FF: Prem Heer ki Pyaare kahani part 9 pg 5

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This version of Kis Desh Mein Hai Meraa Dil is not going to have evil characters but it will have slight problems like in reality. But there will be some personality change in the characters. And new characters

The characters are:

Prem: Lalit eldest son

Heer: Balrajs daughter

Lalit

Balraj

Teji: Balrajs wife

Gayatri: Lalits wife

Rija: Heers best friends

Meher: Heers younger sister

Nihaal: Balrajs son

Avni: Nihaals wife

Preet: Prems younger brother

Harman: Prem other brother

Gudia: Nihaals daughter

Veera: Prems younger sister

Ravi: Rijas brother

Lakshya: Ravis best friends

Krishna Tulsi: Avnis sister

Kulraj: Prems older sister

Swati: Lalit adopted daughter

Heer is a typical girls who has dreams like every girl, but her dreams is quiet different her dreams was not made with her eyes but her fathers. All her life her wishes her dreams have always been what her father wants she has never thought of having her own dreams.

Balraj Maan the father of Heer had made a promise to his best friend Lalit Juneja that he will get his daughter Heer married to Lalits eldest son Prem. Lalit had to leave India and go to Canada for work so he left India telling his friend that he will return one day and get Heer and Prem married.

Years past and Balraj waited for his friend to return and get his daughter married. It had been 14 years already and there was no news from Lalit but Balraj did see him television.

It was a sunny day in Ludhiana. There were kids running in the fresh grass. There were girls sitting a chatting and men fielding and all the women cooking. Heer was walking in the fields near a small road with her childhood best friend Rija. They were linking there arms and walking.

'Are Heer meri shaadi ke liye ek ladka doond re hai mere ma babuji lekin teri shaadi kab hogi' said Rija

'Meri shaadi hogi jab mera dulah Canada se loteghi' replied Heer.

'Acha aur woh kab ayeghi' said Rija.

'Pata nahi (and then a small sigh).'

As the two were walking a car was coming and it splashed mud all over Heer and when Rija saw this she straight away start shouting

'Are pagal tujhe kya dekhay nahi deta kya' she shouted. Straight away a guy comes out of the car in quiet a moody way. He was wearing a black top that said 'I'm mister Cool' and ripped jeans (there suppose to be ripped). Following him was a guy who looked a few years older then him in a calm way. He was wearing a white shirt and black trousers.

'Excuse me aap ne pagal kis koh kaha' the moody guys ask in a sarcastic way

'Jis bewakoof woh gari chala ra tha' said Rija

'Excuse I'm not a bewakoof okay or a pagal' said the guy

'Oooh toh tum woh gari chalarey thi. Tum dekar chala nai sakti'

Then Heer finally spoke up and said 'Rija chor na koi baat nai chal hum ghar chalet hai'

'Toh kya kehre uss loafer ne tera dress karab kardi aur tu kehrey jaane de, nahi Mein usko sabak sikaoonghi' saying this she rolls her sleeves.

Then another guys pats the guy on the shoulder and says 'Hey maafi mangde aur chal yaha se babuji hamare wait kar re hai come one lets go.' said the other guy. But he completely ignored him and the two continued arguing. Suddenly it started raining Heer start pulling Rija away she struggled but managed.

Heer took Rija home and they went to Rijas room Heer changed in to on of Rijas kameezes and had small conversation and giggled. After a while Rijas mom comes and said

'Heer beta tumara maa khi phone aye thi kaha khi tum kho ghar gana hoga.'

So Heer left with Rija because Rija has to stay over at Heers house because her parents are going to go somewhere.

When Heer gets home she finds her sister-in-law and her younger sister waited outside for her. When they see her they run up to her with big smiles on there face and her sister says 'Didi woh log agaye'

Heer doesn't understand who she's talking about so she says 'Kaun agaye Meher'

Just when Meher about to tell her Heers mother calls and takes her inside and gives her a lovely red lehengha and tells her to wear it she keeps asking what's going on but no-one has the time to tell her.

