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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi all,
This is my first FF in RKAB forum. I must say thanks to Raju for giving me inspiration for starting my FF.
I have tried something different as this story was running in my mind from last few days. Hope u will like it....

Before starting actual story I will explain you plot to get more in this story.

With the time, Saksham is married to Niharika. Rudra and Bhumi are as it is. Rani is pregnant with Yudi's child. She is expecting child in few days. She is in her maayaka for her first pregnancy. As it's going to be first grandson/granddaughter for RS, he has decided to announce Yudi as next King once his grandson/granddaughter step into this world. BR is still on bed and there is no improvement in her.

For CR its crucial time as she at loosing end. Coz once this child is born she is going to loose everything. So finally her great mind comes up with plan to kill Rani. She pays big amount to nurse(dai from village) who is going to take care of Rani during her labour pain. Her plan is clean, to give poison to Rani as soon as labour pain starts. So Rani and her child will not be able to survive. Yudi will be in great shock after Rani and his child are dead and he won't be able to handle anything. Thus its clear way for Rudra to become next King. With this plan no one will ever doubt her, coz she will not be present when Rani dies.

Chapter 1: Introducing Raja of this story

Everyone is expecting good news from Rani in a week time. Yudi is missing Rani very much. He takes permission from RS and CR to go to Rani's village and meet her once. Saksham-Niharika pull leg of Yudi saying he can't even wait for few days as his baby and Rani will be soon in Mahal. But Yudi is in his own world as he is getting some feeling, something bad is going to happen. CR is very much happy and she talks to herself that "It's going to be last meeting of Yudi and Rani."

Yudi comes to village and meets everyone. Suddenly labour pain starts for Rani. Yudi becomes very much tensed seeing Rani in this condition. Amma assures Yudi that everything will be fine. Amma sends munna to call dai immediately. Dai arrives with great plan in her mind to give poison to Rani. Dai asks everyone to leave her and Rani alone. But Yudi interrupts and says he would like to stay with Rani when she is in so much pain. Amma and Dadi try to make Yudi understand that it's not possible. However Yudi is not convienced and he asks Amma and Dadi to stay with Rani all the time. Amma and Dadi assures him that they will be there with Rani. Amma asks Yudi to wait outside.

Yudi calls to Mahal and explain them what is the situation. RS asks Yudi to inform everything to mahal.

Dai gives poison to Rani along with medicine. Poison starts affecting Rani. Rani's condition becomes worst with time. Dai is very much happy that she will get big amount from CR for her work. Dadi and Amma are worried about Rani's condition. At one time,

Dai comes outside and explains Yudi that Rani's condition is worst and she will not be able to save Rani and her kid. Yudi is in great shock after hearing this. Amma ask Yudi they can only pray this time to god.

Yudi runs to nearby temple. He prays to god for saving his love. Dadi finds something wrong with Rani's condition. Dadi's doubt become strong after seeing blue neck of Rani.

Dadi immediately understand its impact of poison and she suspect Dai. Dadi calls munna and sends him for some urgent work. Munna comes back along with some jadibuti. Dadi ask Amma to give it to Rani immediateky. Dai tries to interrupt Dadi, but Dadi ask her to stay away from all this as she has much experience than Dai.

Finally, with love and prayers of Yudi and jadibuti of dadi everything changes. Poison fails to impact Rani and her child and she gives a birth to prince charming of third generation of Shishodhiya wansh and this child is RAJA of this story????

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TSharan thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow Darshana !! Great start.....Rani pregnant...I had love to see that in the serial....CR at her worst as usual...but I am glad daadi is able to save rani n the baby n that's the way I hope to see in the serial too!!! CR failing in her attempt to separate Yura and a baby...how sweet is that...

