OS: Bargain for Peace [4 Shabz]

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Bargain for peace

She was so engrossed in her work that it was making him want to just take her books which dared to keep her attention from him and rip them apart. But of course, he couldn't do that. It would show that he was being jealous of books, how pitiful is that? He looked at her and watched as she bit her lip, her eyebrows furrowed as she worked on her homework.

He sighed loudly. She didn't look up.

He frowned and decided to cough subtly. She still didn't look up, continuing to write something.

He crossed his arms and let out a loud "hmph". She sighed this time and rolled her eyes.

He decided to see exactly what it was that was keeping her away from him, and their plans to go out and get some ice cream. Okay, so those were his plans he just made up but still. Standing up and walking closer to her desk, he looked at her desk; a book lay to the side. The thing that dared to keep her away was her History work; he glared at the book with contempt. She looked up and noticed he had left his spot from her bed and was now standing there, glaring at something on her desk.

"Preet, what are you doing? Go sit down" she said, turning back to her notebook and tapping her pen against the page. He broke his "battle of who can glare better" with the book and pouted at her.

"I don't want to" he said, crossing his arms and jutting his lower lip out, exaggerating more than slightly.

"Why?" she asked, flipping back to another page and humming to herself.

"Because! My girlfriend is ignoring me, not paying even the slightest attention to me, I mean I came here so we can spend time together and you're sitting here doing your stupid homework" he answered with a whine in his husky voice. She looked up and stared at him blankly.

"I told you when you called that I had homework and its due tomorrow, I can't ignore it. I also told you that you should probably go and hang out with the guys, because you will get bored here, but you didn't listen, so don't blame me" she replied with a slight smirk. Normally she would've dumped her work till the last minute and gone with him to have fun, but this was the last minute she had. She knew she should have done the assignment the minute it was assigned, at least little by little.

"Well, forgive me for coming to spend time with my girlfriend!" he said dramatically, ignoring the fact that she had in fact warned him. She sighed and held out the remote for him to take. He looked at her for a minute and with a sigh took it and went back to the bed, turning on the TV to watch something.

The sound of the show he was watching, her pen scratching against the paper was all that was heard for the first few moments. But of course, like every other silence with Preet, it didn't last. After all, he didn't get what he wanted and that was her attention on him and only him. Yeah, he could be conceited at times.

He stood up carefully, without making noise and tip-toed over to where she sat staring at her book with careful attention. He quickly placed his hand on top of her notebook and let out a triumphant grin. She glanced at him and narrowed her eyes, making him gulp silently but he kept his hand on her work.

"Preet, move your hand. I need to finish this essay for English" she huffed as she tried to move his hand, silently cursing him for being much stronger than her.

"Wait…English? I thought you were doing History homework" he asked confused, glancing at the book with which he had won against in the battle of glaring, he refused to acknowledge the fact that it was an object, not a human that it would glare back.

"No, I finished that already, that's why it's on the side. Now move your hand before I stab it" she replied with a sugar coated smirk.

He let out a huff, "I can't believe this. Why didn't you tell me before hand? I could've helped you. English is my second language after all" he replied, standing straighter as if waiting for her to applaud him.

"…I don't want to fail my class Preet, now move it" she answered with a roll of her eyes.

"How rude. To think I'm dating you Shabo" another dramatic reply from him making her smile and bite the edge of her lip to hide it.

"One kiss to make you let me work" Shabo said, staring at him with a knowing gaze.

"Better make it two" he smirked at her as she stood and he moved his hand away. She rolled her eyes yet again, what a big price she had to pay for some peace.

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Shabziiiee! I know ur present is really late. So sorry about that. This is from me and Kimz, we both hope you really like it. *grins*

Comments/Criticism/Like Button Anyone? 😆

- Kiran and Rinki

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indiandoll89 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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The idea was soo sooo cute! 😃 I think your writing mojo didn't take an unexpected trip to Hawaii btw! 😉 It's still very much there! 😃

The whole concept was very real, and I could see Shabo like that! 😛 But Preet had me grinning like an idiot!😃 I loved his impatience ness! 😃 😳 Totally cute! 😛

The ending was the shweetest part! 😃 I'm sure Shabzie's gonna love it! 😛

Great job from both of you! 😃 *hugs*

Meera😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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How cute.

my spot.

*edited*

It was cute, and I don't know what else to say. I'm no longer on my Subway high. 😆 Yes, I get high off of Subway, shush. Don't judge me.

