A poem by me to Gurmeet

please tell me how is my poem😛

will gurmeet read this poem😭

no one is replying 😭

Originally posted by: rishi4u

A poem by me😛

Gurmeet that is unique
Gurmeet that is one of a kind
Gurmeet that is perfect
Gurmeet who is hard to find
Gurmeet that is sweet
Gurmeet that is perpetually fair
Gurmeet that you know
Will always be there
Gurmeet with an amazing spirit
Gurmeet with a striking heart
Gurmeet that is trustworthy
Gurmeet that is smart
Gurmeet that assuages your pain
Gurmeet that can dry your tears
Gurmeet with unrestricted love
Gurmeet that can alleviate your fears
Gurmeet with an exquisite smile
That could never be ignored
Gurmeet that's never been hurtful
Gurmeet that is easily adored
Gurmeet that is respectful
Gurmeet who is loved by all
Gurmeet that is relied upon
Gurmeet to never let fall
Gurmeet you can talk to
His compassion is known by a glistening glow
Just by sparking her remarkable light
The whole world will know
What a great and amazing person he is
Gurmeet I shall never forget
he is the greatest ever been known
Best of all the Man I've ever met'

wow rishi its a great poem, whr ur creative mind b4👏

Originally posted by: rishi4u

will gurmeet read this poem😭

we all know gurmeet visit this forum, i wish he should read it😛

Originally posted by: rishi4u

no one is replying 😭

don't worry rishi every one has some schedule, when they come in forum and read ur poem they will definitely repy and appreciate your work. 😛

Originally posted by: rishi4u

Best of all the Man I've ever met'

Please share with us how and where you met him😛

the poem is amazing.GREAT WORK!

The poem is great, but just one correction, generally in english when you talk about a living being you are not to use 'that', so either remove 'that' and make it Gurmeet is .... or change it to Gurmeet who is.... Good Luck!