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karansha

@Arnav-ASR

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Posted: 16 years ago

PART 1:-

ANOTHER FF...

riddhima:-Kya tumhara pati hamesha yehi kahega...milte hain break ke baad???Kripa how can you bear all this???your husband doesnt deserve you..he's just a jerk....hamesha tumhara pati down hota hai to wo 2 ya ek week tak gaayab ho jaata hain.....yahan hum weeks,months ek baare main baat nahin kar rahe balki hum 2 saalon ke baarein mein baat kar raje hain......how can you,,,,,,grow up...just divorce him....

Angad and kripa had married each other against the wish of Kripa'ss parents....Angad was an orphan.he was in the same school as kripa..and they both had grown together....with them growing up.....their love blossomed as well....they had eloped and married each other,,,,in a temple...they were not legally married....and this was the sole reason for Kripa's destruction.....they lived together happily for 1 year...angad was working as a teacher in their school.....and kripa was a housewife....

but one day angad was offered a chance....a proposal to go to simla....he was really smart and intelligent...kripa refused because she was emotionally attached to their city Nainital..how could they just leave Nainital who has witnessed theilr growing love????

This is when everything started out....they fought night and day....angad would leave home for 1 or 2 weeks and would return back when he was cooled down.....the last fight they have had,,,,,,was so big that kripa kept waiting for her husband to coma back.....and this is when she had realised that angad left Nainital and had left her....but she was so blindly in love with Angad that she would refused that Angad had ditched her,,,,,,,her parents had taken her back.....but no one knew that Angad and Kripa were only religiously married not legally.....

Kripa left to find angad after she had one night dreamt that Angad was dying.....but he was not....only he was getting married to Mishty Bose.....an industrialist daughter...that too legally.....it was too late...She went to simla...then after gathering information she went to delhi and then madras and now in bombay,,,

She was working part time at a cafetaria.....and there she met riddhima...who tried to console her each time...and would get angry at angad.....until one day kripa saw angad's face on india times....she then knew that her husband had become a very rich industrialist,,,,,a very rich man.she was proud of him...she was so full of happiness that she didnt read the paper fully....the part where it was clearly wriiten ANGAD KHANNA AND MISHTY BOSE SURELY MAKE A GREAT COUPLE AND A GREAT BUSINESS WITH THEIR MARRIAGE,,,.

....Kripa's life had turned upside down,,,.....

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simply.me

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Posted: 16 years ago

another ff ..yeahhh....gd concept....so are angad and mishty married? ......continue soon

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Roshni

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Posted: 16 years ago

Your on a roll rite now thiss is your second ff and it looks amazing

when i first started to read it .... it sounded like the movie Main aur Mrs. Khanna but then when you said he married again i was soooo shocked....

I feel sooo sad for kripa rite now and OMg how studip is she i would just go find him and then give him a tight slap....

But also i dont want to jump to conclusion yet cuz maybe angad had a very good reason to get married again but still i dont think its rite wat he did with kripa....

I hope you make them together again and everything will be good.....

thanks for the PM

cont.... soon dying to read more of this ff then the other one to tell you the truth..... but i like the other one tooo but this is more interesting....

P.S- - Do you think you can also write one thats all happy and comedy and drama but no separation or cheating or anything to bad that is major and ruins the relationship in short a Romantic ff on AK??

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karansha

@Arnav-ASR

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: lilindiangurl13
Your on a roll rite now thiss is your second ff and it looks amazing
when i first started to read it .... it sounded like the movie Main aur Mrs. Khanna but then when you said he married again i was soooo shocked....

I feel sooo sad for kripa rite now and OMg how studip is she i would just go find him and then give him a tight slap....

But also i dont want to jump to conclusion yet cuz maybe angad had a very good reason to get married again but still i dont think its rite wat he did with kripa....

I hope you make them together again and everything will be good.....

thanks for the PM

cont.... soon dying to read more of this ff then the other one to tell you the truth..... but i like the other one tooo but this is more interesting....

