mayur ff-never wnt dis 2 hpn NOTE-pg 149

jeni

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Posted: 16 years ago

#751

Originally posted by: AngelArTi1988
wow...jeni my dear....luvly update!!!!! u rock yaar!!!!! "wat people do @ honeymoon???"!!! 😃 he he...dis part was realy awesum dear....thnx a lot 4 d pm...waitin 4 friday now...tk cr dr....kp rockin n writin...god bless ya... 👏
luv mayur always!!! luv mjht... 🤗

thx angel....😉am happy...luv mayur.....mjht....

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jeni

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Posted: 16 years ago

#752

hope u all will enjoy reading it...am modifying little from the last part end.....here goes continuity...
chapter eighteen:
both mayank and nupur took a shower and went to bed as they felt sleepy after a long day...

nupur was disturbed from her deep sleep woke up due to the repeated knock she was hearing....she turned towards mayank like what the hell he is doing?why can't he open the door!she turned searching for mayank,but he was not there...she got out of her bed calling mayanks name louder....

nupur:mayank!where are you?but knock on the door have'nt stopped yet?.....she opened the door,there was a waiter holding a message on a paper.....please come to room no 356....

your's mayank.

hey whats wrong with him,viewed the watch it was showing 11.50....she took that paper asked the direction to the waiter how to go to the room no 356...she took the lift all alone in the night,she was damn angry on him for doing this stupidity on night.....went and knocked the door .....it was mayank who opened the door holding his hand back asking her to enter the room with another hand.....

nupur-without going in asked what the hell are you doing here at this time....do you know how much i was scared...and now what are you doing here?

mayank-by god...(ha ha ha ha ha )she is really funny now....but yet answered her...you know am waiting

for wife.....he dragged her inside the room....

nupur-who entered the room with an extremly angry look was now dumbstruck looking on the room

decorations....room was fully dark...with the white candles around.....

them standing there....now mayank took his hand which he was holding back....red roses...bunch of red roses and wished her...

mrs.nupur sharma wish you a many more happy returns of the day....

it struck tewelve.....when he had wished her.....she looked at the calender.....she had forgotten her birthday.....but he,how did he know my b'day date...

nupur-thank you mayank!she smiled extremely happy of his wonderful surprise...

.she looked at the cake which was beautifully written with happy b'day nupur....

mayank-he smiled saying.....cut the cake sweety....

nupur-she blowed the cake,both shared the cake with each other.....she was really shocked....she never

remembered that today was her b'day...how did i forgot?mayank how do you know my b'day date...i did'nt even remembered my b'day date....

mayank-pridely took his shirt and said thats mayanks speciality...i know all....

nupur-opened her mouth to say something...just then noticed a greeting card...she opened the card.....

phone disturbed nupur,she looked at him to pick up his cell....but he said call is

for you dear....she went took her phone saying hello!it was gunjan...

mayank was really admiring her talking with her family members...

gunjan-di...happy birthday.....she screamed out of joy...

nupur-thanks gunjan...how are you,mom and dad?

gunjan-all are fine di.....hope you enjoy lot...

nupur-ofcourse gunjan,am enjoying a lot....

she talked to her mom and dad....it was her first b'day celebrating without her family members...but he made it

as wonderful than ever.....she was talking with her mother...

mom-you know we are celebrating ur b'day with a small get together....here samrat wanna wish you....

sammy-hello bhabhi...happy birthday....

nupur-thx sammy...

sammy-so how is bhaya?is he ok?am so scared to send him alone with you?

nupur-(in a childish tone)thats enough sammy...

sammy-have loads of fun.....here mom wants to wish you....

keerthi,suji and purab wished her....she was really excited...after the phone conversation,she who

looked at mayank standing opposite to her asked are you happy nupur?

she without replying just hugged him tightly as ever......that showed her happiness....she in her broken

voice said....

nupur-mayu am so much excited...i never expected this.....tears was rolling with a lot of joy...

mayank who came out of the hug asked...

mayank-hey!nupur what was that mayu...it sounds really good....why are these tears for...i really dont

want you too see, crying out in a joy too....and he hugged her back,tightly showing his love for her...

for little longer they was standing there in a joy.....

to be continued.......still more surprises waiting....

