challo phir tussi 1 ghanta wait karo, puri medicine lekar jald jald aati hun, phir batana effect kiya ya nahi.. okk..... ab mai ja rahi hun, nahi dn't take me wrong abhi marne ka irrada nahi hai, mai sirf india-forums se ja rahi hun.... he hee hee.. 1 ghante ke liye...
Originally posted by: anupama96
ab thooo ek ghantey hogayiii
ab kaha hooo yaar
ab ankhey mein fruits bhi horahi haiiii jaldi aakey post karo nahi tho fruits ripe hokey gir jayegiiii 😆
Part-84
A: pyar huh.. (he laughed fakely) pshycho hai… chal abhi jaata hun, agar piche se kuch problem hui to call kar diyo….(saying this he goes near reception……)
As soon as he did sign on register, he found one card, on it's envelope it's written janaab thoda muskuraiye, aapki muskaan par koi dilo jaan se fida hai… armaan makes a face… then took his car keys and goes out….
Opened his car and settled on seat, again found one red rose with a note…
Janaab apni deewani se milne ja rahe ho, thodi si to chehre pe khushi laiye…. I promise you aaj ka din aapke yaadgar dino mai se ek hoga… ab aap isse hi padte rahenge ya gaadi bhi start karenge….challiye jaldi aaiye… humse aur intejar nahi ho raha…….
HBA
Armaan looked here and there, thinking may be she's around him that's why she knew about his every reaction, but didn't find anyone, he start driving and with in 15 minutes he was in front of park… and surprised to found no one around (common people), anyways he moved towards gate and stopped to see some children standing in his way holding flowers and wearing different color caps…
armaan mumbles ho na ho jarur kissi pagal khaane se bhagi hui hai… he again looked at children, this time little confused coz they were standing in a very specific order as though making something or want to convey something…. Armaan wants to cross them but stopped out of curiosity, he wants to know why they're standing like this… like there were 6-7 steps and the children were standing heightwise, some on 1st,some on 2nd.. and so on till last step……. Armaan again stepped back from 1st stair and looked them confusingly… they're standing like……
* * * * * (5th step)
* * * * * * (4th step)
* * * * * * * * (3rd step)
* * * * * * * * (2nd step)
* * * * * * (1st step)
somehow armaan concluded that they're making 3 alphabets i.e HBA par ye hba ka matlab kya hai, kal raat se pata nahi kitni baar pad chukka tha hba, eeeeeeeee ye ladki mujhe pagal kar degi….. (irritatedly hold his head)
then paced up, as soon as he reached on last step, he at once forgot to blink his eyes…then came in present and shaked his head mumbled armaan ye kya kar raha hai, tu yaha uss ladki se picha chudwane aaya hai, naaki uske arrangements dekhkar kho jaane ke liye…
his mind saying: par yaar jo marji keh le bahut achi decoration kar rakhi hai wo bhi sirf tere liye….
He again shook his head ye mai kya soch raha hun, decoration se bhi koi impress hota hai bhalla, aur isme kaunsi badi baat hai koi bhi kar le ye to…. Par the question is that ki isse kaise pata challa ki mujhe comics pasand hai….. then again mumbled chal chod na kyun dimag challa raha hai jo kaam karne aaya hai kar aur kalti maar yahan se…..
