'Chori-Chori' (AK,SK,AR,KA,MP)..Pt 29/pg134,Jan13

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Posted: 15 years ago

#381

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Oh....I'm always late to reply....sry I didnt notice u updated. Anyways, it was really gr8. The reaction of Sujal's family when he announced his wedding plan....was so funny.Every1 was happily shocked. Even Miliind was happy.....that was sumthing new. Sujal-Kashish's phn convo was gud. He is damn romantic. After all he's a lover for five long yrs. Kavya-Anjali was gud. But I eagerly want Kavya to hav a better image. Wanna knw his past as to wat made him like this. Armaan was clean bowled I guess. Gud to c the progress of AR. Pls continue soon.

Thanks sumaiya! 😳 Its ok, Hun! Sujal's family is ecstatic abt his wedding. SK are the mature, romantic couple. armaan is definitely gaya kaam se... 😆

Originally posted by: sameira-90
hey great part.. continue soon...

if u have time can u please pm me when u update...

Thanks sameira! I will pm u for sure.... 😃

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever
awesome ff cont soon plz!!!!!!!👏

Thanks iqbals4ever!

Originally posted by: Tanha_Dil
😊hi i'm a new member. i have read ur other ffs too. and i loved them all. love this stroy so far too. especially kripa-angad and armaan riddhima story lines. others r great too. i love the way u portray all the emotions so effectively in such simple words. looking forward to update... continue soon..

Thanks Tanha! Im delighted that u enjoyed all my FFs... 😳 Do keep on reading.... 😃 many moree thrills to come...

Originally posted by: -simi-
i see ur bhoot bhatakoing in the other FF 😆 are u gonna update tonight? 😛

Bhoot... 😆 😆 😆 Yeah I was checking out replies on Haunting when my siggy and avi all disappeared.l

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pallavi25

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Posted: 15 years ago

#382

Originally posted by: kripa12345

Hi Di

i am a new member of this forum

i love your ff specialy this one

cant wait till u update can u update pls we are waiting 😊

Thanks kripa! 😳
Welcome to FF forum! Thanks for liking my stories. 😃

Originally posted by: A&K_4Evr-S
heyyy
when r u gna cnt this ff????

Sorry, Sahr, update got delayed becuz of work and desktop problems, now I got a new laptop...

Originally posted by: palluluvsarmaan
nice update👏👏👏

Thanks Dear! Im glad u liked it..... 😊

Originally posted by: Smilesx3
its sunday!!
r u updatin???

Sorry Kiran! Update got delayed becuz of desktop problems....

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Posted: 15 years ago

#383

when r u gonna update dear?

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pallavi25

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Posted: 15 years ago

#384

Sorry for the very very late update! My desktop didnt work out very well, I had trouble writing there, so I got a new laptop now! 😃
From Sep 15 I will update regularly as my kids will be going back to school/college so I will be free for a few hrs each day. I will post intro of new AK story after Sep 15.

CHORI CHORI …PART 11

Scene 1:

Hidden nook in the wall of Old Fort, Delhi…..secret meeting place of Sasha and Kumud! The two daring lovers sat leaning against the ancient wall, drinking beer from cans and seriously discussing the recent development in Sinha household.

Kumud gestured excitedly with her hands: But Sasha, youre not realizing the seriousness of the situation! That CID Officer, hes going to be my jeeju, agar usey zara bhi shaq ho gaya…. that Im connected to these robberies…..

Sasha interrupted her smoothly: Don't worry Babe! I have a great plan! This is the perfect opportunity to find out about their investigation!
Kaisey? She frowned, what do u mean?

His hazel eyes glinted with cunning: Seedhi si baat hai, jeeju ki pyari saali yaani TUM, investigation ke baarey mein sawaal poochhogi aur wo tumhey information deta rahega!
Kumud was even more taken aback: Lekin wo mujhey batayega kyun?

Sasha laughed cynically: C'mon Babe, don't u know? Saaliyan special hoti hai, aadhi gharwali wagairah wagairah….
Kumud yelled and slapped his arm with loud giggles: SASHAA! BE SERIOUS!

I AM serious! He looked grim: I am deadly serious! You will be our ears and eyes, you will find out what CID has found, how much they have found and what they are planning next….
Lekin kaisey? How will I ask him?

Sasha looked directly at her: Pretend to be a fan of CID, of their investigation….ask him how the robber operates, if they found clues and how they are planning to catch the robbery suspects….get hold of all that info and pass it on to me….
Agar usey shaq ho gaya toh….? She fretted with doubt.

