Have YOU got Talent? ! ! ! Competition

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Righto! Now This competition starts from today, is open to every single member, please take part in it. ! This is a writing competition and i know every single person on this forum is a writer of some sort. Im looking for original ideals, creative, simple, a writer who has an ability to express their words real and erupt the strong emotions! ..not someone who knows the most complicated sentence or someone poetic.

Now to give you some ideas and what you can write about, here are a few suggestions

  • - Imagine your one of the contestants from Saregmapa and you have just won the title..explain your feelings - you name members from this forum...i dont want a typical cry happy kinda story.... i want a twist in the tail!

  • - Other titles. Broken Promise, Lost in Crowd, End of Innocence etc

  • - Or something of your own...Anything you want really, the above are just examples! The theme of the story has to be original. Make it suspense, Thriller, Romance anything! but the talent has to be there!

Rules!


Although i love reading, i dont want the story to be too long or too short..It is not the quantity that matters rather the quality..i want quality! Try not to make it too long.

NO ONE publishes their story on public..

Please Pm your entry to Rage-Of-Angels
Subject "Entry"
by May 28th, 09, Thursday!

you have two weeks to do this, once you pm me the entries i would select only a few whom i believe to be the best and post that on public..anonymous..after that ill let you guyz know what's happening! but once again, NO CHEATING and dont post on public! Get your thinking caps on, get your pen moving and win yourself the title



Passionate Writer of IF!



Pm me your entries with the heading: Entry!

have Fun, i want to see great responses therefore delayed this topic so late so that everyone can participate and make no excuses such as sorry i have exams etc...you have two weeks to do this..and i want the pen MOVING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Kick it in!!!!!!!!!!






Xoxo


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Im not participating in the competition but i love writing, so would write one on End of Innocence..GUYZ DONT POST YOUR ENTRIES ON PUBLIC, i want to make it anonymous for others so send me the entry via pm...im not such a great writer, but my go at writing. Below is my piece of writing, the poem at the end is not mines though..i got inspired from the poem and wrote this.

End Of Innocence. would write later.

Edit: story.

The evening is an orange smudge of fog and sunsets, she was alone once again. Her cries for help again unheard. She didnt say anything Silence surrounded here. Tired, she was tired of walking in the rain, tired of letting her tears flow un wiped. Tired of everything. Her head was popping and fizzing like some coke advert. Why does her misery never end? Once again the night was falling on a 15 years old Megan De stain who had a rare beauty, inhumanely gorgeous. Megan detains was in dilemma, could there have been a witness? Did anyone notice the crime she committed after midnight? Late that night, she injected heroin into her veins, Trying to escape from her reality. Trying to escape herself...running, running where there is no end, running to a path unknown where there is no life. Running away from her crime. It was late at night, the air was cold and crisp and there was a full moon. Megan looked at her beauty in the mirror, unable to recognize herself. It was a face she didnt recognize. She looks at herself in the mirror and saw blooded eyes, blood dripping from her forehead, a face tired of everything that has happened to her, a face that just wants t o be free, a face that once was Megan. She cried that night. A cry for help, haunting memories of a nightmare that will never be forgotten. To feed her addiction, Megan murdered her own mother, the mother who taught her how to live, the mother who was always there to wipe her tears She murdered that mother.. Injecting heroin into her veins, and letting the tears flow on her soft cheek. Just for a couple of bucks, to feed her addiction Megan killed her mother so vile and corrupt. Inhaling her drug, the craving driving her insane. As the night falls, the last breath of her mother was taken without any mercy. When did it all end? The end of morals, the end of conscience the end of her innocence. I want my innocence back cried Megan in the silent night. Too late now though. It is now too late, Megan has sealed her fate, once more push of the needle once more injecting the venom in her blood. Its the end now. Past, present and the future Megan has none of that now, nothing to gain..Sucking her everything up in a needle and shooting in her vein, the girl killed her innocence even before it begun....When did it all end?

End of innocence.

Inspired from the poem,

Innocence lost without my permission
Innocence stolen with my submission
Innocence lost through another's plan
Innocence no longer for another man.
Innocence faded before it begun.

my entry wont count though..i just felt like writing this..so get your pen moving and show me your talent..i would only select the best to be posted on public! so get moving!

I hope you enjoyed my story! 😳😆

Xoxo



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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks for showing no interest in the crappy topic.

Good day.

Xoxo
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rage-Of-Angels

Thanks for showing no interest in the crappy topic.

Good day.

