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Posted: 15 years ago
hey..... it was a nice part.
i sooooo wanna read da next part.
plz continue soooooooon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey ishanki
 
story was dam good dear. but sanjaana????
just throw her out of this...she is bringing so much misunderstanding... when will 31st dec come???
plz plz let everyone know sanjana's truth and make AR happy as before..plzzzzzzzzzz....
 love yaa
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey ishi dear,
Hi, how r u??????
 
Lagta hai aap to humko bhul hi gayi.
thikh hai  hum aapko yaad dilata hai.
 
Aapko to pata hai wo DMG blog waha pe koi NEHA naam ki ladki hai jise aapk FF bahot bahot pasand aata hai & aapne last week KPABHSH ka part post nahi kiya tha.
 
To yaad aagaya ki hum kon hai.
 
so plz give me answer of my question which i was asked u on blog on KPABHSH ke last epic main pucha hai.
 
 
Love
Neha(Vish Ki Jaan)
 
Edited by LOVE_AR - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey,
ishanki di...
 
kaise ho aap aab?????
hope ekdum fit n fine..
 
areeeeee....
di.......ek bhi question ka ans nahi kar sakte????????/
yaar itne saare doughts hain..
yipeeeeeeeee..
yeh oh saach nikla ki yeh sab flash back main hi chal raha hai..
 
aur haan di..
main detalied analysis..
usi ff ka karti hu..
jo mujhe bahut bahut bahut bhaut..
jitna bahut laga lo kum hai..
unka karti hu..
 
toh aapka ff toh..
maashaallah hai...
itnaaaaaaaaaaaaaa khubssorat DEFINING LOVEEEEEEE..
 
toh i thnk yeh analysis bhi kum hai...di....
 
yaar..
aaap mujhe mail toh karo..
abhi ki dstory kk nahi toh maine toh aapko..
pehele story k upar bhi itne question pooche hain..
unhe hi ans kar do......
 
aabhi toh time haina aapk paas...
 
plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzz na di....
 
aapko mere cmnt s ache lagate hain..
 
yepiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii........
 
im soooo happy....
 
lekin di..
updates toh main waise bhi padhungi...
 
par mujhe ans bhi chahiyeh..
 
im nt forcing..par phir bhi na plzzzzzzzzzzzzz.....
 
hmmm....2 3 daz main..
matlab tab new yr aane walla hai...hian....
 
 
 
acha aab aaj ka part...
 
dekha dekha..
i was rite..
woh chudel sanjana hi le kar gauyi na arman ko movie phir dinner..
koi VILLAN SE KUM NAHI..
WOH BHI ..
K-SERIAL KI villan....
sab mkuch ekdum plan kartii hai.....
 
yaar use unn dono ka pyar dekhkar daya nahi aati ridhima par???????
 
ridhima ki kya galti hai..
 
dhoka toh usse arman ne diya na...
 
aur usk liye toh pairon par girkar maafi mangli.....
 
 
bt im thnking..
yeh galtfehmi toh bade gi hi...
 
aab toh mujhe yeh bhi samjh aa ga ya hai..
 
ki new yr par arman sanjana ko hug kkyu karne walla hai..
 
 
kyuki he'll be depressed ki ridhima usse ignore kyu kar rahi hai..
usse naraz kyu hai..
 
usse theek se baat kyu nahi kar rahi n sanjana wid try to console him///
 
aur woh ridhima dekh legi..
 
nice one di.....
 
par yaar...
mujhe bahur boora lag raha hai..
 
itnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa badaaaaa test..
 
kab khatum hoga...
 
ek request di...
 
kal hi post karna na nxt part....
plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz.........................................
 
 
 
yaar yeh parts jaldi aage badhayon...
 
warmna main toh suspence main hi maar jaungi plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz di...
 
aur mail toh karo..
 
i thnk main yahan cmnt karti hu toh aap mujhe mail hi nahi karte...
 
main sirf aapko mail karti rahun...
tab aap mujhe mail main rply doge haina???????????
 
 
plzzzzzzzzzzzz na..di..
 
main thodi impatient si hu..
okkk okk..thodi nahi jyada as aapko pata chal gaya hoga...
 
toh plzzzzzzzzzzzz.....
 
n ur writin skills..
 
 
well incomparable..
u h d kank of takin d story forward conincingly..
 
uspar toh main kuch bol hi nahi sakti....
 
par yyaar..di....
 
acha main aab kluch bhi force nahi karungi..
 
aapka maan ho toh mujhe rply karna warna mat karna.....😭😭
 
love u soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh di..
aapki lil sis..
khushu..
 
love u karan my princecharming..😉
love u shilpa my princecharming ki princess like me..😊
khushboo..
 
