Zindagani~FINAL EPIDOSE UPDATED 3/10 PG54 - Page 21

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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome job will continue frm herez
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SPECIAL THANX TO GULI FOR HELPING UPDATE!

Kshitij and Kumud are talking.

Suddenly Kumud feels dizzy n sick

she runs into the bathroom n throws up

She comes out

Ks: kumud r u ok

K: yes probably jus sumthing I ate

KS: r u sure

K: yes

KS: no we shud have u go c a doctor

K: no I m fine it ok

KS: are u sure

K: yes!

Kumud works around the rest of the day


In the evening

Kshitij: Kumud lets go out for dinner...just me n u

K: no Kshitij. Priya is home we'll have 2 take her

KS; yes plz

K: what bout preeya

KS; there are many servants she can tell them what she wants plz

KS; ok baba fine

k; Where are we going?

ks; its a surprise

K: plz tell

KS: shhhh get ready in 5 min and we will leave ok

Kumud wears a gorgeous red sari she is puts sindoor on

She is looking for neclace but then Kshitij comes with it

He puts it on her n kisses her on the cheek

K: I LOVE U

KS: I LOVE U 2
Priya sees n gets jealous

Kumud n Kshitij are walking off

ks: Priya me n Kumud r goin out we wont be bak till late u tell ram singh wat u want he'll make it bye

P: bye..(says in agry manner)

Kumud takes Kshitij to this realli expensive resterauny

he has all of Kumud favorites ordered

Then she sees many people they all say "surprise"

Kshitij kisses Kumud on the cheek

KS"HAPPY BIRTHDAY"

K; u remembered...even I forgot...'

KS: how can I ever forget the most iportant day in the world

He gived Kumud a small box?

Kumud opens it it has keys in it

Kshitij takes Kumud to the window and she sees a beatiful new car with a bow

K: oh my gosh..kshitij thank u

They hug

they celebrate the rest of the evening together

They come home all happy

Priya gets jealous

Kshitij: Priya get out of mi house

Kumud looks confused


SO does Priya


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Posted: 19 years ago
AWESOME!!!! I think Kshitij found out the truth about Priya!!! I dunno though.
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Posted: 19 years ago
Awesome yaar....u just HAD to stop there!!!...plz continue soon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Kshitij+Khumud

AWESOME!!!! I think Kshitij found out the truth about Priya!!! I dunno though.



ya....i think sooo to!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago

omg!!!! k+k u back hey bingooooooooooooooooooooooooo

bingoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo😆

aur ake hi sixer maar di!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😛

hdt's really fabulious!!! fantastic!!!! gr888888888888 going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏

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Originally posted by: nightangel

omg!!!! k+k u back hey bingooooooooooooooooooooooooo

bingoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo😆

aur ake hi sixer maar di!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😛

hdt's really fabulious!!! fantastic!!!! gr888888888888 going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏



nighangel! I just love ur comment. readin ur comment make mi fan-fics feel special. juss wanna thanks. frm now on I m goin 2 call u mi sister😊😊😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
DEDICATED TO MY SIS NIGHTANGEL

Priya: what

KS: I know that u have been jealous of Kumud

P: u must have been mistaked she is like mi friend

KS: stop ur acting now that ur caught tell the truth

K: Kshitij whats goin on????

KS: Do u want to know y priya stayed back?

K: y? wasnt she sick

KS: no, she was lieing. she stayed back cuz she wanted to creat problem b/w me n u

KS: Even I had not suspected her till that one night

K: what night

KS; y dunt u tell what u did?

Priya; yes yes yes. I did all this. I loved Kshitij since forever since Iknew him n he married u. I tried taking u mangal surtra and u got it bakk. nutting work. u guys r jus 2 damn close

KS: that night I saw priya taking it. i was confused but then I flowwed her and pretended i knew nothing to get to the bottom. I was goin 2 tell u immediately but then I though y not do ths gppd deed on ur birthday

KS slaps priya and throws all the things out

AT THE DOOR
KS: Never show ur face

P: I will b back one day and have u beg and i will kill tha kumud

Kshitij slaps her agin

and kicks her out

Kumud is just shocked

SUDDENLY; she faints

Kshitij runs to Kumud he hold her

He carries her to her bed the doctor comes

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oh u continued!! i wrote the next part!!!!! ahh.. okay!!!!!
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P cant take it

She's about to explode!!!!!

She wants him!!!

She goes in the room!!!!!!!

She is pacing back and fourth!!!!!!!!

K passes by!!

He comes in

She sees him

She smiles

K: Whats wrong??? Are you okay?

P: I am fine!!!

K: U don't seem fine!!!!!

P: Well something has been bothering me!!!

K: What?

P is like should I tell him!!

She doesn't know!!

Kumud comes

P is like why does she have to come!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kumud smiles!!!!

Saakshi calls her

So she leaves

P is like thank god she left!!

K is about to go

P tells him not to go

K: Why?

She just tells him to stay w/ her!

Which he does!!!

Then he starts talking about Kumud!!!

P is like oh no!

He just talks about her and what not

She gets fed up

And she tells him to stop it

K is shocked!!!

P: Kumud Kumud Kumud!!!!!!! IS that all you can talk about?

K is like whats ur problem!!

P starts yelling at him

And then she confesses that she loves him

K is shocked

K: Do you realize what u are saying?

P: Yes!!!! I love you!

She starts going crazy on him!

K is getting mad!!

She's saying don't leave etc…

Kumud is coming back!!!!!!!

P: I love you!!!!!!!

Kumud hears!

She is shocked

And she says I know you love me too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She hugs him

K is shocked!!!

Kumud watches this

And she is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kumud: What is going on here??

K sees

He is shocked!!!!!!!!!

P sees her!!!

P starts talking crap to Kumud!!!

Kumud's eyes pop out!!!!!!!!

K: P stop it!!!

P: tell her that u don't love her and u love me!! Come on tell her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

K is shocked!!

Kumud is shocked

She leaves from there!!!!

K watches her leave

He's like oh no!!!!



The End!

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