SS: A Day That Never Ends!! prt 3 pg 4 12\13

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hiiiiiiiiiiiiiii guys was getting pretty bored once again....have a month's break from univ. So have nthin to do right nw...havent even joined my internship as yet......so since i was getting bored i thought i'll write a ss once again.... Ohh and this story is based on a beautiful movie i watched...... the name of the movie is " 50 first dates" i am in luv wid this movie and couldn't help but think of jb in the similar scenario ..........so here we go nw..........hope u guys like it.

PS ? i don't know hw many prts this ss is gonna be but its gonna end by d end of this month so i guess it wont be tooooooo long.

DAY THAT NEVER ENDS

INTRODUCTION

JAI WALIA ? well as usual he is the same as all my ff i.e. the hotshot business tycoon and a Casanova

BANI DIXIT- mmmmm she is the heroine of the story lol u'll come to know more about her as u read the story

NISHIKANT DIXIT ? a loving father

RANO DIXIT ? a loving sister

BILLO MAASI ? well she is jai's maasi as usual and jai's ONLY relative

ADITIYA BALI- Jai's best friend.

Btw jai and bani both are young just around 24-25 yrs old

CHAPTER ONE
Jai walia had returned home to India after remaining abroad for five years, he had been just 20 yrs old when he had taken over his father's business after his death and today he was one of the biggest hoteliers of the world, he had been too busy all these years to visit his homeland and as it is his business in India was well looked after by his best friend and business partner Aditya Bali, so he had never found the need to visit India but since his maasi kept calling him insistently year after year, he had decided that it was time he fulfilled his maasi's wish and so here he was in India...... to meet his destiny.
He had been in India for five days now getting unbearably bored with nothing to do and maasi's constant pampering, so he decided to pay a surprise visit to one of his famous beach side restaurant, and see how it was running.
So there he was, he entered the restaurant and sat with on one of the table which provided the view of the entire restaurant and the beach...he had been sitting in the restaurant for about half an hour, taking note of the happenings of the restaurant and getting bored at the same time.....thennnnnnnnnn...... he suddenly looked towards the beach and there he saw a beautiful vision coming towards the restaurant..... she was the most beautiful woman he had ever laid eyes on....her long jet black hair blowing with the sea winds, her big black eyes had beautiful twinkles in them which sparkled even more with her heart melting smile, she was wearing a black sleeveless t-shirt and faded blue figure hugging jeans......and jai was a goner, he even forgot hw to breath while he was looking at her and he kept staring at her even when she entered the restaurant, went past him and sat at the table exactly opposite to him.
It was only when the waiter came with his order that he snapped out of his mooning session and realized that he had been holding his breath. The waited placed jai's order in front of him and went away, but jai was too busy again in looking at the beautiful vision in front of her to be bothered bout the food lying in front of him and he knew that he had been smitten and he knew that this was the woman he had been waiting for all his life.....he had heard all about love at first sight but had never thought that he would also fall a prey to it but it was clear to him he had found the love of his life, in the lady who was sitting right in front of him.

Jai thought "okkk so this is the love of my life, nw hw do i get to know her?" then a idea clicked into his head and he got up from his seat and went towards where the girl was sitting sipping her coffee and looking out toward the beach, he cleared his throat and said "excuse me??" when the girl looked up at him questioningly he said " hi, i am Jai Walia the owner of this restaurant, hope i am not disturbing u??" when the girl shook her head with a smile, jai thought okkkk this is gonna be easy from hence on hehehehe.

He then spoke "i was just wondering if u find the service of the restaurant upto the mark? Actually i don't stay here in India and someone else takes care of this restaurant for me, so if u don't mind can i please sit with u and if u have got the time to spare u can tell me all ur likes and dislikes bout this place so maybe i could make this place better for u."

The girl looked at jai and for some time and thought "yeah right, u want to know bout ur restaurant, it doesn't seems so to me with the way u have been staring at me for the past 10 mins but then u r cute so let's do it ur way lol " and she gave him one of her heart stopping smiles and said "yeah sure, plz do join me jai, it will be a pleasure if i could be of any assistance" jai dint wait for a second and sat opposite her and said "thanxx....ummm may i know ur name?" and the girl responded by saying "ohh!! Hw remiss of me..... i am BANI DIXIT"

Bani and jai sat there talking for 2 hours about everything under the sun except the restaurant, they both found each other very cute and jai knew for sure that this was the girl he had been waiting for all his life, they both were meant for each other.