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Part-111

 

Riddhima was lost in nowhere thinking why he lied to me, his message, important work what was all that, if he wants to see movie then why didn't he told the truth, after that dinner, mai yaha bhukki baithi hun tab se uski wait mai aur wo maharaj bahar khana kha aaye, aur jo mujhse promise kiya tha, ye sab kya ho raha hai, sab kuch itna uljha uljha sa kyu hai, kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha, except iske ki mai armaan se baat nahi karungi, samajhta kya hai apne aap ko…

 

1 din baat nahi karungi sab akal thikane aa jayegi.. agar mere saath dinner par nahi jaane ka mann tha to bata nahi sakta tha kya, maine kaunsa force kiya tha use chalne ke liye, jaaye bhaad mai…. Kitni galtiyan kari, pehle jhoot bola, phir bahar dinner karke aaya aur cell bhi switch off kar rakha tha taaki mujhe na pata chal jaaye ya mai disturb na karun usse, aur uske baad hospital aakar mujhse ek baar milne bhi nahi aaya……

 

Kyun apne aap se bad bada rahi ho???

 

Riddhima came in present and turned back, saw him standing in front of her eyes with a sweet smile which added more fuel in her anger…

 

R: tumse matlab?? (little rudely)

 

A: ye tumhari meethi meethi jubaan mirchi ki tarah teekhi kaise ho gayi???

 

R: (ignoring his question)tumhara important kaam ho gaya armaan???

 

A: (little confused) kaunsa important kaam????

 

R: wahi jiske liye tumne cell switch off kiya hua tha??? (with taunt in her voice)

 

A: riddhima maine apna cell switch off nahi kiya, wo on hai…

 

R: ohh lagta hai phir mera cell aur sanjeevani ke phone kharab ho gaye hai…

 

A: riddhima what's wrong with you yaar, aise taunts kyu de rahi ho jaise maine koi bahut badi galti kar di ho, maine kaha na ki mera cell switch on hai…chaho to dekh lo.. (he took out cell from his pocket and pressed one of his button and was surprised when found his cell off, he mumbled abe yaasr ye kab band ho gaya, he switched on his cell then looked at riddhima, who was waiting for his explanation) seriously riddhima mujhe nahi pata ye kab band ho gaya… may be theatre

 

R: (looked him with anger) bas armaan aur kitna jhoot bologe, I don't want any explanation, mai tumhe pareshan na karun isliye cell off kiya tha  na tumne…(armaan was surprised)

 

A: jhoot????? Pareshan???? Cell-off??? (looked her questionably)

 

R: wao kitna innocent act kar rahe ho, forget it…(she turned to go, armaan holds her hand, but she pulled her hand back with force) tum jao movie dekho aur dinner karo..(she left)

 

armaan didn't follow her thinking ye bhi koi baat hui, naaraj mujhe hona chahiye tha ki mujhe message diye bina itni badi surgery karne challi gayi, agar khud nahi aa sakti thi to kissi ke saath to message bhej hi sakti thi, nahi to page hi kar deti.. mai kab se wait kar raha tha, aur agar iss beech mai movie dekhne bhi challa gaya to koi galti to nahi ki, kaunsa wo free thi, aur agar free ho gai thi to note padkar mujhe call kar leti, aur agar mera number nahi mil raha tha to sanjana ke cell par call kar leti…hum waapis aa jaate aur phir dinner karne chalte… par phone to kiya nahi naaraj hokar baith gai.. ye kya baat hui…. Ab naaraj rehna hai to rahe, mai bhi nahi manaunga….

 

Sanjana who was standing little far and was watching all this thought waise to ladai mai jayda maaja nahi aaya bahut hi feeki si ladai thi, par challo ladai hui to… ab mujhe bas iss baat ka dhyan rakhna hai ki ye ladai kam na ho, bas badhti jaaye, aur iske liye mujhe armaan ke saath rehna ho pal pal…

 

Both were angry… but their anger start melting with the passing of time as both start missing each other…

 

Armaan was thinking pata nahi usne dinner kiya bhi ya nahi….mai jaakar puchu uss se..par wo abhi gusse mai hogi bolegi nahi, aisa karta hun note bhejta hun usse..

 

Armaan took out paper and start writing..