Then Rija runs in gives Heer a big hug and says 'Heer tere dulah agaye'

Just for a minute Heer feels as if she's going to faint but the she controls her self she keeps on saying 'Are you sure' to Rija repeats the same thing yes yes yes.

Then Balraj comes in to let Heer know and have father daughter time Rija leaves. They have their father daughter time and Balraj leaves. Heers sister-in-law comes in and says 'Nervous'

Heer replies 'A lot' then her bhabi tells her to take deep breaths and then takes her to the living room where everyone is seated.

When Heer looks up she sees the same guys that splashed mud when Rija saw she couldn't control her self and she bursted out and said

'Tum'

Then the guy who turns out to be Prems Brother Preet said.

'Tum yaha kya kar re ho'

Rija couldn't stand him so she had to say what was inside

'Are kamene tu Kaun hota hai mujse yeah puchne wale?'

Everyone was shocked so they asked her what was going on Rija told her side of the story and Preet told his side of the story and then everyone calmed down but they still couldn't stand each other.

Whiles the elder lot were talking Heer and Prem were just sitting there like statues. Heers bhabi see that so she told her husband Nihaal to do something. So Nihaal told his father to let all the kids go to the side garden of theirs since it stopped raining. Heers Bhabi took them to the garden and she went leaving the kids to talk all of them introduced them self there was:

Heer

Prem

Meher Heers sister

Preet Prems brother

Harman Prems other brother

Gudia Heers brothers daughter

Veera Prems younger sister

Rija Heers best friend

Ravi Rijas brother

Krishna Tulsi Heers babhis sister (who stays with them)

Lakshya Ravis best friend

Swati Prems adopted sister

All of the kids talked for a while and then Preet decided to play truth or dare he explained the game to everyone. Then he asked if they have a wine bottle but then Heer got surprised she start thinking oh my god he drinks and then Prem could tell she had bad thoughts in her mind so he said 'Game ke liye' then Heer understood. Heers neighbour is a alcoholic so Heer thought that he mite have left a bottle so she sent Meher to get it. Meher brought back a bottle and they began the game first Preet span the bottle and it stopped at Veera 'Emm toh bolo truth or dare'

'Errr dare'

'I dare you to sit on that pile of grass for at least 15 seconds' the rest of the crew thought that is the most easiest dare anyone can do but the truth is this dare is quiet hard for Veera since she is a top Diva. They played it stopped at least 4 people and then it stopped at Prem.

'So truth or dare'

'Dare'

'Okay then I dare you to tell us something we don't know'

Prem thought for 2 seconds and then looked up and said 'Mujhe Heer pasand hai'

Heer started to blushing like peach she ran off because she was to shy to face anyone. When Prem said this Gayatri heard everything she quickly ran in and told everyone, everyone was so happy Lalit and Balraj hugged then Teji went to Heer and asked 'Tujhe Prem pasand hai' Heer then slowly nodded her head straight away Teji hugged her daughter.

Next morning

Everyone woke up and today Lalit was taking them to the house he made before he left India to stay possibly forever.

The entire adults were in one care including Gudia, Avni and Nihaal. Harman, Ravi, Veera and Swati were in the four seater car and Prem, Heer, Preet, Rija, Lakshya, KT and Meher took the seven seater.

Prem was driving and next to him sat Heer.

'Hey fatlu ek kaam kar tu humko Prem jiju khi bare bata aur hum tujko Heer ke bara bataoogi' demanded Rija, Heer tried to give Rija no bad idea look but everyone was looking

'Okay not a bad idea and but the way I'm not a fatlu'

Rija rolled her eyes in what ever ever way.

Preet started to describe Prem 'bhai toh bahout quiet and work a lot. Unki off day woh bahar nahi jate woh ghar mein bet kar maa khi matat kar te' as Preet was describing him Prem acted as if he does not no what going on.

