DESTINY..(AR)ff..part 2 pg11 9/7

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Hey Guys!

I m starting a new story named "destiny".I had this idea in my mind for a long time now and decided to write it out. I have been working on this story for about a month now. This will be my second story and I will continue updating my first one, "JaNNe Tu yA JaNNe nA''.." Hope you guys enjoy it and please leave your frank comments'I will try to update both the stories periodically.

This Idea or concept is entirely different from any other story' Please leave your honest opinions'.if u read it pls write comments whether u like it or not'.pls do comment ur comments r really imp for me'''

I'm not posting a character sketch since you will see the characters develop in the story itself''''

Story-line'''

They entered his flat'''arman walked inside'..ridhima still waiting at the door'..

Ar:andar avo'''

She quitely walked in'''there was complete silence'..she looked at him'..

Ri:pls'..muje sirf aaj raat yaha rehne do'.mai kaal subha yaha se chali jaungi'..pls(tears fell from her eye)

Ar:(angrily)maai tumhe yaha rehne dunga'..how can u even think of it?? It is not my mistake''they forced me to marry u???meri life barbad ho gayi tumhari wajah se'''.it's like a living hell''..and how can u think I will let u live in my house??????????

She stood their crying''''..she turned around to leavve'..

Ar:kaha ja rahi ho''..meri baat abhi khatam nahi hui hai'''to mai kehraha tha ki agar tum he lagta hai mai tumse yeh sab kahunga'''aur tumhe ghar se nikal dunga to tum galat ho'''

She looked at him in a shock'''.he came forward''made her sit on the sofa''

Ar:ridhima how could u think that I will leave u all alone'.it's not ur falt'..maine tumse apni marzi se shadi ki hai'..koi zor zabardasti se nahi'..u r my wife'my responsibility''..and my destiny'..mai hamesha tumhare saath rahunga'''I will be always there for u''..

She stayed quiet for a while. she started crying''..

Arman got up to the kitchen'.brought water''..she drank it'.

Ar:ridhima tum'''''.

ridhima looked at him. She could not take it anymore. "I am so sorry arman it's because of me that ur liffe is ruined''.snif'snif

ar: But what is ur falt'..what could u do????? I m sorry '.. I wanted to help you. I couldn't just leave you there. Par us vickey ke wajah se''''Your parents took us the wrong way. I am so sorry."

Ridhima burst out crying, armaan put a hand on her shoulder. she slipped onto his lap crying. While armaan tried to console her. Ar:sab theek ho jaye ga'''.

The story suspence will be reaveled in the first part which I will be posting soon'.

Waiting 4 ur comments

-ridhima😊


INDEX
part 1 ---pg 4
part2 ---pg 11
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yogzz thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very nice FF......
hope u continue soon......
n who is this vickey??????
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey..
do update first part soon..
please PM if thats not a problem..

luv
Rucha

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Posted: 16 years ago
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intro was interesting,i like ur concept alot,it is great👏👏👏.i thought armaan hates ridhima in the starting but i am soo happy that he accepted her as his wife.but who is vickey??

cant wait to read the first part.continue soon.........
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waoh🤗 its really an awesome one⭐️ so cute😛 such a sweet one😳 so touching😍 plz continue it soon😛😉 & when u update plz pm me😳

"mujhe dil apna de ker aaj mehrbaan ho jao,
mere dil main uter ker mere jaan ban jao,
main kon hoon, kiya hoon mujhe koi nahen janta,
mere jaan ban ker mere pehchan ban jao!"


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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy.....its awesome.....really interesting!! plzz cont soon and PM me!!

<3333
Mahima
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey that was a nice start do continue soonn and pls pm me if u can
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey there
the intro looks intersting
Cud u PM me when u update
Thanks Mini
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute_unknown_fr

very nice FF......

hope u continue soon......
n who is this vickey??????



hey! thanks 4 liking....i will continue soon....u will know who is vickey in the first part....
-ridhima😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: frnd.of.frndz

hey..
do update first part soon..
please PM if thats not a problem..

luv
Rucha



i will surely pm u when i update....
-ridhima😊

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