 

Note…

Oe basket dinner kar liya kya??? Yaar I'm really missing you… okk sorry, but please naaraj mat ho, mai movie par bilkul nahi jaana chahta tha but sanjana ne bahut force kiya aur tum bhi operation karne mai busy thi, isliye mai challa gaya, but I promise aage se aisa kabhi nahi hoga, last time tum bahut calm rahi thi jab mai niki ke saath movie dekhne gaya tha, isliye mujhe laga tumhe koi problem nahi hogi, par agar tumhe acha nahi laga to promise mai kabhi bhi aise nahi jaunga… please ab to maan jao, mai theek se kaam bhi nahi kar paa raha hun.. please basket.. I really luv you, aur kissi aur ke kaaran mai tumhe bilkul naaraj nahi dekh sakta…

 

On other side riddhima was thinking kitni rudely baat ki maine armaan se, movie hi to dekhne gaya tha.. par usne mujhse jhoot kyu bola, mai kab se wait kar rahi thi uski..lekin agar usne ek galti kar bhi di to kya ho gaya, wo mujhe pyar bhi to bahut karta haina… par usse mujhe sorry to bolna chahiye tha na, again thinking are yaar kyu pyar ke beech mai ego la rahi hai agar usne mujhe sorry nahi bola to mai bol deti hun, waise bhi 2 ghante ho gaye hai uski aawaj bhi nahi suni… par mai uss se directly sorry nahi kahungi, aisa karti hun paper par likhkar bhejti hun…  

 

Note..

Armaan mujhe neend nahi aa rahi hai, darr bhi lag raha, kal surgery bhi hai, wo bhi badi waali, agar proper neend na li to mai surgery karte karte so jaungi, aur phir dr. keerti mujhe rusticate kar dengi, I hope tum ye nahi chahte honge, aur waise bhi meri tummy mai chuhe bahut jor jor ke jumps kar rahe hai aur holes bhi karne ki koshish kar rahein hai, tumhare babies ki protection khatre mai hai, in short aapke babies aur aapki wife ki job ko aaapki jarurat hai, warna mai tumhe kabhi disturb na karti.. hope you don't mind

in helping me..

 

riddhima made fold of paper, thinking jab pata hai armaan ke bina nahi reh sakti bilkul bhi to kyu ladai karte ho….aur ek baar usse bolne ka mauka bhi nahi diya, ek baar baat to clear karni chahiye thi  na…

 

she moved out of fire escape and asked one nurse to give that paper to armaan in path lab as it's very urgent, nurse moved towards path lab… on other side armaan on the verge of going out.. when…..

 

Sa: armaan kahan jaa rahe ho???

 

A: bas ye paper ward boy ko dena hai, bahut urgent hai…

 

Sa: lao mai de deti hun…

 

A: nahi tum rehne do, mai khud de deta hun, waise bhi usse theek se samjhana padega ki ye paper just riddhima ke haatho mai hi handle karein, aur kissi ko na de…(he mumbled to himself but it's heard by sanjana)

 

Sa: (she was little shocked and mumbled riddhima ke liye paper, then quickly) armaan ruko.. (he stopped) dr. keerti rounds par hongi, agar unhone tumhe yaha na dekha to bahut gussa hoyengi, lao mujhe paper de do, mai kissi wardboy ko de deti hun..

 

A: sanjana 2 minute ka kaam hai, mai khud kar lunga… aur abhi Hitler ke aane mai time hai…(now she's not getting any idea what to say him, armaan atlast left)

 

Sanjana followed him with little distance, and saw the wardboy to whom armaan was handling that paper, after giving paper armaan turned back and was surprised to see sanjana…

 

A: tum yahan kya kar rahi ho sanjana???

 

Sa: (thinking a bit) wo.. wo mai wash room jaa rahi thi…

 

A: to isme itna ghabrane ki kya bata hai, jaaoo…(armaan goes towards path lab and sanjana followed that ward boy, and stopped him)

 

Sa: aap kaha jaa rahe ho???

 

Wb: wo dr. armaan ne kuch jaruri dawaiyon ka note diya hai dr. riddhima ke liye…

 

Sa: ohh to dr. armaan ne note de diya, mai kab se wait kar rahi thi..

 

Wb: par ye note aapke liye nahi dr. riddhima ke liye hai…

 

Sa: aapne shayad galat suna hoga, ye note mere liye hi hai…

 

Wb: nahi maine theek se suna tha, dr. armaan ne kaha tha ki ye note dr. riddhima ko pakdana hai, wo fire escape mai baithi hongi..