'Ab tum batao Heer bhabi kehse hai' Preet said. Heer tried to change the subject by saying 'Erm Preet Canada mein kya kya hai joh India mein nahi hai'

Preet straight away replied with realising that Heer is trying to change the subject 'Hot girls'

At first Rija could tell that Heer is trying to change the subject but when Preet answered her question by saying hot girls Rija forgot about Heer and started to argue with Preet

'What do you mean India mein hot girls nahi tum toh sirf toh din India mein rehi ho toh tumko kaise pata hai'

'Lets just say I already had experience a bootni' Preet said

Now Rija was furious 'Mein bootni lagthi hoon' she said angrily

'Ha kyun tumko lagta nahi' Preet said. Then Prem butted in and said

'Oh shut up Preet toh joh itni besorat hai isliye Rija kho satare hai. Don't worry Rija ye sirf mazaak kar ra hai you're very pretty'

'No I'm not joking your joking bhai tum toh sirf ye sab kehre hai taki tum bhabi koh impress karsakte' then Prem couldn't be bothered to say anything so he ignored it and just gave a serious look to Preet.

By now they got to the house everyone ran out leaving Prem and Heer to get the luggage and a chance to talk. Prem carried all of the bag just leaving Heer carrying Meher and Rijas bag. They went inside Prem lead the way he went into a big room that was empty thee was just a big cupboard and a bed and next to the bed there was a side cupboard then he spoke up and said 'Yeh tumara karma hai' Heer was quiet confused.

'Tumhe kaise pata' she asked then he replied.

'Hum tumara ghar jaane pehle hum yaha aye thi sab kuch thik kiye' then Prem gave Heer her bag she put it on the bed and went into the bathroom Prem was about to leave when he saw a book, it was Heers diary. He quickly put it in his bag and went to his room which was right next to Heers. He went in he put his bag away and got the diary out he opened the first page and it had a picture of everyone in her family, on the next page there was a picture of her, Rija and Krishna Tulsi. He turned a couple of pages until he saw a page that had a title called Prem he start reading the passage and gradually he had a big smile on his face. When he closed the diary a picture of Heer fell out he took that picture and put it in his wallet. Prem tip toed into Heers room and quickly put the diary in her cupboard and ran out.

Few hours later

Everyone had settled in Krishna Tulsi and Rija were sharing a room, Veera and Meher were sharing a room, Swati and Heer were sharing a room, Harman and Ravi were sharing a room, Preet and Lakshya were sharing a room and Prem had is own room because soon Heer is going to be with him. So there no point anyone sharing with him.

Preet told everyone to come to the terrace. Heer couldn't come because the elder lots stopped her by talking to her. Everyone was waiting for Heer when KT came and told them that the elder lots have stopped her then Preet said 'Mein bhabi koh lekar ati hoon' he went down and then said to Heer he needs her help so then she came to the terrace.

When they got their all of them were having there own conversation. Preet screamed and stopped them then he called Rija, KT and Lakshya to the front and they began.

'Do din mein shaadi khi sari function shura hagayeghi' KT began then continued Lakshya ' Aur isliye humko in do din keh liye koi gumne chal na hoga kyunki shaadi khi baad sab busy honge'

'Toh hum sab ko decide karna hoga kaha jaane hai' Rija said

'Ek minute mein nahi jaa paoonghi mujhe yaha bahout kam hai aur Veera aur Preet keliye collage doond na paregha, tum log jao mein nahi jaa paoonghi but I'll try and join you guys' Harman explained.

Preet gave a sad sigh then Harman left them to decide and so Preet said 'Toh iskha matlab sirf hum dus log gare hai.'

It took them a while to decide but then they decided to go KT old house which is 2 inches away from a beach and behind it is a big field, and no one lives there since her Parents dies

'So it's settled hum meri purane ghar mein jaa re hai.' Said KT as clicked her fingers.

They took permission from the parents and then they started to pack.

Heers room

Heer was quiet nervous she didn't feel like going it was her first time going far from her parents even though she sometime stays at Rijas is really different to Heer.

