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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Ravjot-

Meera I lied to you. You told me not to read it and I did. Well technichally you told me not to read it and I said I wouldn't till the next day and I woke up at like 5-ish and couldn't go to sleep and I read it so that's still the next day right? So I didn't lie!

I loved how you described the pain Meher and Preet were going through and how Preet is trying to sacrifice because he thinks Meher still loves Harman and neither of them know that they love each other and this misunderstanding is causing a rift. Honestly, I loved it =) And the way you ended it with having a distance between the two was heartbreaking and I loved how you wrote it. Can't wait to read the sequel =)



Awww thanks Ravs! 😊 It is the next day! πŸ˜†

Awwww thanks so much!😳 The sequel will be coming soon πŸ˜› And it'll clear all the misunderstandings! πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Well I've gotta go out for a bit now....so I could just post it? πŸ˜›
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Posted: 15 years ago
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This part is especially for shabo24. She wanted the sequel and I did feel a bit mean with the way I ended it--so this is going to continue right from where Preet left and went into the kids room this is kinda a bit more fluffy! 😳


Meher was upset with him. How dare he walk away from her? She was his wife--she'd deal with him the next morning. She needed proper sleep now. His stupid actions had kept her awake and restless almost all night.


Next Morning


Meher awakes with the heavy feeling of something covering her. She slowly lets her eyes flutter open and sees Tannu sprawled next to her with her two legs over Meher and her head in Preet's lap who is looking down at Meher.


"Preet--tum?" Meher asks.


"I'm sorry," he whispers to her. "Tannu was insisting on sleeping with both of us last night, when I got to her room, so I tried to convince her that you were asleep already but she still brought me,"


Meher slowly pushed herself up and leaned back on the bed frame and turned to face him. "It's alright. We're still married Preet,"


Preet's eyes looked away right as she said those words, he didn't know why but he couldn't do it anymore. He wanted to tell her everything, tell her loved her, but he couldn't. She was Harman bhaiyya's. He'd have to find a way to get them together. Why was it though that his heart only felt relief when he was around her--she was his curing touch.


Chhalke Palko Ke Pichhe Chhalke Tanha Ansoo Koi
Teri Yaad Jab Sataye Woh Chhalke Chhalka Jaye Yun Hi
Iss Had Ki Jo Hai Sihaayi Sun Mere Ansoo Se Hai Bani
Mera Dard Bhi Tu Hai, Jaana Hai Dawa Tu Hi


Meher quickly got out of bed, making sure not to wake Tannu and disappeared into the bathroom.


Preet ran one of his hands through his hair. She literally was 'teasing' him. Being her cute bubbly self, always smiling never letting negative people like Maya bhabhi or even his own sister Veera ruin her happiness.


Ek Meetha Marz Dene, Aana Tum Yun Hi
Ek Dawa Ka Karz Dene Aana Tum Yun Hi
Suni Suni Raaton Mein, Khoye Khoye Khwabon Mein
Aana, Aana Yuun Hi
Ek Meetha Marz Dene, Aana Tum Yun Hi
Ek Dawa Ka Karz Dene Aana Tum Yun Hi


A little while later Preet had woken up Tannu and she had rushed off to her room, knowing her mom must be looking for her. He didn't know what to do now. He didn't have his excuse to be in the same room with Meher. Only he knew how hard it had to be to carry Tannu to his and Meher's room without waking her and her asking him about why she was in her mami and mamu's room. He decided to try to go on his regular routine as he waited for Meher to come out of the bathroom so that he could go in and get ready for work. Slowly Meher walks out and Preet felt stuck in his spot as he struggled to breath. He had seen Meher numerous times with her hair wet from the shower, but right now--there was something else in her face. She was glowing, with love. Her love for Harman. Feeling that thought made all of Preet's apprehensiveness fade away and so he casually walked past her into the bathroom. He didn't know what he'd do without her. Whenever the time came that she left him--he'd die.


Tum Jo Nahi Toh Zindagi Ke Andhiyaare Roshan Nahi
Tum Jo Nahi Toh Zindagi Ki Tasveeron Mein Rang Nahi
Chanda Nahi Suraj Nahi, Jab Tu Nahi Kuch Bhi Nahi
Thodi Chandani Lutaane Aana Tum Yun Hi
Thodi Dhup Chhidak Jaane Aana Tum Yun Hi


Later that afternoon, Meher worked her way up to Preet's mini home office in a corner of their room. "Preet, chai?"


Preet hmm's without looking up and Meher takes the opportunity to shut the door without making any sound. She tiptoes towards him slowly.


Tum Jo Nahi Toh Meri Suni Hai Dagar, Manzil Nahi

Tum Jo Nahi Toh Mere Rukhe Naino Mein Kaajal Nahi

Tum Jo Nahi Toh Mere Paav Baje Paayal Nahi


She slowly places both her hands on his eyes. "Pata hain kya?" She whispers at his right ear.


