MINIkash'hoping against hope ending pg 42 *crY*

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Heyy guys....!!!..i just had new idea.....n though i know with one ff itz a foolish thing to do for me to another one..but i cant help it....soo here i go...!!!!😉

It can be visualised for sure as an karan-shilpa story...but i really wanted some new names.and a little aged characters too.......soo please bear...!!😳.

introduction....{just a small part..i'll be elaborating soon...😉}

Aziza looked out of the window...admiring the gloriously setting sun behind the mountains...the birds chirping noisily....but seemin to speak a thousand uncomprehensible words...the cold breeze blowing her hair...aziza smiled ...tied her hair...and sat in her balcony holding her cup of coffee staring the amazing sights of Dehradun....and thoroughly mesmerised by the purity of the place that had done wonders for her career...for aziza ...

On her 32 th birthday...she had just fulfilled her dying father's last wish..she had finaaly opened a cancer hospital ....where she was the head doctor..and a week before she had been rcognized and awarded by the " world cancer research foundation" for her outstanding work in medicine...the most recognised one being when she saved a dying 60 year old cancer patient suffering from 3rd stage cancer....Aziza now had all the zeal and vigour to fight against the deadly disease...but little did she know this disease will in a short time bring her life to standstill again.....will engulf her happiness...and will completely drown her in the endless valley of fear ...fear of loosing a loved one...and she'll be left fighting a impossible battle....
Aziza was an independent..divorced ..and gritty lady...she had fought various endless battles in her life...and has had a very difficult life..her mother had passed away when she was 7..and after that it was her father who was the world for her..but her world had shatterd when she had gone abroad for her higher studies..and when she came back she realised she was too late to save her father who died of cancer..leaving her all alone in the world..but made her promise to not let any one else die as he died..he also made her marry piyush mehra....a very well known business man ..but little did he know that he had left her daughter in a very messy situation..because piyush and aziza never got along...they were always caught in the crossfire of opposite mindsets..and wit hpiyush being a very hot tempered man..the matter just got worse when aziza and piyush got divorced ..aziza being the mother of their 2 year old child rihana...all this when aziza was just 26....
Now...6 years later...aziza was the best mom in the world for rihana..the best dad too..for piyush was heartless..he left aziza and rihana without giving them a single penny..and aziza who was always used to holding her dad's hand in every troublesome situation..was now the lone hand for some one else.....
but aziza being extremely talented and determined ..carved her niche in the medical world soon.and did commendable work..she 's now fully independant .....😉

please feel free to criticize the concept as of now..😆....i'll post the 1st epi soon....😉

*edit*
part 1 page 2
part 2 page 8
part 3 page 13
part 4 page 17
part 5 page 20
part 6 page 25
part 7 page 29
PART 8 PG 32
part9 page 36
part10 page 38
part 11 page 40

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Aneesha, i hope its YOU and not sumone else writing this FF or operating the ID.....So much Conspiracy Negotiations and Speculations in this FF that too in the intro....N that to by u?😲

I could never imagine seriousness on your part😲😆.....Great..we both start our 2nd FanFic on the same day😆 (Sacha Pyaar b/w PC and Shahid☺️)🤣

cant wait now ...for further details and unfolding the story thingy😉😉 add me to ur PM list😉😉

Love

Steff/PC🤗



Edited by Steff_DMG - 16 years ago
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woah dear its really an awesome one⭐️ mind blowing😍sound interesting & spl its KASH one plz continue it soon😛& add me in ur pm list if u don't have any problem😳

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For I believe that you're my destiny,
To you I offer every best of my heart,
For I believe that you will value it......
One-day love is everything,
You ever dreamed would be,
Then suddenly it leaves you,
Saying 'I' instead of 'We'..
I want to share my whole life with you,
I want to hold you in my arms,
Loving you is whole life what I want to do."






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Edited by nidha1983 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ steff.....all the conspiracy ends in the intro..😆.......i just had this idea..so i thought lets go on with it..i wanted to make the lead a verry strong...n soft @ the same time..so...!!!
dont expect much of humour here..it will basically be sad....!!
ya sacha pyaar...😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow Anu Behna !!!.........i loved the intro ........nice concept ........quite different 😉
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@ paro didi..ohh.. u read alreadyy..gr8 goin...😆
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Lovely intro!! Do continue soon!!
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congo 🥳
nice intro😛
Edited by nisha80 - 16 years ago
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EPISODE 1

"rihana.....dont trouble mama like this..where r u..??....sweety just one more sip....milk's good for kids....!!.."

Rihana meanwhile was content listening to her mother's words...and simply refused to show herself..after hiding successfully behind the curtains the other day..this time rihana was was having a fun time under the bed...!!

"rihana itz already late for school...n u r playing hide n seek with mama..beta please naa...cum..otherwise i 'll be 'katty' with u for the whole day.."'.aziza knows she has done the trick and smiles mischieviously..