He cheekily pulled her cheeks : I have full confidence on ur acting! Tum usey apney ungliyon per nacha sakti ho! Usey pata bhi nahin chalega uskey ghar mein hi spy hai!
Kumud gasped : Sasha, you are a real DEVIL!
He smirked, full of overconfidence: I know!

That's why I love you! Kumud purred and melted into her devilish lover's arms, they started kissing and making out, oblivious to the growing darkness, the mosquitos and crickets.
They had a physical relationship for last 2 years. Kumud was completely reckless about her affair with Sasha! She had complete faith in him and would even follow him to Hell!

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Scene 2: Muskaan's sagai

Jeet raised Ridhima's hand to his lips and kissed it lightly. Ridz stiffened with embarassment and tried to pull her hand away but he muttered with clenched teeth: Don't move….Wo dekh raha hai….
Her back was stiff but she smiled sweetly for their observer's benefit: Good! Dekhney do!
Jeet held her hand and gazed at her with genuine admiration: You look like a million bucks!
She fluttered her eyelashes: Really? Would u give me a million bucks?

His eyes twinkled humorously: Million toh kya? Main tum par sab kuchh qurbaan kar sakta hoon…
Her eyes widened, not sure if he was role-playing or serious! He winked quickly to set her mind at ease, she sighed in relief and proceeded to flirt with Jeet Chaddha as outrageously as she could! She smiled coyly at him, laughed at all his jokes, allowed him to hold her hand all throughout their conversation.

Armaan watched them from a distance, gnashing his teeth: Kaisey Ridz ka haath pakda hai! B****y Yankee! Bada aaya hai apney dollar ka ghamand lekar! Aaj shaam iska band nahin bajaya toh mera naam bhi Armaan nahin!
Atul walked up to him: Kis par badbada raha hai? Kya hua, Yaar?

Armaan tossed his head jerkily: Wo *&^%#$ apney aapko bada champion samajhta hai! Dekh kaisey chipak raha hai….usey pata hona chahiye India ki ladkiyan itni fast nahin hoti….
Atul glanced at the two and shrugged nonchalantly: Kya bak raha hai, Yaar? Tu khud bhi toh fast types pasand karta hai!

Lekin Ridz toh uss type ki nahin! …Armaan fumed.
Toh tu kyun andey de raha hai? Uski life hai, wo handle kar legi! Tu fikr mat kar, hamari Ridz bewakoof nahin hai!

Armaan cooled down a little but couldn't stop seething inside: Ek baar dance shuru honey de, uss Amrican bandar ko bhangda nacha nachakar langda kar dengey!

Atul laughed heartily but looked strangely at his pal…..something was fishy, why was Armaan suddenly acting so possessive about Ridz? Kahin uski makeover ne Armaan ko diwaana toh nahin kar diya?
Hmmm that would be an interesting development! Agar koi Armaan ko sudhaar sakta hai toh wo Ridz hi hogi!

Ridhima stole a sideways glance and laughed silently. Muskaan's plan seemed to be working like magic. Armaan looked quite green with envy, he was muttering something to Atul, throwing dark, murderous glances at Jeet.
Her heart ached a little but she tightened her pretty lips: Serves you right, Mr. Armaan! Ab tumhey pata chalega jalan kya hoti hai, dard kaisa hota hai…

Unfortunately, Jeet and Ridhima's flirtation came under the radar of his parents as well.
Jeet's plump, pink-clad, diamond-dripping mother poked Muskaan's mother excitedly with her elbow : Arey Parjayiji, wo kudi kaun hai?
Mrs.Chaddha turned, startled: Kaun?

Arey wo, apney Jeetey ke saath khadi hai, kinni soni kudi hai, naam kya hai uska?
Wo? Pammi Chaddha's eyes lighted up with pleasure: Arey wo toh hamari Ridhi hai, apney Muskaan ki bast frand (best friend)! Dono callege mein ek saath padhtey hain, badey pakkey dost hain…

Jeet's mom was thrilled: Achha? Uski shadi vaadi toh nahin huyi naa?
Nahin, nahin, lekin hai toh hamarey Muski ke umr ki, zaroor uskey Maa baap bhi rishta dekh rahey hongey.
Phir toh changa hai, Jeetey ke saath kinni pyari lag rahi hai….dono ki jodi bhot fit lagegi. Baat chalayen, kya khayal hai?