 

Sa: (little irritated but tried to remain calm) acha bataiye ki iss note mai kya hai???

 

Wb: medicines ki list…

 

Sa: aur iss waqt kaun kaun se doctors duty par hai???

 

Wb: aap aur dr. armaan…

 

Sa: to phir dr. armaan dr. riddhima ko medicines ki list kyu bhijwayenge, agar unke muh se galti se nikal gaya to aapke pass apna dimag to hai, use thoda use kar lete, lao ye list mujhe do…

 

Wb: par dr. riddhimaa…

 

Sa: maine kaha na ye note mere liye hi hai, aur please time na waste kijiye, mujhe patients ko medicines bhi deni hai iss list mai se padkar….(ward boy atlast gave her note but still little confused, sanjana turned and while walking opened the note, hardly she read one line, when collide with someone and fell down…first of all she was lil scared thinking kahin armaan na ho, but then found one nurse so gaining her confidence)

 

Sa: dekh kar nahi chalna aata aapko, kahan tha apaka dhyan…

 

Nu: sorry dr. sanjana, sister tara ne piche se bula liya tha, isliye aapko dekh nahi payi…

 

Sanjana don't want to involve in that unnecessary chat, so she didn't say anything further, stood up, then looked down for note, but was surprised to see 2 same papers and was confused which one to grab… nurse was also confused..

 

Nu: dr. sanjana isme se aapka kaunsa paper hai..

 

Sa: mai bhi yehi dekh rahi hun..(sanjana opened one paper and by chance it's the note written by riddhima, sanjana was again shocked)

 

Sa: sister aapko paper kisne diya???

 

Nu: dr. riddhima ne aur kaha ki dr. armaan ko de dun ye paper, bahut urgent hai…

 

Sa: (thinking ye dono to mere plan ka kabada hi kar denge, inke uppar to na mujhe 24 ghante hi najar rakhni padegi, then thinking filhaal iss nurse se picha chudwana padega) sister ye note mai dr. armaan ko de dungi, mai path lab hi jaa rahi hun, aap sister tara ki baat suniye kahi koi important kaam na ho.. aur agar dr. riddhima note ke baare mai puche to keh dijiyega ki aapne dr. armaan ko de diya hai…. Theek hai???

 

Nu: ji dr. sanjana..par aap unhe yaad se de dijiyega(saying this she left) 

 

Sanjana thought thanks god iss se to jaldi peecha chutta, she quickly read the note and mumbled ohh to madam ka gussa uttar gaya, bahut jaldi uttar gaya mujhe to laga tha 1-2 dino tak baat nahi karienge, par ye to… directly baat nahi kar sakte isliye paper ka aadaan pradaan shuru kar diya, bhuk lag rahi hai to canteen jaa, armaan ko kya kehne ki jarurat hai, khana to apne haatho se hi hai aur apne muh se..

 

aur koi ehsan to nahi kiya agar bhukki reh bhi li to aur ek armaan hai jo satya waadi harishchandra ki tarah sab kuch iss chotte se note par likh diya, agar dono hi ek dusre ke notes pad lete to har cheez khul jaati, itni aasani se to nahi hone dungi patch-up inka, she folds the note and kept in her pocket as her pager start ringing, start walking thinking in mind dono ka dhyan rakhna padega…

 

1 hour passed both were waiting for each other's reply, atlast riddhima's got up as she's finding difficult to wait, so she goes out of fire escape, searching for the nurse whom she handled note but other sister told her that she'd already left… riddhima mumbled ab pata nahi unhone wo note armaan ko diya ya nahi, waise agar diya hota to armaan jarur aa jaata..

 

par sister ko maine kaha tha ki ye note bahut urgent hai armaan ko de dena to unhone usse jarur de diya hoga, par aisa bhi to ho sakta hai jab wo gayi ho tab armaan lab mai na mila ho, ab kaise pata karun usse note mila ya nahi….. usse dekhne ka bhi mann kar raha hai, aisa karti hun mai path lab mai hi chalti hun, par mai uss se kahungi kya, idea mai uss se kahungi mujhe apni patient ki reports collect karni hai   

 

she smiled at her intelligence and hurriedly goes towards lab as she's very feeling very impatient to see him, as soon as riddhima entered in lab, sanjana felt uncomfortable thinking what if she directly asks him about her note, on other side armaan was thinking may be she'd read his note and now she's no more angry with him, so he smiled in heart yet he wants to confirm, so looking in her eyes…

 

A: tum yahan???

