PriYO short ff ! Unexpressed love and emotions!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi guyz, i was thinking to write a one shot for Priyo since long time, but could not think any good ideas! so now finally, came up with one idea, so thought giving u a good shot before leaving! hope u all like it!


A newly married bride, sitting in her bedroom, with her legs hugging her chest! she is waiting for her husband! She is Sanyogita Chauhan! She just gor married to one of the most successful Businessman of India Mr. Prithvi Chahaun!
After a few minutes wait, he comes! as he walks in he sees room is decorated with beautiful roses and dias (lamps) and is looking exceptionally beautiful! He slowly walks towards the bride who is sitting on the bed! Sanyo's heartbeat increases as he takes every step towards her, but the next thing she sees was just so unexpected! He walks towards the cupboard, which is behind the bed! he does not even looks at her and give her smile! he straight walks in the directions of cupboard and takes his night clothes out and wlaks in to the bathroom!

Sanyo sat there, observing this! she was stunned by this act of him! she kept on thinking that how could he just do that to her? he just married to her with his own willing? several questions came in her mind, but she ingored them saying, "he must be tired with this wedding preprations and that too on his own as he has no one in his family, except one best friend Mayank!"

After a while, Prithvi comes out of his bathroom,goes near the bed and dozzes off to sleep on one side! this was even bigger shock for her, that he didnt even ask her how she is? is she happy? Sanyo gets up from the bed and gets change in her nighty! she goes near window, and kept on thinking what had happened a while ago! then, she goes to her bed and tries to sleep but failed! sleep was no where in her eyes, but quetions! those eyes were seeking for annswers of her life! the night passed, and the morning came with a new hope of life!

Sanyo wakes up about 6'o clock in the morning! she gets up from the bed and turns around to get a glimpse of her husband, but the side was empty! there was no sign of Prithvi in the room!
suddenly she knocks the bathroom door, but no responce, finally she opens the door but he was not there either! she goes around the whole house, finally, a maid comes to her!

Maid: good morning Maam
Sanyo: where is prithvi?
Maid: sir has gone to gym and will go to office straight after that!
Sanyo: but how do u know?
Maid: thats his routine activity!
Sanyo: thanks!

Sanyo comes back to her room and stands front of the mirror asking herself millions of questions! she stood ther for god knows how long and shattering in tears! she had so many dreams about her wedding, her own house which she will decorate by herself and etc! suddenly, one door knock brought her back to reality!

Sanyo: (wiping her tears) who is it?
Maid: its me maam! Jenny!
Sanyo: come in!
Maid: (opening the door) maam, ur breakfast is ready!
Sanyo: ok im coming in 10 minutes!

Madi goes form there and sanyo goes to have shower! After 10 minutes, sanyo comes out of the shower wearing Red saree! she is looking like a priness in this colour! she comes downstairs near the dinning table and takes her seat! as she sees the table, it reminds her of her own family! over here, she is the only one to seat on the huge dining table! a tear escape from her eyes but she controlled herself! after the breakfast, she went in her room, and then only her cell phone buzzes! it was her mum's phone!

