28Apr-written-Kush survives, Luv becomes king

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Jai Siya Ram

Kush is bitten by a snake. Hanuman ji comes there.
Hanuman - Kush, I understand that this condition of yours is unbearable for Luv. But this is important for your test. Whatever I am doing is by the orders of Mahadev. Your tests have only begun. It is to be seen if you can pass further tests.
Kush is unconscious, so obviously he does not hear. Hanuman ji disappears. Some villagers see Kush. They bring him to a vaidya.
Vaidya- There is no chance of this survival. Make him float on a boat of bamboo-sticks in river. Put a red flag next to him. On seeing him people will understand that he is bitten by snake. Somebody will save him.

Sita gets a nightmare that her sons are in trouble. Malini consoles her that Mahadev will take care of them. (Oh and Mahadev himself is giving them all troubles.)

Parvati - Swami, please stop these tests. Do you have no sympathy toward these boys? Don't you care for them? Even well known sages and knowledgeable people get disturbed in this situation and they are small boys. See what is happening. They are making Kush float in river.
Lord Shiv merely smiles.

Luv runs around.
He is shouting - My brother has been bitten by snake. Somebody please help.
Parvati - See there. How Luv is running around for his brother. I cannot understand why you are quiet. Do you want to see them in bigger trouble?
Shiv - Uma, do not worry. Before any big action, there are tough tests. If it does not happen, then success is suspected.

Luv sees a palace. He runs towards people standing there.
Luv - Is there any Washerman here? Please save my brother. He has been bitten by snake.
The people there make him their king.
They shout in unison - Mayapur naresh ki jai.
One person - Maharaj has come at the right time. Whatever our astrologer said has become true.
Luv is forcibly made a king.

On the other hand, a washerman, who also knows how the cure for snake bites sees Kush. He cures Kush of the snake-bite.

In Mayapur
Luv is taken inside the palace. Mahamantri orders the door to be closed so that Luv is trapped inside.

Luv - I want to meet my Kush bhaiya.
Mahamantri - You meet him later. First see the arrangements in this kingdom.
Mahamantri shows Luv the whole palace.
Mahamantri - This is all yours. You are the king of Mayapur.
He shows a statue to Luv.
Mahamantri - Maharaj, this is our kuldevi Mahamaya. Whenever we get a new king, we make him wear the necklace, which you see the kuldevi wearing.
The necklace is sparkling.
Mahamantri thinks - Luv, the moment you wear this necklace, you will be seized with Moh (attachment). It is your test that you have to escape this Moh. Once you wear this, you will belong to this place for ever.
Luv sits on a thrown. All are saying "Maharaj ki jai". Mahamantri tries to make Luv wear the necklace.
Luv - I do not want to wear any necklace.
Mahamantri - Sometimes you should do things not for your happiness but the happiness of your people.
Mahamantri makes Luv wear the necklace.
This is really stupid. When Luv clearly said that he did not want to become the king, then itself he passed the test. The effect of the necklace is such that anybody wearing it considers himself as the king of Mayapur and forgets everything else. In such a situation, forcibly making him wear the necklace and then expecting that he should not be affected by it is completely unfair. It is like throwing somebody from a building and blaming him if he is pulled down by gravity.

Mahamantri - Maharaj, who are you?
Luv (happily) - I am the king of this place. I am the king of Mayapur.

Kush opens his eyes. and calls Luv.
Kush shouts - Luv, where are you?
Washerman - Who is Luv?
Kush - My brother. He was with me. A snake bit me. I do not know what happened after that. I need to search for my brother.
Washerman - How will you search him in this condition? First come to my home and take rest.
Washerman's wife - What has happened to you? We do not have anything to eat at home. And you are opening a dharmshala.
Washerman - Where will he go? He is alone. He will eat a little bit with us.
Washerman's wife - Ok but he must do our work.
Washerman - Sundanda, are you in your senses? He is already in so much trouble. And you want him to do work?
Sunanda - I do not care. If he wants to get food, then in the day time, he has to beg and in the night, he has to wash clothes.

In Mayapur, the mahamantri shows the treasury to Luv. Luv is excited to see such a rich treasury.
Luv - Beutiful. What a reach treasury! Is this all mine?
Mahamantri - Yes, maharaj. You are the king. So this whole maya is yours.
Luv - Mantri ji, I wish that you give special importance to the security at this place. No outsider should even see all these.
A lady comes and takes Luv away for food.
Mahamantri thinks - Luv, you are fully entrapped. It is to be seen if you can cut this Moh and be eligible to get the swarn-kamal.

