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Rashmi

@aandhanika

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Posted: 16 years ago

#141

Hey...

I can understand what you mean.. well that of rajat's officiaal site.. i have heard many things of my friends so i don't go there to much..but leave that..

I was hopping you would continue the FF but u have all ready decide not to so i can't do anything about that...

I can't help the silence readers because i'm not even sure if there are a lot of silence readers or just one...

But all i can say is that i enjoyed ur storry.. it would be nice if i could have read it till the end but okay.. thanks anyways.......

Rash aka Aandhanika (R.M.G)

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mahi

@larki_punjaban

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+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#142

thnx sis =)

when i feel 2 continue my story i will tell ya =)

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mahi

@larki_punjaban

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#143

Part 67

BOMBAY...

Arriving at chinese resturant meeting vikrant and his friends wearing blue and white shalwear kameez and holding hands with Veer. Entering the door and seeing couples, groups eating the yummy chinese dishes and having fun...

looking arround to the table for vikky friends and him...

VIkrant: JAMEEEEEEEEETTT!! VEERRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HERE!

Jamseet: aaah there... hi guys...

Vikrant stands up with a few friends and hugs first Veer and then shakes hand with Jasmeet... how decent ... lol

Vikrant: welcome guys... here u g with my friends... sonu. pooja, bunty and babli...

Jasmeet: and where is Bijli?

Vikrant: out of country... lol sit

Veer: so.. jasu that are ur DV friends... right?

Jasmeet: yaa right well they are very special for me

Veer: and what abt me??!!

Jasmeet: Veer....

Vikrant: ohhhhhhh jasu he loves i can c that.... and feelll aaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh ... kidding guys LOLZ!

Bunty: nice couple...

Vikrant: ya... so what u wanna have? Jasu n Veer!?

They have a meal and talk abt their old days on set, stage porgramm and abt the moment when Jasmeet puts Rakhi on Rajat's hand... that was really cute!

Jasmeet: hey vikky,... when is rajjy coming back?

Vikrant: i think in 2 weeks...

Jasmeet: are u gonna 2 dehli?

Vikrant: no i cant qauz of my shoot in Balika Vadhu... i mean for screan test

Jasmeet: haiin???!!! really ur gonna sign a new serial?

Vikrant: who knows... and u know when rajjy will come back DV will end after 2 weeks so i need new work... lolz

Jasmeet: and what abt Mugdha!?!

VIkrant: i dont know even she doesn't know...

Jasmeet: and rajjy? he was saying something 2 begin with bollywood no?!

Vikrant: ya... but after ending DV he will does a stage show in Goa so after then... maybe... i think its better when he should concentrate on his studies...

Jasmeet: he knows better...

Veer: i liked him as the littel prithvi and in Sai baba... what an adorble kid... but as veer he looks like elder then me hahaha

Jasmeet: someday he has 2grow up Veer...

Vikrant: bari chalu chezze hai woh... but really swwet...

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In Germany at Pooja's place...

Rajat is sleeping. Manu is watching TV Pooja is out of door with Komal... The parent's are having coffe time at coffe bar... Suddenly the fon bells...

Manu: hello??!! who's there...

Manav is calling...

Manav: is Pooja there

Manu: what u want?

Manav: i want Pooja back!

Manu: after all this?

Manav: ihv realized my mistake...

Manu: dont lie...

Manav: im serios...

Manu: listen buddy we are not interessted in ur damn lieng story and what ever! Pooja has left u and thank god she feels better know after u... so plz dont u dare 2 call us or her again or disturb any one of us! is dat clear...

and very angrily he hangs up!!!! ... Rajat wakes up...

Rajat: bro?! kya hua?

Mannu: nothing rajjy...

Rajat: who was on fon?

Manu: Manav...

Rajat: really? what he wanted?

Manu: nothing? just lieng! wanna Pooja back! bas***d!!!

Rajat: hmmm... im really very happy for pooja di

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In Hamburg at Poonam's place

Poonam is sitting at her laptop and watching pics and videos from her last days when rajat was at her place for a few days...

Video1: when they both played basketball and Poonam wins

Video2: playing antakshri with the family and Poonam sings the wrong song and everyone makes laughing at her

Video3: practising for the dance at the wedding with rajat ae chori...

Video4: at the wedding...

Video 5: at Poonam's birthday

All the pics...

Ponaam cloese her eyes and sees nice scenes but suddenyl she sees the scene of bye bye ... and she get tears in her eyes... when rajat went back... she feels very sad... and she wishes the time should never come back qauz she loves Rajat very much and she doesnt want 2 be hurt or want 2 hurt abt it it =)

2 b continue...

Edited by dv_freak - 15 years ago

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Noor

@Cardenia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#144

SooooOOooo nice events ..

Gr8888888888 part dear .

I like how u narrate the situation of Poonam when she was remembering ...make me imagine that😊

Keep it up 👏👏

Thnx alot 4 posting 😃

Edited by Cardenia - 15 years ago

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Rashmi

@aandhanika

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#145

Hey dear,, thanks a lot foe continueing your fanfic.. I liked your new part a lot.. miss those rajat- poonam's part.

Do continue with the updated,, thanks!.

@ Cardenia

Thanks for the pm..

Edited by aandhanika - 15 years ago

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mahi

@larki_punjaban

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#146

thnx for liking

i love my oldies homies!

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part 68

At Pooja's place

Its raining... its a bit cold ... its in the evening. everyone are sitting in the sitting room and having chaye time. just Pooja is in her room enjoying the rain with closed eyes outside. she has some good and bad memories in front of her closed eyes.

knock knock at the door...

Pooja: come in...

Rajat: di what are u doing here?! let's go down and have some chaye and samosas... come on darling... my cutie...

Pooja: what's wrong with u?? darling? cutie??