P.S- - Do you think you can also write one thats all happy and comedy and drama but no separation or cheating or anything to bad that is major and ruins the relationship in short a Romantic ff on AK??

actually im on holidays and ive got nothing to do....so ive thought to spend my free time into creative writing.....yeah actually when ive watched main aur mrs khanna.....i really liked sohail khan's dialogue and thought why can't i write on something like that......but i couldnt make the storyline like main aur mrs khanna...because it would have been same as the movie......

yeah kripa is from a small town(i dont know really of nainital ia a town or hill station--so no offence guys)..so she holds values.....and besides that she is irrevocably in love with Angad,,,,she cannot just forget Angad who was there growing up with her,,,,the moments they have spent together.....and another reason is that kripa holds herself responsible for whatever happened......that's why she is still blindly in love with him.....

as far as angad is concerned......you will find out soon..keep reading😊😉........

thanks for ur lovely comments...😛😛

p.s:ok dear i'l try to think about one and then will start...😛

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karansha

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: simply.me
another ff ..yeahhh....gd concept....so are angad and mishty married? ......continue soon

yeah another ak ff.....there are hardly any now...😕.....thanks ya.......ya Angad and Mishty are married that too legally.....that's the problem now.....how will AK reunite...

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aishwarya

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Posted: 16 years ago

hey..nice concept..

Ridz is Kripa's friend..thats nice bcuz she really needs one..!..what Angad did was'nt right..

he just betrayed her n left her!..jus bcuz she did'nt wanna go 2 Shimla?..dey cud work it out...!

n he married Mishti!..m sure only 4 d money..!..Kripa is still happy abt his sucsess..she's so selfless..love her 4 tat..!

update soon

-aish

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monika

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Posted: 16 years ago

I hate angad he left kripa and marry misty .. i am crying ... thank you for this ff i wish he will feel kripa's pain, is that she is pregeee?

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karansha

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Posted: 16 years ago

PART 2:---Flashback:

Kripa was a pretty girl…she was simple as well…living with her grandma…..she inculcated each and every values and put them into practice…..her grandma would always say that Kripa was the most sweet,gentle and caring of her other siblings….Kripa was emotionally attached with her grandma more than her parents and would spend hours at her place,they would talk about everything…..

Kripa was still dazed after having watched a film on marriage,where her grandma told her that "marriage is a woman's dream..a marriage fulfill all the needs of a woman and woman should respect their husbands….support their husbands…."

Kripa disagreed with her…--"lekin ham auraton ko yehi sab kuch karma parta hai kya…mard kuch nahin karegein??"

And her grandma would tell her that "men should be the breadwinner and women should be at home…doing the housechores and all""

Kripa was little then but what her grandma had told her,marked her life completely,quite destroyed it too..to some extent…..Kripa was not like her other siblings,was always thinking about her prince….when would she get married and kept on daydreaming until Angad came in for the first time….he was 13 and kripa was 10….Angad was always a bright student….be it was sports or studies…he would excel in everything….at that time,Angad was made prefect…he had become the favourite of every teacher….

One day as usual,his teacher was absent and was free..so he decided to go on and inspect….he was on duty right now…he used to say to his friends.."chahe mera prefect banna koyi mayine nahin rakhta,main phirbhi bahut lucky samajta hoon apna aap ko….kyunki mujhe ehsaas hota hain ki mein responsible hoon….i don't know"

At this small age itself,he knew what responsibilities were…….he was a very responsible guy……it was then when he saw a pretty,little girl crying…

A—hey kya hua tum kyun ro rahi ho??

