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Posted: 15 years ago
Diya - good job with both scenes...how did you churn out such contrasting scenes back to back? I liked how the sight of a numb Damini scared Prithvi. It conveys his fear at what he's done so well...has he lost her? That's got to be a horrible thought for him. In the second one, I LOVED Damini's problem!! Awwww....I'm fat, feet are swollen...you are never there....and Rosh ate my chocolates! LOVED IT! You are soo right, a pregnant Damini will be a firecracker gone nuts! Can you imagine her tossing and turning in bed trying to find a comfortable position, then giving up in frustration, and then waking Pri 'cos she can't sleep. 😆

Edited by kheerni - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

**Writing by Lifez_Beautiful**


FICTION 1

[its raining heavily here.. so nthng else is coming to ma mind excpt prida.. so these r my random thoughts..Its Prida after evrythng is sorted out...
Hope u all like it..]

It was a wet ,rainy evening..the scenery luked beautifully fresh....the mist had jus cleared exposing the emrald green canopy of the lush green mountain range'there was total silence.. Except for the pleasant chirping of tiny birds'the lake was filled to its brim.. And was shimmering in the golden yellow of the setting sun....and there in the balcony of a beautiful cottage..seated on a comfortable huge couch.. Some1 was completely engrossed wth smthng else'....It was damini....her head completely into an interesting novel.... not even noticing the dimming lites of the eveng.. N the beautiful drizzle wch had started yet again'

Suddenly sm1 crept near her n whispered "jaan" into her ears ..! She skipped a beat for a second..due to d sudden surprise ! She was so engrossed in d book dat she had not noticed dat Prithvi had brought 2 mugs of coffee 4 them and was standing there ...4 her to notice hm.... 4 almst 5 mins now!!

Damni nw flustered dat she had been jerked to senses by her husband dearest ..said in a mock angry tone .." ufff tumne tho meri jaan hi leli thi....aisa bhi koi kartha hai kya prithvi ?!!" still recovern 4m the shock.. Hearrn this pri tells her softly.." mein kya apni jaan khud lunga kya ?" n touches her face.. to brush off the hair from it.. Wen suddenly damz gets up n says.." umm.. Tum mujhse baat hi mat karo.. Aise hi baate banathe rehthe ho.. Jaan kehthe ho na .. Fir abb tak kahan the ?? Mujhe yahan honey- moon pe le aake khud kahi ghayab ho gaye..!! Tum tho mujhse pyaar hi nahi karte..".. Prithvi tryn to hold her by shoulders n tries to apologise sayn.." arrey shona.. Im sry.. Tume tho pata hai na.. Yahan ek bada horse trading centre hai.. Main wahan humare stud farm ke liye ek naaya pony dekhne ke liye gaya tha.. Aur tumhe bhi tho horses bahut pasand hai na..aur haan.. Raaste mein uss Mr.barath se mila... us centre ka owner unse yahan pe ek humari adventure club ki branch kholne ke baare me discuss kar raha tha.. Isiliye der ho gayi.. Sowie baba.. " he tld nw catchn his ears... but to his amusement.. Damz wasn't in a mood of listening at all !! She had nw kpt her fingers on her ears n closed her eyes n was nodding a firm no to his excuses...she was lukn like a small kid .. Shown tantrums at a toy store.. Who wasnt accepting a no for her demands !! She was looking so adorable to him dat he nw crept at her back n hugged her 4m behind resting his face on her shoulder... n repeated ..." abb maaf bhi kar do na ..bacche ki jaan logi kya ab ?" he said wth a impish ,naughty n genuinely sorry tone.. It wud have melted any heart in the world.. N how cud damini of all... resist this..

She had a beautiful smile n tilted her head to rest onto his n continued.." tum na mujhse pyaar hi nahi karte na.. "

he said...in a mocking loving tone.." haan main tumse se bhilkul pyaar nahi karta.."

She.." aur tumhe mein bilkul aachi nahi lagti na..?"

He" haan tum bhilkul bhi aachi nahi lagti.."

She" tum mere liye kuch bhi nahi karoge naa..?"

He.."haan mein tumhare liye kuch bhi nahi karoonga.."..he said still lovingly huggn her..implying dat evry sentence he said with the exception of the word "nahi.." was the sole truth of his life..

Then suddenly damz said.." pri.." he sez.."hmm.." she.." u knw wat ? I hate u !!" she sez playfully pushn hm away n runs inside !! He suddenly taken aback by her gesture decides to run behind her.. He had forgotten .. She was the best athlete in her school n college days.. No 1 cud evr catch her'!! N ther they both were running like kids all over the house.. Till they reached back to the same place.. N damini settled back onto the couch tryn 2 catch her breath back.. Pri was a complete 5 secs late ! N he too came n sat besides her.. Both were Huffing , puffing n laughn madly at their childishness.. n pri got a glimpse of those radiant eyes.. He cudnt take his eyes off them..

He gently turned her face towards hm n brushed those beautiful strands falling onto her face.. This tym she dint protest.. But instead was tryn to read smdng 4m his eyes.. He then cupped her face gently n whispered..his voice almst feeble.. Choked wth emotions.." damni.. Thank u.. Thnk u 4 cmg into ma life..thnk u 4 agreeing 2 b a part of ma life.. N nw thank u 4 being ma life.... there is no prithvi wthout damnee.. U r the reason 4 my very existence nw.. U r the meaning of my life nw.....dont evr leave me.. Wud die wthout u.." sayn he gave a loving peack on her forehead......he held her in dat position 4 sometym.. As if to etch the moment in his memory 4 evr.. To register their love 4 posterity......They then lukd at each others eyes.. He dint need an answer.. Her eyes had tld evrythng.. There were tears....tears of passion, love, happiness, longingness.. N so many other unexplainable emotions in them......He cudnt resist huggn her tightly.. N ther they sat 4 almost an eternity.....cuddled up wth each other..sipping the coffee..watchn the beautiful setting sun n listening to the music of rains.... Life was BLISS...... N hopely wud continue for evr.. Evn surpassing the boundaries of life itself..


..This was one of the most beautiful couple dat evr existed on this earth' PRIDA...like they say.. They were made 4 each other.. But more than dat they were MAD 4 each other...


luv niki..😊


PS: the last line was inspired by a movie.... but it was toooooooooo perfectt for prida.. so had to write it here..😳 😳

Edited by Lifez_Beautiful - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely lovely nikki just awesomee no words to say
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pridafan

lovely lovely nikki just awesomee no words to say



Thnx a lot soni !! im really glad u liked it..😳 😳


luv niki..
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Posted: 15 years ago

not like it love it awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pridafan

not like it love it awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee



awwwwwww.. thnx a ton sweety !! 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
NIkss....sweety 🤗...wat a gem this one....adoreable as they r Prida was perfect in this one......very well written babes...plz keep more coming!!!Loved it!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awww ma Honey bun !! 🤗.. loads n loads of thnx 4 ur Honey dipped wrds swty !! 😳😳

luv niki..😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
@niki: lovely piece..sweet love of prida!😳....good work niki!

btw wheres the 4th part of 'a wedding'?!...im eagerly waiting for tht too😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
@ maz: thnx a lot swty.. 🤗

n will write ' wedding' in d weekend dear.. i wantd 2 knw hw d original went.. bt here it went scary ! [ evry1 is scard nw.. boys n gals!😛].. so will try 2 keep ma vrsn a bit happier..😉

luv niki..😊

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