Rihana meanwhile comes running'..

"maa please don't be angry naa u'll have to speak to me otherwise with whom will I gossip about my friends after coming back from school..?"

Aziza smiles.."achcha..to datz what ur mom's for u ..look @ u..barely 8 years old..and u talk of gossiping'.!!"

Rihana becomes sad.."no mom..u know I cnt stop loving u..ever .u r mu life .if u don't talk to me I'll be all alone...who will I play with ?..maa I love it when u run behind me like an angry bull..!!"

"rihana u called me a bull..??....."..as aziza looks away dejected..

"but my bull's special..she is neither fat nor ugly'she's the most prettiest bull in the world'n I know itz her bday 2 day..n datz why I love her even more...!!"

Aziza is teary eyed.."aww..my baby..come.."..and aziza and rihana hug..!!

Just as aziza brings the milk glass nearer..rihana shouts n runs away ...n aziza runs behind her....!!!

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"aziza maam'happy bday'!!"'.

"thanks Tanya...any new cases..?"

"maam'yes'actually it's a case recommended by naina maam{aziza's favorite teacher..}'."

"acha..??...ohh..send me the case history'!!"

"ok mam patient no 401 n 310 were asking for you by the way..."

"Tanya'how many times do I tell u..dont call the patients by their ward name'they r not in a jail'this is their home'and any ways its not like there r a 100 people here that you cant remember the names just a 15 names..!!

"sorry mam.."

"fine...i am going to the general ward now don't keep chattering...!!"

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It was 2pm...when aziza finally returned from the general ward..she really loved spending time with the patients'.they meant a lot to her..they were like her extended family..the faces kept changing every week..but the relations were the same..they were like her motherly n fatherly figures to her..

Aziza saw a file kept on her table..and realized she had not read the case history of the new patient.

She opened the file..n was immediately captivated by the smiling photo of a 28 year old guy his smile was so deep that aziza began to smile too and thus began the start of an unbelievable love ..!!

Aziza closed the file after reading it..

Pancreatic cancer'4 months already'and aziza knew clearly..that 98% patients of this type meet a painful death..within a year...

Aziza thought'

"must be a cigarette smoker or an excessive coffee drinker but he is so young..."

Aziza gloomily read his reports and to her the situation looked dismal..

Aziza called Tanya..

"this new patient..whats his name'.Rehan '.start with his chemotherapy 'dr rajesh and dr mrinal will be there'.i'll not be coming tomorrow...."

"right maam.."

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It was 6:30 pm when Aziza started from the hospital..she was late for her own "surprise bday party"..planned by rihana....taking all the required monetary help from aziza...!!!!

Suddenly in the road she saw tree uprooted and bunch people standing gloomly at the other side..

Aziza looked at those people..some thing seemed to have caught her attention'yes that smile'.even in such a hopeless situation..where had she seen it'."ohh..its rehan'!!"'aziza exclaimed...

Aziza went forward and called "rehan..!!"

Rehan ..looked back absolutely surprised at being called by some one unknown'.still he went forward..

"hii..do I know u..?"

"no.u don't..but u'll soon know me hospital is this way..n u need to be there now !!..do one thing ..take my car n go with ur family..!"..she said..acknoledging his parents and family

"oh .. .thanks but who r u..??.."

"u'll know that later..now go and..i'll take ur taxi....park my car inside the hospital and give the keys to ur nurse...."

"ohh sure..u can trust me."rehan said..flashing his million dollar smile. . .aziza smiled back

"now I must rush"

And the two went away in their directions not knowing they r meant to travel together....

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Aziza entered her house which had now no light.

"ohh'I forgot to pay the bill!!"'aziza thought

Just then she found a whole lot of children tring to hug her rihana whispered

"momwe thought when u'll enter we switch off the lights but the lights went away itself'I swear..n now its all dark n spooky.!!!"

"itz okay'we'll celebrate a candle light bday wont that be soo exciting'?"

All the children got excited.

After lighting the candles...

"rihana..isnt it a super bday party u have planned for mama..?...chocolates..ice cream..pizzas..which I hate'n musical chairs'!!...quite a mature planning.."'said aziza mischieviously.

"I know u'll love it maa..!!"'.rihana said more mischieviously and playfully ran away...

Aziza spent a very fun birthday..playing with the kids and having all the junk food !!!...not knowing that her life's not gonna be like this any time soon...

Thaddam thaddam...

note.. : i have verry little knowledge about cancer...and itz just being used as.."one of those diseases..".here..please forgive me if i include any wrong thong in medical terms here...but pls do point out the mistake of course..😛

i have tried to be a different writer frm my 1st ff...if u wanna read tht too..here's the

link...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1167953/new-ff-ar-ak-zindagi-ho-to-aisi-part-9-page-24

pls do comment...😛..m nervous...😳

Edited by aneeshadgr8 - 16 years ago

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