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Posted: 16 years ago
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Defreeze... all shocked … everybody's reactions, indu tells amma not to do this… all try and stop her but she doesn't budge… pravin is silent… finally vishakha tells amma not to use these tactics… amma leaves saying her decision is final. Reactions from pravin vishakha on one side with vishakha saying that how long will she stay hungry… within a couple of days she will eat… pravin not liking it but still adamant that the divide would stay. Babuji trying to make amma understand, she not agreeing. Amit cutting his phone, saying… I will be there in twenty mins… taking off on reema, this is the reason why I didn't want to stay… now your indu bhabhi has delayed me… and my friends are waiting… reema tells him indu bhabhi stopped him because it would have looked weird if you had gone out at that time with the whole family seated for dinner.. She again asks him … can you not go for one day when you know what all is happening in the house right now, he says the matter is not open for discussion. Indu arrives with a plate…tries to make amma eat unsuccessfully and leaves with the plate finally. On her way to the kitchen , indu catches amit sneaking out of the house, she goes and confronts him… he says he is going for an urgent meeting… she says what kind of meeting so late happens so late in the night… amit stutters but says , my work sometimes takes me out all times of the day and night… indu tells him that , even if that be the case, he is now the Son in law of the house and it does not give him shobha to step out so late and specially in a city new to him etc…and she would not allow that… and finally indu does not let him leave. Next day…At the breakfast table… amma is not at the table… all notice... in a corner Reema thanks indu for making amit stay last night. In her room Amma is lying morose and indu comes and watches her and is worried for her. Indu comes to babuji and tells him she can't see amma in this state anymore and tells him to do something about it. Babuji along with indu comes to amma and tries to make amma eat, when she doesn't budge he says some emotional lines and finally gives her his kasam and says that if you will not eat, I will also not eat from now… amma melts and babuji takes the food thali from indu and makes her finally eat… indu watches misty eyed. In the night indu tells arjun about amma finally having eaten… and I knew only babuji could have done it… thank god… arjun is glad … then indu ask arjun if he would help her out in solving another problem… arjun is surprised but promises … indu tells him about amit and his drinking/ gambling habits… asks for him to help her out in sorting that… arjun agrees…Same night… later, amit trying to sneak out of the house and arjun comes and tells him he will accompany him for the meeting… amit is in a fix… has to take arjun along. Next morning...Indu notices from her side of the house vishakha getting a dizzying spell and she sits down, composes herself and walks away… she is looking pale and unwell… indu wonders about it…. rukmini comes and tells indu she is taking amma to the mandir as she wanted to go… indu decides to stay in the house…In the mandir an aarti is playing as amma and rukmini are praying to god .As Vishakha is doing something she gets dizzy and is about to faint in the hall… indu watches this and rushes crossing the line and catches her puts her on the couch and calls the doctor. Doctor finishes checking vishakha and turns to indu. Amma is praying to god…give me some hope for the future, give me a new beginning…Overlaps on to the doctor telling indu …she is pregnant… its good news…Freeze

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Posted: 16 years ago
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the story is now similar to movie Sansaar (Anupam Kher, Rekha)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks a Lot Anu... u r doinga gr8 job...
i luv ur updates..

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