Aditya bali had entered his restaurant an hour before and had noticed jai sitting and talking animatedly with bani, he did not like the idea of jai and bani getting involved with each other much, as he knew both of them pretty well, jai being his best friend and bani being the daughter of the woman who was once his friend but was no longer in this world and hence he knew all about bani, but adiya did not interrupt their conversation thinking that jai will not be coming back to the restaurant everyday and hence will not be meeting bani again. He heaved a sigh of relief when he saw jai escorting bani to her car and seeing her off. Unbeknown to him, both jai and bani had decided to meet again the next day at the same time, in the restaurant itself.

The next day jai waited for bani to come outside the restaurant and she appeared in her car at the same time as she had the day before, she parked the car and got out...jai noticed that she was wearing the same clothes she had been wearing the day before but dint think much of it and started to walk towards her with a big smile on his face, both walked toward each other and jai stopped infront of her while she walked gave jai a fleeting look and went ahead of him and entered the restaurant and sat in the same seat as she had the other day.

Jai just stood where he was standing, and thought wat just happened here?? Then he shook his head and went in to where she was sitting and all but fell in the seat opposite to her and said "heyy bani....mornin...wat happened out there??" bani said "EXCUSE ME??" Jai smiled and said " common bani u r acting as if u don't know me, nw cut this acting and tell me hw r u this morning" bani looked at him as if he was mad " excuse meee I DO NOT KNOW U....nw get up from my table b4 i call someone and get u thrown out"
Jai was shocked at what bani was saying but looking at her face he could clearly see that she was serious and wasn't joking at all but nevertheless he tried again " bani what kind of a joke this is, we met here yesterday don't u remember me?? I am jai....jai walia" bani got up from her seat and shouted "i told u i don't know u....i have never met u in my life...nw get out of here" jai was utterly shocked but got up from his chair and was about to say smthin when aditya came running to where they both where and bani looked at aditya and said " uncle look at this man, i don't even know him and he is trying to act smart with me" jai in his turn tried to speak smthin but aditya cut him short by saying to bani " don't worry dear i'll take care of him....u just sit down and njoy ur food" he then looked at jai and said "u come out with me" jai tried to say "but adi...." aditya just took him by his hand and dragged him out where finally jai got a chance to speak "aditya is she mad or wat...i met her here yesterday only and nw she is saying that she doent knows me....wat kinds joke is this?"

Aditya and sighed and said "no jai this is no joke.....bani is speaking the truth, she doesn't knows u, and as far as she is concerned she has never met u in her life" jai interrupted by sayin "but..." but aditya dint let him complete and said "no jai, bani is not mad but she is a very special child...." to be cont.

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jeenal20 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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me
woo minku
u started a new ff
will give my comments
1ce i am done reading
now my comments
minku dear
gr88 start
i think this is ur adaptation of the hollywood movie
1st 50 dates
love that movie4
so will enjoy reading this ff also
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey minks,

I know this one!!! The English movie had been adapted in my mother tongue as well (Telugu).

Even though I have seen it I would love to read it!!!!!

A very off-beat emotional story, and I really liked the starting!!!!!

Continue soon!!!!

God bless

Dhani

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow minku u started a new ss, hope u complete ur earlier one too in this break else u know na my belans will break something else😆 loved the start and u made my bani special child, koi baat nahin, dekhtey hai tum us ka kya karti ho
yaar i have neither seen nor read about this movie, but now i want to know whole story soon so do continue soon
luv,
swati aap ki poti
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Well I havent seen the movie but will like to know what happens to jai and bani but please dont split them up and no sad ending please...
Will be waiting for the next part minks please cont soon...
byebye
Love Perveen...xxx
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG....i loved this great sart...i havent watched 1st 50 dates....but i would love too... sonam
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey minku....
u know i m really happy u started a new ss but lemme tell u one thing.....PLZZ DONT LEAVE IT INCOMPLETE😆 (( and swati di is rite hope u will complete ur previous ff))
chalo koi nahin😆😆...
i loved ur fast part....
cant wait to read more...
plzzz cont. SOON...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great start.....looking forward to read the next part since i don't knw the story of 50 1st dates.....and yes please complete your previous FF......

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Posted: 17 years ago
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ur fanfic sounds really good..looking forward to reading more update soon...special child huh..i wonder why? continue soon😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi
Hey this is similar to one English movie which features Drew barrymore. i forgot the name. But to see Jai and Bani that way would be surely interesting. Waiting.
Bye

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