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meepha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#391

Originally posted by: _Monu_

wow wow wow

awesome updt

finally he realised his 1st loooove!!

ha ha ha!!

so cute updt!!

cont soon

cant wait

see yaa

love uuu

thnx monu-m glad u liked da update..

will update soon

luv ya too

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meepha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#392

Originally posted by: frndship_trust
wow yaar its so gud....great yaar...AWESOME.......BRILIANT....
Thanku

yaar kya batau...mera dil bahut kuch ho raha hai.....n it just skipped a beat when mayank hug nupur wow...all of the sudden...so cute n sweet yaar....

n my heart skipped a beat after readin ur cumments..lol.thnx

BEST FF yaar really LOVED IT....keep up the gud work

thnk u honey..muah

n thx a lot for PM n keep PM and thanks ton for ur hard work...

awwwww....

i really enjoy reading ur FF...uff haye main mar jawa...love it...n yaar cant wait for the next one...n cant wait when nupur will realize she loves him too.....😳

k will update sooper soon

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meepha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#393

Originally posted by: I-love-dmg
wow...yaar awsome update as usual.......reallly enjoyin dis...
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m glad

thnx 4 commentin

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meepha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#394

Originally posted by: mjhtnupurmayank
very nice part...... 😊 😊 😊

thnx

😃

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meepha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#395

Originally posted by: ruchimayur

that was so chweet !!!...it was too good !
mayank proper bf ban gaya hai...hehehe..cool !!! loved the unexpected hug :)

glad to knw dat u lyked it

awwwwww...bf tou waqaye bun gaya hai..

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meepha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#396

Originally posted by: preethis
hey wonderfuil dear.. i loved it...

glad to knw dat u lyked it

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meepha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#397

Originally posted by: Kanky
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How cute!! Loved it . . . 😳

glad to knw dat u liked it

😳

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meepha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#398

I received many pm's dat dey cant open page 48..so i updated da same part again..njoy readin

Notification=From now onwards Da pm service has been switched off..Obviously i'll continue pmin Da ppl i hav already in da list.Buh no more coz da pm list has almost hit 40...N its takes hell a bunch of tym to pm each n ever1..I dunt mean to b rude.M reeli sorry

PART 9

Nupur lyin in bed*thinking*

Mayank is so sweet.Itna khayal rakhta hai & da fite-M so glad dat i got a friend lyk mayank in dis strange city... :S

& after sum tym,

She dozed off

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Mayank:

"Ye Kya Horaha hai MUJHE???Aisa pehle tou kabhi nahe howa?

Kahin naa laage mann,

Kya hai yeh sunapan,

Ahaa..ahaaa..

Matlab-First i was attracted to my friend dat nite..Buh i digested dat fact n buried it in myself....

Mujhe tum bata do,

Koi to wajah do,

Ahaa?ahaaa..

& knw mein uske barey mein itna possessive aur protective horaha ho...Itna ghussa Woh bhe mujhe..Mein ne ajj tak kisi ke sath fite nahe ki aur ajj ITNA GHUSSA ke.................

mujhey Nupur ki itni parwa kuon honey lage hai.Kuon mein us ki aik jhalak dekhne ke liye tarasta ho.Kuon us ki mathey ki aik shikand pe mein puri dunya sar pe uthane ke liye tayaar ho.Kuon us ke bina jeena acha nahe lagta.Kuon us ki siwa kuch acha nahe lagta

Har ghadi ab khayalon mein,

Keh raha hai koi,

Har ghadi mere khwabon mein,

Aa raha hai koi..

MAYANK-Wats Wrong wid u???

Mayank tries to make sense of hys thoughts.

"Kahi Nupur.....

Kahi Nupur mera pehla pyaar tou nahe?"

& in dat one delicate moment-Realization dawned upon hym

"Nupur he mera pyaar hai"

Is this love?

Maine ye jaana

Ahhaa..

Is this love?

Tu hi bata naa

Mayank:"oh my god!!!!m i actually happy dat i luv her??Mein Aur luv-n den i m happy on da fact dat m in luv-WOW!!mayank-tu tou gaya kaam se..ITna bura change....

Per Woh kya soche ge....Wat will she reply me back

A gush of emotions seem to suddenly surface ?.all at a time?..nothing clear cut but overwhelming emotions about Nupur & finally

I LOVE U NUPUR-I LUV U V.V.MUCH

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Next day.