Kyun nahin Bhabhi! Pammi was excited: Badi soni kudi hai, khandan bhi badhiya hai! Papajee bahut badey daktar hain! Surjun (surgeon) hain….bahut badey hospital mein….
Jeet's Mom looked around eagerly: Kya wo aaye hain? Humein bhi toh milao unsey…
Pammi craned her neck to search the hall: Bulaya toh hai, abhi aatey hi hongey. Main aaj hi Padma jee se baat karungi!

Parivaar mein aur kaun hain? Bhai behen hain? …Jeet's Mom was calculating her net worth.
Nahin, eklauti beti hai….ek chacha export ka business hai, doosra CID officer hai, aur koi aulaad nahin khandan mein…
Jeet's mom was so impressed by Ridhima's credentials, she could just smile delightedly at the perfect bride for her NRI son!

Ridhima was oblivious to the matchmaking and chattered with a false gaiety with Jeet and his friends, unaware that their playacting was being taken seriously by more people than Armaan!
Armaan stomped off to a corner and sulked, trying to shake off the image of Ridhima holding that "guy's" hand.
Duffer! Idiot! Kisi aadmi ko bina jaaney hi usey apna Rajkumar banaa liya! What if he turns out to be a psycho? A serial killer? God knows US mein uskey 19-20 girlfriends hongey!
Being the quintessential hypocrite, it never struck Arman that he had no right to judge Jeet, being the bad boy that he was….

The party was warming up, more guests were arriving. Gupta family came in, Padma and Shashank, followed closely by Prachi and Milind. Sujal had been excused since he had a dinner date with Kashish!
Muskaan's parents came forward to greet the Guptas, pleasantries were exchanged.
Padma looked around eagerly: Ridhima kahan hai? Dikh nahin rahi….

Mrs. Chaddha smiled from ear to ear: Useekey toh charchey ho rahey hain, Padma jee, Wo dekhiye wahan khadi hai, kyun lag rahi hai naa Pariyon ki Rani?

Padma and Shashank spotted her at last, both gasped audibly. They couldn't believe the complete transformation of their little girl into a glamor doll! The cocoon had broken and a butterfly had emerged.
Prachi beamed with pride to see her potential model: Bhabhi, zara dekhiye Ridhi ko…..
Padma covered her mouth: Haye Raam! Ridhi ko kya hua? Yeh sab…

Pammi Chaddha laughed: Yeh sab Muskaan ke stylist ne kiya, dono kudiyan ek saath tayyar huye naa…kyun, lag rahi naa lakhon mein ek? Hum toh kehtey hain jee ….ek saath dono sahelion ki shadi kar deejiye…

Padma looked doubtful: Itni jaldi shadi?
Arey sagai toh karva saktey hain naa? Jaisey hum Muskaan ki kar rahey hain….Pammi advised her smugly.

Lekin wo…wo ladka kaun hai? Pehley toh kabhie dekha nahin? Ridhima's parents frowned in confusion at the tall young man holding her hand and chatting earnestly.
Arey wo toh hamara Jeet hai, inkey badey Bhaisaab ka beta, New York mein rehta hai, kitna vadda karobaar chalata hai, apna Pentax (Penthouse) Apartment bhi hai!

Shashank was quite impressed with the boy's credentials but Padma was hesitating: Pammi jee, wo sab toh theek hai lekin hamari Ridhi abhi chhoti hai, uski padhai jab tak khatam nahin ho jaati…..
Mrs. Chaddha was slightly offended: Achha jee, jaisi aapki marzi!

Ridhima spotted her family finally and came running: Mummy, Papa, Chachi aap sab aa gaye!
Padma held her daughter's flushed cheeks with a bemused smile: Haan Beti, tu bahut sundar dikh rahi hai, kahin kisiki nazar naa lag jaye….
She rubbed off a little kajal from her eyes and made a tiny black teeka below Ridhi's right ear.
Ohh Mama! ….she hugged with a shy smile.

Prachi hugged her and showered her with compliments: Yeh purple dress tumhey bahut suit kar raha hai, Ridhi aur makeup bhi perfect hai, stylist ka naam kya hai?
Ridhima excitedly exchanged information about the stylist with her Chachi/friend.

Shashank tweaked her cheeks proudly: Sach mein Beta, tum aaj bilkul alag dikh rahi ho! Agar Mrs. Chaddha parichay nahin karati toh hum tumhey pehchan bhi nahin paatey!
Ohh Papa! Aap bhi naa…..Ridhima laughed bashfully and rested her head affectionately on his chest for a moment!

