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Muskaan- ridz uth uth na. ridz uth tere mom ka phone hai.
Ridz- nooo go away
Muski- dude wake up it's your mom
On the phone with her mom
Ridz- hi mumma
Padma- good morning beta, isn't it noon over there
Ridz- so
Padma- acha baba sorry sleep for as long as you want
Ridz- did you call me to tell me sleep, what happen?
Padma- why I can't just call my daughter?
Ridz- yes but I know you didn't call me for any reason so spill what happen?
Padma- ok baba, I called to ask what time will your flight reach India.
Ridz- at 9, can I hang up now
Padma- kya huwa beta, why are so irritated.
Ridz- I don't want to come to India. I know for a fact that whatever happened last time will repeat, I don't want to go through it again
Padma- it's been 5 years since I have seen you and we all want to see you
Ridz- but mamma
Padma- I don't wanna hear anything u r coming and that's final
Ridz- ok fine I will come for a month or so but u will let me go back and promise me that no one will stop me or emotional blackmail me about staying back and also NO ONE will persuade me to get married like last time I came
Padma- ok meri ma... so when will u be leaving?
Ridz- in 3 days.
Padma- call me when you depart
Ridz- yes mommy..ok mama I have to go now '.have to go back to sleep
Padma- bye...take care love u
Ridz- bye love u 2
~-----call end-----~
3 DAYS LATER
At New York airport ----on the phone with her mom
Ridz- yes mamma I packed everything and remind me again why do have to make a stop over to Dubai
Padma- because your cousins live over there it would be good if u meet them. Zoni (4 yrs old) was asking about you just go and meet them
Ridz- ok fine, oh did I tell u. Hold on a second we have to board the flight.ok I m on the flight so what was I saying.yea remember Muskaan she was with me in medical school. she is coming with me to India to meet u all isn't that nice..
Padma- that's very good.. interrupted by Ridhima
Ridz- u want to talk to her. Here talk
Hands the phone to Muskaan who is sitting next to her
Muskaan- hello aunty
Padma- hello beta kaise ho?
Muskaan- I m fine aunty...I hope you don't mind me coming over...Ridhima elbowed her to stop taking stupid...
Padma- oh no we are glad that u r coming over now we can meet you since Ridhima keeps talking about you
Ridhima snatches the phone away
Ridz-mom we got to hang up now we are about to take off
Padma- ok beta ...bye have a safe journey and don't worry you uncle will be there to pick u up at the Dubai airport.
Ridz- ok mom bye
Ridz- god moms talk a lot..
Muskaan- but she is you mom...ridz gives her the eyes that say not again or change the topic...so tell me about your cousin zoni
Ridz- zoni, she is amazing I love her to death I sometimes feel like she is my own daughter. I pamper her to death I nicknamed her princess cuz I spoiled her. She acts exactly like me, copies everything I do since her childhood, it sometimes annoys me but she shocks me as how well she can imitate me. I love her. She also has a brother his name is zeshan but I call him Z. Hi is very nosey so never tell him anything he will go ahead and tell everything to anybody even strangers. He is adorable though
Muskaan- how old are they?
Ridz- zoni is 6 and zeeshan is 12 yrs old
Muskaan- nice, so who else r u gonna meet over there?
Ridz- my uncle, my...
Ridz get interrupted by the air host, would u like something to eat or drink
Ridz- um.. I will have 1 coke without ice please...um Muskaan you???
Muskaan- mouth open wide
Ridz- Muskaan do you need anything...Muskaan...helloooo
Muskaan- he sooo hot!!!!!!!
Host- excuse me????
Ridz- she means to say a hot chocolate. Haina Muskaan
Muskaan comes out of her trance.haan haan bilkul
Host- yea sure and as soon as he leaves
Muskaan- and a piece of that hot delicious pie
Ridz- yuck tere taste ko kya hogaya hai
Muskaan- kya yaar ridzi tujhe ro koi bhi pasand nahin ata...dekhna tera mr. right tere paas hoga aur tu use ignore kardegi
Ridz- yea yea whatever
Muskaan- dekh lena...and with these kinda talk they reached Dubai in 12 hours
Dubai airport and are getting their luggage …
Ridz- wo dekho mere uncle…. hi Mahesh uncle
Uncle- omg tum kitni badi hogayi ho ….tum itni sit hi jab maine tumhe dekha tha …..aur yeh kaun hai
Ridz- oh this is my friend Muskaan….. We live together and we also went to the same medical school
Mahesh- ohhh ok ….aau beta …chalo chalet hain….. tumhari aunty kabse tumhara wait kar rahi hai … aur late ho gaye to mujhe khana nahin milega…
Ridhima and Muskaan laugh…
Uncles' place
Ridz- hi aunty kaise ho aap….
Ridz- yeah meri auty hai smriti…aur yeh unke do pyare but chote se shaitan bache … zoni and zeshaan ….
