POEM : REALITY OF LIFE

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life is all about what u want to c

There is a light at the end of tunnel ,u will c


Life shows how moving forward may get tough

Life shows u need faith to cross the road which is rough



Children r most sensitive gift.

And Ppl are answerable for this God gift

For any harm we will be questioned

For any tears we will be arrested

If punishment doesn't come here, it will there .

If world is cruel, ppl will get justice up there .

God doesn't leave children alone

He is watching and u should know


God is Merciful and love the one who face hardship with guts

God test us all with good and bad times so don't loose guts


A person can never feel alone if he finds God in his heart

A person doesn't need to look far but only check his own heart

life is a transitory face and not a permanent abode

So like different seasons it keep on changing its code


Believing in God make u smile even in pain

Keeping ur trust in Him make u only gain .


Life is not fair , it was never meant to be

Life is just a test , it is the way it has to be


If u lived your life according to will of God, then u have nothing to fear

Ur death is beginning of a new and final chapter so why do u fear. ?





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Posted: 16 years ago
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Really nice Dear...!!! It is a very very gr8 and wonderful poem...Keep it up..!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: gr8_mms

Really nice Dear...!!! It is a very very gr8 and wonderful poem...Keep it up..!!!


thanks Maria 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey sana i am extremely sorry for replying so late but what a poem i really lovedddddddddd it man, i stand up and salute you. this poem shows how highly spirited and pure hearted you are, i just have this feeling that you have kind of gone through alot in life which has made you more stronger and tougher instead of weaker and it has given you so much courage, thats why i always say whenever you are around i feel so much positive about everything, you are gifted sana, i am truly proud of you.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Senny

hey sana i am extremely sorry for replying so late but what a poem i really lovedddddddddd it man, i stand up and salute you. this poem shows how highly spirited and pure hearted you are, i just have this feeling that you have kind of gone through alot in life which has made you more stronger and tougher instead of weaker and it has given you so much courage, thats why i always say whenever you are around i feel so much positive about everything, you are gifted sana, i am truly proud of you.




ooooooo Senny this was very sweet of u ...yaar ... very sweet comment 😳😳😳.... thanks ... and i have lost someone very close to me .... i guess thats why i can c the reality of life as how fleeting it can be 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sana...I'm so sorry for such a late reply!!
But this poem of yours...its really the reality of life...what an apt title you chose...its heart touching..all those things you said in it.
In my personal opinion...this is your best work till now...definitly.
The lines that really made an impact were..
"If punishment doesn't come here, it will there .If world is cruel, ppl will get justice up there ."
"A person can never feel alone if he finds God in his heart
A person doesn't need to look far but only check his own heart"
And the last line...death is a new chapter for us...so why does everyone fear it...
It really shows how much of a spiritual person you are...and how much you believe in god and have faith in him.
I agree with senny now...in the above commment...I see why you are always so positive...and always keep others around you positive...you spread that vibe.
I again say...it was your best piece of creation.
I was really moved by reading it...as i never really used to think about these things as much.
👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: hgrhr

Sana...I'm so sorry for such a late reply!!

But this poem of yours...its really the reality of life...what an apt title you chose...its heart touching..all those things you said in it.
In my personal opinion...this is your best work till now...definitly.
The lines that really made an impact were..
"If punishment doesn't come here, it will there .If world is cruel, ppl will get justice up there ."
"A person can never feel alone if he finds God in his heart
A person doesn't need to look far but only check his own heart"
And the last line...death is a new chapter for us...so why does everyone fear it...
It really shows how much of a spiritual person you are...and how much you believe in god and have faith in him.
I agree with senny now...in the above commment...I see why you are always so positive...and always keep others around you positive...you spread that vibe.
I again say...it was your best piece of creation.
I was really moved by reading it...as i never really used to think about these things as much.
👏



Nidhi thanks so much 🤗... for such a wonderful comment... thanks yaar ... and i am glad u like this above all ...it is closer to heart in different sort of way ..... and yes reagrding God .... i do keep on remembering Him and i know one day we will b in front of Him ... so that makes me think twice before hurting a person

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