Swati comes in and sees that Heers not packing. So she goes up to her and says

'Nervous,'

'Yes, a lot,'

'Don't worry' Swati helps Heer and then Heer feel's better and start's packing. Everyone has packed there things and all set for there trip. Heer was feeling quiet bored so she thought she mite as well go see what her best friend was up to since she hasn't spoken to her in a long time, she's on her way to the Rijas room when some one pulls her in to Prems room, they cover her mouth so she doesn't scream, Heer closed her eyes for two seconds and then a while later she opened her eyes, she was shocked to see Prem.

Heer doesn't say anything for a while, just when Heer is about to say something Prem covers her mouth. Prem started of by saying 'Tumari ankein bahout kubsoorat hai,' then he paused for a second. He looked at Heer for a long time. Prem continued 'Mein tumse kuch kehna hai.' He was going to carry on when he heard Rija voice from outside. Heer quickly ran out and bumped into Rija. Rija saw Heer come out of Prems room, she put her hand on her hips and said 'Madam aap Prem jiju khi room mein kya kar re ho' Heer was really shy, she was about to run of with a excuse but she knew Rija knew her too well. A while later Prem came out the room and Heer and Rija were still outside. Then Rija turned to Prem and said 'Hello Mr to be Jiju aap bahout impatient ho hai na'

'Matlab' Prem asked.

'I mean aap kho Heer keh saat puri zindigi betani hai, to aap kho tori si patient hona chaye hai na' she explained.

Prem got shy and scratched his head and walked of.

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(2) Next Morning

Everyone woke up. Everyone meaning:

Heer

Prem

Meher

Preet

Veera

Rija

Ravi

Krishna Tulsi

Lakshya

Swati

Gudia. Gudia was being very naughty and she wouldn't let her mum do any work so Preet thought why don't we take her and Kulrajs two kid the third one was a bit too young to come along with them.

Tanu ( and I don't what her sons name is so I'll make it up)

Abhishek

They all started to load all the bags in the bus, private bus that they own. Everyone finished putting the bags. They took blessing from the elder lots and head off.

Along the way they were being very very loud and having so much fun. ' Hey Prem bhai ek gaana ga do.' Preet requested. But Prem seemed though he wasn't in the mood. ' No Preet meraa mood nahi hai.' Prem says as he lies his head down. Preet thought to himself ' Mein abhi aap mood thik karta hoon.' Preet sees that Heer is walking by Prem and Rija behind her so what he does is pushes Rija who makes Heer fall down on to Prem. The minute Heer feel onto Prem there was a matter of silence and everyone present in that very scene were just staring at Prem and Heer. Rija went over to Preet and said ' Good Job lekin mujhe puch karke bhi yeh kam ho sakta ta right na'. The Preet replied ' Nahi ho sakta ta kyun is bus aur kisi khi baas tumare jehsa itni bare kamar nahi hai.' Preet said and laughed. Heer and Prem were just staring at eachother they were lost it seemed as though they have been hypnotized and there no way to get them to their sense. Then Meher realised that it would be best if she got them in there senses so she went up to them and clicked her fingers and then they got in to their senses. On the other hand Preet and Rija finshed arguing and Preet goes up to Prem 'Prem bhai ab mood hai.' Prem smiles at Preet and they both on to the top of the bus and singing ABCD... I Love You From Hum Saath Saath Hain http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=ninsb8n8cRE&feature=channel

Lakshya and KT are singing the I love you part since they are actually in love. Suddenly half way through the song the car stops and Prem and Preet are really close from falling but they catch them self. Prem and Preet go down to find out what happened why did they stop. They go to the driver and says ' Kya hua kyun rokha.' Then the driver explains that the car has broken down and it will take atleast take 3-4 hours to fix it with the right things which it not with them so he will have to walk to the local mechanic and get so in the mean time they decide to just go for a walk since there a small market around.