Shashank and Padma looked proud, yet apprehensive, mixed feelings of parents who realize their daughter is all grown up and would soon leave their nest.
Armaan suddenly appeared out of nowhere: Hello, Auntie, Uncle! Aap kaisey hain?
They greeted him pleasantly and asked about his parents.

Armaan smiled: Jee, Mom-Dad dono achhey hain….his eyes strayed constantly to the stunning new Ridz, standing demurely between her mother and Chachi. He swallowed once…By GOD! Nazdeek se aur bhi sensational hai, yeh ek din mein kaisey badal gayi!
Poor Armaan had no idea about the wonders of makeovers, he was so used to plastic beauty that real beauty dazzled him!

Ridhima was well aware of his perusal and hid her smile, she quickly turned to her Chachi: Badey Chachu kahan hain?
Prachi frowned and looked around: Yahin toh the! Naa jaaney kahan chaley gaye…shayad phir se….

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Their conversation was interrupted by Mr. Chaddha's announcement, sagai ceremony was beginning and he requested all guests to gather around the couple and witness the ring exchange.
Ridhima and family rushed to the spot followed closely by Arman.

Rahul and Muskaan exchanged diamond/ruby and platinum/gold rings. All guests cheered and applauded. Rahul's pals whistled loudly. Armaan groaned: Yaar, tu ab gaya kaam se, merey dost! Khoontey se bandh gaya….
Rahul stared at his lovely betrothed and murmured: Yeh bandhan mujhey manzoor hai... jab bandhnewali itni pyari ho toh…..bandhney mein koi problem nahin....

Muskaan heard him and blushed happily. Atul cheered: HEAR! HEAR! And high-fived with Rahul.
Angie and Nikki suddenly appeared and commandeered the dance floor: Ladies and Gentlemen! NOW get ready to partayyyy! Lekin pehley do alag teams bana leejiye, boys ki aur girls ki, ab hamari dance shuru honay wali hai!

The parents and elders moved away to gossip and chat, the young men grouped on one side, the girls on the other.
Typical wedding songs started blasting on the stereo system:

[Ek Punjaban, kudi Punjaban dil churakey le gayi
Sona sona dil mera sona….

Ek punjaban, kudi punjaban
Hey, ek punjaban dil churaake le gayi, hai!
Sona sona, hai dil mera sona

--CHORUS--
Sona sona, dil mera sona

--MALE 1--
Ek punjaban dil churaake le gayi, hai!
Sona sona, hai dil mera sona

--CHORUS--
Sona sona, dil mera sona

--MALE 1--
Surme waale nain ladaake le gayi, hai!
Sona sona, hai dil mera sona

--CHORUS--
Sona sona, dil mera sona

Rahul took Muskaan's hand and pulled her to the dance floor while their friends surrounded them and clapped to the beats:

Armaan suddenly dashed out in front of the group and started dancing to:

Bachnaa Aye Haseeno Lo main aa gaya

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YXxV-8ouh3o&feature=related

Bachnaa ae haseenon lo main aa gayaa
Hay, bachnaa ai haseenon lo main aa gayaa
Husn ka aashiq, husn ka dushman
Apni ada hai yaaron se judaa, hai ho!
Hai, bachnaa..

Hai, duniya mein nahin hai, aaj meraa sa deevaana
Pyaar vaalon ki jubaan pe, hai mera hi taraana
Sabki rang bhari aankhon pe aaj, chamak raha hai mera hi nashaa,
Hi ho!
Hai, bachnaa..

Jaam milte hain aadab se, shaam deti hai salaami
Geet jhukte hai labon pe, saaz karte hain ghulaami
Ho koi, pardaa ya baadshaah, aaj to sab hain mujhpe fidaa,
Hai ho!
Hai, bachnaa..

Ridhima and her friends watched him humorously as he strutted and preened his stuff, trying to impress all the pretty girls in the room, but it was all for the benefit of the one girl he had ignored till tonight!
The girls were not to be left behind. They rallied aggressively with:

Gore gore yeh chhore, gore gore yeh chhore

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iBa5fm1_PSk

Gore gore yeh chhore, gore gore yeh chhore

--FEMALE--
(Yeh ishq ishq chillaate hai
Yeh gali gali mandraate hai) - 2
Shaadi ki dagar na jaaye magar
(Yeh gore gore se chhore yeh gore gore se chhore
Yeh gore gore se chhore, hey hey hey hey) - 2
Andar se chaahe kuch bhi ho yeh
Ada magar hai hero waali
Din raat kitaabein padhte hain yeh
Ladki ki tasveeron waali
Kahin jeevan mela, par shaadi jhamela
Darvaaza inhe dikhlaao zara
(Yeh gore gore se chhore yeh gore gore se chhore
Yeh gore gore se chhore, hey hey hey hey) - 2
Shaadi ki jo baat karo to
Buri yeh haalat karte hai
Bin shaadi sang rehne ki yeh
Badi vakaalat karte hai
Har ladki pyaari bin zimmedaari
Laila ke bina hi majnu bane
(Yeh gore gore se chhore yeh gore gore se chhore
Yeh gore gore se chhore, hey hey hey hey) - 2
Jab yeh boodhe ho jaayenge
Khaans khaans ke reh jaayenge
Kandhe par koi haath na hoga
Hamdam koi saath na hoga
Thokar khaayenge phir pachtaayenge
Tab yaad inhe aayenge hum
Yeh gore gore se chhore yeh gore gore chhore
Yeh gore gore se chhore, hey hey hey hey
Yeh ishq ishq chillaate hai
Yeh gali gali mandraate hai
Shaadi ki dagar na jaaye magar
(Yeh gore gore se chhore yeh gore gore se chhore
Yeh gore gore se chhore, hey hey hey hey) - 2

Milind was standing beside Prachi with a grouchy expression, watching the youngsters dance. Padma urged him to go dance with Prachi, to which he complained roughly: Bhabhi, aap logon ki zidd ki vajeh se ek zaroori conference call chhodkar aana pada.

Shashank looked sternly: Aaj Sunday night hai, yeh sham tum apney parivaar ke saath rahogey…… Kal se jitna chahey conference kar lena! Main bhi Sunday ko surgeries nahin karta. Haftey mein ek sham toh tumhey apni patni ko dena padega.

Milind clammed up after that rebuke and silently drew Prachi onto the dance floor. Prachi tried to relax but every now and then he would pull out his mobile and check for messages.
Prachi put up a cheerful face but she couldn't help wondering: Sunday night ko yeh kiskey call ka intezaar kar rahey hain?
She tried to enjoy the rare feeling of dancing in her reluctant husband's arms, but the joy was missing!

Meanwhile the youngsters danced vigorously, Rahul-Muskaan in the center of the circle. Boys team and girls team moved closer and closer with each challenging song! Battle between the sexes always heats up the proceedings…..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qAbXr6VKNTA

Girls: Sheher ki pariyon ke peechhey jo hain deewaney
Wo hamari saadgi ka rang kya jaaney

Shehar ki pariyon ke peechhe jo hain deewane
Shehar ki pariyon ke peechhe jo hain deewane
Vo hamari saadgi ka rang kya jaane
Arre haan aa ha dildaar bewafa

Jo nahin samjhe ki hum kiske hain deewane
Vo hamari aashiqui ka rang kya jaane
Arre haan aa ha samjho na meri jaan

Koi hoga haseen kam to hum bhi nahin
Dekho zara nazar bhar ke
Itna udo nahin hoi na aisa kahin
Na idhar ke raho ho na udhar ke
Koi hoga haseen kam to hum bhi nahin
Dekho zara nazar bhar ke
Itna udo nahin hoi na aisa kahin
Na idhar ke raho ho na udhar ke

Shehar ki pariyon ke peechhe jo hain deewane
Vo hamari saadgi ka rang kya jaane
Arre haan aa ha dildaar bewafa

Aa ja
na na
Aa ja meri baahon mein tu jaana nahin re
na na
Aa ja meri baahon mein tu jaana nahin re
na na

Ridhima was enjoying herself immensely. She didn't notice Armaan was moving closer to her with each step. Suddenly she bumped hard into a male body, she gasped and looked up! It was the Prince of her dreams, her only desire/ Armaan. All the clocks stopped moving, time stood still! She was locked in his blue eyes, eyes that looked quizzically into hers, probing, asking something she didn't understand. Her heart leaped painfully in her chest, there was that breathless feeling again of wind rushing in her ears. Everyone else receded into the background, the music faded, it was just the two of them, 2 pairs of eyes locked in a magnetic pull of attraction! They couldn't move, couldn't look away!