Please keep going this is gr8 start of the story....had love to see yura fussing over the baby n enjoying seeing their baby grow....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Darshana,
Great start!! RAJA is born😊😊 Love the part......Why did Yudi not take Rani to a hospital?😊😊
Concept of the story was great....Waiting to see what CR will do next.😍
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ooo interesting darsh
gr8 start! plz do continue! xx
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Darsh,
Loved your first FF But hey i hope she would not be shy with her husband evenafter having baby 😲
Will she ever show any tantrums ????? So plz lets see Rani showing some tamtrums to Yudi in your FF plz.....
Riti
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I love the concept!! i cant wait to see what u come up w/ next!!! i loved it!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Chapter 2: Beautiful moments

Munna runs to temple where Yudi is praying. He informs Yudi about good news. Yudi feels like he is top of this world. He thanks god and runs to Rani's house to see her and their new born baby.

Rani is lying on bed along with little prince. Amma and Dadi are sitting along with her.

Amma and Dadi tells Rani now she has become complete woman after giving birth to child. Now she is more responsible and she has to be a good mother. While this talk is going on Yudi enters in room. Amma and Dadi leave Yura alone.

Yudi comes near to Rani and sits on bed. He looks at the baby and gives cute smile to Rani. Yudi moves near to Rani and gives a gentle kiss on her forehead. It's a warm thanks from Yudi. He then hold baby in his hand and lovingly looks at it. He thanks Rani for all beautiful moments in his life and all happiness. He says to Rani that today we got the link who will always keep us united. He hugs Rani and they both are holding their baby in hand. (Complete family)

Yudi calls back to Mahal and informs RS about child. He also informs RS that he wants Rani to rest for the day and they will travel back to Mahal tomorrow.Everyone is Mahal is very happy for this news. RS ask everyone to have grand celebration and organize grand welcome for YuRa and his little prince charming.

CR is in great shock after hearing this news….. RuMi again feel like betrayed by CR as she again failed to keep her promise.

Its night time. After having dinner Amma, Munna and Dadi are preparing for Rani's return to Mahal. Munna insists Amma that he wants to go with Rani to Mahal. Dadi and Amma denies to Munna. Amma says he will give trouble to Rani and baby once he is with them. Munna sweetly replies now he is uncle and he is more responsible. He understands his responsibility and he will do his best. Everyone laughs on Munna's thought. Yudi asks Amma to give permission to Munna to come along with them to Mahal. Amma makes Yudi understand that its time to take care of Rani rather paying attention to all troubles created by Munna. She also promised Yudi in few days she will visit Mahal along with Munna and Dadi.

Everyone goes to bed. Yudi asks Rani to take rest. Rani sits on bed. Yudi goes near to baby and starts talking with baby. Rani happily looks at Yudi and smiles at the way he is talking to baby.

Rani : Kuwarnji, aap baat to kar rahe hain. Lekin kya jis se baat kar rahe wo aap ki baatein samajh raha hain?

Yudi : Kyun nahi samaz raha hain? Yeh humara beta hain aur ye humare dil ki baat bin bole hi samaz jayega.

Rani : Lekin aap bhul rahe hai, ladke humesha maa ke karib hote hain.

Yudi : Yaha pe aap galat hain, Rani. Ye humesha humare karib rahega.

(Yudi walks near to bed and sits on bed)

Rani : Agar ye aap ke karib rahega, to hum kaha rahenge.

Yudi : Aaap??? (Yudi pulls Rani near to him and give her a tight hug. Rani gets answer to her question and she relaxed herself in Yudi's arms)

In mahal, CR is sitting on chair and thinking deeply closing her eyes. Something is running in her mind. What will be her next plan???

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Posted: 16 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwww that was soooooooo cute!!! I loved it!! esp the last part:

"Yudi : Aaap??? (Yudi pulls Rani near to him and give her a tight hug. Rani gets answer to her question and she relaxed herself in Yudi's arms)"

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Posted: 16 years ago
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great going.👏👏 keep up the good work. 😃
wonder what will CR do next?
Edited by ramas - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Great work dear...loved it completely...n that hug Yudi gave to Rani was the best!!! looking forward to the next update.............👏

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