Rajat: damn! ... actually di!... i love u but the problem im not in the same age like u i would marry u... well... Rajat ki kismat... *acting crieng*

He makes jokes with her so she laughs aswell and hugs him. she went down to the family and join them. her Masi Rajat's mom sits next 2 Pooja and hugs her so tightly ..

Rajat's mom: i love my daughter sooo much!!!

Rajat: mom i know u love u daughter in law... but if i would be in the same age like her...right dharam patni g!

Pooja: stop it... hahahahahaha ... pati dev of... not me ! im not gonna 2 tell the girls name

Rajat's mom: haiiinnnn!!!!! Pooja tell me her name ... kaan mein come on....

Pooja: should i ? * looking at rajat*

Rajat is confused: what are u talking abt?

Pooja: hmmmmm... Poonam ki Raat!

Rajat: What???!!! are u mad mom plz dont believe her plzzz plzzz plzzzzz

Rajat's mom: hmmm she is a nice girl... i like her 2!

Pooja: ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh rajkumar g ur in trouble

Rajat: di no plzzz... we are just good friends i mean best friends...

Pooja: yaaa best friends... i think u should go forward now dont make excuses...

Rajat: di enough! i dont need 2 make excuses iv already said that i love u!

Pooja: i love u 2 my brother...

Everyone are laughing... and the evening goes very nice with family...

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India , Baroda , Sagar filmcity...

Sagar sahab: when will rajat come back? something is missing on this set

Aditi: after 2 weeks...

Harsh: oh god! that scene was duff...

Sagar sahab: wait when rajat will come it will be more duff then u think

suddenly Harsh remembers the scene the moments when Harsh was ill he has 2 take so may retakes... and nobody listened 2 him... after listen to Sagar sahab he gets tears in his eyes and excuse himself and goes away from there...he goes to the hill side and closse his eyes and misses his family...

Harsh: ma ... sis.. dad bro... i miss u guys... i need u

there is a soft hand in his left shoulder... Aditi...

Aditi: i know tau g is very rude but dont worrie everyhting will be alright... =)

Harsh: ...

Aditi: Harsh?! u wanna go back home?

Harsh: hmmm ... ya

Aditi: just one month and then ur free okay?

Harsh: ya..

Aditi: Harsh... i cant c u like this... i want my rajkumar agni back..!

Harsh: okay sorry...

Aditi: ahhnn... no sorry no thnx on friendship buddy... i want 2 tell u something...

Harsh: ya... im listining...

Aditi: well... i like someone... * and looks in his eyes*

Harsh: really? who is the lucky guy

Aditi: truth or lie?

Harsh: truth...

Aditi: i like... u ...

Love in The Air...

2 b continue...

Edited by dv_freak - 15 years ago

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Noor

@Cardenia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#147

U welcome dear Aandhanika 😊

**************

Here is came aother nice part too ..👏

I like it .. =)

Ohh Pooja 😉...what she did with Rajat ... was fun ..😃

Thnx Mahi 4 this UD .

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Rashmi

@aandhanika

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#148

WAW! yaar... harsh and aditi are finally getting some where... heheheh/

great update!... continue soon..

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Rashmi

@aandhanika

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#149

Hey dear,

The dharamveer section has been archived so we won't be able to know when you update next. so can you please sent me a pm when you don't see my comment here after your next comming updates..

Thanks in advance

Bye
tc
love, rash

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mahi

@larki_punjaban

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#150

Part 69

At Pooja's Place!!

The hottest weather of the year in frankfurt. Pooja and her family plan to go out for picknick with the rest of the family. so everyone are getting ready. Mannu wears a shirt with out arms and a short. Rajat comwes out with his jeans and white t shirt..Pooja wearing half knie skirt with yellow top. After leaving and after 3 hrs they finally find a cool place for having their meal and fun. They spent the day in a lots of fun eating playing games walking around. at the evening they even enjoy the sunset. Pooja remembers her first days with Manav when she went with the whole class to a trip and she sits with Manav and enjoyed the time. She gets tears in her eyes but at the same time there she feels a very soft hand on her shoulder... its her mother, she smiles to her and hugs her.

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INDIA, BOMBAY...

At Jasmeet's Place

The house is full of decoration and of ppl like relatives friends...

Jasmeet's the poor bride is busy in shooting ...

everyone at Set making fun of her that dekho ... bride is here on work and at home everyone are preparing for the wedding.

Jasmeet: but after tomorrow i won't be able to come for 2 months... tab kya karoge sab?! lol

she is very happy that she is getting married 2 Veer her childhood love. Even Veer doesn't have much time before his wedding he has to finish all his work. At his office:

Veer: oh good itna kama hai! its really sick man!

Sec.: Sir! can i help u Sir?

Veer: Is the Letter of Mr. Chopra ready?

Sec. : Yes Sir!

Veer: okay...

Veer's dad comes in: oye puutar aren't u finished till know?

Veer: dad i think ihv 2 come tomorrow aswell for some more work.

Veer's dad: naaa Puttar, u need rest after 1 week is ur wedding yaar... dont worrie ill handle it...

Veer: dad.... =(

Veer's dad: Veer Puttar.... dont worrie let's go home....

NEXT DAY...

At Pooja's place...

Rajat's family and Rajat hismelf are collecting all their clothes and stuff for taking them back home. jeans... shirts... salwar kameez... shoes... gifts... aah gifts! Poonam's gift... the friendship bracelet... Rajat holds that bracelet and remembers the time when Poonam gives him the bracelet... That was a time... fight on her bday.. feeling guitly... Rajat's explination for her mistake.. Poonam's reaction and awsome day with Mansi... The sweet hug ... Everything he remembers... he really is going to take nice memories with him to back home...

2 be continue...

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