those characters for the heck of it)

Actually, I was inspired by Angel. You remember that show in late 90's? I had left watching it after three seasons and last night I restarted it to take a break from crime dramas.



welcome to the club, I should have guessed, but I wanted a confirmation. 😛 you wrote a FF on those characters? really??
i remember Angel, the one Buffy fell for hard! didn't like that show as much, as I enjoyed Buffy
but yes, i see what you mean.


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: olive_green



welcome to the club, I should have guessed, but I wanted a confirmation. 😛 you wrote a FF on those characters? really??
i remember Angel, the one Buffy fell for hard! didn't like that show as much, as I enjoyed Buffy
but yes, i see what you mean.



Yep! He is the one. I really went into obsessive phase with that guy. Brooding vampire with a soul. It was darker than Buffy and lets face it. The guy was (is!) way too handsome.

Oh about Twilight story. I just used the names Bella and Edward. Its a seven part story and they talk only about books. Its actually fun and I am getting people to read it but they frown at the word "Twilight" (Yes, I am talking about you guys - NJ and Kiran!)

In case you want to venture and take my word for non presence of sparkling vampires with beautiful voice and one dimensional clumsy damsel in confusion:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1155223

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Posted: 15 years ago
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no arguing with that- the guy is too handsome. 😉

i have bookmarked your link, seven days- will get to that sometime soon. thanks for that link- one dimensional clumsy damsel in confusion-you have a way with words- it just sounds intriguing.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hmmm.. Sookie.. Its so vampirish.. hahahahha. don't know whether this word exists or not. :D
First he feeling something for her....an emotion did he call it?! ...but then... again back to his dark nature...that was an very well put tirade of emotions ending to nothing. Enjoyed it!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: olive_green

no arguing with that- the guy is too handsome. 😉

i have bookmarked your link, seven days- will get to that sometime soon. thanks for that link- one dimensional clumsy damsel in confusion-you have a way with words- it just sounds intriguing.



:-) Never been described that way before.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prasanthi

Hmmm.. Sookie.. Its so vampirish.. hahahahha. don't know whether this word exists or not. :D

First he feeling something for her....an emotion did he call it?! ...but then... again back to his dark nature...that was an very well put tirade of emotions ending to nothing. Enjoyed it!!



:-) Nope it does not!!!

I wonder if vampires have emotions. Since everything is technically dead in them, so emotions should not exist, correct? But then again, I had "Angel" as basis so I took some creative liberty.
Dark most of the times wins. Well, except for Harry Potter and Lord of the Rings.
I am too cynical to believe otherwise.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey sookie..nice one..
the person really liked her..but well his cruelity won over i guess..n he cudnt even feel anything..he just suck out all her blood not bothering wether he caused pain but he did'nt want to look at her after that..mean!
thnx 4 d PM
do write more
-aish

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