In the Market

They all split up and decided to meet by the river after 1 hour and then they would all go together and see the place. Since everyone has a little bit of childishness in them they ran of like silly kid except for Heer and Prem, they left Gudia with Heer since Gudia is very naughty and the only person that can handle her with out shouting at her is Heer. 'Bua mujhe waha kelna hai please mujhe le chalo.' Gudia kept insisting Heer to take her it a little play corner but Heer kept saying we'll go there later when finally Prem thought why don't I just take her ' Kya tum mere saat jaana chawooghi waha.' Prem said. Gudia nodded her head and held his hand and skipped to there with Prem Heer was gazing at Prem loveliness and was lost in to her own thoughts about Prem when suddenly some one grabs her by the shoulder and pushes her slightly. ' BOO,' Rija said. Heer thought oh god you. ' Kya hua tum inko ehse kyun dekhre ho. Actually mujhe pata hai kyun tum inko isliye iss tara dekhre ho kyun kit um soch re ho khi kyu Prem jiju tumare bache se ese pyaare kareghi.' Rija explains this and laughs. Heer hits heer playfully and says her name in vein. ' Hum chale.' Rija was trying to take Heer from there but Heer said ' Unko toh bata ke joa mein tumare saat jara hoon.' Then Rija says ' Thik hai mein Unko bata thi hoon. Oi Mr Romeo.' Rija clicks her singers to get Prem attention and when she does she says ' Mein aapki Heer ko lekar jari hoon thik hai.' Prem nods his head and at the same time think 'Great'.

Rija and Heer are sitting on a big piece of rock near the river and laughing then suddenly Preet pops out of no where and says ' Yaha kis baat khi hasi hori hai?' At first Rija rolls her eyes thinking I hate that guy, but then replies ' Hum dono iss liye hasre hai kyun mein kaha khi tum ek gaint hi tara chal te ho!' Then Preet turns is smile upset down. By then everyone had gathered near by the river except for Prem even though it had just been 45 minutes, where they were sitting was about about 100 metres high from the river and if anyone fell they had a great chance of losing their life. Preet and Rija again started their arguments when suddenly Heer screamed her lungs out just when Prem got to the river with Gudia.

Heer was really close to the edge of the ground and she fell but she was lucky enough that the back of her salwar kameez had caught on to a piece of rock sticking out from the edge, Heer was still in the danger of falling since her salwaat kameez want made out of a strong material. Prem straight away ran towards her to help her up but she wasn't strong enough to grab on to his hand ' Heer mere haath ko pakro!' Prem kept screaming at Heer to grab her hand but she could her hand kept slipping out then suddenly her salwaar kameez ripped a little bit ripped which was going to make Heer fall off.

Heer was so close to falling when Prem came and grabbed her and because her was a bit to low and if Prem two inches lower they both would fall so what Preet and Rija decided to do is grab Prem so that he can go lower and get her.

Finally Prem had got low enough to get Heer up. Heer had a small tear in her eyes tear of fright. The moment Heer got on to the ground before anyone could ask her if she okay Prem just forgot everything and hugged her really really tight that even if Heer didn't want to she would have no chose but to close her eyes. Then her releases her from his arms and he then puts both his hands on Heers face and says 'Heer tum toh thik ho' Prem said in a caring voice and Heer just nodded she had no idea why he was reacted. Then suddenly the driver comes and says 'Sab ghari thik hogaye itna vaak nahi laga mechanic fixed everything.' Then they all thought that it would be best to leave this scene where it is and head off.

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(3) In the bus

Back in the bus Prem was finding it really hard to say something to anyone after his reaction near the river. Rija and Preet start whispering things to each other then Preet takes Prem to the top of the bus and Rija takes Heer to a part of the bus where no one can see them. Then Rija has a flash back of what Preet and Rija where whispering about.

*Flashback*

'Rija tum Heer bhabhi ko akele lekar waha joa aur mein Prem bhai ko bus khi upar legoongi aur hum dono unse unki feelings nikal kar record karege aur jab hum beach house poch jayenge tab hum play karenge.' Preet whispers to Rija and Rija says 'Ha thik lekin ek problem tumko jiju kya kehenge.' Then Preet says 'Kyun nahi kehenge' 'Well because tum ek akri lakar ho jo koi unki feeling share karenge.' Rija replies then they have a slight argument then they do as planned.

