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Posted: 16 years ago
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This scene is dedicated to meftal???..hope you like??..

Raj - kranti jaldi karo hame der ho rahi hai?.sab log hamara intazaar kar rahe honge??..(to himself)- hey bhagwaan in ladkiyon ko tayaar hone me itni der kyun lagti hai????

Kranti - jyaada chillaoge to tumaahre saath nahi aaungi??

RAj - mere saath chalkar tum mujhpar koi ehsaan nahi kar rahi ho!!!!!!!

Kranti - ehsaan hi kar rahi hun?.agar main chahu to tumahre saath party me to kya do kadam bhi tumahre sath na chalu???.wo to chaijee ka dil rakhne ke liye main tumahre saath chal rah ihun??..

Raj - mujhse shaadi karne ka faisla tumahra tha mera nahi??ab bhukto!!!!!!!!!

Kranti -dekho ??..is waqt ladai karke koi faayda nahi..agar wahan pe kisiko pata chal gaya ke hamare beech pati-patni jaise koi sambamdh nahi hai to ghar me bhi sabko pata chal jayega aur phir bauji ki tabiyat phir kharaab ho jayegi.

Raj - thik ab agar tumahra BHASHAN khatam ho gaya ho to chale????

In the party both are welcomed by raj's frnd!!!!!!

Frnd - welcome raj welcome?..kitne dino baad mil rahe hai?london se aane ke baad tune to ham eek baar yaad bhi nahi kiya?..aur to aur hame shaadi pe bhi nahi bulaya???

Raj- kya karu yaar??..lahore aane ke baad zindagii me sab kuch itna achanak hone laga ki khud bhi sabse anjaan hun?.khair.tu kaisa hai?..

Frnd - main thik hun?aaj tujhe tere kisi kareeb waale se milwana chahta hun???chal aa??.aayi ye na bhabhiji???..

Frnd - SUZI??????

Kranti - suzi?????????

RAj - suzi?????????

Suzi was a BOMBSHELL of rajs college and one of his best frnd!!!!!

But here she has worn salwaar kameez exactly same as that of ROOP in JAB WE MET.

Suzi - hello raj?.what a pleasant surprise?( she hugs him and he too hugs her passionately forgetting kranti's presence)

Kranti is jealous of suzi and their frndship and the way they met???.

Raj - suzi tum yahaan??????/

Suzi - plz raja b tum mujhge SUZANA bulao??..hamare clg waale din ab gaye.isliye ab main suzi nahi suzana hun!!!!!! Ye kaun hai ???..mujhe isse nah imilwaoge???

Raj - she's my wife KRANTI???..in his mind ( galti se ban gayi )

Suzi - hi kranti .bohot khushi hui tumse milke??( forwards her hand for a shakehand)

Kranti - ji NAMASTEY!!!!!!!!!

Suzi - ohhhh?.NAMASTEY??..

Suzi - wow raj tumhe to bohot sundar biwi mili hai!!!!!!!

Raj - meri chodo0 apni batao??.( raj and suzi leave kranti alone and talk for a very long time?..kranti is getting so jealous that she could not stop herself from drinking alcohol???.she suddenly faints and raj takes her in his arms and leaves the pary!!!!!!

Both are in cAR?..

Kranti - tum jaao na us SUZZZIIIIIIII ke paas???.

Raj - kranti sambhalo apne aap ??.tumne bohot jyada pi li hai??hey bhagwann ..kaash ghar pe sab so gaye ho???warna ye kranti to kujhe kahin ka nahi chodegi!!!!!

They reach home..kranti going on murmuring something??..raj takes her in his arms and both ahed to their bedroom?raj sneaks and goes??

Raj - kranti ?.finger on you lips???..plzzzz??.kuch mat olna warna sab jag jayenge??

Kranti - yes sir!!!!!!!!

Raj drops her in t5he bed and tries to leave but kranti hold shis hand and ?.

Kranti - mujhe chod ke mat jaao?mujhe andhere se bohot darr lagat hai?..she pulls him and keeps her head on his lap!!!!!!

Kranti - mujhe lori sunaao na???..

Raj - kya?..???????

Kranti - arre kamaal hai tumhe lori nahi aati??????

Raj - nahi......mera matlab hai ..aati hai lekin ab mujhe neend aa rahi aur tum bhi so jaao ..bohot raat ho gayi hai??.

Kranti - lekin tum mujhe chod ke mat jaana???.

Raj - achcha thik hai .lekin ab tum ab apni aankhen band karo aur so jaao??..

Kranti sleeps and raj keeps staring at her!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Modern Kranti
2222222222 Good
rally loved it
Its hilarious 2 c Kranti in a new Avatar
WOw
Pl complete it while he is staring his beautiful Wife

( Half Cooked food is not digesting )
Pllllllllllll Complete soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sasha722

Modern Kranti<br>2222222222 Good<br>rally loved it<br> Its hilarious 2 c Kranti in a new Avatar<br>WOw<br>Pl complete it while he is staring his beautiful Wife<br><br>( Half Cooked food is not digesting ) <br>Pllllllllllll Complete soon<br>



Really Kranti was so different!!!

And as mentioned by Sasha.. please complete it
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Good work Chauveen.... And Kranti asking Raj to sing lori was superb... Poor Raj... Keep the good work...

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Posted: 16 years ago
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as usual chauveen this chotu sa .......story was too cute...............😳
I wish you would have written more .....................
and that lori waala part was very funnny.............
🤣🤣
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thankuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu sooooooooooooooo much chauveen,i liked it very much,especially when asked kranti asked him to sing the lori⭐️⭐️

again thanx😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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chuveen itna acha......
2 gud
plz continue ha
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Me imagining Raj singing lori ... 😍🤣

Very sweet one Dear though too short. Will agree with Sasha, half-cooked food is injurious to health. 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: poetic

Me imagining Raj singing lori ... 😍🤣

Very sweet one Dear though too short. Will agree with Sasha, half-cooked food is injurious to health. 😳

ha ha ha😆... Arey Racha... lori sunthe sunthe kahee soo na jana.....
My head is working little bit out of control...
we all know the famous maximum used dialoge by Raj.. that
"Kranti mere baat tho sunlo... "
so his lori lines will be like this...
"Kranti.. meri lori tho sunlo...." (She will be sleeping before the arrival of his lori...😆)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Just read your short story, got me wondering what in heavens name did Kranti drink that she went out like a light 😊, I would sure like to know. On the whole the story was funny. Nice work.

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