Kush is eating what poor people eat and Luv is happily eating varieties of food in the palace.
Kush is sleeping. Sundanda forcibly wakes him up.
Sunanda - Get up. He does not do any work. He is a burden on us. Go and bring somethings by begging.

Background song:
Kush is begging on the streets.
Vandevi ke bete Luv Kush do bhai
Vandevi ke bete Luv Kush do bhai
Unse hua Shiv ji ka anadar
Dono dukhi is baat ko lekar
Swarn-kamal arpit karne se
Kar de bhool kshama Shiv-shankar
Dhankuber ka divya sarovar
Swarn-kamal hai uske andar
Shiv ji ka Ashish pane ki
Durlabh swarn-kamal lane ki
Yojna banayi
Vandevi ke bete Luv Kush do bhai
Vandevi ke bete Luv Kush do bhai

Kush comes back after begging whole day.
Sunanda - Is this what you got after begging whole day? Only this much? You will get nothing to eat today. Whole night you will be hungry. Where are you going? Will your mother clean all these clothes?

Narad comes to Shiv ji. He is very sad.
Shiv - What happened, devarshi? Why are you so worried?
Narad - When two small children suffer so much, then I will definitely be worried. What kind of test is this?
Parvati - Devarshi is right. Nobody can understand your leela.
Narad - Mahadev, why did you separate the two brothers so much?
Shiv - Humans are slaves to circumstances. Circumstances test them. You should be happy that these two boys are experiencing the truth of life at such a small age. (Is this really something to be happy about?)
Narad - But is it necessary for the tests to be so tough?
Shiv - They are Lord Sri Ram's sons. Their whole life is full of tests. Hanuman ji has created this maya to see if these two boys can free themselves from Moh.
Narad - Will they become free?
Shiv - That is what I also want to see. If they cannot free themselves from Moh, then whole life they will not be able to reach their goal.
Parvati - This will result into big trouble.
Shiv - Everything will be clear with time. Just wait and watch.

Kush gets some clothes to wash. He sees Luv's clothes.
Kush - These are my brother's.
Washerman - How can it happen? These clothes have come from rajmahal.
Kush remembers Vetal's statement that whoever eats the fruit will become king.
Kush (excitedly) - My brother has become a king. Luv has become king. I am telling you the truth. The king of this state is nobody else but my brother Luv. I will go to meet him.
Sunanda is shocked to hear that Kush's brother is king.

Precap - Kush meets Luv but Luv refuses to recognize him.

How many more tests will be there of Luv and Kush and of the patience of us viewers?
Edited by akhl - 16 years ago


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Posted: 16 years ago
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There are so many things to say here I hardly know where to start.

  1. Why are the Sagars so intent on not only depicting Mahadev as such a sadist, but even worse, a fatalist, as everything is vidhi ka vidhan and nothing should be done to restore any sanity into any course of events. (The way they are depicting it, Rama could have resigned himself to Sita's abduction by Ravan as 'vidhu ka vidhan', and done nothing about it).🤢
  2. In those days, cities did not have names ending in 'pur' or 'nagar'. Like the city named after Kush was Kushavati, Taksha was Takshashila, Angad was Angadvad... No purs, no nagars... Very anachronistic! Oh, and the name of the city is Mayapur? How cute, and convenient
  3. You forgot to mention that the Mahamantri is Hanuman, as is obvious by his comment about Luv & the swarna-kamal. Now, Hanuman pleaded his inability to support the kids while they are being tested, but he doesn't have the inability to sabotage Luv's chances of success. (Had everything in the Ramayan actually followed this script, then Rama may well have disowned Hanuman and sent him packing back to Kishkindha for causing Sita so much anxiety.)🤢
  4. Everybody else wears a crown, but Luv wears a wierd looking turban? Also, why was Kush shown singing that stupid song?
  5. The vaids in the village that Kush is first taken to can't save Kush, but the dhobi can? Also, if Kush's test is over and he's passed, according to Hanuman, why are they taking him away from that spot and making him somebody's servant? Particularly when Kush wasn't looking for a day job? Couldn't/wouldn't Kush have refused to stay with his gracious host, with a bitch of a wife? And were men at the time so hen-pecked that their wife could force them to do whatever they wanted, no matter how mean? Also the stupid comment by Sunanda of Kush being a burden on them - Kush didn't want to stay there in the first place! Just b'cos they saved his life, he's now their slave?😡
  6. Generally, if someone was given any piece of jewellery, such as a necklace, it was customary to accept it. If the necklace was enchanted, Luv was essentially being cheated. To give him an enchanted necklace that makes him forget who he is, and then test him on whether he can break free of maya, is beyond insane, as Akhl pointed out. Also, the parallel shots of Luv having luxurious meals and Kush eating what his 'gracious hosts' gave him really🤬 me off.
  7. Just b'cos they are Rama's sons, their lives are full of tests? In that case, why leave out Rama's nephews, who too belong to the same Raghukul that K-L belonged to? After all, wouldn't one want them too to be worthy of Harishchandra, Bhagirath, Dileepa, et al? As Ananya said, divine sons of a human father. Do the Sagars think these 2 are gods? Also, even Rama and his bros didn't have such tests at that age.🤢
  8. After trapping them in this way, Shiva just cooly says to Narad & Parvati that if they can't get out of this moh, they'll be trapped forever? Even if Shiva has no sympathy for K-L, doesn't he sympathize with Rama & Sita, whose sufferings he can witness first hand?😲
  9. This saga is getting elongated with no end, but in the meantime, are they mindful that there is a 15 day limit by which they are supposed to be back in the ashram with the swarna-kamal? Here they are trying to get it for Valmiki to offer Shiva, and Mahadev himself takes delight in sabotaging their attempts. What is Mahadev - a sadist?