Some how Rija got Heer to speak what she feels 'Rija tuhne dekhe jab Prem mujhe gale lagaya tha. Pata nahi kyun lekin mujhe lagta hai ki Prem ki tarah iss duniya mein koi nahi woh bilkool alag hai. ' Then Rija says 'Jab uno ne tum ko gale lagaya tab acha lage ha ya na sida question thik hai' Heer just nodded her head slightly but Rija made Heer speak it with her voice.

Up on the bus top Prem was just speaking his heart out how he feels with, he beauty, the way she gets shy he was talking so much that Preet actually had his hand on his chin and just left the recorder in his bocket and start playing games on his phone. Then Prem realised that Preet was getting bored o he decided to annoy him ' Are yaar Preet mujhe lagta hai ki Rija aur tu ek Perfect couple hai na woh kya kehta hai hindi mein ha ha Rab ne bana di Jodi hain na.' Then Preet face expression changed extremely changed and he forgot the subject and start ' Are you crazy aap pagal toh nahi ho. Heer bhabi khi akene aap ko anda toh nahi kardiya us moti se mein kabhie pyaar nahi karoonghi.' Then Prem gives Preet a smile and after Kt comes up and says 'Guys chalo hum agaye.' Then Prem and Preet looked around and the place was beautiful it was surrounded by beautiful trees and there was sea in front of it the sea looked as though it had no end to it. And behind the house it had big field just plain field with jut fresh grass and there was no tree nothing but on one side there was few trees that was there to hold a swing that you can sleep on and on the side there was a normal swing. There was a middle aged guy who was most likely in his 30 who cam out and KT 'Kaise ho ramu kaka kitne din ke baad mein aap ko dekhre ho. Hum log yaha do din ke liye yaha gumne aye hai.' Then ramu kaka welcomes them all to the house and takes there bags in and settles them in to their room and shows them around the house.

Rooms:

Room No 1 - it is near the beautiful sight you can see the whole sea from the room and you can sea the open field from the other side of the room - Heer

Room No 2 – it is just a normal room with a nice sight of the front of the house you can see the front garden and the main gate – Veera, Swati, Rija

Room No 3 – it is just a normal room with a nice sight of the front of the house you can see the front garden and the main gate but this room has a small balcony – Meher, Krishna Tulsi, Gudia, Tanu Abhishek

Room No 4 - Preet, Lakshya , Ravi – this room is right at the top of the beach house and it has no windows but there is just a big window on the seiling and you can see the stars from it

Room No 5 – from this room you can see the opened sea and on the other side is the window that will show you the fresh open fields. Prem

Room No 6 – Living room in this room there is camp fire a door made of glass and it is like 7 inches away from the sea.

Room No 7 – Kitchen it is a normal kitchen which contains things a kitchen needs.

Room No 8 – Bath room and Toilet

Balcony a normal balcony.

In the afternoon

After everyone had seen every single corner of the room they all sat round the fire with sweet hot chocolate and were laughing and just talking amongst themselves. After a while Preet and Rija give each other signals that they should play the tape. They get up and leave and first they play Prems voice recording and everyone is quiet and just listening to Prem expressing his feeling. Heer feels so shy and Prem is giving Preet a look saying watch what I do to you when I catch you and Preet is giving him a look saying catch me first.

Then suddenly Preet insulting Rija comes up and Preet is being chased around the house by Rija and out of no where they disappear. Ramu Kaka calls KT and for same weird reason Lakshya follows and gradually they all disappear leaving Prem and Heer alone and suddenly what Heer said in the recording comes up. Prem is jus so happy by hearing the word of Heer in the tape he goes towards her Heer puts her head down. Prem is walking towards her and slowly hold her by the shoulder and picks her up and bring her chin up. They both are staring at each other and you can see the moon between them. The wind is blowing the curtain over them two love birds...

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