Suddenly a dancing body pushed Ridz so hard, she stumbled and fell forward. He grabbed her with both arms and pulled her hard against his chest, she cried out softly and almost fainted from sheer bliss! This was where she belonged, where she had wanted to be since she was thirteen!
Armaan had a strange feeling in his chest, like melted honey trickling down his ribcage. He held her close, inhaling the sweet fragrance of her hair (had she always smelled so nice?)….squeezing her soft frame in his arms (she fit so well there)
He felt peaceful all of a sudden, paradoxically amidst all the cacophony surrounding them…..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=po2tV7On9zQ&feature=channel (AR cute/romantic VM)

Aaja Milke... Hum Baant Le Dooriyan Tanhaaiyan...
Dhadkano Mein... Bajne Lagi Ansuni Shehnaaiyan...
Saj Rahi Hai Ab Aankhon Mein Pyar Ke Khwabon Ki Parchaaiyan...
Aaja Milke... Hum Baant Le Dooriyan Tanhaaiyan...

Na Koi Khusboo Thi Na Koi Mausam Tha
Har Lamha Zindagi Veeran Thi..
Charo Taraf Sirf Ghum Ka Andhera Tha
Tanha Tha Har Khushi Anjaan Thi..
Tujhko Pa Ke Khone Lagi Ab Door Tak Phaili Huyi Veeraniya...
Saj Rahi Hai.. Ab Aankhon.. Mein Pyar Ke Khwabon Ki Parchaaiyan..

Aaja Milke... Hum Baant Le Dooriyan Tanhaaiyan...
Dhadkano Mein ...Bajne Lagi Ansuni Shehnaaiyan...

Zulphon Ke Saaye Mein Tera Basera Ho
Palko Mein Din Dhale Ab Raat Din...
Mein Bida Keh Doon Saare Zamane Ko
Sochu Na Tu Mere Jab Saat Ho...
Hum Zuban Se Jo Na Kahe Voh Keh Rahi Yeh Waadiyan Khamoshiyan...
Saj Rahi Hai.. Ab Aankhon.. Mein Pyar Ke Khwabon Ki Parchaaiyan...

Without being aware of it, Armaan and Ridhima started moving silently with the music, eyes locked in mesmerized wonder, bodies barely touching, yet buzzing with electric shocks. Muskaan glanced at them and grinned victoriously. She silently did a thumbs up to Jeet who smiled back and winked. Their plan had borne fruit. Next they had to make sure that Armaan confessed his feelings for Ridhima…..that would be the most difficult part!
He would need a bigger push!

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Scene 3:

Angad waited anxiously at the club. He hoped she would come, would keep her promise of singing with him. His heart knew she would come!

He hadn't slept all night thinking about her! It was confirmed, the little thief had stolen his heart! He couldn't stop thinking about their scintillating dance, their fiery encounters. It wasn't just her sexy little body, he loved every little thing about her….her reckless beauty, her bindaas attitude, her free spirit, her dazzling smile (when she deigned to bestow one upon him)….YES, he had fallen in love with her at 2nd or 3rd sight! She grew on him like a fascinating addiction!

Angad craned his neck above the swaying bodies, trying to see the main entrance. His friend, DJ Bobby yelled : ANGAD! UR UP NEXT, BUDDY!
Angad raised his hand, signaling him to wait: IN A FEW!

Suddenly he spotted HER entering the club's double doors. His breath caught in his throat! She was absolutely stunning in a short golden dress, her long tanned legs showed off to perfection! Her babydoll lashes were dark with mascara, lips pink and luscious! Angad swallowed quickly….the tightness in his chest doubled!

Kripa too checked him out from top to bottom, her dark eyes boldly admiring how his buff bod was enhanced by the black sleeveless shirt, the large panther tattoo leaping out aggressively from bulging biceps! She licked her dry lips, feeling a strange excitement build up inside.
Yeh mujhey kya ho raha hai? What was about this man that accelerated her pulse-rate, made her heart flutter and her belly clench with tension? Was it just physical attraction or something more?

Angad's eyes glittered down at her: I knew u would come!
She smirked: Tanya apna vaada kabhie nahin bhoolti!

He grinned: I will hold you to that one! Ab chalein? Our fans are waiting….
He jumped up on the low club-stage and held out his hand. She grabbed it and jumped up beside him. The pit dancers yelled and screamed with excitement: ANGAD! ANGAD!
He raised both hands: GUYS! GUYS! EK MINUTE! I WANT TO INTRODUCE YOU TO MY LOVELY CO-SINGER, MISS….he paused a minute and gave her a teasing smile: MISS TANYAAAA!
YEAHHHH! TANYA TANYA! They chanted like a slogan taught by their master.