She picks it up! Sanyo: hello maa! Mum: hello, beta how r u? Sanyo: im fine maa! wt about u guyz? Mum: we all good too! we are waiting for u guyz! arent u coming? Sanyo: for what maa? Mum: sanyo, for the phagphere rasham? Sanyo: oh maa, i forgot about it sorry! Mum: theek hai! jaldi se aaja! we waiting beta! Sanyo: yes maa, im coming! they both hangs up the phone and sanyo leaves to go to her mum's house! sanyo enters the house and sees that everyone eagerly waiting for her! everyone is delighted to see her! sanyo goes to them and hug all of them one by one! the whole day passes, sanyo stays in her room all day! finally, its 6'o clock! Sanyo: maa, i think i should leave now! Mum: but beta, how come prithvi is not here to fetch u? Sanyo: maa, actually he had an important meeting, so he'll be late! i will go in my car! Mum: ok beta! keep coming and take care of urself! Sanyo: u too maa!
Sanyo leaves and reaches her home! she enters the house! jenny (her maid) comes ot her and says:
Jenny: maam, someone is waiting for u in the study room!
Sanyo: for me? ok i'll see! thanks!
Jenny: its ok!
sanyo goes to study room and sees one man is waiting for her! he is sitting on the chair with his face coverd with a big fat book! Sanyo enters the room!
Sanyo: hello!
Man: (moving the book from his face) hello, im Mayank Sharma! Prithvi's best friend and ur devar!
Sanyo: (with smile) oh hello! nice to meet u!
Mayank: same here! BTW can i call u bhabhi?
Sanyo: ya sure 😳!
then they both talks for almost 2 hours, sanyo felt good talking to him or we could say they became really good friends! then mayank leaves from there! sanyo also goes to her room and gets change in her casual jeans and top!
the days were passing faster than clock! Prithvi hardly used get time out for sanyo! they used go to restaurant once a month!
After a year, Sanyo went to doctors as she used to faint a lot and used to get really bad headche! doctor took some tests and the thing he afraid of happened!
Sanyo came home and went in her bedroom straight away! prithvi was out of country due to bussiness meeting! Sanyo went in the room and locked the room! She was shattered in tears and cried and cried unlit there was no tears in her eyes left! She looked at the piece of paper which stated that she has brain cancer and is at the last stage of the illness! there was no cure to this illness! suddenly the phone rings, sanyo wipes her tears and goes to recieve the phone!
Sanyo: hello
Prithvi: its me!
Sanyo: how r u?
Prithvi: im good! how r u?
Sanyo: im fine........ (while saying this her head start spinning and she faints on the floor)
Prithvi: (hearing the noice)Sanyo, r u ok? hello, sanyo, wt happened?
prithvi suddenly, calls off all his meetings and comes back to india! He comes home and asks, jenny, wheres sanyo? he cries!
Jenny: sir (sobbing) maam is in hospital!
Prithvi: what? which hospital?
jenny: city hospital!
Prithvi runs to the hospital and reaches the reception!
Prithvi: wheres sanyogita chauhan?
lady: she is on the third floor ward on 3A!
Prithvi goes to the third floor as fast as could! he reaches and sees that mayank is outside the ward waiting for prithvi!
as soon as mayank sees prithvi, he runs to him and hugges him!
Prithvi: wt happened to her? i said wt happened?
Mayank: she has brain cancer and is at the last stage! she will not survive till tomorow!
hearing this, prithvi breaks down from inside and shatters in tears front of mayank! mayank saw his best friends breaking down front of him for the first time in his life!
doctor comes out!
Prithvi: doctor, she'll survive na? doctor say something!
Doctor: im really sorry but she has only got house left!
Prithvi: just shut up (he says in top of his lungs) u dnt knw anything! she will survive!
saying this prithvi goes inside the ward, where sanyo os lying down on the bed! Sanyo sees prithvi coming towards her and is more than delighted to see her love in front of her eyes at the last moments of her life! Prithvi moves closer to her and sits on the side of the bed! he takes sanyo's hands in his and says:
Prithvi: im sorry plz forgive me! (with tears in his eyes)
Sanyo: (keeping her fingers on his lips) shhhsshhhhh, wont u say those 3 magical words even today?
Prithvi: I love u! plz dnt leave me! i wnt be able to live without u!
Sanyo: i love u too!
Prithvi: i know, its toooooo late to say this but i was toooooo busy in making money that i forgot to make love!
Sanyo: plz dnt say this! since u have said those 3 magical words, i dnt mind dying at all!
Prithvi: shhhhhhhhs, just shut up! u not going anywhere!
Sanyo: i knw the truth! i...... love.......... u............. (saying this she closed her eyes forever and goes to eternal sleep!)
Prithvi shatters down in tears and realise that if u love someone, it is as important to express ur love and emotions to the preson!
i really hope u like it!
do comment!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow,wonderfulupdatešŸ‘.What an update sweetyā­ļø.I'm speechless dear😊😳.

Very true, when u love some one tell him/ her soon😳.Kaya pata time mile iye na mile😳.
Great storyā­ļø.I'm feel the pain of sanyo and prithvi😭.
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#3

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Wow,wonderfulupdatešŸ‘.What an update sweetyā­ļø.I'm speechless dear😊😳.

Very true, when u love some one tell him/ her soon😳.Kaya pata time mile iye na mile😳.
Great storyā­ļø.I'm feel the pain of sanyo and prithvi😭.

thank u soooooooooooo much di! and yes agree with u ki u never know, kal ho na ho!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#4

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

thank u soooooooooooo much di! and yes agree with u ki u never know, kal ho na ho!

Welcome sweety.Thanks for agree with me.Very well say kaya pata kal ho na ho.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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really nice part dear ,its true dear pyar kar izhar waqt rehaty ho kar daina chiayay warna bohat dair ho jati hia šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: maria_awan

really nice part dear ,its true dear pyar kar izhar waqt rehaty ho kar daina chiayay warna bohat dair ho jati hia šŸ˜‰

totally agree dear! thanks for liking it dear!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

hi guyz, i was thinking to write a one shot for Priyo since long time, but could not think any good ideas! so now finally, came up with one idea, so thought giving u a good shot before leaving! hope u all like it!