Par he was little confused that why she did all the arrangements, she just want to meet him then why these arrangements, then again thinking mai kyun itna pareshan ho raha hun…
After the stairs one bridge kind path follows from which one single person can pass at one time followed by park… and from last stair you can get the over view of whole park… the whole bridge was decorated with comics, that too stylishly, as soon as armaan took one step forward i.e first step on bridge…. There was rain of multicolored and sparkled snowball, mixed with trimmers and stars, looking very graceful, armaan was again surprised, sometime looking above, sometime down wondering from where it's falling.. all his way filled with sparkles …. And it continued till he reached at the second end of bridge, as soon as he stepped on ground, in sand it's written followed by candles(*)
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
* jab jab aapke kadam hamari aur badhenge, *
* aap apni jindagi ko Aise hi jagmagata hua payenge, *
* chuu nahi sakta aapki jindagi ko koi bhi andhera, *
* beshak roshni karne ke liye hum apne haatho ko jalayenge *
* HBA *
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
armaan for the first time felt little curious, pata to challe kaun hai ye, pata nahi kyun aisa lagta hai jaise bahut ache se jaanti hai mujhe, meri pasand, napasand sab pata hai…. lets see……
Right after this, his mystery gal had made a path whose boundary was defined by bucket of flowers that was placed on ground with little gaps and in between the boundary, whole path was covered with hand prints without gap as if some one had pressed his/her hands tightly on ground, that marks were till that point where his mystery gal was actually waiting for him….
He start moving forward, and was stunned… how could she love him that much, his mind kept on saying…Don't know why par armaan ki himmat nahi hui unn haatho ke nishano par apne shoes rakhne ki, he opened his shoes, may be due to respect or may be coz he doesn't want to insult her feelings….
his anger vanished, he decided to talk with her calmly and request her not to irritate him in future by sending these kind of notes….
he stopped in front of one sweet and eyecatchy place, that was like 4 pillar were arranged at 4 corners, making a square and from all the sides covered with curtains of pearls that were waving due to wind, producing a very sweet sound that was directly going to heart… and in between one girl was standing, obviously waiting for armaan, armaan couldn't see her face as her back was facing…. She was wearing red top with white long skirt…..
Armaan slightly moved forward and entered in, that girl without looking said….
Hume pata tha aap yaha jarur aayenge, hamara pyar aapko yahan kheench ke le hi aayega…. Par aapne apne shoes kyun uttare, humne to aapki raahon mai apne haath bichaye taaki aapki jindagi hamesha phulon si khili rahe, aur agar kabhi koi kaanta aa bhi jaaye to uska dard aapko nahi hume ho…. taaki Jab jab koi bhi kaanta aaye hum haath rakhe aur aap unn par chalte jaayen…..
Armaan was first shocked that how she came to know about his shoes, but then ignoring her words…
A: (very sweetly and peacefully)aakhir aap kaun hai aur mujhse chahti kya hai?? kyun mujhe itna pareshan karti hai??
G: (smiled) har baar to batati hun ki aapki deewani hun, aisi deewani jisse aapke siwa kuch aur naajar hi nahi aata, aisi deewani jiska mann karta hai ki wo aapke liye kuch aisa kar gujre jaisa aaj tak kissi ne kissi ke liye na kiya ho, par samajh nahi aata ki aisa kya karun…. Kitna pyar karti hun kaise dikhaun mai….
A: dekhiye aap jo bhi hai please mujhe iss tarah pareshan karna band kijiye, mai riddhima ke alava kissi aur se na pyar karta tha na karta hun na kar sakunga..
G: aur hum bhi yehi kehna chahte hai ki hum sirf aapse pyar karte the, hai aur rahenge… jab se pyar ka matlab jaana hai tab se sirf aapko uss matlab mai paaya hai…aapke alava mai kissi aur ke baare mai soch nahi sakti….
A: to wo aapki problem hai, mujhe aapki baaton se koi effect nahi padta… aapne jo karna hai karti rahiye par please mujhe pareshan karna band karo…. Aapki wajah se meri aur riddhima ki bhi ladai ho gai, mai aur koi problem nahi chahta, so please kindly leave us alone….
G: meri jab tak saansein challegi tab tak aapka picha karna nahi chod sakti… aap to meri manjil hai, aur apni manjil ko bhala koi kaise chod sakta hai and about riddhima to usne aapse ladai ki kyunki usse aap par vishwas nahi hai..
A: (cutting her in between, and little loudly) riddhima ke baare mai bolne ka hak aapko kisne diya, she's mine aur uske baare mai kissi ko bolne ka koi hak nahi hai… better mind your own business….