Muskaan- hi bachon…Namaste aunty
Smriti- hello beta … how was your flight… bohut tired hoge Na…interrupted by Zoni
Zoni- yeh kaun hai ….hamare liye chocolate layi ho ….and she keeps on bantering… interrupted by Z
Zeeshan- chup. Your sooo preeeeety…. Staring at her… I don't want chocolates I want her…
Ridz- and that's my weird cousins…
Smriti- ach yeh sab chodo …chalo khana khate hai warna thanda ho jayega…
….to her husband...Faking anger...ab ap ko alag se invitation do ya khud ake kha lenge…
Ridz- kya hua itna gussa kyun….
Smriti- dekh na mein ne in se lemon lane ke liye kaha tha subha
Muskaan- tho…
Smrithi- tho inhone watermelon le aye… aur kahte hain jab pucha tho …"they sound similar"
Ridz and Muskaan laugh…
Mahesh- it's an honest mistake they sound the same….
Smriti- haan haan kyun nahi agar cricket matches the dhyaan hatey to kuch samaj mein aye na…huffs in anger… acha yeh sab chodo tum log kitne din ke liye ho yahan …
Ridz- ummm 2 days.
And with these chit chat they finished their food …
Smriti- acha tum jake aram karlo …safar se bohot thak gaye honge…
Muskaan- ji…
Zeshaan- aao mein app ko apka room bata hoon ….muskaan...ji...Says in a funny way…
Muskaan smiles at his childish crush…and Ridz rolls her eyes at her cousin…..
Ridz- Z don't worry I will take her…since we both are stayin in the same room…
Zeshaan- theek hai di (sad and gloomy)
Muskaan- ridz what's wrong with you he just wants to us to our room
Ridz- oh come on ….fine...Groans
Z is all smiles and leads them but always peeking back at Muskaan and blushing.
Bedroom
Muskaan – nice place… thank you Zeshan
Z – You can call me Z
Ridhima is rolling her eyes at them… to both – seriously guys I m drop dead tired can we please cont. this later…
Muskaan – yea I m tired too …so I will se u later Z
Z – sad …ok good night… n with that he leaves
Muskaan – what's the matter why r u yelling at him…
Ridz slumps down and groans in discomfort – I never wanted to come here
Muskaan – why it's nice here
Ridz – it's not this place it's the people over here and then the place
Muskaan – what??
Ridz – never mind just forget it …. I m gonna hit the shower first then a deep slumber
Next morning
Ridz woke up early because of the jet lag and saw that everyone is already up… well early for her
Ridz- you guys are up early
Aunt Smriti – yea, your uncle and me have to go to work so
Ridz – what about the kids
Smriti – oh already left she has dance classes today
Mahesh – so any plans for today or r u just gonna sleep in
Ridz – haha very funny…we r gonna do some shopping n maybe hit some beaches
Z – oh oh can I come
Ridz – um… I guess
Smriti interpreted – no beta let them go have fun we can go later …
Z – No I want to go with them
While the mother son were arguing Muskaan woke up
Muskaan – good morning
Z – Very good morning …blushes...Thinking she is even prettier half awake
Z – I want to go with them
Muskaan – go where?
Ridz – aunty it's no problem he can come with us to the mall and maybe we can get Zoni on our way too
Muskaan – oh the mall of course they can …it's just a mall
Padma – no it's not fine I shouldn't even let u to go alone … you r a girl what if something happens to you
Muskaan got very angry at this because she stands for women rights
Muskaan – what in the world… this is 21st …
Ridz interrupted – Muskaan can I talk to u for a sec alone in our room (with meaning full eyes)
Bedroom
Ridz – hon, this is what I was talking about n this is why I don't like coming here. There is too much restriction. Mahesh uncle is fine but Padma aunty gets on my nerves…grr
Muskaan – please tell me your parents aren't the same
Ridz – hell no just relax n bare with me for another 2 days that's it
Both laugh
They go outside
Mahesh – anyway which mall r u guys going?
Muskaan – I have heard a lot about the Dubai mall…and how big n beautiful it is…
Mahesh- zoni's dance classes are over there too…maybe you can all go shopping.
Z- woooohooo great wait a sec I will go get ready…
Ridz – slow down there superman…there is still time.
Padma- I still don't want you to go roaming around town, it's not safe.
Mahesh- its fine they are old enough to take care of themselves
Padma- par zoni aur zeeshan nahin ja rahe (she leaves)
Z- par dad
Mahesh- (whispering to them so Padma won't hear them) it's ok beta I will drop you all don't worry.
Dubai mall
They ask the cab to go to the Dubai mall and when they reach there, they are mesmerized by its beauty and the number of shops there s shop from
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Muskaan – I have never seen a skating ring in a mall
Ridz – I haven't seen a bigger shoe shop … it has two floors of just shoes
Muskaan - not with you shoe obsession again…
Ridz – there is nothing wrong with shoes and OMG they are soooo adorable….plzzz lets go
Muskaan- urggghhhh!!!!!