Angad picked up his guitar and twanged in rhythm, Kripa felt a little awkward at first but soon caught up with the magic of the moment:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O6oHxNH_0QI&feature=related
(AK sizzling vdo from KYPH)

Is pyaar ko main kya naam doon - 2
Bechain dil ko kaise aaraam doon, o oh, o oh oh oh
Bechain dil ko kaise aaraam doon, aah eh
Is pyaar ko main kya naam doon

--CHORUS--
Rabba mere rabba rabba, rabba mere rabba

Rabba mere rabba rabba, rabba mere rabba - 2

--MALE--
Tanhaai betaabi teri saugaate hai
Mere in honton pe bas teri hi baatein hai
Ho, oh oh, aah aah
Kuch naa keh paane ki yeh kya majboori hai
Nazdeek rehke bhi yeh kaisi doori hai
Khamosh honton se kya paigaam doon, o oh, o oh oh oh
Bechain dil ko kaise aaraam doon, eh
Is pyaar ko main kya naam doon - 2

--MALE--
Ae bechain dil ko kaise aaraam doon

Angad was in seventh heaven! Having her so close to him, sing with him, it was a dream come true! She was a very good singer, with a sweet, clear voice. Now if he could only convince her to be his permanent partner…..in life and on stage, his life would be made! He couldn't let a chance like this go by without expressing the emotions bubbling in his heart, struggling to burst out.
He serenaded her with this number:

Pehli nazar mein

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wk-bgbgLd4Q (One more AK VM)

Pehli Nazar Mein
Kaise Jaado Kar Diya
Tera Ban Baita Hai
Mera Jiya
Jaane Kya Hoga
Kya Hoga Kya Pata
Is Pal Ko Milke
Aa Jee Le Zara

Mein Hoon Yahan
Tu Hai Yahan
Meri Bahon Mein Aa
Aa Bhi Ja
O Jaan-E-Jaan
Dono Jahan
Meri Bahon Mein Aa
Bhool Ja Aa

O Jaan-E-Jaan
Dono Jahan
Meri Bahon Mein Aa
Bhool Ja Aa

Baby I Love U, Baby I Love You, Baby I Love You, Baby I Love You … So..
Baby I Love U
Oh I Love U
I Love U
I Love U So
Baby I Love U

Har Dua Mein Shamil Tera Pyaar Hai
Bin Tere Lamha Bhi Dushwar Hai
Dhadhkon Ko Tujhe Se Hi Darkar Hai
Tujhse Hai Rahtein
Tujhse Hai Chahtein

Kripa was blown away by his romantic serenade ! Her heart thumped loudly, this was the first time a guy had openly confessed his love for her! She didn't know how to handle this! She was more used to warding off lustful advances of men, but this? She didn't know what to do or say, how to react, should she get angry or…..

Angad smiled inside, he could sense her confusion! Perhaps he was moving too fast!
Pyaar ka izhaar dheerey dheerey karna hi munasib hoga! To make her feel at ease again, he rocked the stage with a rambunctious number:

Dhoom macha le dhoom macha le…..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EWYpEse4f78&feature=related

Kripa danced and sang with him effortlessly, she felt at home there, the stage, the dancing crowds, Angad….his husky, manly voice….which sent goosebumps through her body and energized her to lose all her inhibitions and confusion!

But someone was watching the rocking couple on stage with a furious expression! Prithvi had tracked down Tanya at the club. He couldn't believe what he saw there! Tanya was singing and dancing with that ….that Angad!??

He had begged her so many times to sing with him,. She had always refused under the pretext that she wasn't interested. Ab kya hua? Angad ne kaha aur yeh gal gayi? I did so much for her and this is how she repays me? Aur iss Angad ka toh main…..I will have to get rid of him somehow…..lekin kaisey?

Prithvi waited for his chance, fuming, seething with jealousy! Angad and Kripa aka Tanya entertained the club with their pulsating music and sparkling chemistry! They were unaware of the silent observer plotting to end their musical partnership!

It was late at night, past 2 am. Kripa bid goodbye to Angad…their hands lingered together, loathe to let go!
Kripa smiled: Bahut der ho gayi, ab mujhey jaana chahiye….
Let me take you home! He gazed into her eyes.
She looked away with a flush: No! I will manage, Thank you!
When can I see u again? He asked eagerly.

She dipped her head sideways with a teasing smile: Why do u want to see me?
His eyes pleaded with her: Come tomorrow, sing with me….
She laughed: No way! I don't want to be a professional singer! Ek raat ke liye theek tha, no more!

