RK post tabela funny sequence

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Posted: 16 years ago
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friends irony is that in january i had posted this funny story about serial in my kotw post and some part of my story became so true ..meri kaali zabaan aur apna serila band ho gaya😭😭😭

but phir bhi lets relive old memories and freinds read this hillarious story

which i wrote for rachna...
post tabela night ...
raj spreads his arms......to strech and what does he see kranti sitting up looking at him from downcast eyes all shy and smiling sweetly😆(is that same kranti we know)he looks at her sweetly and pulls her towards him and camera moves😡 to some goats paintings done by villagers in tabela😆😆😆. camera moves back to raj and kranti they r not hugging anymore😡😆😆 (fire that editor right away😡😆)
kranti ...ab kya hoga.....main to lut hi gayee ji(she has BBR's bhoot in her)
raj aur mera socho kranti mera takle ko dhoka diya aur tumhaara ban betha......😭😆😉
whil e raj is crying because of his lost love governor takla... kranti starts smiling sweetly...looking into infinity ..just staring😕😆
poor rajs halat was like this...😭
finally raj accepts the descision to move on with kranti and their journey begins....
both of them get out of dream land and head to see nirmal and sanjay who r all smiles to see raj and kranti blushing like this...
abhi dono think of doing some more romance....
and we witness some good hugs and good...kodak moments ...
that fountain outside raj house...skepy mentioned..dono wahin aa kar beth jaate hain haathon mein haath....aur sirf khaamoshi ki zabaan...
raj...duniya hamaare pyaar ki yuhin jawaan rahe..😳
kranti main bhi wahin rahoon mera saajan jahaan rahe...😆
do din ki zindagi hai ise yun guzzaar de
ujri hui yeh pyaar ki raahein sanwaar dein
hum tum yahaan rahein ya na rahein is ka gham nahin
lekin hamaare pyaar ka baki nishaan rahe..
main bhi wahin roon mera sajan jahaan rahe..😆
duniya mein chor jayenge hum wo nishaniyaan
bun jayengee jo pyaar ki meethi kahaaniyaan
duniya hamaare baad humein yun karegee yaad
do pyaar karne wale the par ek jaan rahe..
main bhi wahi rahoon..
duniya hamare pyaar ki....yuhin jawaan rahe...
BBR ki kahaani khatam bec kranti finds out accidenly that there is pillow beneath madhus tummy😆
both r kicked out of house forever
raj becomes ideal pati and he religeously provides all signals to krantikaris..
he ditches takla in anarkali bazzar of lahore...
kranti feels really proud of her hubby dear...
together both sing......
watan ki rah mein watan ke naujawaan shaheed ho...
pukaarte hain yeh zameeno aasmaan shaheed ho
shaheed teri maut hi tere watan ki zindagi
tere lahu se jaag uthegi is chaman ki zindagi
khilenge phool us jagah pe tu jahaan mein shaheed ho
watan ki rah mein ...
ghulaam uth watan ke dushmanon se inteqaam le..
in apne bazooon se khanjaron ka kaam le
chaman ke waste chaman ke bagbaan shaheed ho
watan ki rah mein...
pahaar tak bhi kampne lagein tere janoon se
tu aasmaan pe inqelaab likh de apne khoon se
zameen nahi tera watan hai aasmaan shaheed ho
they r both very happy and acheive freedom for thei r country single handedly along with some KK monkeys
parttion happens raj and kranti move to amritsar...
raj becomes famous laywer in independent india
and trps of the show go down the hill because of lack of masala...
and they live in ranjeet avenew happily ever after😕
and THE end...
and this is jyoti and sam after that...
finally i am able to finsh this really bad story rachna am no writer this proved it i can only steal stuff am real good at that😆
so moral of my stroy ...BECAUSE KRANTI ACTED IN NEGATIVE SO WE GOT TO SEE MORE EMOTIONAL RAJ AND NOW SOFTENING KRANTI ...SO AM ALL IN FOR WHATEVER WRITERS HAVE IN STORE..(oops chand got ur bhoot in for a min😆)
am really sorry rachna this is best i could do hope they r close to 500 words😕😭

