Kabhi khushi kabhi gham 4 Kshitij-kumud - Page 2

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jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#11
part-6.....kshitij-kumud come back home very late.khusum
was praying in the pooja room.
Abhay shouts:where were
u? K:papa,we went 4 a movie.
A:ok,but u cud've
called up & informed us.we got
scared when u did'nt
reach home at the usual time.
Ks:sorry papa.we won't
repeat this again. A:don't
giv urself a chance 2
tell sorry again. K:yes papa.
the next day,K &
Ks were busy cooking in the
kitchen 4 their parents.
K:if it was an special curry
we cud've bought it
from the hotel telling them
that we'v made it home.
Ks:so yesterday's curry was
from the hotel?
K:ya...u thot i made it?very
funny....their
cooking was very funny &
awkward.so khusum comes & helps
them.they were embarassed. Khu
:2day's prepration is
by our children. A:ya..i
understood.not at all
tasty.ks-k got
embarrased. K:papa,i only made this
veg curry. he:very bad. Ks
laughs.K gets
angery. K:papa,chappathi is
made by me. he:seems 2
be stale & the taste is better
not 2 tell.K
laughs. razik tells them 2
make certain curries 4 them.
K:we'll make anything..A teases:don't make
anything...make only food. the
next day ,A goes 2
Ks's company.he sees the
manager scolding sum models
4 not doing their job
properly.they start crying.A
felt sympathy .he fights 4 the
girls. the manager feels
bad.Ks sees it & pulls his
dad back.he:i'm sorry
sir.this is my dad. manager:u
plz take ur dad out. Ks
:whats this papa? A:i felt
sad 4 he girls.thats
why.sorry...Ks pretends 2
be angry:papa,don't giv
urself a chance 2 tell sorry
again. Ks laughs.A
also laughs.

nightangel thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12

new parents & orphan children make their relationship so cute.... 😛dht's amazing & something new..no body feels dht they r not dhere actual parents!!!!!😊

gr8 going👏 keep it up...😛

jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#13
Part-7...Mahi's daughter simran dates with nakul

always.Abhay sees it.he tests
whether their luv is

sincere.he understands that
their luv is pure.so he

supports them. mahi fixes
simran's wedding with another

guy.so in the last moment
nakul-S decide 2

suicide.A finds it.he
advises them.since there was
no
option,he helps them 2 get
married in the register

office.he comes back as if he
does'nt no anything.M

becomes angry seeing S as
a bride.she scolds &

neglects them. A reveals 2
Kshitij that he is the 1

behind this wedding. Ks
loses his control:u saw

mahi aunty's sorrow?how cud u
giv them pain like this?u
r
so cruel.1st day onwards
u've been creating problems.u
r
becoming a burden. A
becomes upset.khusum cud'nt

tolerate this.she gets heart
attack.she gets admitted in

the hospital.khusum becomes ok.
Ks:sorry mamma.i lost
my
control.i shud'nt hav
behaved like this. Khu:its ok

beta...u plz don't giv papa
pain.u no the problems weve

faced. khusum starts telling
their story.they had only
1
son-trishul.he was spoilt.he
drinks a lot.he marries a

rich spoilt girl vidhi without
their knowledge.when

they came 2 no,they accepted
her.V gives b'th 2

2kids.Vinayak & Bhumi.they
were very close 2 their

grandparents. A find out
that V has got an

extra marital relationship
with T's friend Vinod.he

tells this 2 T.but V
turns T against A.

T:how cud u talk like this
about my innocent

wife?what kind of a dad u r?
he insults him b4 Vinod &

vidhi.both of them enjoy
it.unexpectedly hearing
V's words,T dumps them
in the old age home.they

left india 4 america.they
did'nt even enquire whether

they r alive there. Ks-K shed
tears hearing the

story.A enters the
room:get ready khusum:we'll go

back 2 the old age home.why
shud we giv burden 2 them?

Khu cries. K:plz papa,don't
go.plz don't leave
us
alone. Ks:papa,its my
fault.i 'm really sorry.plz

4give me....i beg u.plz don't
go. he holds A's

hands. A hugs ks.every1
becomes happy.they start
a
new enjoyable life. Mahi
accepts

S-N.unexpectedly
kali's uncle calls up

abhay:trishul had called up.
A was shocked.