Then at least come to dinner with me, 8 pm, Jade Garden tomorrow!…..he was insistent, his eyes digging into her senses.
Sochungi!....she smirked and flung a leather jacket over her bare shoulders, put on her helmet, got up on her red hot bike and rode away with a cheeky wave!
Angad sighed with adoration: What a babe! Kamaal ki ladki hai!

He put on his helmet and drove away on his yellow Yamaha …..unknown to him, Prithvi followed him on his bike at a discreet distance……the 2 bikes traversed the night streets of Delhi, till Angad reached Khanna residence.
He went inside the gates, Prithvi stopped at the road corner and watched furtively. Toh yeh haii dushman ka ghar! He went closer and noted down the address! Tomorrow he would return to stake out the enemy's house!

He idly glanced at the nameplate on the neighbour's gate and froze! Three names were engraved in gold letters on black. Dr. Shashank Gupta, Milind Gupta, Sujal Gupta!
SUJAL GUPTA! Kahin yeh wo Sujal Gupta toh nahin jo…..that CID officer who was investigating our robberies? Interesting! Prithvi's eyes glistened with an unholy light! Now he knew how to keep Kripa away from that Goddamned Angad!

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Next part: Prithvi's plot, AK, SK and AR have sleepless night, SK shagun and sagai date fix, Armaan in turmoil, Kavya's secret

pallavi

Edited by pallavi25 - 15 years ago

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Deepa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#385

thank god u finally updated Pallavi dear...................was going crazy..............awesome update...............i seriously hate kumud.......shes completely opposite to kashish n her upbringings...............and armaan hes completely blown and infact the blow was not so light..............atleast now he realised................really hard skulled guy but hope ridz n muski's plan dont backfire coz of jeet's mom..................now armaan can never ever forget ridz make over....................now its gonna be his sleepless nights.....................i dunno y milind is like that..............irritating person.............dunno how prachi is putting up with him............like armaan some1 has to knock some sense into him too...................oh loved AK scene............hope kripa realises something concrete for angad before that stupid prithvi creates misunderstanding between AK................but missed SK very much in this part...............wanna c their wedding and romance so much............cont soon dear.............

and pm me when u post the new AK ff..................good luck for that..........

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Simone

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Posted: 15 years ago

#386

woahh i just signed on and saw that u FINALLY updated i was jumping with joy 😆

Sasha is quite a smart robber! Kumud will try to find out as much detail from Sujal as possible! 😆 But she needs to know that Sujal smart enough to be 2 steps ahead of them! This case is turning out to be quite interesting now!

Heyy bhagwan those punjabi aunties saw Jeet and Ridhima talk to each other??? They might try to fix the 'rishta' with Ridhima's parents but Ridhima's heart is already stolen, so they wont be able to do much 😛

Armaan is so cute! But with lots of double standards 😆 Atul is right, only Ridhima can 'sudhaar' him now!

Their little encounter on the dance floor was quite hot 😳

Waiting to see how Jeet and Muski make the next big move of making him confess..?

I felt bad for Prachi... how rude of Milind to check his phone while dancing with his wife! 😡

AK was so much more heart-felt this time, rather than the wam bam hot meeting 😆 Angad confessed openly... aww. but Kripa's confusion is quite understandable!

I felt bad for Prithvi but also hated him in this part! What a creep - following Angad to his house!!!!

OMG no he saw Sujal's nameplate... now he'll probably make Kripa believe that Angad is a 'secret agent' sent by Sujal 😡

And now that ur computer problems are solved, U BETTER UPDATE SOON otherwise i'll gather all other readers from here and run after u with a belan!

and yes its a serious threat!

🤣🤣🤣

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Daebak

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Posted: 15 years ago

#387

lovely part !

plzz continue A.S.A.P......Cant wait to read on SK !

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aishwarya

@aish_punk

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Posted: 15 years ago

#388

Hey Pallavi..lovely part..

Sasha n Kumud are trying to get secrets outta Sujal?!..hope they do'nt succeed..! ..

Armaan is getting so jealous seeing her with Jeet..😆..m lovin tat..!..he deserves it..n their cute lil moment was nice..n i totally enjoy RM sagai..! 😃

Angad n Kripa together was awesome..!..i bet they rocked d stage..😉..n Prithvi was plotting agains them?!..gosh..he's evil..!..n wow..Angad is in love?!! i guess Kripa feels d same way too <3..n i hope she dusnt move away 4m him jus bcuz Sujal is a CID officer..i mean they're just neighbours..!

update soon

-Aish