 

R: (trying to find if he's read the note or not) haan wo mai.. (she stopped, kept on looking in his eyes, armaan was also looking in her eyes, without giving break to their eyes, and sanjana felt irritated, so for breaking their eye contact)

 

Sa: riddhima tum yaha iss waqt kya kar rahi ho???

 

R: (cuming back in senses) wo mai apne patient ka blood sample dene aayi thi…(still looking armaan)

 

Sa: par sample kahan hai????

 

Riddhima bites her tongue thinking soch samajhkar bolna chahiye tha, ab kya jawab dun… armaan too looked questionably at her… riddhima was trying to act normal and searching her pockets..

 

A: bas.. I mean riddhima tumne sample apni pocket mai rakha hua hai???? (looked at her strangely)

 

R: (slightly confused) nahi mai kuch aur dhund rahi thi, may be mai sample wahin par bhul aayi hun… mai lekar aati hun….(she turned to go)

 

A: (tried to stop her and for confirming) riddhima.. (she turned with little hope in heart) riddhima thodi der pehle koi ward boy…

 

Sa: (at an instant) armaannn…..

 

A: (turning to her) kya hua???

 

Sa: armaan time 4:25 ho rahe hai…

 

A: thank you sanjana mujhe batane ke liye, mujhe to time dekhna hi nahi aata tha..

 

Sa: aree patients ke check-up ke liye nahi jaana kya???

 

A: to isme itna chillane waali baat kya hai, mai kaunsa kahi bhaag raha hun, chalte hai na..

 

Sa: nahi abhi challo…

 

A: tum kitni jiddi ho yaar, agar 5 minute baad challe jayeinge to kuch ho jayega???

 

Sa: haan bahut kuch ho jayega… patient ko dawai time par nahi milegi jiske kaaran uski tabiyat kharab ho jayegi…. Baatein to phir ho sakti hai, par patient ko dawai time par milna jaruri hai.. challo… riddhima hum baad mai milte hai….

 

A: par…

 

Sa: no par war, she almost pulled his hand and riddhima was feeling irritated, anyways she left from there, hardly after 5-10 minutes, when armaan was giving injection to one of his patient, his cell beeped… before armaan could react, sanjana asked for his cell saying tum injection lagao, message baad mai pad lena…. Armaan quickly gave injection to patient, and asked for his cell, sanjana gave him back…. Armaan opened his inbox and found no message…

 

A: are message kaha gaya????(looked questionably at sanjana)

 

Sa: company ki taraf se message tha, I hope tumhe wo message padne mai koi interest nahi hoga….ya tum unn messages ko bhi save karke rakhte ho???

 

A: (little smiled) nahi… mujhe laga riddhima… khair chodo, challo next patient check karte hai…(she handled his cell back to her..)

 

Sanjana thought tumne bilkul theek socha tha armaan, wo message ridhima ka hi tha, par mai tumhe kaise padne de sakti thi wo message, jab tumhara cell beep hua tha mujhe to 100 % hi yakeen tha ki message riddhima ka hi hoga, coz itni raat ko kaun tumhe message karega, bechari riddhima tumse puch rahi thi ki tumhe koi note mila ya nahi aur keh rahi thi ki ek baar uss se mil lo, bechari bahut miss kar rahi hai tumhe.. par iss baar akele milne aana, uss sanjana ko saath na laana…. Kitna pyara message bheja tha..

 

Sanjana mumbled ab tum hi batao armaan tum mujhe akela kaise chod sakte ho, after all riddhima se pehle tumne mujhse pyar ka daawa kiya tha, aur ek achi girl friend hone ke naate mujhe tumhe akela nahi chodna chahiye na… samjhao apni wife ko….she smiled to herself, then looked at armaan who was busy in checking patients… and then looked at his cell.. then thought riddhima ne armaan ko kitne pyar se message bheja hoga, aur reply ki bhi wait kar rahi hogi bechari, mujhe usse reply karna chahiye nahi to uska dil tut jayega…

 

She wrote…

 

Riddhima mujhe pareshan mat karo, let me do my work aur faaltu ke notes bhejkar na apna time waste karo na mera, iss se badiya tum thodi der so jao, nahi to subah surgery nahi kar paogi, aur please khana bhi kha lena….

 

Riddhima read message, she was really surprised, not expecting this kind of message from him, she mumbled samajhta kya hai apne aap ko, pata nahi kiss cheez ke liye akad raha hai, ek to khud jhoot bola aur tewar dekho kaise dikha raha hai, nahi aana to mat aaye, agar wo bhi reh sakta hai mere bina to mai bhi reh sakti hun…she got up and moved towards house….

