Dill mill gaye-picking up the loose ends!

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rose

@rose82

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Posted: 16 years ago

This is dill mill gaye in the way i envision it...episode by episode...picking up those loose ends the creatives left

nikki:dr modi ki toh watt lag gayee

anjie:kya hua nikki..itni khush kyun ho?

atul:haan haan nikki,itni khush kyun ho?

nikki:arey..pata hai...blah blah(u know what😉)

atul:wah nikki mere sher...us abhimanyu ki toh taayi taayi fish kar di...kuch aur help chahiye toh main hoon na...accha idea doonga

nikki:tere paas ideas ke liye aane se pehle mein chullu bhar paani mein doob jaaungi😆

next day

abhi is busy writing something in the lab..nikki passes by

abhi is silent and engrossed in his work.nikki wants to have some fun again..

dr modi...lagta hai aap busy hai?

modi silent....and jotting down some notes.

nikki:hello...mein aapse(and takes the pen to catch his attention)

abhi holds her hand tightly,pulls her towards him,looks into her eyes and says

''mein aapke baare mein galat sochta tha...in do din mein,main har ek second sochta raha ki meine tumhare saath galat kiya..mein apne hi nazro mein gir gaya tha.yeh ehsaas mujhe zindigi mein pehli baar ab hua...woh bhi aapke wajah se,dr nikita!aur is kissa ko aapke pyaare dost ke saamne mazaak udaane ke liye bhi shukriya.mein galat tha....socha tha ki ek dost bani...lekin mein galat tha...akela hu,akela rahunga''

and leaves the room with his killer angy looks.

nikki is shocked with a single tear in her eye...she looks back at the previous incidents...flashes appear...by now a drop falls on her hand....she brings her hand to her eye level and looks at the tear drop...

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rose

@rose82

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Posted: 16 years ago

nikki gets a shock of her life...she goes to the locker room thinking all that happened.Then suddenly she gets a call on her phone while in locker room...

haan komal...arey bhai...poochne ki baat hai kya??zaroor aa sakti ho!............of course mere ghar mein koi nahi hai...........haan,mein tumhe yaha ke saare doctor friends se milwa doongi,pehle tum college mein admission toh karva lo!!......haa baba...DR ATUL SE BHI MILWA DOONGI...!!arey bhai...tumse peeche kaun chudana chahta hai??tum aao toh sahi!

muskaan hears this...''hey nikki...kaun hai yeh komal??''

nikki"yaar muskaan...meri ek neighbour thi,meri bahut acchi friend hai...vo abhi sanjeevni ki college block mein admission karva rahi hai..toh yaha mere saath rehne ke liye aayi hui hai..

muskaan""accha..toh hamare baare mein kyun pooch rahi thi?aur haa...ye atul ko kyun pooch rahi thi😉'

nikki"hamari bahut baatein hoti hai...toh meine sabke baare mein bataaya hai...atul ki love story ko sunke toh vo atul ki fan ho gayi...pata nahi kyun....chal chod yaar...dr kirti ke paas jaana hai..chal bye

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Mahima

@cutie_mahima

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Posted: 16 years ago

Heyyy!!
yayyy!! u started a FF!!! =]
i am sure i will LOVE it!!!
and the first parts are FAB!!
plzzz cont soon and plz PM me when u update!! =]
<333
Mahima

P.S: may i know ur name?

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rose

@rose82

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Posted: 16 years ago

rahul comes just then and finds Muskaan alone...he tries to walk closer but muskaan just walks away.rahul holds her hand, ''muskaan..meri baat toh suno''

''kya sunu??bolo rahul?jo hua,uska mujhe koi afsos nahi....mein teri raah har din,har pal karti rahi...ki kab rahul aayega.ab tum aa gaye...lekin is muskaan par muskaan kyun nahi hai?yeh kabhi socha hai tumne?''

rahul,''mujhe pata hai...aur isme meri hi galti hai..lekin meri majboori toh samjho''

''kya samjhu?tumhari aisi kaun si pareshani hai...jo tum mere saath share nahi kar sakte?'kya meine tumhe apne bhai ke baare mein bataya nahi?''

rahul,''vo alag hai''

M:kya alag hai?kya alag hai?agar tumhe batana nahi hai...toh bhagwaan ke liye mere zindagi se chale jaoo...mujhme itni shakti nahi hai,ki mein tumhe saamne paau,par tumhe apna naa keh saku!!!!😭

R:tujhme vo shakti bhi nahi hai ki sun paao

M:tumhare bina meri zindagi adhoori hai rahul... tum mujhe is adhoorepan ki kaaran bataana nahi chahte..ya mujhe is laayak hi nahi samajhte?

R and M look at each other

episode ends.

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rose

@rose82

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Posted: 16 years ago

thank you mahima!!!!ur words are really encouraging!!!!my name is deepa!nice to meet u mahima!😃

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Mahima

@cutie_mahima

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: rose82
thank you mahima!!!!ur words are really encouraging!!!!my name is deepa!nice to meet u mahima!😃

you're most welcome deepa!!! =]
it was really nice meeting u too!!😊😃

and this episode was awesome too!! totally loved it!!! =]

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26javey

@26javey

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey i just read your fic and its great

i love it

plz cont soon

can you pm when you update

Javeria

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rose

@rose82

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Posted: 16 years ago

thank you!i try to make each episode short so that its easy to read...hope no one gets bored.yup..i'll pm u and thanks to both of you for the lovely comments!