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pari29 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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sami kab main kyaa kahoo yaar has has ke tummy dard kar rahi hainn, tumne jo apne punchies dal hain kamaml ke hainn, want more stuff life this , ase hi kaam karti rahii aur hume haaasti raho,
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh god its really very funny and different pov too. yeah agar telefilm hota to thik tha ek hi din me khatam. like kranti's pic, expression was great. abhi raat me haste huye sona parega.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sami.........wait...........just let me laugh yar.............
🤣............🤣..............🤣

o ho...u know the most....funny..
tht Raj is cryin tht he gave dhokas 2 taklu.....LOL.............😆😆
Arey yaar........ye taklu na hota to humara kya hota..........i mean iska jitna mazaak banao kum hai.....
BTW in the scene when he died i was laughin cuz the blood on his eternal takla was tomato ketchup...n it was totally visible....so red blood.........piya ke rang ka.........🤣

Sami its 2 funny yaar..........
muahs to u.........
BTW wheres ur kavi ji aka apni poet...........n also pennu is not visible yaar...

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sami......it was hilarious........🤪🤪
OMG .......I am in peels of laughter right now.......🤣🤣🤣
bechara Raj............
and Kranti thinking.... mere ghar aayega ek nana raj .
Raj feeling sorry for ditching his past love....taklu..............mujhe maaf karna taklu kranti tumse zyada sunder hai..........
🤪🤪🤪
sami let me give you a big huggie for writing this............🤗🤗
you really made my day..........

@ tetuty........you are right yaar ye taklu nahi hota to hamara kya hota.....atleast we are laughing right now at his cost........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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sami I am really fida of yrs
shayris
ijust love to 2 read
sami do u have ur site on blog if yes
pl let me kmow
as u write mashallah
keep it up
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sami .....too ....good scene...post tablela

Agar yeh great Indian laughter show hota to tum usme laughter champion hoti.


too funny ,.......sach mein...and that photo mein BABA gadi ,small sweaters ...kaha se yeh ideas aate hai ..?

taklu ko anarkali baazar mein ditch karna...🤣

would love to read more of your work.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: pari29

sami kab main kyaa kahoo yaar has has ke tummy dard kar rahi hainn, tumne jo apne punchies dal hain kamaml ke hainn, want more stuff life this , ase hi kaam karti rahii aur hume haaasti raho,

hah apurpose yehi tha na sab ko hasaana aap sab ko hansa payee..... ya i sure will do some more..😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bonai

oh god its really very funny and different pov too. yeah agar telefilm hota to thik tha ek hi din me khatam. like kranti's pic, expression was great. abhi raat me haste huye sona parega.

haha diffrent pov hum sab ka....yup yup yup.... haan tum ko khoob hasaana hai humein kyun.....aage tyaar rehna...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: tetuty66

Sami.........wait...........just let me laugh yar.............
🤣............🤣..............🤣

o ho...u know the most....funny..
tht Raj is cryin tht he gave dhokas 2 taklu.....LOL.............😆😆
Arey yaar........ye taklu na hota to humara kya hota..........i mean iska jitna mazaak banao kum hai.....
BTW in the scene when he died i was laughin cuz the blood on his eternal takla was tomato ketchup...n it was totally visible....so red blood.........piya ke rang ka.........🤣

Sami its 2 funny yaar..........
muahs to u.........
BTW wheres ur kavi ji aka apni poet...........n also pennu is not visible yaar...

haan agar takla na hota na.....to kya hota hehe..... ya unhone red colour laga diya....yaaar thanks tum ko hansa payyee ..wo kehte hain kisi ko hansa do yehi sab se important hai na thanks so much😳

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