 

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okks that's it...

 

next update most probab tomorrow or day after tomorrow..

 

keep in touch

 

khushu abhi mai reply nahi kar rahi kissi ko bhi, bahut saari mails pending ho gayi hai, actually time hi nahi milta, but tujhe parso tak pucca mail kar dungi, aur teri predictions bahut achi hai, tune to sachi mai isse k-serial i mean k-story bana diya😆😆😆.. waise bhi ye sach mai k se start hota hai, to ek dum fit hai teri predictions iss story par....

 

trisha: jo kal yachna ko kaha tha wahi tumhe bhi keh rahi hun, mai tumhe nahi bhuli i swear, bas kuch reply nahi hota karne ke liye... tum sabke comments bahut ache hote hai to particular kissi ko bhi point out karne ka mann nahi karta, aur agar tum me se koi question puchta hai to wo future parts se related hote hai iss wajah se mai kabhi reply hi nahi karti warna tum sabko wo maaja nahi aayega jo ab aata hai, hope you are getting my point...

 

 

jay: welcome and thanks for your comments.... 

 

 

sonia: yaar tune kaunsa question pucha tha mujhse, please phir se post karde..plzzzzzzzzzz.......

 

 

neha: tu bhi aa gai india-forums par, welcumm😊😊... mera id hai [email protected], aur tune songs puche the kaun kaunsi movie se hai, par yaar maine to bahut saare songs daale hue hai story mai, infact mujhe to theek se yaad bhi nahi hai ki kitne songs the, ya to tu mujhe list de de songs ki aur mai tujhe bata dungi ki kaunsi movie ka kaunsa song hai, aur iske alava koi alternative hai to tu mujhe bata diyo, okkkk... aur mai tujhe nahi bhulli yaar, intro dene ki jarurat nahi hai😊😊😊

 

meri 4 deviyon neha(cc waali aka shweta's fan my princess), kshuu,pooja,ritu... agar tumne comments reserve karke unn par comment na kiya next day tak to tum sabko mai jaan se nahi marungi😆😆😆, kshu very bad tere uppar teri mumma ka effect ho raha hai, waise pehli baar tune comment blank choda hai isliye chal ja tujhe baksha, aur baaki sabko last warning....

 

 

regards

ishanki... 

 

 

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hey dear😊

        comeon yaar make a move,how many days we have to read this flashback........plzzzzzzz   come to the present ............plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...........😍😍Edited by k_anjali12 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

di mat rulaiye itna😭

 
 
sanjana ko dur bhejiye...
ar ke beech mein problem mat kijiye... agar story mein twist laana hai to pls aisa laiye jisme ar saath ho aur kisi aur ke khilaaf ho
 
 
as for the part
phir se itna ache se likha tha ki mere paas words nahi hai lekin aansu hain
 
 
waiting for the next one
 
love
kavya
 
 
 
Edited by dmg_fanatic - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Ishu   in parts ko padne se dar lag raha hai.
woh dono alag ho jayenge toh.

unko bahut dard hoga aur unka dard mujh ko bardash nahin hoga
sachh mein is Sanjana ko to mar hi dalna chahiye .
I hate her .

pl z ISHU     unko na dukha woh dono bahut masum hai .plzzzzzzzz    it hurts


bas ek zara khayal is dosti ka tha,
warna bohut gila teri berukhi ka tha,
mujh ko laga main b teri zindage main hun,
per ya to dokha meri SADGEE ka tha.
lots of love
ritu



Edited by janu1610 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
sorry isu main yeh aur le nahi pa rahi i will comment after everything sought out
hope u dont mind
mujhse ab ar ka jhgda sehen nahi horaha
karan ki dewani mithila
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Posted: 15 years ago
part chota tha ya maine jaldi padh liya
😕
anwy ab tu mujhe pehle yeh bata ki sanjana ko bahar nikalne ka kya legi tu
kabhi tu meri baat nahi maanti
chunnu munnu wali bhi abhi tak nahi maani...jisko laane ko bol rahi hun use laa nahi rahi
aur yeh bin bulayi mehmaan pata nahi kyun le aayi tu yeh ff mein
ufffffffff kitni kameeni hai yeh sanjana dayan
aur kya kahun main
wahan unn dono ko pata bhi nahi unki peeth peeche kya kya saazishen chaling
i really hate her
maar daalungi main usko sahi mein
mumma tu gandi hai
but i love u
nehu....


Edited by Neha_luvPRB - 15 years ago