D FIST OF DESTINY [rajeev/priyanka] fic

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Hiiiiii reet,

wow !!!!!!!! a fic on RP n that too an suspense thriller n love fic.........sounds interesting

saket is rajeev right......but i wonder is saket his real name in the fic

n razia is priyanka......so she is suffering from memory loss.......n saket loves razia very much n from the words that he wish if he had really shared the realation really with her .......this means they r not wife n husband n he fears that when she gets her memory back she will hate him.......really wonder exactly what happened in the past

doctor fledger is treating razia n he likes this couple very much.......but he also seems to have a doubt about saket.s true identity

i think in the starting u mentioned that this is the story of four young stars.........one may be razia n what happened to the others

who is soni ...... n whats the aweful dream that make razia that much scared

i am so eager to read the next part

its really a fantastic part.......u described the emotions of saket really well

plz continue soon

n please if possible send me the pm when u update the next part

Edited by Sanskruthi - 15 years ago

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Ohh....nice to hav another Rajeev-Priyanka fic. May be its not baed on KMA...n hope oue hero is Saket only. Well....right now things r nor clear.....but I'm sure thats wat u wanted. Btw, I luved the way u described Saket's situation.....though not completely but may be I understood teh situation partially n Saket is really having a tough tym.
I am w8ing to knw abt the past.....like how all these started....n all. U knw...its really interesting n am very eager to read the next parts. Pls continue soon n Thank U 4 the PM.

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Hi reet!!😃

wow! RP fic !!!😃 that too romantic thriller!! I'm sooooo happy!!

Well i loved this update ! It's bit confusing now, but very well written!👏

I hope Saket is our Hero, Rajeev. Whoz razia but?

You have started creating a spell from the first update itself!👏

waiting eagerly for next update and thanks a lot for PM!

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

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+ 10

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

another Rp ff.Great dear.So,It's not based on lrl.It's based on romantic,suspense thriller.very interesting.Wonderful start.

Pls continue soon dear and pm me when u update it.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago

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reet

@rajeev's_reet

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

hey friends...

.thank u so much for such a response...

😊

yes....dere are a bit confusions......saket is rajeev khandelwal..

and razia is priyanka bassi.....

dis is not based on kma...and certainly not copied from newhr else.....da picture of d story is of outside india...

charecter and dere works are absolutely new to u ....

all dat i can say now...😉

plz wait my friends for the next update...d RAAZ will unfold itself a bit in dat....you get a better idea...wat is goin on...

but as dis is a suspence thillr...u have to wait for every next update for more clear idea..so please keep reading....

i hope i will b able to satisfy u....

waiting for ur honest statements

i will be updating tomm....

thanks a lott

luv..

reet

Edited by rajeev's_reet - 15 years ago

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reet

@rajeev's_reet

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

dear friends as i m almost a begnr to india forum...i can not add u in buddy list ....wud u plz send me a reqst for buddy ....so dat it will be very much helpful for me to send u the infrmation of next updates..

actually i m not very comfortable with d indiaforum usage..

and plz i wud like to know your real names...so dat i can know u....if u dont mind😊

thanks again ,

luv

reet

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reet

@rajeev's_reet

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

@ shaina..

thanks a lott for ur support and comment..

yeah....i guess dat u r absolutely right ....!!

dey are not dat dey are seeming to be...

waise...in future ho bhi sakte hai..kya pata ....janam shadi aur maut iske bareme kaha kaun kuch keh sakta hai....

hai na...?

filahl to saket ko bohot darr hai yeh sochke ..kahin uski yaadash wapas na aajaye...agar aa gayi to shayed saket ko jo apna pan...jo peyar mil raha hai....jo varosa mil raha hai...woh ek pal me khatam ho jaye...

aisa kya raaz hai ....? janne ke lie stay tuned....

@ hinal...

i guess hinal hi aapka nam hai....thanks for reading it....and aa..its a bit confusing as of now...

i m sorry for that....but i think u will get d story line after next one or two episodes.....

thank u so very much .....

plz keep reading ....i will be waiting for ur comment again

@sanskruthi...

yeah....saket is rajeev...and like u i m also in dialemma ...ke whether saket is his real name ?

kaha se aagaya Mr saket .....!! kahase aagayi yeh chuhiya ...razia...

aur soni bhi kaun hai...jiske yaad ne uski hosh ud gayi...ya wapas aagyi...

yun samajhiye....log aksar apne koi khas ...dil ke kareeb ko hi yaad karte hai..behoshi me.....ke woh koi dushman ya fir koi dost .....................ya fir koi aisa jo uske jigar ka tukra hai...

dekhte hai..soni kaun hai....i hope u will get to know who is she....thank u ke u likes sakets emotion........saket ko apna emotions jahir karna aata nahi hai...islie mujh badnaseeb ko hi yeh kaam karna pad raha hai...😭😭

@sumayia

aah...dont mind if u hav a nick name ....do let me know..hehe...

aapke aur sanskruthi ji ke naam mai kisidin spell na galad likh lu...chotisi koi name nahi hai...sumi ...ya suman ...like it..???hope u dint mind ....!!!!!!!!😊

no ...its not based on kma.....areh janab to india me hai hi nahi....kahi poland me baithe baithe pata nahi kya kar rahe hai...woh bhi ek pagal ke sath....

par kisiko pagal se peyar hota hai kya?

ho ta hai....

parr sadde saket nu eddada koi rahem nai aaya razia pe...one to aachi khasi kudi mileya ci.... kudi pagal kiu hon laggi...

lets c y she turned mad....

m sorry to introduce our heroine as a mentally disbalanced girl...who thinks saket her husband...forgotten every bit of her past

thank u for ur response dear ...and dont mind abour d nick name...i wanna know my readers as well..

plz do not mind...

@manatated ,...

thanks dear ...that u liked it so much ....aah...m really happy..

razia is priyanka bassi...our own priyanka.....heroine of d story\

dear plz tell me your name....

@prthwisanyo1

thank u so very much...yeah ...u gt it right ...its not based on lrl...

i will update tonite ....thanks a lot for ur support

@ d end....thank u very much all off you...

i will be updating tonite ...as well inform u abut it

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vvdn

@vvdn

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Amazing fic..luv the affection between Razia n Saket.plzzzzzzzzzz continue soon.

waiting for next part

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Hey Reet....firstly u guessed my nick name correct yaar.....all my frnds in IF call me Sumi.....so u can do that too...😃😃...and rahi baat spelling ki.....wo to tumne ab bhi ghalat likhi hai....but no probs....even I do mistakes while typing my own name...😆😆...and dear....mere paas mind karne k liye itna mind hai nahi....so chill...😆😆😆.....waise to be honest.....I dont mind the heroine being mentally disabled....all I hav to do with is our HERO....😳😳😳....as u can very well realize I am a hard-core Rajeevian. 😳😳😳

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reet

@rajeev's_reet

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

Aisa kya huya tha jisse the lives of the four changed forever??😕 😕 😕 😕

Saket is really worried about Razia but Dr.Fledger assured him that she will be alright by evening!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Saket loves Razia more than anything and couldn't afford to lose her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Why does Dr.Fledger get this unknown sensation each time he holds Saket's hand??😕 😕 😕 😕

Poor Razia!!!!! She is suffering from memory loss!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Uski yeh haalat unke honeymoon ke baad se hai and nothing could make her well again!!!!!

Fledger likes this couple very much and they reminded him of his own wife!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛How sweet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Fledger feels that there is something about Saket and seems to have a a doubt about his true identity!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Saket's grip reminds him of a hawk and its a warrior's hand!!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

So things are clearly not what they seem!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