SAPNEY-MJHT FAN FIC-update pg 5

SAPNEY-MJHT FAN FIC...
hi.....this is the first time im every writing a fan fic....actually its not a very long one.....it just came up while i was watching mayur on MJHT yesterday......though the main charecters of this FF are mayur.....sajan,raina,dodo and benji also have an important role to play......this is the first part of the FF...hope you like it.....and please give youre further suggestions about it.....thanks

Part I
The sea was roaring louder than ever with each passing wave.....like the turmoil of emotions in the calm and composed Mayank Sharmas heart.He looked down from his 11th floor sea facing office,pensive.Life was exacly how he had imagined it five years back.He was a top creative director in a mumbai based adverstising agency,had a large apartment of his own,a car,a six figure pay check to give his lovely mom everything she needed and ever wanted.But there was something still missing in his life which he rtealised but never liked to talk about.As he walked towards his table he saw his moms impish face smiling at him through the photo frame.He smiled remembering the standard dailoge his mom used to say evrey morning,"Mayu....tera carrer sab kuch settle ho gaya hai na?.....tum shaadi kyun nahi karte.....puri zindagi akele bitani hai kya???..."to which Mayank would reply the same thing everytime...."Maa....tumhe pata hai na,main bahut busy hu.....sone ka time nahi milta to shaadi kab karunga??..".But both Mayank and his mom knew the reason for him not getting married was definatly not the lack of time....Somehow he could never imagine himself with anyone else,or find any one else who could be even remotely like her.....she who was so special that even the most prescious stone could replace the value she had in Mayanks life.....
That very minute the clerk knoked on his cabin door anouncing the arrival of a person very keen on meeting Mayank.Mayank snapped out of his thoughts with a composed expression although on the inside he was secretly cursing himself for thinking about her all over again....why....WHY...WHY!!!!cant you stop thinking about her.......is it nessesary that you have to think about Nupur Bhushan all the time....

I really REALLY like the starting!!

really loved it yaar

thanks so much nidhi and ruchi for the compliments...ill updat soon....

wow nyc start..........

plz cont soon and the first part was really good

hey start yaar do continue.

please continue....i would love to read ur ff...sounds interesting......pm me.😳

u knw dis is till nw d bst intro ive read..

thanks a lot for liking my FF.....im updating the part II soon.....