Mayank & shilpa r on da breafast table

Mayu:Maa!!Nupur kaha hai?

Mayank deperately waitin 4 Nupur

Shilpa:Haa!!ajj kal us ke allawah koi aur nazar he nahe ata....

Mayu:Maaa!!Mein tou aise he pooch raha tha

Wen Nupur enters.she was in da same clothes of yesterday coz she didnt bring clothes along wid her buh she had taken a shower.Her hair were open N water was drippin from em.

Mayank mesmerized by her beauty

Mayu:Achi lag rahe ho!!

Nupur:Mayank!!Mera mazaak matt arao..I knw ke main kal waley kaprey pehni vi ho...buh....

Mayu:Mein seriously keh raha ho

Nup:Ahaan!!Mayank..tum bhe na..Kab serious hote ho kab mazaak karte ho pata nahe chalta

Shilpa:Beta!is ko choro naashta karo....

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After havin breafast dey left for college

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College

Dey were on the way to dere classes wen nupur spotted benji wavin at her...

Nupr:ill b back in a while..Class mein miltey hai mayank

& she left

Nupur went to Benji.

Mayank*thinkin* UFFF!!She left me & went to Benji.m i so borin ke woh mere saath tym bhe nahe paas karna chahti???NOT FAIR

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Class:

Mayank was waitin 4 Nupur in da class

Nupur along wid Benji enterd da class

Nupur came & sat beside mayank.

Be4 mayank could speak

Benji spoke from da seat behind

Benji:Peeche ajao na...

Nupur looked at mayank n was abt to refuse wen mayank

Mayu:Chali jao.I dun mynd its okay

Nup:buh....

Mayank:Jao...

Nupur chali gaye

Nupur*thinkin* kitna ajeeb larka hai.Mein tou is ke saath bethna chahti the...Ye Benji tou bohat borin hai....Kal is se farig waqt mein baat kya hogaye ye tou.......

Mayank*thinkin* & she went again..Per woh rukna chahti thi mayank..Tu ne use bheja..Tu kitna bura ghadha hai...Buh mayb she's happ wid hym.Mayb she does not lykes me at all..

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Tring-Class over

Benji goodbyes nupur n leaves

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Nupur :hey mayank

Mayank wid fake anger

Mayu:Dun hey me!!!

Nupur:aaaa..

Mayu:Subhah se mujhe akela chorey ja rahe ho..Do u even knw how bored my lyf is widout u...(OOPZ) i mean widout a partner to sit wid..

nup:haan!buh pehle tum akeley he tou bethtey the

Mayu:leken pehle mein tumse py...Dosti nahe kari the na...

Nup:tum tou aise baat karey ho jaise m ur GF...

Mayu:*thinkin* ho nahe leken hopefully bun jao ge.ILL LEAVE U NO CHOICE*

Mayu:UMMM!!!!!Nupur chaley-Agli class ka tym in which ULL SIT BESIDES ME

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Later dat day:Dey saw a notice on da notice board dat as holi is cumin-All da students r invited to play holi in Xcel college ground 2mrow.There wunt b ne classes 2mrow...

nupur:Chalo!!!!COOL!!phir kal miltey hai.Mein chali ghar.Bye

Mayank*thinkin* y do u always hav to leave Jaan!!!Aur aggar jana he hota hai tou gudbya hug ya kiss kuch tou diya karo..

Mayank:naye..u cant go lyk dis

Nupur:ahaaan...Y is dat?

Mayu:i need to tell u sumthin

Nupur:Go ahea....

Mayank suddenly hugged her

& whispered in her ear

Mayu:M glad dat u made it in my life as my Lo....DOST!!!!!!!I promise ill never let dis break

Nupur was kinda shocked wid dis sudden gesture

both broke da hug.

Nup:is melodrama ke wajah?

Mayu:BYE NUPUR

& he left!!!

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"True love comes quietly, without banners or flashing lights. If you hear bells, get your ears checked!!!!"

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Thanku so much 4 reading & commentin on dis FF...Wen my Pages reach 50..I'll do half century.M v.Happy.Sorry buh recently watched t20 world cup...N hav developed a thing 4 centuries.LOL

Neways Do cumment n use da lyk button if u like my update

Edited by muneefah - 16 years ago