FF:U, Me, Aur Hum note pg.2 8/15

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Hey guys. Im Radhika. I thought of starting an ff on the shree forum cuz im a very big fan of shree and luv h&s. I have two other ffs on the bmtd forum. Im not that graet but decided to give it a shot.
Characters- some will be the same while some will be different. More will be added later
Shree- 22, sweet, innocent girl, like in the show- poor, but she has an education, goes to college, and lives in the city without her father, who sent her away for education. She isn't a party girl.
Hari- 22, like in the show. A rich tycoon's son who works at his father's business and goes to college also. His parents both died in a very mysterious accident.
Madhu bhabhi- Hari's bhabhi. The sweetest you can imagine. Really nice and always covers up for Hari
Anant- Madhu's husband and Hari's adopted brother. Takes care of most of the business. 40% of the property is his.
Danny- Hari's other adopted brother. Owns 30% of property. He hates Hari and Madhu bhabhi and Anant bhaiyya.
Nikki- Danny's wife. She is a sweet, nice person, but gets greedy sometimes.
Rajni- Hari's girlfriend. Is with Hari only for his money, but he doesn't know that. She is Nikki's sister, but was adopted from birth, so Nikki doesn't know about her.
Lappu- Shree's best friend. He is her only friend and always supports her.
Nihaal- Hari's best friend and companion. He always stands by his side and doesn't care about Hari's money.
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Part 1 - I hope you enjoy it.
3rd Person POV
RIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGG!!! An alarm clock rang at 5'o'clock in the morning. A pretty girl slowly got up, stretched, then quickly got out of bed. She went to take a shower and then came out after a couple of minutes, without a hint of makeup on her face, which hwasn't even needed. She wore a simple, pink and orange salwaar kameez.
After drying her hair, she quickly walked to the pooja room and started the aarti. Her melodious voice swirled throughout the house. However, the landlords didn't like waking up that early.
"Eh larki!! Be glad we're letting you stay here on such low rent!! Chup re, varna hum tumko yaha sai bar karlenge!(hey girl(rudely), be quiet, or else we will kick you out)"
The girl quickly nodded and continued the aarti, singing to herself. She turned around and we see that the girl is non other than Shree. She gave the scornful landlords prasad and then took some for herself.After looking at the time, Shree rushed to the kitchen and strted preparing food. She had to make the owners' lunch, dinner, and snack, then make her lunch. Because se didn't have enough time, she just decided to skip her lunch. She rushed, and put the food in the fridge. After she put it in, Shree rushed outside with her bookbag. At the busstand, she realized she didn't have enough money for the bus, as her landlords forced her to use the money to buy some daroo(liquor) and food for them. She didn't mind though. But, money was a problem. After school, she would try to get a job.
In the meantime, a young boy none other than Hari woke up on a soft bed with feather pillows and a silk blanket. He had a servant wake him up, give him juice, and get fluffy slibbers and a silk robe for him. After a lot of prodding, he finally got up and got ready. He wore a simple but very expensicve white and black striped shirt
After seeing the time, he skipped the aarti and just took prashad from his madhu bhabhi, he quickly rushed to his mercedes. His chaffeur was sick, so he had to drive the car after a long time. While driving, he started eating his paratha which bhabhi had packed soo lovingly for him. He quickly stuffed it into his mouth. He thought, "One down, 3 to go" On his way, he realized he had very few minutes to get to school. Hari sped up and veered through all the cars. A police car stopped him and gave him a ticket, which he just paid off quickly and then ripped it up. He had 5 min left to go to school. At the big intersection, he hit a yellow, and obviously, sped up instead of slowing down, and sneezed at the same time. Because of htat, his vision got blinded for a few precious seconds. The next momnet, he felt the car hitting a bump. He stopped the car suddenly,and got out. He was shocked. Outside his car was a girl, who had fallen unconsious and was bleeding."Oh shoot!!"
He felt guilty even though the passerbys and witnesses assured him it wasn't his fault, and that the girl had run into the stree and fallen unconscious before he hit her. Becaue of his car, a traffic jam formed, and there was no way for the ambulance to come. Hari made the decision o carrying her because the hosptial waas soo close. To due the loss of blood, Shree's heartbeat began to slow down, which made hari speed up. He finally reached the hospital. The doctors refused to check he rbecause hari couldn't fill out any forms. Hari yelled, "There is a girl unconscious here and having a dropping heartbeat and all you can care about is the stupid papers!! Or do you thihnk your dumb bill wont be paid?? " And with that he threw money in their face.
The doctors grew embarrassed and then took her for chckup. After coming outside,tehy said they found a necklace on her which showed that her name was Shree. After they went back, hari repeated, "Shree, shree, shree" He patiently waited while the doctors analized her. They needed a match for her blood, the rarest of the rarest blood type, hh.(http://www.answerbag.com/q_view/298151) otherwise, she would die. Hari then said."oh, that's ok doctor, that's my blood type. I will donate the blood."
He was led in the same room Shree was in, and watched her while his blood was being drawn. He coudln't help but notice her simplicity, naiveness, and how beautiful. Shree stirred a couple of minutes after the blood was transfered. He called for the doctor. Ater a couple of minutes, she regained consciousness. The doctor checked her pulse and pressure, and then said he would get the dischaged papaers ready. " But one thing Mr. Hari, make sure she gets enough food." Hari nodded.
In the meantime, shree wondered who this hari was. After getting discharged, she aked him by mistake, "Who is this Hari?"
He laughed and said "Im hari. By mistake, i hit you with my car right after you fainted. And what's this about not eating, Come with me, i'll get you food." She looked away and said that she didn't talk to strangers. Hari said,"ok then. hI, Im Hari. I have two brothers, a bhabhi, and one maa-like bhabhi. and you are"
"Im shree, nice to meet You!" They shook hands and then went to eat at a nearby dhaba. After seeing the rpices, Shree's eyes widened, and she ordered only water. Hari asked her why, and she told her. He said,"Dont worry, now this is on me." And he ordered 7 dishes. Shree protested, but he told her it was the least he could do.
The end.........i hope you like it.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Sweety! Liked it?!?!?! R u kidding? I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hari is soo sweet! Awww, he donated blood and bought food....so shweet! Keep up the great work, Sweety and plz continue soon!
Luv u,
Farhana
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sv_4eva

