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Believe

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Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hi all

Challenge game for competent poets..
complete the sher above and give a new misra or chalange !!

aksar tumhe dekha hai
bas dekhe hi main jati hu
har khwaab mey
mere har khayalat mey...??...........

where is next line...fill it...

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IMAN

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Posted: 16 years ago

Aksar tumein dekha hai
Bas dekhe hi main jaati hoon
Har khwab mein khayalat mein
Bas tumko hi main paati hoon

nxt:
kyon hum dono ko juda kiya
kyon hum dono ko fanaa kiya
koi gunaah to humne kiya nahin
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Believe

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Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

kyon hum dono ko juda kiya
kyon hum dono ko fanaa kiya
koi gunaah to humne kiya nahin
Phir bi hum gunegar ki tara jeene lage,... Nxt Na hum ko kabar dha... Na tum ko kabar dha... ...................

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IMAN

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Posted: 16 years ago

well actually it's not khabar tha but khabar thi
so i'll continue wiid the correct one

Na humko khabar thi
na tumko khabar thi
K chalte chalte aise hi chutt jayenge
Hum rah-e-mohabat ke
aghaaz mein hi lut jaayenge

nxt onee:
Dhal rahi hai shaam jana
Wisaal ki akhri shaam jana
Karlo mujhse jee bhar k baat
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Believe

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Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

Dhal rahi hai shaam jana
Wisaal ki akhri shaam jana
Karlo mujhse jee bhar k baat
Kya pata kal hum na ho...😉

next Wo muje anjaan dhi... phir b kareeb lagthi dhi...

Edited by Believe - 16 years ago

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IMAN

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Posted: 16 years ago

Woh mujhe anjaan thi Phir bhi kareeb lagti thi
Humari mulakat bhi Kuch ajeeb lagti thi
Woh thi to meri zindagi hi
Per zindagi kam,woh mera naseeb lagti thi

nxt oneeee:
Kaash k tum ab ajao
Dil ko zara behla jao
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Believe

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Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: IMAN
Woh mujhe anjaan thi Phir bhi kareeb lagti thi
Humari mulakat bhi Kuch ajeeb lagti thi
Woh thi to meri zindagi hi
Per zindagi kam,woh mera naseeb lagti thi

wah wah...bohot khooob..i loved it...👏

nxt oneeee:
Kaash k tum ab ajao
Dil ko zara behla jao
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Kaash k tum ab ajao
Dil ko zara behla jao

Mere Dil ki baad suno..

zara mujko apnavo...

next....

Usse mohabbat karte karte...

mere dil ki bath bolna bhul gayi..

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Edited by Believe - 16 years ago

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IMAN

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Posted: 16 years ago

Usse mohabbat karte karte
Mere dil ki baat bolna bhool gaye
Manzil pe agaye hum chalte chalte
Aur raaz-e-dil kholna bhool gaye

nxttttt:
Ek baar kehdo meri jaan tum
K yaad tumein bhi aati hai

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Believe

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Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: IMAN
Usse mohabbat karte karte
Mere dil ki baat bolna bhool gaye
Manzil pe agaye hum chalte chalte
Aur raaz-e-dil kholna bhool gaye-----------------👏👏

nxttttt:
Ek baar kehdo meri jaan tum
K yaad tumein bhi aati hai

Ek baar kehdo meri jaan tum
K yaad tumein bhi aati hai

Ek baar maano meri jaan tum

B muje chahte hey.........

Buz ek bar...........

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Roz dhek kar muzkurate chale jate hey wo..........

uski aanko ne muje deewna banadia...

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