A newly married bride, sitting in her bedroom, with her legs hugging her chest! she is waiting for her husband! She is Sanyogita Chauhan! She just gor married to one of the most successful Businessman of India Mr. Prithvi Chahaun!
After a few minutes wait, he comes! as he walks in he sees room is decorated with beautiful roses and dias (lamps) and is looking exceptionally beautiful! He slowly walks towards the bride who is sitting on the bed! Sanyo's heartbeat increases as he takes every step towards her, but the next thing she sees was just so unexpected! He walks towards the cupboard, which is behind the bed! he does not even looks at her and give her smile! he straight walks in the directions of cupboard and takes his night clothes out and wlaks in to the bathroom!

Sanyo sat there, observing this! she was stunned by this act of him! she kept on thinking that how could he just do that to her? he just married to her with his own willing? several questions came in her mind, but she ingored them saying, "he must be tired with this wedding preprations and that too on his own as he has no one in his family, except one best friend Mayank!"

After a while, Prithvi comes out of his bathroom,goes near the bed and dozzes off to sleep on one side! this was even bigger shock for her, that he didnt even ask her how she is? is she happy? Sanyo gets up from the bed and gets change in her nighty! she goes near window, and kept on thinking what had happened a while ago! then, she goes to her bed and tries to sleep but failed! sleep was no where in her eyes, but quetions! those eyes were seeking for annswers of her life! the night passed, and the morning came with a new hope of life!

Sanyo wakes up about 6'o clock in the morning! she gets up from the bed and turns around to get a glimpse of her husband, but the side was empty! there was no sign of Prithvi in the room!
suddenly she knocks the bathroom door, but no responce, finally she opens the door but he was not there either! she goes around the whole house, finally, a maid comes to her!

Maid: good morning Maam
Sanyo: where is prithvi?
Maid: sir has gone to gym and will go to office straight after that!
Sanyo: but how do u know?
Maid: thats his routine activity!
Sanyo: thanks!

Sanyo comes back to her room and stands front of the mirror asking herself millions of questions! she stood ther for god knows how long and shattering in tears! she had so many dreams about her wedding, her own house which she will decorate by herself and etc! suddenly, one door knock brought her back to reality!

Sanyo: (wiping her tears) who is it?
Maid: its me maam! Jenny!
Sanyo: come in!
Maid: (opening the door) maam, ur breakfast is ready!
Sanyo: ok im coming in 10 minutes!

Madi goes form there and sanyo goes to have shower! After 10 minutes, sanyo comes out of the shower wearing Red saree! she is looking like a priness in this colour! she comes downstairs near the dinning table and takes her seat! as she sees the table, it reminds her of her own family! over here, she is the only one to seat on the huge dining table! a tear escape from her eyes but she controlled herself! after the breakfast, she went in her room, and then only her cell phone buzzes! it was her mum's phone!