Xoxo



aww ROA 🤗
I must appreciate your effort in taking time out to come up with this interesting contest! Hats off to you😃.
Yea I too will request the members to send in their entries. I will send mines as well, though not a writer at all😆. So even if you have no idea what to write about, just send in whatever you can. 😆
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Originally posted by: Gur.N.cool



aww ROA 🤗
I must appreciate your effort in taking time out to come up with this interesting contest! Hats off to you😃.
Yea I too will request the members to send in their entries. I will send mines as well, though not a writer at all😆. So even if you have no idea what to write about, just send in whatever you can. 😆



Thanks. 😊

You dont have to be a writer, my story is pretty crap above too and people like slumdog had problems understanding my crappy english lol! 😆 whatever comes to your mind really, sure send me whatever you can..you have two weeks! 😆



Xoxo

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Posted: 16 years ago
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oooh wow great idea!!
I will definitely send in my non-writer-entry for sure!!
Good thing we have two weeks though 😆
Great idea GF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sweet Muffin to start the ball rolling I will put down something. But I am not taking part in any competition but just to have a bit of fun. Hope none is offended.
Welcome Kathy Bhai
It seemed an ordinary day but I had to rush to the airport to pick up Kathy Bhai. I was out of luck and out of funds and out of everything as my last few dollars were betted on a race horse called RF, recommended by Cloddy Bhai, which failed to bear the rich dividends promised. Imagine with a large jockey like OBJ who half the time was drunk on some Rafi music there was no chance of it coming in. Cloddy Bhai claimed it to be an "insider tip" as usual. Suddenly as I walked towards the Taxi Stand I heard a loud horn "Beep Beep" and I saw Cloddy Bhai who asked me to jump into his Mercedes 300. As soon as I was seated and had fixed the safety belt he threw me a stack of Fifty thousand United States Dollars crisp notes and said "I made a mistake and betted on an outsider called Slumdog that paid 10,000 to one".
I split the stack of notes into half and handed him twenty-five grand. Cloddy Bhai said no thanks as his rakhi factory and Shaadi.com portal were both doing tremendously well. I threw the money into his glove compartment as I always shared such profits with him.
As a matter of interest I asked him for the reason his Shaadi.com portal was doing so well. He did not look at me straight and stared at the road ahead through his dark shades. I knew the answer but pretended not to know for he had posted some pics of our friends in there too; Piya Bahen in a nice Desi costume, Sweet Muffin in a light blue saree from Bangalore, Vijay Babu looking distinguished in a coat, and several others. Cloddy Bhai picked up my thoughts and agreed to remove them at once. He called up Baz and gave the instructions and added " replace them with pics of Bebo, Asin and Hrithik. Oh yes please remove my pic too". I smiled to myself for it was so Cloddy to mislead others at times, he could sell sand to the Arabs.
Kuhuji, CG, Anju and Shez were all waiting at gate no.10 , the VIP gate, for Kathy Bhai with garlands in hand and a troupe of dancers which included Rani, Guruji, Antarji, ROA, KA, Piya Bahen and singers included Gumsum, Mahi, Game_over. Tabla was played by Nazia and Varsha and harmonium by Baz and Gauri.We were to have dinner at WA Dabba where a free-flow of coke was arranged for ROA n Cloddy Bhai. I must say the ladies looked extremely lovely in their bright dresses and beaming smiles.
Suddenly Kathy Bhai walked in with his armed bodyguards a close distance behind. He smiled and waved at all and we could see a glint in his eyes and a slight tear drop.
All had a bit of tears in their eyes too for Kathy Bhai was not just Khatarnak but also a Senator in his hometown. The music exploded with a bang and there was much rejoicing and Guruji and Vijay really jumped very high doing the Bhangra. This made all laugh.
Cloddy Bhai seemed concerned but I told him that his secret was safe.
Kathy Bhai looked very well and was speechless as he hugged each one in turn.
From there it was a straight drive for some splendid dinner.
With the new found wealth I of course picked up the tab and Cloddy as usual claimed that he wanted to share 50:50.😆😆
Lovely.😊
Edited by Summer3 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG summer bhaiya you should have definitely participated...that is one great story!! I would vote for you :D You like my new display pic eh?? 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: PiyaBawri

OMG summer bhaiya you should have definitely participated...that is one great story!! I would vote for you :D You like my new display pic eh?? 😆

Oh Bahen I liked it so much that I even "borrowed" it.
somehow our hearts just go out to these kids naturally.😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Yes!
Kids are definitely the best gifts from GOD.

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