Death Talkies: Wheel of Time [Apr/04 P66]

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@-Aria-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#41

thats exactly the image i had in mind, someone who had taken her life and was stuck in this world - where she could see her death bed, and as the rest of the poem goes...could see the flowers and see the leaves flutter in the breeze...but couldnt feel or inhale the fragrance of spring....and that was her punishment...bascially learnt to appreciate life...till finally was alive again..i dont know what prompted that thought..mine was written back in 01-29-00 :) yup thats the date. wow! at how we both shared the same thought.

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

Rocker

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Posted: 16 years ago

#42

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hope to be back soon!

Alright! I never knew that I'll be back here so soon :D.

Hi Sookie!

Its not the story that attracts me, but your choice of words that have the knack to pull me over n over again! Enjoyed reading it. My favouriite:

Arguments. Negotiations. Compromises. Endings.

Its mocking me, its inviting me, its consuming me in its big fat belly filled with words. I twirl the glass. Amber encourages me at the same time when the paper invites.

Throat burns. Eyes water. Hands shake. Head hurts.

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#43

Just read the next one... it written briliantly.. till the end i wondered whats it gogin to be.. where which situation she is in..and the signing part made me realise her issues... i think there is a sense of suspense filled with great words sed to in very little space explain a vast description which perhaps is also complicated... so great job again sookie..and i have ot mention i liek the title evrytime.. it just that its sooo easy for u to play with these words whcih suit so well.. and r in memory for long... great work.. keep it up dear..

Bhoomi

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 16 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam
Just read the next one... it written briliantly.. till the end i wondered whats it gogin to be.. where which situation she is in..and the signing part made me realise her issues... i think there is a sense of suspense filled with great words sed to in very little space explain a vast description which perhaps is also complicated... so great job again sookie..and i have ot mention i liek the title evrytime.. it just that its sooo easy for u to play with these words whcih suit so well.. and r in memory for long... great work.. keep it up dear..
tc

Bhoomi

Thanks a lot Bhoomi! I am glad you liked this one shot. It was one of those conversation inspired spur of the moment thing. Its a pretty simple story isn't it?

On a side note, I updated first post in this thread regarding titles used. Starting this chapter, it will be from NCIS TV series :-)

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Sri

@RadiantTreasure

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

hey sookie*
how r u ?
lthnks for PM..
sometimes i feel "i" am not worth reading u r writings..they are so lovely and as i said i am very blunt to understand them until i read it 4-5 times again and again..
they have lots of feelings and emotions and ofcourse u r suspense and mystic elements...which i fail to understand most of the times.....
yet i try cos i just love them...
i wonder in which part of the world u r as most of u r writings are inspired my many eng serials/movies...
just want to say that this particular part was fab...-a ladys feelings at the time of divorce...
thanks again for u r lovely effort..no matter how long back u have written it..
waiting for next part..
sri:-)

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 16 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Prasanthi
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hope to be back soon!

Alright! I never knew that I'll be back here so soon :D.

Hi Sookie!

Its not the story that attracts me, but your choice of words that have the knack to pull me over n over again! Enjoyed reading it. My favouriite:

Arguments. Negotiations. Compromises. Endings.

Its mocking me, its inviting me, its consuming me in its big fat belly filled with words. I twirl the glass. Amber encourages me at the same time when the paper invites.

Throat burns. Eyes water. Hands shake. Head hurts.

Yeah...there is nothing much going on in the story front isn't it? A lady signs divorce papers. That's the summary. But then there are words. :-)

Edited by Sookie* - 16 years ago

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 16 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: sri_4
hey sookie*
how r u ?
lthnks for PM..
sometimes i feel "i" am not worth reading u r writings..they are so lovely and as i said i am very blunt to understand them until i read it 4-5 times again and again..
they have lots of feelings and emotions and ofcourse u r suspense and mystic elements...which i fail to understand most of the times.....
yet i try cos i just love them...
i wonder in which part of the world u r as most of u r writings are inspired my many eng serials/movies...
just want to say that this particular part was fab...-a ladys feelings at the time of divorce...
thanks again for u r lovely effort..no matter how long back u have written it..
waiting for next part..
sri:-)

Sri, Its nothing of that sort. Its fine if you dont understand it at one shot.
Okay, I very much live in India and have amazing Internet connection. And I was and still am a TV addict. I am catching up with old classic TV shows online and also watch new ones online.
:-)

Edited by Sookie* - 16 years ago

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#48

Reveille

"You know, there are no permanent fixtures in your life. Usually you believe that there is - a person, a thing or a feeling which would stick by you not forever, but for a very long time but one day, it falls apart. It doesn't crumble to dust in one shot overnight. It happens gradually and so slowly that every memory of it haunts you for the rest of your life. It fails you to hold on to that constant landscape that you always retreat to when everything becomes suffocated and life simply reduces to creases on your forehead.
If you were to explain every tiny little feeling that each of your cell would feel when there is a jolt of odd feeling that someone you admire, respect and have come to assume as a friend that you can rely on anytime, utter a callous statement, you could perhaps earn a credit in physiology - since describing that feeling would mean explaining reaction from every vital organ of your body because of the unexplainable hurt it has caused to each of your nerve ends.
If you are really honest in the way you show your emotions on your face, then perhaps you could be a study in disappointment.
The way your face would fall, wiping any humor in your eyes, erasing the casual smile that you were sporting only moments ago, sudden constriction in your throat, the loud beating of your heart in your ears and a sudden heat that arises from the base of your neck and travels all the way to your cheeks to warm them and tinge them with a rosy hue of embarrassment.
In that moment, all you can do is nod and flee the room as quickly as possible to hide the disappointment you felt when you heard those words for the first time.
One might ask you, is your friendship so shallow that you get hurt by mere words from that person. It would be hard to explain to people around you the way you are feeling as it's not even close to being rational. In a little while you will come to terms with your embarrassment and move on. But you have realized that it's only a matter of time when words that bother you and hurt you would become more frequent and somehow they would also bother less and less and one day, these words wont matter at all.
They would feel empty and would be just some words spoken by a stranger.
Then you wonder, if everything is ever permanent at all.
Somehow, the answer does not scare you anymore."

Edited by Sookie* - 16 years ago

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

Rocker

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Posted: 16 years ago

#49

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Hi Sookie!

Its not everytime do we sit and think about this. Sometimes we shun away from the truth. But at the end it always the bare TRUTH and then everything settles down as if nothing. So well said Sookie!

Edited by Prasanthi - 16 years ago

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Mridhula

@Mridhula

Beginner

Posted: 16 years ago

#50

hmm...it was very interesting...like i mentioned earlier, you descriptions are marvelous...i can imagine the vivid expressions on a persons face when disappointment dawns on him/ her. it would be difficult to describe each and very reaction or emotion...but when we try and do that, we'd probably feel blue; because we'd finally know how one frown looks on our face even though it may seem effortless to some.

thanks for posting...

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