Z – No wait we have to get Zoni first otherwise she will get mad.
Ridz – yea your rite… do u know where it is…
Z – Yea...Follow me…ha-ha
On the other side of the mall we see 4 hot guys walking in…
Armaan, rahul, Atul (armaan's friend), Abhi (rahul's friend)
Abhi – seriously dude y r we here
Armaan – because I have get my sis from her dance classes and get some shopping done with her
Atul – ok… but y r we here then
Rahul – cuz we don't want to get bored alone
Abhi – ha-ha very funny guys
Then armaan n rahul go the dance studio to get their sis…
All Armaan, his friends, Ridhima and Muskaan are also in the dance lobby waiting for their sisters. Their class was gonna end in about fifteen min.
Meanwhile…
Rahul – dude look hot girl 12 o'clock (straight ahead)
Atul – where where????
Abhi – are you that desperate man…chill…even if u want to make your gf jealous that doesn't mean get any hot girl u see.
Rahul – relax guys… I m gonna go talk to her
Abhi – ja mere sher…u can do it
Armaan- pite ga sala….everyone laughs
Muskaan – ek bohut hi cute ladka hamari taraf a raha hai…eep
Ridz – first stop eeping second he might be coming to get a magazine or something…third he isn't that cute …he is ok…
Muskaan- whatever…he has a cute smile… but then again he might want to get some magazine from the rack (which was right next to them)….so she is went back to talking to Z
Rahul comes up to her n sees her talking to a kid n thought maybe she's married n that her son…
Rahul – oh whatever…she looks young n pretty…maybe she is a divorcee…(thinking in his head)
Rahul – hi I m rahul…name tho suna hi honga
Ridz looks up and starts laughing….muskaan elbow her to shut up
Rahul – I m sorry did I say something funny
Ridz – no it's just a horrible pick up line…even Z could have done better
Rahul – excuse me...
The guys heard that started laughing…but stopped when rahul looked at them
Muskaan – plzz don't mind her…she not always like this…
Rahul –I m sure
Muskaan – excuse me …
Rahul – I will be right back…
Rahul goes back to the boys ….
Atul – what your charm didn't work …in a sarcastic tone…
Everyone laughs and rahul looks smug
Abhi- that girl soo totally told you.
Rahul - help karo na yaar… her friend is kinda tough…idk…hellllllllpppppp
Armaan –at least name tho puch le … or first uske friend ko compliment kar bad us ladki ko..
Rahul- you sure…
Armaan- am I ever wrong…
Muskaan – wo wapas aa raha hai…main kya kahun usko…hi my name is muskaan…nai nai it sound too boring…people call me Muskaan…no no too much attitude..
Ridhima- just shut up…sirf name hi tho bolna hai aur tu itna soch rahi hai… agar I love u bolna hoga tho .. tu tho sara duniya uthalegi..ang giggles
Muskaan- whatever….
Rahul- sorry…I forgot something…
Ridhima- interrupted him….what your dignity.
Abhi- (to his friends) I like that girl…spicy…ohh
Muskaan elbowed Ridz and gave a nervous smile to rahul
Muskaan- soooo… what were u saying...
Rahul- hey I didn't get your name…
z- You don't need to know her name…
Rahul- oh hey there little guy…
z- I m not a little guy…hummmpphhh
Ridz- what do u wants??…just come to the point n stop running around the bushes
Rahul got nervous… oh those are lovely shoes… nice color..um they go with your eyes
Ridz – what…I knew u were stupid but I guess you blind too…I didn't know I had beige eyes…
Rahul- me neither
Ridz –what…excuse me…I m gonna go ask the receptionist how much longer…
Armaan and Abhi looked at him exasperatedly and sighed
Armaan- I m going in to help him…I can't watch my brother get murdered by that girl…
Abhi- good luck man…yeh bhi gaya
Armaan- hey I m armaan n I just wanted to put u on notice that I noticed u noticing me…
Ridz looked up with an annoyed face…
she uprubtly woke up from the dream of her blissful past...everybody was joyous for some reason cuz she could hear alot of commotion going outside. so she called a nurse in by pressing the beeper...beeeeeeeeeeep
nurse- yes maam did u need anything...
ridz- wats the promblem outside..
nurse- not a problem maam, they just very thankful n happy that thier relative is fine..
Ridz- relative...u mean armaan..with that she got up with a jerk, which made her fall back down again.beacuse of the pain in her head..
Nurse-yes maam but u should take complete rest..now cuz you are in a vulnerable condition..plzz maam
Ridz- no i have to see armaan..NOW
Nurse- maam u cant..u can meet him later..just rest for now..n beep me if u need anything else..n with that she left
But ridz was determined to see armaan at this moment, so she detacted the glucose dripping off her arm..n the monitering machine for the under observation..nothing mattered more for her than Armaan rite now...
tell me if there are any mistakes...hope u liked it..😛
Edited by nishath_afroze - 16 years ago
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