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Dear Friends,
I must say somewhere the creatives are falling behind, the are unable to hold the impact of the previous days good episode, the actors are good, the storyline should be good, pata nehi kaha things are falling short, it is not giving me a compact feeling, maybe I cannot describe, when I finish watching, something is missing I always feel.....aaj ki do baatein....
1) I loved this scene in particular, this dialogue delivered by Ateesh saying that we should know when to retreat was very true and totally heart wrenching, while Keshu obviously not willing to understand, Ateesh told him that it is time we should hand over some responsibilities to the children, it is time for them to learn...I loved Atish here...Keshu like a normal father unable to understand when his intentions are right, what can go wrong....
2) Hamari Ketki mayi wearing that gaudy sari and gaudier jewelry coming to give two pieces of gyans to her Bahu, sorry friends, I did not like the execution of the scene, message was good but the execution I felt was very artificial...I would have preferred to see that Urvashi is doing household chores and is somewhat absent minded, she fails to understand when there is so much tension between the father and the son how can Ketki look so calm and composed and then Ketki asks what is wrong, it is time Ketki does some work too instead of looking pretty and partying gyans. Nothing wrong with gyans but then execution of the scene should also look natural, part of our day to day life....
Jate jate, I like Ketan, he is good and he is bad, just like the way I want him to be, and drinking once in a while is nothing wrong, so please creatives do not show usne bahut paap kar rahe hai, the dialogues in that scene could have been better more updated than what is Keshu Sanghvi's son doing here.....areh he might be Keshu Sanghvi's son but what is wrong in wanting to have a peg or two? I am sorry I cannot connect with these kinds of dialogues, yes Kaustabh could have approached him, saying I would like to become your friend etc etc...........I want Ketan to have more brains and tease Kaustabh a little and then show him his rightful place....no B grade movie type revenge, dialogues and sequences.....it should be sauve and interesting, dekhke maaza a jaye...
Last but not the least, you do not thank parents, I am sorry Urvashi, Ketki's trick taught to you played off nicely but that does not mean you look and ketki and say thankyou mummy silently or loudly, instead a look and a hint of smile towards Ketki by Urvashi would have done the work....sometimes looks & gestures can speak volumes instead of dialogues.....you have good actors make use of them creatives, your thoughts friends, love Tin
I must say somewhere the creatives are falling behind, the are unable to hold the impact of the previous days good episode, the actors are good, the storyline should be good, pata nehi kaha things are falling short, it is not giving me a compact feeling, maybe I cannot describe, when I finish watching, something is missing I always feel.....aaj ki do baatein....
1) I loved this scene in particular, this dialogue delivered by Ateesh saying that we should know when to retreat was very true and totally heart wrenching, while Keshu obviously not willing to understand, Ateesh told him that it is time we should hand over some responsibilities to the children, it is time for them to learn...I loved Atish here...Keshu like a normal father unable to understand when his intentions are right, what can go wrong....
2) Hamari Ketki mayi wearing that gaudy sari and gaudier jewelry coming to give two pieces of gyans to her Bahu, sorry friends, I did not like the execution of the scene, message was good but the execution I felt was very artificial...I would have preferred to see that Urvashi is doing household chores and is somewhat absent minded, she fails to understand when there is so much tension between the father and the son how can Ketki look so calm and composed and then Ketki asks what is wrong, it is time Ketki does some work too instead of looking pretty and partying gyans. Nothing wrong with gyans but then execution of the scene should also look natural, part of our day to day life....
Jate jate, I like Ketan, he is good and he is bad, just like the way I want him to be, and drinking once in a while is nothing wrong, so please creatives do not show usne bahut paap kar rahe hai, the dialogues in that scene could have been better more updated than what is Keshu Sanghvi's son doing here.....areh he might be Keshu Sanghvi's son but what is wrong in wanting to have a peg or two? I am sorry I cannot connect with these kinds of dialogues, yes Kaustabh could have approached him, saying I would like to become your friend etc etc...........I want Ketan to have more brains and tease Kaustabh a little and then show him his rightful place....no B grade movie type revenge, dialogues and sequences.....it should be sauve and interesting, dekhke maaza a jaye...
Last but not the least, you do not thank parents, I am sorry Urvashi, Ketki's trick taught to you played off nicely but that does not mean you look and ketki and say thankyou mummy silently or loudly, instead a look and a hint of smile towards Ketki by Urvashi would have done the work....sometimes looks & gestures can speak volumes instead of dialogues.....you have good actors make use of them creatives, your thoughts friends, love Tin
Cricket
