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cuppycake990

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Posted: 16 years ago

OK GUYS THIS IS A POEM ESPECIALLY FOR U GUYS....😊
I WROTE IT MANY YEARS BACK WITH THE HELP OF MY MUSIC TEACHER....
IT SUITS ALL OF US HERE ON IF (read it like a song)
so here it goes....

WE ARE A FAMILY..😊
LIVIN UNDER ONE SKY...😊
THE BIRDS SING THIS SONG AS THEY FLY BY..😍
WE ARE ALL FRIENDS...
EVEN THOUGH WE'RE FAR APART...😭
OUR FACES ARE DIFFERENT BUT WE HAVE ONE HEART...❤️
LOVE IS WHAT OUR HEARTS SHOULD HOLD...
LOVE IS WHAT OUR HEARTS SHOULD HOLD...
FOR LOVE IS MORE PRECIOUS THAN SILVER AND GOLD...❤️
THROW AWAY THE HATRED FOR THE SAKE OF PEACE ....
FOR THE SAKE OF LOVE...❤️
FOR THE SAKE OF GOD ABOVE...
THROW AWAY THE HATRED FOR THE SAKE OF PEACE...
FOR THE SAKE OF LOVE...❤️
FOR THE SAKE OF GOD ABOVE...😊

So guys what do u think.🤔.plzz comment..it means a lot to me..because its the one and only poem i wrote myself.....
i know its not as good as sanaz or falakz 🤗 but still do comment....

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Edited by cuppycake990 - 16 years ago

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shamil

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Posted: 16 years ago

aisha...its a lovely poem dear👏

I think u should continue writing more..🤗

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CryingEyes-

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey Aisha,lovely poem dear,so touching and so true😊.Great job,you have talent👍🏼,don't quit writing,i would love to read more poems of you in future😉.

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cuppycake990

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: shamil
aisha...its a lovely poem dear👏
I think u should continue writing more..🤗

thank u so much....i ll try writing more...😊

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cuppycake990

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: MarialikesMohit
Hey Aisha,lovely poem dear,so touching and so true😊.Great job,you have talent👍🏼,don't quit writing,i would love to read more poems of you in future😉.

thank u soo much maria sweety.....i ll try to write more.im not in practice anymore na..so i donno how will it go....actually college has made me dumb n numb🤢...i wrote it in my school..😊

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CryingEyes-

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: cuppycake990
thank u soo much maria sweety.....i ll try to write more.im not in practice anymore na..so i donno how will it go....actually college has made me dumb n numb🤢...i wrote it in my school..😊

Well you are right dear,college also making me dumb and numb😉,well just keep trying and trying to write something and i am sure you can do it😛.

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cuppycake990

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: MarialikesMohit

Well you are right dear,college also making me dumb and numb😉,well just keep trying and trying to write something and i am sure you can do it😛.

thank u so much sweety..ya i ll try my best..😊