This serial should be renamed 'Vidhi ka vidhan', or something along those lines. And I doubt that the Sagars have any idea about what it is.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks Akhl for the update!
A bigger thanks to Chandra for putting across (y)our thoughts or rather your arguments. This is heading nowhere!🤢
I see Ananya's quote coming true in every episode - Divine sons of a Human father ?????😒
Oh, and probably, Shiva will have to witness only Sita's tiered suffering. Bcoz Rama just has one constant suffering of Sita and his kids not being with him. He has no clue of whatsoever is happening to K-L. 😭
The turban was one thing which got me LOL. And he's also wearing a Mughal-e-Azam style costume to go with it. But aren't we in the Ramayan?😕
And an ordinary dhobi is more capable than a Vaidya? Looks like the Vaidya got his degree from Tapaas University....... And btw, do we even need another dhobi now?
Probably Kush was trying to locate Luv by singing that song expecting Luv to reply back by singing the next stanza....... Remember "Yaadon ki Baaraat"......😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Chandra, I am totally with you on this one, point by point! Oh, man, these kids are suffering more than their parents ever did in vanvas, what with manual labor and being made to forget the past with the gem necklace! Love your title for this "Vidhi Ka Vidhan", hehhee!😆😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I really applaud you for having the patience to continue writing such good updates Avinash, even when the serial is beyond repair.👏 I suspect it will seem too bland once Luv Kush return to Valmiki Ashram (if they ever do by next year) and Ram does the Ashvamedha.🤔 And when in the world are they going to show the Lavanasur episodes? When Chandnii talked to Gurmeet, didn't he say they were working on those?
And I really hate how they are showing Hanuman's character. Even if what they're showing really did happen, Hanuman would never act towards Luv Kush how he's doing in this serial.
And agree with you point by point Chandra.👏
Edited by _LalithaJanaki_ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oh, that arises another question.....
Doesn't Hanuman realize that these two are sons of his own Prabhu and Maiyya? Thats unlikely of Hanuman, isn't it?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: chen2chic

Oh, that arises another question.....

Doesn't Hanuman realize that these two are sons of his own Prabhu and Maiyya? Thats unlikely of Hanuman, isn't it?

aha! you don't know then ,anything can happen in Anand (Sagar) Ramayan 😃
Hanuman can forget his 'divya-drishti whenever he wants n regain it when he needs to.😳😉
Thanks akhl for the update, as Lalitha says you have loads of patience to write an update when serial has gone bizzare
Chandra bhaiya: Agree with your points, sply with Hanuman n Shivji ones....and ofcourse! Vidhi ka Vidhan...lolz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Chen2

The turban actually looked like a Maratha turban - the one worn by Shivaji's general Tanaji Mulasare. The costumes didn't strike me as Mughal-e-Azam (though I haven't seen that film).

Tapas University?🤣

So we have dhobis curing Kush, singers (Sandipan) defame Sita, ashram people gossip about her, ashram student leading K-L astray, vaids floating Kush on water with red flags (what was this - their equivalent of the red cross?)

I still can't digest #5 above - the one about Kush being invited to stay with the dhobi, and then having to work like a slave. Couldn't he have just refused - after all, his job was finding Luv!

Something tells me that Sunanda was also married to Mr Vidhi🤪

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chandraketu

Something tells me that Sunanda was also married to Mr Vidhi🤪

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Posted: 16 years ago
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These comments are sooooooo hillarious. I cant stop laughing.

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