Originally posted by: Enigma_Swati
Hey Nandini!
I just shuffled through all the pages to see if I put up a comment, coz I probably read it yesterday and unfortunately didn't comment... I dunno what thingy I was busy in? Anyways... here goes...
(First, sorry for not commenting yesterday and your rePM, I think you Pmed me the first time itself! 😃)
you know the starting part is the one which I love the most. The way you described the surroundings, the environment and the feelings they are just so good! I love reading that part of any FF maybe because I myself lack at it somehow. And please don't say that I don't, I know I do... It takes me ages to think of appropriate words at how describe something!!! Ridhima's desperation and cries for help for her love really stirred me within. 👏
And Atul came as no surprise! You beautifully used his character in the story.. I have always thought that his character has always been made some kind of scapegoat in the series and didn't actually like that part where he was portrayed as a joker even though he is such a mature person inside (yes, I think so!) Both Ridhima's and Atul's behaviour were very normal and obvious.. The sympathetic glances from people are pathetic! (😆 symathy is pathetic! omg! i have gone mad!!)
To be very honest with you, I found Ridhima's outburst over God a little filmy... Not that it wasn't written well, but it kinda doesn't go with her image. But yeah! things change and this probably the reason for it... she was desperate to see her beloved alive and out of danger, it make sense.. and yes, I understand her position completely.. i know you are confused with the irony in this but my take is not very clear on this matter, sorta confused... but yes i liked it!
Atul and Ridhima's conversation was beautifully penned... I loved that part too! Like I said the series never showed this side of to much extent although this should have been there... He's a true friend and I really like this side of him...
I loved the she was beside him every moment.. i completely adored it!
Gosh! Long comment? You deserve it.. might have been longer but I got an exam tomorrow and two fics to update.. will try and make it longer next time..!
Update super soon!
Thanks for the PM and the rePM!
Love ya!
Swati 😃
Heyy Swati...!! 🤗
Man, and to think that you were thanking me for replying to your thread the way I did...well, what is this then, mademoiselle? Hm?! Thanks so so soooo much...!! And even more so because you've been honest...I was afraid of the filmy bit...which is why I kept it limited to just a couple of sentences...but you know, that whole questioning of faith is something I know exists just the same in real life...the problem is probably with my expression of it in writing...will try and do a better, more subtle job of it the next time round...although I'm warning you, there is going to be more of the Almighty in the parts to come...but yes, I'll keep what you said in mind, and formulate them in a less filmy style...thanks soo much for pointing it out, really...😊
but yeah, there is one thing...the fact that it doesn't go with her image...that's because I am consciously giving Riddhima a different dimension...she is roughly the Riddhima we're all familiar with on the show, but I'm making some changes in her background, which is why the changes in her character too...they haven't come into play so far because I've hardly dwelt on Riddhima's perspective much in all the previous parts...in this part, I put Armaan in the background deliberately, so that there is a more direct view of Riddhima, and the fact that there's more to her than I've given out so far...know what I mean?
Thank youu for all the kind words...and for replying the way you did too...(touche!)...hehe...😎
Take Care and Cheers!
Nandini 😃
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