Angad was concerned now….he was acting like a very good prefect,but when he gazed into kripa's eyes,he knew instantly that her eyes were meant to kill….not in that sense but he couldn't take his eyes of her….it was so intense…..she couldn't hold it anymore and ran and hugged him while weeping violently….angad's shirt was wet from her tears…after a while…kripa look down embarrassed and let out :-sorry prefect…she did it so innocently that angad let out a smile…

Upon asking again kripa told him that her friends made her fall and was laughing at her…she even showed him her knees where blood was oozing out..Angad immediately took her to one of their teachers…where her wounds were tended…Angad was holding her,comforting her….as it was hurting a lot…

Later Angad went on investigating and as he could sometimes seem to hover over the little kids of 10…they were forced to tell them the truth about kripa being innocent…Angad didn't spare them and reported them to the principal…

That day kripa had found solace in Angad's arms and became the friend of Angad..no one would dare to say anything to kripa now as she was protected by Angad,the friend and the prefect…Kripa would spend time with him during recess and would hang out together,they would go to see the lake(fictitious) together…..and Kripa thought about what her grandma said"the one who will protect you,hold your hands,give you his shoulders to cry upon…will be your prince"

Her grandma's description could have been that of a friend too,not lover…but kripa started loving Angad…he was unaware of her feelings….

Angad was 15 then and kripa 13…

when one day,it was during a football match,angad was running……scoring…..and during a break…his friends pointed out—you have to win….warna bechari kripa…

A-Isme kripa ka kya jaata hain??though he was a bright student,he was a fool concerning love.

Friend-dekh who tujhe kis tarah se dekh rahi hain..mujhe lagta hain..woh tujse pyaar karti hain….uske aankhein ne tujhe chora nahin ek pal ke liye bhi jab tum khel rahe the…..

Angad glanced at kripa and for the first time in life,he had realized that she was the most beautiful girl in the whole world and when could see love in her eyes for him..he resumed later to play and keeping in mind that kripa should be happy…..he won the game..being the captain of the his team,he holded the cup and to evryone's shock kripa came running down…..to hug him tightly in front of everyone…to add to some more shock,no surprise and happiness to kripa's joy,angad whispered softly into her ears:I LOVE YOU

Their love blossomed and their love grew more and more…kripa's parents were against her relationship with angad….her grandma too had died…and she was all alone..no one understood her..except angad..kripa was 20 and angad 23 when they got married…they were very happy with their married life….they were very much in love and would go to the lake,often at night to hold each other and to stare at the stars or the moon…

Kripa was still attached to her mother….the same mother who had realized that her daughter was indeed a gem…her mother had no say in front of suryabhan but she would meet kripa secretly though..

Angad wasn't getting enough and they were living on rent….Kripa would say"if I have your love I'll be able to live throughout the rest of my life"

Angad was more realistic and practical but would never dare say "kripa be realistic"he would simply smile…

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karansha

@Arnav-ASR

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Posted: 16 years ago

part 3:-

Then angad had got the offer to go to simla….kripa refused to move out…she was so attached to this place..Angad was trying to make her understand that it would be for their own good but kripa remained adamant…and angad would go 1 or two weeks away from home…..where?he would go at one his friends place in Nainital itself…his friends reasoned him to go home but angad would refuse…angad was fed up with kripa now.she was acting like a non-pratical girl who was bent on destroying their lives….Kripa was 21 then and Angad 24 when they have had their last fight and angad left home,

K—angad meri baat suno tum….nainital mein ham reh sakta hain na,,,simla jaane ki kya zaroorat?please angad do you want to destroy our home sweet home?

A-im destroying it or it's you??you are destroying it with your baseless values and morals…kripa try to understand life is not easy….we have to move out…their we will have a place to stay in…and I will have more salary and ..

K-salary,sirf salary ke hi peecheh pareh ho.paisa paisa aur paisa.sirf paisa ko hi importane dete ho tum…paison ke ilaava kuch aur bhi cheezein hain duniya mein….love,respect…..

A-what??how dare you kripa….tumhari himat kaisi huyi mujhe money-minded kehte huye??agar main money-minded hota to aaj tum yahan nahin hoti,balki simone yahan parhoti…uske paas to bahut paise hain,lekin tumse bahut pyaar karta hoon isliye yahan tumhare paas hoon….

Kripa couldn't say anything,Yeah she had wrongly accused Angad…and angad was not money-minded….simone was in the same school as them…she was really in love with angad,,,she was rich as well..but angad had refused her and instead married kripa…a poor girl….both were poor and no one did really pointed out the fact.but that day kripa didn't know what she had done….she didn't know the value of money….angad had told her several times to work as well. but she was adamant. …didn't want to work remembering her grandma and hence she preferred to stay a housewife…she was idealistic…living in a fake world….