Hi Sweety! Liked it?!?!?! R u kidding? I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hari is soo sweet! Awww, he donated blood and bought food....so shweet! Keep up the great work, Sweety and plz continue soon!

Luv u,
Farhana

thnx sweety di, im glad you liked. srry loved it. Yeah, hes such a sweetie. Thanks, i'll try . Luvu too!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks Radhika for hte lovely FF.I loved it.Your characterisations are really good.Shree the sweet,innocent but poor girl and Hari the caring,loving rich boy.They meet for hte first time in very unique way.Liked that part a lot.And you provided a precious piece of informatio..'hh' type of blood.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: devashree_h

Thanks Radhika for hte lovely FF.I loved it.Your characterisations are really good.Shree the sweet,innocent but poor girl and Hari the caring,loving rich boy.They meet for hte first time in very unique way.Liked that part a lot.And you provided a precious piece of informatio..'hh' type of blood.

thanks devashree di, i raelly appreciate the comment. Yep.......i didn't wanna start off my ff with inaccurate info, so i decided to look it up.i always thought the rarest type was ab negative, but turns out i was wrong.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice FF. I really liked the characterization of Hari and Shree. Now looking forward for the next update. Do update soon. Also the Title suits the story well.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: psarada

Nice FF. I really liked the characterization of Hari and Shree. Now looking forward for the next update. Do update soon. Also the Title suits the story well.

thanks psarda, im glad you like it. I will try to update asap.i have tests now, so can't. btw, im radhika
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Radhika, I added your FF link in Shree Media Corner.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: devashree_h

Radhika, I added your FF link in Shree Media Corner.

thnx.
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Edited by bmtdluver - 16 years ago

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