I don't know if its going too slow but, I think its repetitive and that is why it seems slow...I think writers need to understand that if they want to keep the audience engaged, they still need to show character development or introduce new characters.....I am not a professional writer, but I know when someone knows what they are doing and I think they are completely killing a perfectly good concept by showing the same shity dialogues between Garv and Bandini and Bandini and other characters... There is so much potential in Garv and Bandini's character that they can enhance on...and If they want tips, I am here to help...I am not even kidding....But, because of them I am afraid, the show and the actors will suffer....😡which I would hate to see....
Edited by sweetchilly1234 - 16 years ago