K—tumhare kehne ka matalb yeh hai that you are regretting your marriage with me??how dare you angad??

Angad was stunned..everytime kripa would misinterprete things..would get angry,,,,and angad would later pacify her with his love….but kabtak yeh chalta rahega….how could she have doubted him???he was so much in love with kripa.he was saying to move out for them to have a better life…but kripa ruined it all….

Enraged angad lashed out:--Ya im regretting it…tears were threatening to come out from his eyes..h turne around…..and left forever….

It was too late for kripa…her mother had told her that she was at fault….but her father didn't agree with her…and sided kripa.instigating kripa against angad…(yeah kripa had to return to live with her parents)par kabtak yeh chalta rahega??that night kripa had the nightmare not knowing that her life too had turned into a nightmare….

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karansha

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Part 4:- At present:

Kripa was considering all that her mother had told her,…yeah she admitted she was at fault…she could have worked….supplementing her husband's income….or move out from nainital….but but now she was going to find her angad now…..she couldn't wait to get him close to her again…

Riddhima found out that angad was coming to inaugurate one of their newly launched products at the same mall in which they were working in a cafeteria….and kripa had a day off…they were enthusiastic to meet him…..kripa tried to gain her composure when she saw angad in black suit…it must have cost him a fortune,his hair was gelled back and he was wearing a Rolex watch….wow.he did look stunning…he did the inauguration of the product….it was a cream for women….he asked a few woman to come to try out the product…..they were satisfied with the product…he was about to get out from the mall….when a voice made him stop….

V-i haven't got the chance to try out your product sir?

It was riddhima…angad was amazed but was even more amazed at seeing a girl besides riddhima and her face was covered with a dupatta…except her eyes were visible….he didn't know why did he invited them to the party of his product launch….after giving the invitation card he was thinking hard about that girl's eyes..it as like kripa…no why would she even be here…

Kripa had intentionally covered her face because she wanted to surprise him…and she would surprise him at the party…..little did she know that she would not get herself a surprise but the shock of her life…she was getting dressed into a dark blue sari and did he make up….she was all excited…kripa was very excited….riddhima had phoned her and asked her to go and wait her outside the party venue…riddhima was still working when she noticed the newspaper same that kripa had read .

She said to herself that angad was handsome…indeed…but was left speechless when she found out that angad was married to mishty bose…Omg tonight kripa would found out….she had to stop her from going there…she left for their flat…but kripa was not there….s*** she had forgotten she had called her and told her to go there….

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Kripa was elated to see angad in a dark blue suit…surrounded by the press….she was eager to have a glimpse of his….at that very moment riddhima came and told kripa to go from here,,,but kripa was in mood of listening to anyone and showing the invitation card.entered with riddhima…….the party was a great one…..with people of the higher class,…expensively dressed……..

R-tu chal kripa.please meri khatir..pease chalo yahan se…

K-kya keh rahi hain riddhima main kaise??mujhe angad se milna hain..

R-please meri dosti ke khatir chalo yahaan se….

K-nahin wait na baba…kya hua itna pareshan kyun dikhayi deh rahi hain….

Before ridhhima coud reply….the host of the evening Armaan mallik…announced……LAIDES AND GETLEMEN PUT YOUR HANDS TOGETHER TO CONGRATULATE MR ANGAD KHANNA FOR HIS NEWLY LAUCHED SUCCESFUL PRODUCT AND TO CONGRATULATE MISS MISHTY BOSE AND OUR CHAIRMAN OF KHANNA INDUSTRIES ANGAD KHANNA'S WEDDING…….

Kripa was already going to clap her hand but stopped.when reality dawn upon her…what was happening??her eyes were moist..angad was smiling at his guests when his eyes fell on a teary kripa..

She was here!!!!!!he was elated but OMG…..kripa slowly fell to the ground….rescued by none other than…Prithvi Bose…