I love that Preet's annoying Shabzie, and she's just annoying. Him needing her attention was a typical Preet thing, and she bribed him with a kiss! I don't know why I'm so surprised, at least he let her do her work then. 😆

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Lucky Lucky Shabzee!!!!!

I loved this one shot! It's totally cute! And I just loved this line:
"I thought you were doing History homework" he asked confused, glancing at the book with which he had won against in the battle of glaring, he refused to acknowledge the fact that it was an object, not a human that it would glare back." How adorable!!!!!!
Happy Birthday again Shabzee....the party continues!!!😊
Love:-Nonee

Posted: 16 years ago
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Rinki and Kimzie! 🤗

Gosh, I miss our crazy spamming. :) But on to the shot, it was so cute! aha just like me to leave everything till last minute! *shudders* Dreading next year, I am. :)

Preet was just AWESOME in this shot, impatient much? 😆 Thanks a bunch and love you both! :)

--shabz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: indiandoll89

The idea was soo sooo cute! 😃 I think your writing mojo didn't take an unexpected trip to Hawaii btw! 😉 It's still very much there! 😃
Thanks Meerii. Heh, yah, guess it decided to stay home. 😆
The whole concept was very real, and I could see Shabo like that! 😛 But Preet had me grinning like an idiot!😃 I loved his impatience ness! 😃 😳 Totally cute! 😛
*hums* Was trying for that...oh totally, i was having fun writing him. 😆
The ending was the shweetest part! 😃 I'm sure Shabzie's gonna love it! 😛
Aw..thanks. Hope so
Great job from both of you! 😃 *hugs*
Thanks. =]
Meera😳
Rinki

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: noneeM

Lucky Lucky Shabzee!!!!!
Heh cute Nonee.
I loved this one shot! It's totally cute! And I just loved this line:
"I thought you were doing History homework" he asked confused, glancing at the book with which he had won against in the battle of glaring, he refused to acknowledge the fact that it was an object, not a human that it would glare back." How adorable!!!!!!
Thanks! *hugs* Im glad u liked it. Think it shows Preet's wacko side. 😆
Happy Birthday again Shabzee....the party continues!!!😊
Love:-Nonee
Rinki



Radz- u have to comment on lot of things no? 😆😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shabo24

Rinki and Kimzie! 🤗
*pats head* yes?
Gosh, I miss our crazy spamming. :) But on to the shot, it was so cute! aha just like me to leave everything till last minute! *shudders* Dreading next year, I am. :)
Totally. We shall continue that someday, we will for sure. Aw...thanks. Me too. *shivers*
Preet was just AWESOME in this shot, impatient much? 😆 Thanks a bunch and love you both! :)
Of course. It is Preet after all. Welcome, =]
--shabz
Rinki

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Posted: 16 years ago
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YAY! Shabz liked it. 😎

But anyway awesome job writing this Rinkz. And ahem, thanks for including me in the gift giving process. I dont know what I'd do without you. Don't answer it, cuz its not a question. 🤣

I loved this, it was short, simple, and just totally sweet! It reminded me of something. *ahem* Preet was totally adorable, the staring contest with the book made me laugh. You made him so childish, but then again children dont ask for presents like that! 😳 Man, if they did that would be the only thing they would be getting from me, a kiss on the cheek and "Happy Birthday" and I would be done for. But noooo they want action figures, and expensive dolls. *frowns* No one gets me a laptop!

Shabz was perfect in the shot, she really would say things like that. And haha, leaving things to the last moment, thats why she's a turtle. 🤣

I loved it!

kimz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: kimmu

YAY! Shabz liked it. 😎
Yes she did.
But anyway awesome job writing this Rinkz. And ahem, thanks for including me in the gift giving process. I dont know what I'd do without you. Don't answer it, cuz its not a question. 🤣
Thanks. Ah, i've answered that like million of times before...so ill stay quiet this time. But know this, it wud be bad. 😆
I loved this, it was short, simple, and just totally sweet! It reminded me of something. *ahem* Preet was totally adorable, the staring contest with the book made me laugh. You made him so childish, but then again children dont ask for presents like that! 😳 Man, if they did that would be the only thing they would be getting from me, a kiss on the cheek and "Happy Birthday" and I would be done for. But noooo they want action figures, and expensive dolls. *frowns* No one gets me a laptop!
What i was aiming for. Choco? 😆 Hehe, yah. I thought it wud suit him. Oh i know rite? 🤣 Tell that to ur dad when he comes back! 😆
Shabz was perfect in the shot, she really would say things like that. And haha, leaving things to the last moment, thats why she's a turtle. 🤣
Ahem, duh.
I loved it!
Whoot
kimz

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