She picks it up! Sanyo: hello maa! Mum: hello, beta how r u? Sanyo: im fine maa! wt about u guyz? Mum: we all good too! we are waiting for u guyz! arent u coming? Sanyo: for what maa? Mum: sanyo, for the phagphere rasham? Sanyo: oh maa, i forgot about it sorry! Mum: theek hai! jaldi se aaja! we waiting beta! Sanyo: yes maa, im coming! they both hangs up the phone and sanyo leaves to go to her mum's house! sanyo enters the house and sees that everyone eagerly waiting for her! everyone is delighted to see her! sanyo goes to them and hug all of them one by one! the whole day passes, sanyo stays in her room all day! finally, its 6'o clock! Sanyo: maa, i think i should leave now! Mum: but beta, how come prithvi is not here to fetch u? Sanyo: maa, actually he had an important meeting, so he'll be late! i will go in my car! Mum: ok beta! keep coming and take care of urself! Sanyo: u too maa!
Sanyo leaves and reaches her home! she enters the house! jenny (her maid) comes ot her and says:
Jenny: maam, someone is waiting for u in the study room!
Sanyo: for me? ok i'll see! thanks!
Jenny: its ok!
sanyo goes to study room and sees one man is waiting for her! he is sitting on the chair with his face coverd with a big fat book! Sanyo enters the room!
Sanyo: hello!
Man: (moving the book from his face) hello, im Mayank Sharma! Prithvi's best friend and ur devar!
Sanyo: (with smile) oh hello! nice to meet u!
Mayank: same here! BTW can i call u bhabhi?
Sanyo: ya sure 😳!
then they both talks for almost 2 hours, sanyo felt good talking to him or we could say they became really good friends! then mayank leaves from there! sanyo also goes to her room and gets change in her casual jeans and top!
the days were passing faster than clock! Prithvi hardly used get time out for sanyo! they used go to restaurant once a month!
After a year, Sanyo went to doctors as she used to faint a lot and used to get really bad headche! doctor took some tests and the thing he afraid of happened!
Sanyo came home and went in her bedroom straight away! prithvi was out of country due to bussiness meeting! Sanyo went in the room and locked the room! She was shattered in tears and cried and cried unlit there was no tears in her eyes left! She looked at the piece of paper which stated that she has brain cancer and is at the last stage of the illness! there was no cure to this illness! suddenly the phone rings, sanyo wipes her tears and goes to recieve the phone!
Sanyo: hello
Prithvi: its me!
Sanyo: how r u?
Prithvi: im good! how r u?
Sanyo: im fine........ (while saying this her head start spinning and she faints on the floor)
Prithvi: (hearing the noice)Sanyo, r u ok? hello, sanyo, wt happened?
prithvi suddenly, calls off all his meetings and comes back to india! He comes home and asks, jenny, wheres sanyo? he cries!
Jenny: sir (sobbing) maam is in hospital!
Prithvi: what? which hospital?
jenny: city hospital!
Prithvi runs to the hospital and reaches the reception!
Prithvi: wheres sanyogita chauhan?
lady: she is on the third floor ward on 3A!
Prithvi goes to the third floor as fast as could! he reaches and sees that mayank is outside the ward waiting for prithvi!
as soon as mayank sees prithvi, he runs to him and hugges him!
Prithvi: wt happened to her? i said wt happened?
Mayank: she has brain cancer and is at the last stage! she will not survive till tomorow!
hearing this, prithvi breaks down from inside and shatters in tears front of mayank! mayank saw his best friends breaking down front of him for the first time in his life!
doctor comes out!
Prithvi: doctor, she'll survive na? doctor say something!
Doctor: im really sorry but she has only got house left!
Prithvi: just shut up (he says in top of his lungs) u dnt knw anything! she will survive!
saying this prithvi goes inside the ward, where sanyo os lying down on the bed! Sanyo sees prithvi coming towards her and is more than delighted to see her love in front of her eyes at the last moments of her life! Prithvi moves closer to her and sits on the side of the bed! he takes sanyo's hands in his and says:
Prithvi: im sorry plz forgive me! (with tears in his eyes)
Sanyo: (keeping her fingers on his lips) shhhsshhhhh, wont u say those 3 magical words even today?
Prithvi: I love u! plz dnt leave me! i wnt be able to live without u!
Sanyo: i love u too!
Prithvi: i know, its toooooo late to say this but i was toooooo busy in making money that i forgot to make love!
Sanyo: plz dnt say this! since u have said those 3 magical words, i dnt mind dying at all!
Prithvi: shhhhhhhhs, just shut up! u not going anywhere!
Sanyo: i knw the truth! i...... love.......... u............. (saying this she closed her eyes forever and goes to eternal sleep!)
Prithvi shatters down in tears and realise that if u love someone, it is as important to express ur love and emotions to the preson!
i really hope u like it!
do comment!

wow superb update zoah..........sach kahu toh tumne mujhe rula diya yaar😭........i m left speechless..........mujhe toh mere kaustubh ki yaad aa gayi😭.just the difference was ki sanyo ki place mein kaustubh tha😭............really it was very nice.šŸ‘šŸ‘
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: anasrashid_fan

wow superb update zoah..........sach kahu toh tumne mujhe rula diya yaar😭........i m left speechless..........mujhe toh mere kaustubh ki yaad aa gayi😭.just the difference was ki sanyo ki place mein kaustubh tha😭............really it was very nice.šŸ‘šŸ‘

hey thanks a ton for liking it! and im really sorry that i made u cry! didnt intend to do it!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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my god zoah..................its so emotional yaa................tune to muje bht centi kar diya.............
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Posted: 15 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: niyaati

my god zoah..................its so emotional yaa................tune to muje bht centi kar diya.............

hey meri jaan niyaati u back? awesome!
thanks for living this one shot! mein bhi bahut centi ho gayi thi type karte waqt!

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