G: (turned towards him, hiding her face with burka) oops so sorry, mera aapko gussa dilwaane ka koi iraada nahi tha, bas jo laga wo bol diya…
A: mujhe aapki baatein sun ne mai koi interest nahi hai, just request karne aaya tha ki ho sake to mujhe pareshan karna band kijiye…
G: aur jo aap dusro ko pareshan karte firte hai wo?? (armaan felt as if he knew this voice, he tried to look her face but she turned back)
A: matlab????
G: (as if trying to handle situation) matlab aap khud se hi puchiye…. Aapke kaaran hum kitna pareshan rehte hai, sochte hai ki kab aap hamara pyar accept karenge, kab apnayenge hume…. Bataiye iss se badi pareshani koi ho sakti hai???
A: (again irritated) aapko ek baar samjhane se samajh nahi aata kya, kaha na ki mai riddhima…
G: (cutting him) oh ho kya riddhima riddhima laga rakha hai, wo to tumse aaj ke din bhi ladke baith gai, kitna special din hai aaj tumhare liye, agar tumse pyar karti hoti to tumse kabhi na ladti…
A: haan shayad jayda hi pyar karti hai, tabhi bardash nahi kar payi tumhari letters ko… (girl hits her head…)
G: aapko pata hai ki aap duniya ke sabse bade budhu insaan hai…. jise kuch samajh nahi aata…
A: (first try to understand the meaning of her words, but then ignoring it) mujhe aapki bematlab ki baaton mai koi interest nahi hai, maine jo kehna tha keh diya, agar aap mujhe pareshan karna band kar degi to bahut aabhari rahunga aapka….
G: nahi pareshan karungi bilkul bhi pehle waada kijiye ki aap mujhe hamesha pyar karenge… (saying this she goes near him and put her head on his shoulder)
A: (moved forward) tum pagal ho gai hai kya???
G: ji aapke pyar mai…..
A: mera kaam ho gaya, ab mujhe chalna chahiye…(he turned)
G: abhi to aapka kaam shuru bhi nahi hua aur aap chalne ki baat kar rahein hai… jaan na
nahi chahenge ki mai kaun hun, kaisi dikhti hun…
A: jaan na chahta tha, par ab nahi, socha chehra dekh ke karunga bhi kya…
G: mai to suggest karungi ki aap ek baar chehra dekh lijiye, kya pata aap apni basket ko bhul hi jao…
A: basket ko bhulna.. (he laughed) majak kar rahi..(then stopped, getting something)
G: kya hua??? Ruk kyun gaye???
Armaan turned back and looked that girl deeply, she got little nervous and immediately turned back…
A: tumhe kaise pata riddhima ko mai basket kehta hun???
G: ( thinking acha tum itne samajhdaar ho ki cross questioning kar sako, anyways again tried to mislead him) ohh wo, ab tumhe itne ache se jaanti hun to ye bhi to pata hi hoga ki tum kisse kya kehte ho… (armaan thought ki point to hai iski baat mai, jab itna kuch jaanti hai mere baare mai to ye bhi jaanti ho hogi….. he again turned to go….. )
Where as girl from the other side shaked her head and smiled, she hold his hand…
G: kaha ja rahe ho??? (in her original voice)
A: (from back) leave my hand…
G: ji nahi tum mujhe cake khilaye bina nahi jaa sakte….
A: (again ignoring her wordings and in angry tone) maine kaha mera haath chodo, mujhe hospital jaana hai, riddhima meri wait kar rahi hogi….
G: aisa kaise ho sakta hai??
