FF--Mayur's life afta marraige.... (updated pg 2)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Soon Afta marriage

(after few days dey return 4rm honeymoon all of u'll might have read d thread whr dey went 2 paris so I din want 2 repeat all d honeymoon stuff mayb in flashbacks I'll include some honeymoon moments)

One fine morning

Nupur comes out of bath room.. drying wet hair' goes 2 d window n opens d curtains'

Nupur- hmmm.. by god..'. Kya din hai' aur yeh ek mahashay hai jo so rahe hai'

mayank?? Utho' (keepin on hands on her waist)

mayank- sone do naa'. (covering his face by blanket)

(nups climbs up on bed n tries 2 remove it 4rm his face)

Nupur- utho.. dekho mayank subah ke aath baj gaye hai.. abhi jaldi karo..

(jus den water from nup hair falls on mayank's face)

Mayank- kya kar rahi ho??? Jao yaahan se..

Nupur-jab tak tum nahi uthoge main yaahan se nahi jaaungi

Mayank- toh mat jao (n stuffs cotton in his ear der was a small jar with loads of cotton balls on the side table)

Nupur- yeh kya tha????

(mayank acts 2 sleeps peacefully)

Nupur goes 2 grab d jar jus den mayank grabs her in his arms

Nupur- mayank chodo yeh kya rahe ho???? (trying 2 free herself')

Mayank- itne asani se nahi'

Nupur- maa agayi toh?? (continues to free herslf)

Mayank- aane do' patni ho tum meri.. haq hai mera

Nupur- accha mujhe toh pata hi nahi tha' (den goes 2 his ear very seductively)

should i continue dis????? temme honestly.........

comments r welcome... gimmi some of ur ideas too... which i can add up... really confused.. don know whether u'll will like dis o not

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Shaunaki awesome yaa..👍🏼I luved it..Do continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@sam-- thank u soo much...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks ruchi... yaa will soon continue...
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really like it, keep going !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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plzzzzzzzz contuied soon i love it
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oh god sim 20, you are torturing me. i was sooo excited to read and all of a sudden it was like finished , aww God, ofcourse continue honey.
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hey amazing one!!!!....plz continue....i really cant get enough of mayur
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks a lot guys... here m updating 2nd part

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Oh I 4got 2 mention it was sunday

(mayank was very excited)

Nupur- uthossssssss

(n runs away)

Mayank- nupur???????

Hayye… yeh ladki bhi naa…

Mom (keepin juice jar on table) - nupur kyun bhaag rahi ho kya hua???

Nupur- kuch nahi maa.. who actually

Mayank interrupts

Mayank- kuch nahi maa… who pagal ho gayi hai…

Mom- mayu kyun ched rahe ho is bechaari ko???

Mayank cums out of d room screamin

Mayank- bechari?????????? Aur yeh???

Nupur- suniye ji, aapne brush kiya??? (batting her eyelashes)

Mayank- haan haan jaa raha hun….

Tokne ke alawa toh kuch aata hi nahi hai (goes in d washroom grumbling 2 himself)

Nupur- (frowns a bit n heads towards kitchen vd mom) dekha maa apne??? Hamesha chillata rehta hai… oops chillate rehte hai..

Mom- nupur tum yeh kya aap, suniye, chillate lekar baith gayi ho.. sidha sadha tum bolo naa.. dekho beta yeh purane jamane ki baat hai aaj ke jamane mein pati aur patni barabar hote hai.. aur tum log toh ek dusre ko colg ke time se jante ho toh phi aise kyun?? kya mayu tumhe aisa respect deta hai nahi naa??? Toh tum kyun bolti ho??? Tum bolo usko aap bulane ki koi jarurat nahi hai..

Mayank comes out 4rm washroom with wet hair n towel in his hand wiping his face

Mayank- maa, mera breakfast ready hai kya???

Nupur- patience word ka P bhi nahi hai tum mein..

(nupur comes out screaming n places his plate infront of him… pouring juice into his glass.. n takes towel from his hands 2 dry his hair)

Mayank- yeh kya kar rahi ho??? (frowning)

Nupur- tumhare baal sukha rahi hun.. koi problem??? (givin a raised eyebrow look)

Mayank (makin a face)- nahi (he din have ne other option.. as u'll knw he cant say no 2 nups)

Nupur starts 2 dry his hair

Mayank- mere baalon ka satyanash karogi tum ek din..

Mom- mayank chup… ek toh yeh bechari

Mayank (interrupts)- aap isko bechari bulana band karo… aap nahi jaanti yeh kaise hai..

Nupur- accha.. tum batao main kaise hoon???

(giving him wicked look)

Mayank- arre sweetheart tum to bahot sweet ho.. (trying 2 catch her)

Nupur blushes runs away 2 kitchen

While mom laughs

Mom-kyun chedta rehta hai tu usko???

Mayank- kya karu maa?? Maja aata hai..

(both laughing)

Mom-pagal, chal jaldi kar train ekdum time par hai..

(I jus thought I'll send mom sumvr so dat mayor can romance khullam khulla, well I dunno where 2 send her jus think she is goin out of town.. m thinkin of sendin her permanently but I knw u'll will bash me up.. so I'll bring her back sometimes n have some cute trio scenes but 4 now she is going your thoughts are required 4 this point)

mayank- maa, aapki packin ho gayi???

Nupur- sab kuch le toh liya naa aapne???

Ticket rakh di purse mein???

Main paani ki bottle laati hun..

(n goes 2 get it 4rm kitchen)

Mayank half smiles

Mom- mayu sach mein bahot pyaari hai… (pulls his cheek) acchi pasand hai teri…

Nupur gets d bottle n keeps it on table

Mom-arre main who papers toh rakhna bhul hi gayi..

(I dunno wat paprs usko andar bhejna tha to bhej diya)

Mayank- nupur, paani pass karna

Nupur fills a glass of water n hands him ova n was about 2 leave

Mayank- kya hua???

Nupur-kya???

Mayank- wohi to main tumhe pooch raha hun.. kuch bol kyun nahi rahi ho???

Nupur- bol toh rahi hun (n walks)

Mayank follows her 2 their room

He holds her hand n turns her

Mayank- bolo kya hai???

Nupur- bola naa kuch nahi

He goes closer 2 her

Nupur- chodo mujhe

Mayank- nahi

Nupur-chodo

Mayank- naa

Nupur- ek baar bolne par samajh mein nahi aata chodo

(frees herslf n goes out)

Mom-nupur mayank kaha hai??? Der ho rahi hai..

Mayank- chalo maa

Mom- (nupur takes aashirwad 4rm her) beta khud ka aur is pagle ka khayal rakhna (hittin mayu on head)

Khana time par khana

Ladna mat (both look at each othr)

Mayank- chalo maa, der ho rahi hai..

---N dey leave---

hope u'll like dis...

comment guys...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great update!! hehe...I can smell the romance coming on now....!😉😉

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