Made up story for tieing up loose ends...

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Posted: 16 years ago
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ALot of us are frustrated with many loose ends that Saat Phere left us so in order to give some sense of peace I thought I'd make up a lil mini SP Part 2 Ending to be satisfied...

ALso ohter "mini endings" are welcome...
The wedding is happening between Shweta-Ragvir, Sawri-Daksh.
Shubra comes in with Kunjan her mother in law and Piyush all grown up. Saloni greets them..Shubra hugs her and says "You have been in soooo much pain and gone through so much that you did not even think of calling me once..I know I was in US with Kunjan, Padma, and Piyush, all settled but just cuz I was away in America does not mean that I forgot about my family in India. Whenever I called Ma (Ambika) she always told me that you guys were doing fine and she did not tell me anything about Nahar.

But then one day I called Manno Bhabhi and she told me that Nahar died and about Jiji and the family but everything is under controlled. I wanted to call you but Manno Bhabhi told me that if someone finds out that Amrit ji is fake due to my phone calls with Saloni then it would create problems so I did not call. I left everything up to Mataji Maharaj.

But now I come to India and ma (Ambika told me everything yesterday)..anyways forget it I am glad that you are out of jail and you are iwth your family.

Saloni cries and says where is MannoBhabi..Shubra says MannoBhabhi got back with her husband and child and now they are living abroad next to us. That is how I found out about Amrit Ji but she did not know that you went to jail.

Manno Bhabhi walks in saying "dhaare dhoni..saloni you did not consider me family that you hid the fact that you were in trouble!!" Saloni cries and hugs Manno Bhabhi.
Kaveri interrupts saying Saloni di..bura mat maan lekin u were supposed to be in jail lifetime..what happened and how did you meet Daksh and Ragvir?
Saloni says after my Jail sentence the nurse who was in the ambulance iwth me saw my picture in the paper and she came to me and told me that she knows that Jiji's death was an accident beause she heard us talk in the ambulance and I told her that life does not matter now that I am happy being in jail because my family does not want to accept me.

The nurse said that I should be free and if you want meaning in your life that she knows a man who is in the last stages of his death and he has only one wish that someone would come and take care of his 2 sons. They are young and have lots of money and for them to handle such business and for ppl not to take advantage of them they need someone who is pure and not greedy to tkae care of his 2 sons. The nurse tells Saloni I know you come from a big family and despite that you have no greed in your heart and that is why I feel taht you can take care of his sons.
Saloni tells her ok but don't let her family know that she is getting out of jail. THe nurse writes a testimony that jiji's death was an accident and saloni is released.

The nurse takes Saloni to Daksh's dad and the dad approves of Saloni-And that is how Saloni becomes Dhasa!

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snmirza thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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feel satisfied after reading ur ending...
thankz
uzee thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks a lot...it was really creative...and really ties up the loose ends very nicely 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks that was beautifully written very nice. You did a better job that the creative team of Saat Phere .
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Posted: 16 years ago
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what happened to Kakisa? and will Kakasa's death always remain a secret? Please can you write about them two thanks.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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we can assume tht kakisa was transferred to a special home cuz she was in a coma and she died of old age....

and we know tht cuz ther eis a picture of kakisa and kaka sa hanging on the wall with a garland around the photo

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks for the ending
It was satisfying to read :)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks for the ending it ties all loose end of the story. The creative ended sp in a hurry, why saloni sent to prison? How jiji creating such a havoc & killing spree made to look saintly, not punished for her deed?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks alot that was very nice read.

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