FF:Contract Marriage[MayUr]Pt23 pg113 4/8

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Divya (Divz)

@ch0c0lates

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#761

Its great to see their relationship progressing....and now becoming friends....awesome job Rohit!

Keep updating!

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Annie

@annie07

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#762

awww.......rohit awesome part...gr8 to see them talking to each other and withour those two haddis...........plz post the next 1 soon.................thanx

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minalpink100

@minalpink100

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#763

very nice update plz pm me wn u will update u r next update i already sent u buddy request

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@-SMay31-

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#764

OMG rohit just Fantastic part..wondeful..i loved every bit of it...*claps* keep up da gr8 work.. :))

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430105

Hibernated

Posted: 16 years ago

#765

aww...rohit...i just loved loved loved this part....yay mayur are finally friends...it was soooo cute...how he consoled her.....that was sosweet of him!!!! awww..loooove mayank......aw and both r confused abt their feelings....hope they fall in looove sooon....thanks for this awesome part....do pm me wenever u update!

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Ananya

@ananya_s

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#766

rohit dadaji!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.......it was such a cuuuuutttttttttttttttteeeeeeeeeeeeeeee part.......tnx fr puttin me in it!!!!.......ill just imagine it as 10yrs ago.....aww.......im nt really angry wid u coz ive always wanted be wid mayank nd nupsi!!!!!.....lol.....waise dadaji aapne mujhe itni khushi di hai ...... itni khushi di hai ki mujhe abhi aapko peetne ka mood nahi hai.............so nxt time watch out........tnx again fr dedicatin d part 2 me😳

luv
ananya

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#767

hi rohit
nice update.
now their friendship began
its a very good news.
just waiting 4 ur next update.
plz dont take too much time.
Pm me if possible.
faria

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nishi

@Nishithini

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#768

hey! I read the update yesterday as soon as u update but couldn't comment.

it was an awesome update. so mayank and nupur are finally friends. I hope very soon they realize their love for each other.

very nice part. continue soon.

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GamesOfLife

@GamesOfLife

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#769

Mr Mayank ... I am so hot 😛😛.😆😆😆...this guy of urs is so full of himself 😆.....par aag to dono tarf hai ...he cant stop looking and cant stop thinking 2😉 ....gr8 dialogues there Rohit 👏

@ and these strange feelings .... well love is a mystery and puzzel yet to be solved 😉.... looking fw how they reach the answers for all the questions😛😉

@ 2 much war in the poor guy's mind ... her pain his pain ..... and then he say he don't even like her ....bichara .😛... the inner struggle of ur characters make me enjoy ur FF every time ..👏👏

@👏👏👏........ hate him? ...like him? ..attracted to him ? all the emotions of nups was so beautifully written ...u tackle all the grounds with this roller coaster ride ..... i loved the scene where he makes her smile ... Mayu can be obnoxious and then next min so caring ...no wonder he is confusing Nups .. this will confuse any girl ....and ur Ananya was so cute😛👏...
@ looking fw to this friendship ...... Keep on writing and raising r heart beats Rohit ...urs is the most passionate Ff of r forum 😆😆😆....dont u dare spoil r kids !!😛👏

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Senny

@Senny

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#770

hey rohit man what an update, it was fantastic man, i lovedddddddddddddddd this part, it had the beginning of the innocent love, like a proper beginning and a freindship between mayur, wow i thought mayur would never become friends man but you proved me wrong man, it was just too good.

your update was sweet, simple beautiful yet MAGIC PERSONIFIED, excellent job, keep it up rohit.