A: ji haan wo mera intejaar kar rahi hogi…
G: wohi to, wo tumhara intejar kar rahi hai.. aur tum phir usse chod ke ja rahe ho…
A: (not hearing her)maine kaha mera haath chodo, riddhima hospital mai…
G: (cutting him) riddhma hospital mai nahi hai, kyunki wo tumhare saamne khadi hai…(little loudly)
A: mujhe jaane do, uski surgery bhi khatam hone waali hogi… (this time riddhima removed burka from her face and again pulled his hand tightly, so that he could see her face….) maine kaha… (he stopped, his mouth remained opened with shocked look)
A: riddhima tum????
R: acha tumhe lagta hai ki mai riddhima hun, usse to hospital mai hona chahiye tha…tumhe galat fehmi hui hai mai riddhima nahi hun, uski duplicate hun….
A: riddhima.. (still in shock)
R: kab se chilla rahi thi tab to sunai nahi diya, jaane do, jaane do ki rat lagaye hue the, jaise tumhe iske alava kuch aur bolna na aata ho…
A: just stop it riddhima… (riddhima stopped) to ye kya sab tum..
R: (cutting him) ji haan mai hi aapki secret admirer hun, aur batao kaun tumhe itna pyar kar sakta hai, bolo bolo… koi hai iss duniya mai???
A: (cuming in senses) pyar ya pareshan… oh my god 3 mahine se tum mere piche padi ho haath dhoke….
R: nahi armaan, jaruri nahi hai hamesha haath dhoti thi, kabhi kabhi bina haath dhoye bhi tumhe letter likh deti thi…
A: it's not funny riddhima, pata hai mai kitna pareshan tha… (little louder)
R: ohh calm down, kyun blood pressure bhada rahe ho apna, maana ma doctor hun, par aapne saath medicines lekar nahi ghumti…
A: riddhima tum na….
R: haan bolo mai na, mai na……..
A: riddhima tum bahut bu…
VO: HAPPY BIRTHDAY ARMAAN……( Dekho sabko pata chal gaya ki riddhima ye sab kuch kar rahi thi, bas apne armaan ko chodkar…bahut hi budhu hai…….)
Okkk that's it for today…
Nice predictions and nice guesses………
to 7th may ko hamare armaan ji ka b'day hota hai……..
Aaj to bas secret admirer ke baare mai pata challa hai.. b'day abhi baaki hai mere dost, par wo Monday ko manayenge……. I think phir se 2 parts mai…. Monday and may be Tuesday also…. Aaj to just riddhima ki preparations thi.. abhi celebrations baaki hai..
Precap: R: jhut na bolo, raat ke 12 baje se abhi tak tumhe 100 baar b'day wish kar chukki hoyungi…. 12 baje wo booke, yaad hai… phir itni pyari si hug ki thi… tumhe kya laga mai so chukki hun??? Budhu aisa kabhi ho sakta hai, tumhe b'day wish kiye bina so jaungi…
A: happy b'day to ek baar bhi nahi bola na tumne mujhe….
R: pata hai mujhe laga tha ki tum khud hi samajh jaoge ki ye sab mai kar rahi hun…. Kitne clues chodde tumhare liye, par……. Na tum meri writing pehchan paaye, na tum mere lipstick marks pehchan paaye, na tum meri aawaj pehchan paaye, na tum decoration se judge kar paaye ki ye sab maine hi kiya hoga… na tum mere haatho ke nishano ko pehchan paaye.. tum kuch bhi nahi pehchan paaye… saari duniya ko pata chal gaya par abhi tak mere budhu armaan ko nahi pata chala….
After that some romantic moments and touching words from riddhima to armaan……
Ab batao ki kaisa laga update, mujhe pata hai ki jayda shock to laga nahi hoga tum sabko, sabne almost guess hi kar liya tha… anyways… hope tumhara wait karna bekar na gaya ho….
Tuesday se mere college test shuru hai, waise unki value nahi hoti, par continuation mai hai aur dene bhi compulsory hai…. waise to update karti rahungi par agar bychance kissi din na kar payi to surely next to next week 5 updates hongi…. Okk…
Challo ab mai chalti hun… neha ji pet ka headache kaisa hai????
Luv u all….
Ishanki…….
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