"Kya?" Preet asks.


Meher slowly takes her hands away from his eyes and he turns to face her. "Preet--jabse humari shaadi hui hain, kya maine kabhi bhi tumhe yeh eshaas diya ke main khush nahin hoon?"


"Yeh sawal?" Preet asks confused.


Meher sighs and walks away to stand by their window.


Saawan Nahi, Bhaadon Nahi
Jo Tum Nahi Kuchh Bhi Nahi


"I love you Preet." Meher lets the one lone tear escape her left eye. "I have since the day we got married--since the moment you asked my permission to marry me."


"Meher?" Preet asks.


Meher shakes her head still not facing him, "Please, mujhe bolne do," She sighs again. "I don't know ke tumhe yeh KYUN lagta hain ke main tumhare saath khush nahin hoon. You have given me more happiness than I could ever imagine. Yesterday when you came and told me that you wanted me to be with Harman, I was shocked. I had no idea that you thought I still loved him. I stopped loving him the day he left me--jo aapni gharwalo ke liye kuch nahin kar sakhta woh mere liye kya karega?"


Preet slowly stands up and walks towards her and takes her shoulders to turn her around. "Don't say anything else--not a word. Meher--this entire time, I've kept my distance ONLY because I thought you still loved Harman bhaiyya."


Meher shakes her head softly, the tears building in her eyes.


"Oye hoye, meri voti ko aisi choti baatein pe bhi rona aata hain?" He winks as she hits his shoulder. "Oh wait what line was it from that stupid movie you like?" Preet pretends to think. "Right! 'bade bade deshon mein aisi choti choti baatein hoti rehti hain,'" He puts his arms around her and hugs her close. This was the feeling he had been waiting for. She was his magical touch. The slight brush of her had made him feel like the entire world was complete.


Ek Meetha Marz Dene, Aana Tum Yun Hi
Ek Dawa Ka Karz Dene Aana Tum Yun Hi
Suni Suni Raaton Mein, Khoye Khoye Khwabon Mein
Aana, Aana Yun Hi
Ek Meetha Marz Dene Hmm Mm Mm Mm Mm
Ek Dawa Ka Karz Dene Hmm Mm Mm Mm Mm

So? How was that? I've never actually had a girl confess first, it was weird in my head, hopefully not as bad when you read it? Let me know how you all liked it! πŸ˜ƒ


Love you,

Meera😳

Edited by indiandoll89 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
that was so beutiful wow and i loved how meher confessed i mean that women is getting tossed by her ex and her husband... that was the best part thankyou
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks Ravs! πŸ˜ƒ

Thank you Shikha! πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
Awwwww! That was so sweet! Awww...You actually had me talking to my computer screen and calling Preet an idiot, though for the life of me I cannot remember which part that was!
I'm so happy Meher confessed...I wish something like that would happen on the show, y'know? Something that makes them both confess that they are falling in love with each other...*grumbles*
Love,
Bhav (:
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sourpuss

Awwwww! That was so sweet! Awww...You actually had me talking to my computer screen and calling Preet an idiot, though for the life of me I cannot remember which part that was! Awwww I'm so happy that you enjoyed it! 😳 I wasn't sure about the response I'd get, since I'm much more Premeer-ish!πŸ˜† but ohh you called Preet an idiot?πŸ˜†

I'm so happy Meher confessed...I wish something like that would happen on the show, y'know? Something that makes them both confess that they are falling in love with each other...*grumbles* I wish it would too, or maybe at least let them have some more "moments"😳
Love,
Bhav (:



Thanks for commenting Bhav! 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Meera, that was prefect! I'll come back with a longer comment.
*edited*
I love Meher's annoyance in the beginning, very justified, and Preet using Tannu as an excuse. They both just want to be together, but both are under a misconception. And Preet has no idea he's hurting his wife by pulling away.
I love, love, love the way she doesn't allow him to say anything, wanting to get everything off her chest, so that she doesn't lose nerve. It was all realistically done. And that hug, oh that hug. (need I say more?)
Love,
Radz
Edited by Anhdara13 - 15 years ago
Posted: 15 years ago
#29
You write it?? Thanks Meera...it was exactly what I expected and MORE! Very sweet...what's the popwerpuff girl theme song like...sugar and sweet and everything nice...*cringes* Something like that...but thats what the shot was like, the apprehension you showed between Meet was just great and then that hug. *pouts* I want that type of hug in real life...

--shabz
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: shabo24

You write it?? Thanks Meera...it was exactly what I expected and MORE! Very sweet...what's the popwerpuff girl theme song like...sugar and sweet and everything nice...*cringes* Something like that...but thats what the shot was like, the apprehension you showed between Meet was just great and then that hug. *pouts* I want that type of hug in real life...

--shabz



Awwww yes I wrote it, and I'm glad you liked it! 😳 I just wanted to show the whole thing properly! 😳 Ahhh I want a hug too!😳

@Radzie: will wait! πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³
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