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Posted: 19 years ago
#14
wow everything gone so fast!! heart attack, marriage, flashback etc...amazing jasminer... 👏sounds like jet epic.!!!!!😛 hmm Ekta should learn some lesson!!!😆😆😆
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#15
Part-8....Abhay tells:i'm willing 2 giv all my wealth 2
tRishul.i guess thats what he
wants now. he disconnects the
PH. Khusum:why can't he giv us
peace atleast now?
overhearing this,Kshitij-kumud
get inside the room. they
had tears on their eyes.K:if
ur son comes,will u
go back?we'll become orphans
again. Khu cries:no we
won't go..A:sure. Ks-K
become happy. they
decide 2 conduct the wedding
anniversary party of
Abhay-Khu.but they did'nt
want it. K:we've 2.once we
were not invited 4 a party.
Ks:in our party,both
orphans & the ppl who did luv
marriage can cum. they
agree. the party day...all the
colony ppl were
there.abhsy sang.Khusum
danced.suddenly a car cumes.it was
shocking that trishul gets out of
the car.he was seen
dull.did've a leg.had a
walking stick.vinayak-bhumi also
were there.they cum running 2

A-Khu:dadaji...dadima....ppl were shocked.
mahi:who r they? A-Khu
kept silent. T:i'm
their only son.but only these
orphans gave them luv. all
were shocked. A loses his
control:why did u cum
here?now u insulted our poor
children by revealing that
they r not our children.u r a
truble maker. t
weeps:curse me dad.now i'm
suffering 4 what i did 2wrds
my parents.i lost my leg in an
accident.my wife left me
& went with my own friend.i'm
physically weak.i had 2 do
sum operations.but it did'nt
bring any gud result.again
i've 2 do an operation.i might
lose my life.my children
will become orphans.i want my
parents 2 cum with me 2
luk after them. A:so we shud
leave kshitij-kumud 4
that?they only gave us luv
when we were alone.
vinayak-bhumi:plz cum with
us...now papa has becum very
nice..he does'nt scold
us,does'nt beat us. Khusum cries
in this confused state.
T:kshitij....kumud......i beg u 2
return my parents 4 my
innocent kids. K
cries...she runs 2 her
house.ks follows her.both of
them return with Abhay-khusum's
bags. K:u both hav 2 go
back....A was
shocked:what? K:now these kids need
u both more than us. khu:how can
u tolerate this?
Ks:we'll take it as a sweet
dream we had. khu
-Abhay hug them with tears.
T thanks them:i dunno how
2 thank u ppl.u'll go 2
heaven. their car
goes.ks-k cry.suddenly
K faints. she was
taken 2 the hospital. ks
was feeling difficult 2 face
others.but others did'nt feel
bad. mahi:u r sitting as
if u ppl hav dun sumthing
wrong.we've heart.we don't
blame u...kali &the DR &
K cum out of the room.
Kali:there is a sweet
news.kshitij..u r going 2 be a dad.
ks was so happy....K
was shy. garv:now don't
think that u ppl r orphans.u r
going 2 get a child 2 luv
u. ks hugs K.she gives
b'th 2 a baby.that
day unexpectedly abhay-khusum
cum there .they were
surprised. A:why?u never
expected us? Ks:we
dreamt of this beautiful
scene.but did'nt hav any hope.
khusum pampers the baby.
Ks:where is trishul. they become
sad. A:he left 2 another
world.
Ks:sorry...K:and bhumi &
vinayak...? khu:they
went 2 school.
K:papa...mamma...plz stay with
us.our child needs
grandparents.also a luvly brother &
a cute sister. Ks:yes.don't say
'no'.plzzzzz. khusum &
abhay smile with tears on
their eyes as a sign of
willingness. they all hav a
happy life again. THE END..
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Posted: 19 years ago
#16

omg!!!! jasminder...dht's really amazing!!!no words to say ...i can't express my feelings...its damm touchy!!!! particularily dh last part.....its so so so fabulious!!!! bunch of congrats to u.....!!!!!👏

in a one word..u r fiction is just "bingoooooooooooooooooooo......"👏

ok guys here dh story end...so we need some feast:

it's all here:😛

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Posted: 19 years ago
#17
Its awesome!!!
I cant believe it ended!
It is ssoooooo good and sweet!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#18
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