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Posted: 17 years ago
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Characters:
I.Kasi & Muthukannu......(Kasi is no more)
Punitha - 1st daughter.....(she is adopted daughter of Kasi & she is the only owner of 100+acres of property)......she is our heroine
Valar - 2nd daughter
Malliga -3rd daughter
Manjari - 4th daughter
II. Subbaiya - Kasi's Friend & now alleged as Kasi's murderer
Balu - 1st son of Subbaiya.....(he is supposed 2 marry Punitha but end up marrying Sangeetha)
Somu - 2nd son of Subbaiya
III.Eswari .....(2nd wife of Punitha's dad & wanted 2 acquire punitha's property)
Umapathy....her 1st brother(who married punitha in her childhood & wanted 2 marry her again)
Seethapathy...her 2nd brother
IV.Deenadayal....(dada who is helping Eswari 2 aquire property 4m Punitha)....He has a daughter who is just returned 4m Hostel after many years.
V. NRI Gokulakrishnan...(he wanted malligai thottam owned by Kasi but commited suicide due 2 debts)
Vikram....his only son(who thinks Punitha is responsible 4 his dad's death & now he wants 2 palivangify her by marrying her)...he is our hero
Sammandham....(he is a broker & he is Eswari's man & he is the one who said negative things abt Punitha 2 Vikram😡)
Mottai......he actually murdered Kasi & now he is planning 2 kill Subbaiya....he wants 2 get justice 4 his mother's death...he has misconception dat Subbaiya & Kasi is responsible 4 it.
Almost all of u are following this story,so im going 2 continue 4m Vikram's 2nd entry 2 Village i.e after his dad's death....he enters the village as Pannaiyar son's friend 2 palivaangify Punitha & her family 4 his dad's death.Punitha's family as usual is undergoing pressures of Eswari & co & Valar is still helping Eswari & co but portrays herself 2 be a gud & innocent gal 2 her family & subbaiya.Balu & sangeetha rite now lives in Chennai.
Ist Episode:
Umapathy & Eswari declares dat Punitha is his wife & they had a child marriage & stuffs,Punitha is shocked on hearing this & muthukannu is helpless upon this situation;Malliga & Manjari is shocked too but consoles Punitha...whereas Valar is enjoying the situation with an innocent look in her face.Subbaiya enters the scene & threatens Eswari saying he will dodge a police complaint against them as Child Marriage is a Gr8est sin according 2 Indian Law....Eswari is little shocked on Subbaiya's act & she ask Umapathy 2 leave them now...Umapathy is irritated & he warns Subbaiya,not 2 involve in his matter......he shows a lovey dovey look 2 punitha & says 'maama appuram varendaa chellam'...Punitha is annoyed on his acts & continues 2 cry as usual.
In the Pannaiyar's house,Subbaiya is explaining the Punitha's situation & asking Pannaiyar's suggestions 2 handle Umapathy.........Vikram hears this & make a plan in his mind & smiles wickedly.He enters the room & greets pannaiyar with an innocent face....Pannaiyar introduce Vikram 2 Subbaiya & vis a vis.Subbaiya enquires abt his purpose of visit 2 this village & pannaiyar says he has come 2 find a bride for him as his dad wanted him 2 marry an indian gal...he is a gud friend of my son & he is a gud guy too adds pannaiyar......He also request Subbaiya 2 suggest a gud bride 4 him if he finds one.Subbaiya nods his head & luks at Vikram & then he says he has some work & he will let him know if he finds any suitable match 4 him & b4 leaving he reminds Pannaiyar 2 take care of Umapathy.
Pannaiyar leaves with him too saying he has some work & Vikram has a victorious smile in his face.
Thodarum.
I hope u all like it & Please lemme know whenever its dragging or if u feel its not rite anywhere.Feel free 2 comment on it gals,it is just an attempt 4m me.
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sankadevi30 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice intro & gud start ambi👏

hope in ur FF gud things happen to punitha
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Good start Ambi di😃
Atleast Vikram is the hero in unga story....and not after that Valar😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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A very good start ambi ... atlest we can be less stress on what is happening in actually senthurapoovae ... idhalai unggal karpanai yedhuthu vidungo daa chellam ......
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Really a good start ambi 😊 ... Sure we'll enjoy this & have a fun time here .. Aarambame , Summa kizhichutteenga 😆 ..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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2nd Episode:
Subbaiya comes 2 punitha's house directly 4m pannaiyar's house & calls muthukannu.muthukannu offers him seat & ask him whether he met pannaiyar & informed him abt Umapathy's torture!!he says dun worry pannaiyar said he will take care of them but now i wanted 2 discuss with u sumthing important & ask her abt punitha.....she says all the gals gone out & he says dats gud & opens the topic with her about Vikram..........Subbaiya says' i met a guy at pannaiyar's place who luks handsome & he has come 2 marry an indian gal,he is a friend of pannaiyar's son & pannaiyar says he is a gud guy & even asked me 2 luk 4 a bride 4 him' the immediate gal came 2 mind z Punitha.....its high time we settle her so dat we get rid of this umapathy issue once 4 all & Vikram also luks like a gud guy 2 me.muthukannu is full of joy after hearing this & she says anna,im sure punitha will not say no 2 u when u ask her....so u better open this topic 2 her & then u inform pannaiyar abt this.subbaiya says ok & leaves.
In the way back home,he sees Vikram who is helping a elderly lady 2 carry her basket & he is so nice 2 ppl around him in village......subbaiya is convinced dat Vikram is a gud guy.........after subbaiya leaves Vikram turns towards his back & smiles wickedly.Punitha comes back home & muthukannu starts her jadai madai talks dat its high time she settles punitha & she has 3 more responsibilities after her........Punitha is suspicious & ask her wat is the matter.....muthukannu says subbaiya anna came home & he has a gud proposal 4 u......punitha z shocked,amma please dun talk 2 me abt marriage....i still cant forget balu mama,i know it is wrong 2 think of him after marriage but this was my dream 4m childhood,i cant get rid of it overnite,....i need time........i dun think i can marry anyone rite now........may be we can settle Valar 1st if u say u have a gud proposal.........muthukannu is shocked.
She says how z dat possible 2 settle 2nd gal b4 1st one.....dats not possible........punitha argues & try 2 convince muthukannu.......Valar z hearing all this .............how come Punitha thinks gud 2 me😲😲😲 & she is confused on this thots😕............muthukannu says i dunno punitha u talk 2 subbaiya anna abt this & brush off this topic.............Punitha says amma,i want 2 complete all my responsibilities b4 i settle down......Kasi appa's responsibility are in my shoulders now & i dun want 2 settle down till we settle all our problems.muthukannu is touched by these words😭😭😭...........she says indha nalla manasukaagave unakku nalla vazhkai amaiyumdi.
Thodarum.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks da ambi.......will def. read it soon in comment.....congrats on yet another FF of your daaaa....👍🏼
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Posted: 17 years ago
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it sounds really gud so far ambi, i'm soo glad u decided to write this.
atleast i can look forward to scenes that the director of the serial didn't put in.
thanks!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Punitha can't forget balu mama ?? 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 ... Nalla irukku , Supero super ..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanx nallu,meli,nezu,aish,hiya & laksh 4 ur response.i wish & hope i do justice 2 ur expectations friendz.
laksh dear ivalavu vizhundhu pirandu sirikadheenga adi keedhu pattuda pogudhu.

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