coming monday episode-a short ff

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Posted: 15 years ago
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One of the gundas has slapped bharti and she falls down....Other one beating bauji

BHarti turns to look....the gunda is going near the car....she finds a big size stone and throws it on him............
he stops but still proceeds..bharti gets up soon and goes behind him but he seizes the suitcase and gives her a nice hit with a suitcase and runs away..the other gunda follows

Bharti has wounds on her forehead..bruises on her arms and bleeding from her mouth.......

she quickly takes the car and asks ma bauji to get in and follows them but theyve ran away and have taken a bike
parked some distance away..she keeps following them but they enter a very narrow and crooked place and get out of sight..she notes the bike no and calls the police..........

ma sees bhartis wounds and says they ahve to go to the hospital..bharti says that everybody at MU will be waiting for them and she has to first inform about this to them.... she is worried about how everybody will react..as they were all expecting the bonus eagerly...........

--break--

bharti enters party place... everybody turns to look at her (pre cap scene) armaan looks at her....

everybody crowds near her but she says she has to go to the wash room first.. gyan and RC look at each otehr and grin wicked ly.........
bharti goes searching for the wash and arman follows her

KK enters the scene and says the dialogue shown in precap..that shes going to c a new adyay...

bharti is trying to wash her bruises and dirt..arman comes from behind

ar: bharti..kya hua...yey kya hai..( holding her wrist and turning her)

bhar: hey arman..tum yahan..ladies bathroom mey

ar: woh bath chod....yey kaise hua....(hes looking at her bruises)

bharti explains all that happened

bharti: ab pata nahi sab se kaise kahun ki suitcase chori ho gayi hai
ar: thats not an issue bharti...tumne itni raat akele un gundon se fight kiya..if something had happened....(hes caressing her forehead wound with his thumb..hes got a very worried look on his face) bharti is lost in his eyes for a while........

arman takes a tissue and wipes the blood on her forehead .(background music) bharti is still gazing at arman...he takes the tissue near her lips where there are still stains..and starts wiping...she closes her eyes.....

vineeta comes in
sees them in this intimate scene
vineeta: ahem.....

bh and arman move away
vineeta: hey darlings ...any idea about joining the party outside or yahin diwali ke party mana rahe hain aap log

bharti : haan... chale armaan.... she again gets the worried look

---break---

arman is slowly following bharti.....everybody is talking about the bonus .. bharti hears all as she walks along..she crosses gyan and rc ...they are talking

arman hears them mention bharti and hides behind a pillar

RC: ab dekte hain ke yey bharti kaise escape hoti hai
Gyan: wah wah sir..aap ka tho koi jawab nahin............dont forget my sacrifice sir...(looking at vineeta)
RC: are yaar..tum to is baar editor ban jaoge..dekte rehna..kal iski band bajwayenge.....

arman notices something fishy in this conversation and starts recording in his mobile

gyan: woh suitcase safely pahunch gaya na sir
rc: haan haan..bahut safe hai....
gyan: first thing tomorrow we should put the money in her account sir.........
rc: haan zarur....dekte hain yey bharti ki bhachi kya karti hai kal
gyan: acha ..to kal main bank aa jaaoonga..aap suitcase ko lekar aa jaayiyega
rc: arey tumhaare car mey hi hai suitcase..tumhi ko lekar aana hoga
gyaan: mera car main????? sir...aap kaisi museebat mey ab mujhe fasa rahe hain
rc: kuch nahin hoga.....everythings going according to our plan....just wait and watch....

arman stops the recording....

he goes finds bharti..
she is about to tell amarjeet............

amarjeet: kyon bharti...kya hua
bharti: sir sir..woh... (swallowing ehr words)

amarjeet: kyon vacillate kar rahi ho..batao na....

Word of the day "vacillate" ( meaning hesitate)
arman pulls her by hand and takes her out...........

bharti: armaan..kya hai...
arman: pehle ye suno

bharti hears the whole thing.............
the conversation stops

both look at each other..arman smiles at her.... bharti gives the wide sweet grin...
he is standing leaning on a car.....but his hands are free
bharti suddenly throws her arms around him
arman loses his balances and keeps a hand on the car (like jab we met)

they are still hugging
bhartis eyes are closed
bharti: arman ..thank you so much... i can never repay you for this...toone mujhe phir bacha liya
arman: (slowly taking her face in his hands and looking at her intently) whos asking u to repay...
bharti looks at him sweetly with a smile
arman moves her face closer....

arman: bharti....
she looks down

amrjeet comes running to the scene.....shouting....
amarjeet: bharti...are sab ko bonus deni hai....bahut raat ho gaya.agar main vacillate karun tho
acha nahin hoga

bharti snaps out.... embarassed look...

bharti: ab to us suitcase ko gyan key car se nikaalna hai
armaan: haan chalo


--episode over---

precap: gyan and raichura are accusing bharti.... bharti and arman smiling at each otehr


Edited by violet_231 - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago
#2
OMG!!!!!!
That is so nicely written yaar...especially the ArBi scenes!!!
Great work Violet...lurved it entirely!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#3
hey thanks.. i cudnt wait till monday to c what happens
i know other fans are eagerly expecting the next epi too
so i just wrote this
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow amazing ff dear👏.....enjoyed every bit of it

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Posted: 15 years ago
#5
Awesome prediction
Loved it
Especially the ArBi scenes
AJ was funny
Hope it happens on monday
Take care
Zoya
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey thks a lot fr d sypnosiss....thks a tonn
cnt wait fr 2mrww
luv
Ritu...
Edited by catch_ritu - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#7
chooooo cute Arbi roxxxx
Edited by sukirtiprincess - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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toooooooo good yaar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! the arbi scenes were tooooooo cute!!!!!!!!!! i loved it....you should write a real fanfic....a long one :)
hope this happens on mon!!!
Love, Aarti
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Posted: 15 years ago
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WOW, your an amazing writer! That was so good! I could actually imagine everything happening .. I loved it! Lets hope that your prediction comes true and we have something like this tomorrow!

Very good, once again =D

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Posted: 15 years ago
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If only this happened for real!

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