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amazingneira

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Posted: 16 years ago

#753

so sweet mayu!!!!

lovely.. u add flavour by pasting pics.. nice update

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#754

thanx jeni for ur romantic update.
i enjoy a lot.
plz keep it up.
thanx 4 ur PM.
faria

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Posted: 16 years ago

#755

awesome jeni! plz plz update soon! i just cnt wait! thanks for the pm!

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Srishti but I prefer being called Mishu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#756

awesome updt
mayu is soo sweet arranging a b'day surprise for nups
plz plz continue soon!!

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adi_gupta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#757

hey anyone can post the update here so i can read it

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afsha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#758

Plz som one post update on last page

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Mithila

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Posted: 16 years ago

#759

soooooooooooo cute update anu.

just love mayank.

thanx for adding mayur romance.

waiting for henext part.

luv ya.

update soon.

can't wait for more surprises.

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Mithila

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Posted: 16 years ago

#760

@adi_gupta n afsha

here it is for u.

hope u all will enjoy reading it...am modifying little from the last part end.....here goes continuity...
chapter eighteen:
both mayank and nupur took a shower and went to bed as they felt sleepy after a long day...

nupur was disturbed from her deep sleep woke up due to the repeated knock she was hearing....she turned towards mayank like what the hell he is doing?why can't he open the door!she turned searching for mayank,but he was not there...she got out of her bed calling mayanks name louder....

nupur:mayank!where are you?but knock on the door have'nt stopped yet?.....she opened the door,there was a waiter holding a message on a paper.....please come to room no 356....

your's mayank.

hey whats wrong with him,viewed the watch it was showing 11.50....she took that paper asked the direction to the waiter how to go to the room no 356...she took the lift all alone in the night,she was damn angry on him for doing this stupidity on night.....went and knocked the door .....it was mayank who opened the door holding his hand back asking her to enter the room with another hand.....

nupur-without going in asked what the hell are you doing here at this time....do you know how much i was scared...and now what are you doing here?

mayank-by god...(ha ha ha ha ha )she is really funny now....but yet answered her...you know am waiting

for wife.....he dragged her inside the room....

nupur-who entered the room with an extremly angry look was now dumbstruck looking on the room

decorations....room was fully dark...with the white candles around.....

them standing there....now mayank took his hand which he was holding back....red roses...bunch of red roses and wished her...

mrs.nupur sharma wish you a many more happy returns of the day....

it struck tewelve.....when he had wished her.....she looked at the calender.....she had forgotten her birthday.....but he,how did he know my b'day date...

nupur-thank you mayank!she smiled extremely happy of his wonderful surprise...

.she looked at the cake which was beautifully written with happy b'day nupur....

mayank-he smiled saying.....cut the cake sweety....

nupur-she blowed the cake,both shared the cake with each other.....she was really shocked....she never

remembered that today was her b'day...how did i forgot?mayank how do you know my b'day date...i did'nt even remembered my b'day date....

mayank-pridely took his shirt and said thats mayanks speciality...i know all....

nupur-opened her mouth to say something...just then noticed a greeting card...she opened the card.....

phone disturbed nupur,she looked at him to pick up his cell....but he said call is

for you dear....she went took her phone saying hello!it was gunjan...

mayank was really admiring her talking with her family members...

gunjan-di...happy birthday.....she screamed out of joy...

nupur-thanks gunjan...how are you,mom and dad?

gunjan-all are fine di.....hope you enjoy lot...

nupur-ofcourse gunjan,am enjoying a lot....

she talked to her mom and dad....it was her first b'day celebrating without her family members...but he made it

as wonderful than ever.....she was talking with her mother...

mom-you know we are celebrating ur b'day with a small get together....here samrat wanna wish you....

sammy-hello bhabhi...happy birthday....

nupur-thx sammy...

sammy-so how is bhaya?is he ok?am so scared to send him alone with you?